Alvida 1997 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Ohh pragyu this was an unexpected end 😳😳 seriously matlab kya story thi par maine vo last valien end ko to expect kiya tha par this end I have never expected 👏

Coming to update Malhar rajat and kallu really they are best friends forever from the beginning to the end inkein scenes shuru se hi bohot achein thein...🤗 that starting scene of mallu saying that If bhoot comes and gets upset seeing them eating like this and kallu replies it was hilarious🤣🤣🤣beachara mallu dar gya 😆😆kallu and rajat sleeping on his shoulder it was such a nice scene Malhar helplessness of finding the answers behind his brothers death it was such a emotional scene 😭😭

Really we cannot find some answers for our lifetime 🥺🥺 rajat and kallu hugging him kalyani saying I love you aur uska reaction uff such a cute scene it was Malhar's shying

Rajat ne jab vo malhar ko kahana ki he loved him not kallu I was shocked because like Malhar we also thought that he like kallu but that was unexpected but thier friendship doesn't broke it was great maan gayien guruji kya likhein hoo poori kahani hi palat dii 👏

And last scene they are married finally🥳aur mallu dm hai hamara yeeee 🥳aur kallu writer 🤗🤗🤗🤗 rajat is a superstar all got their best jobs ...aur kallu ne mallu ko cheda his reply aur Malhar ka pehla pyaar Luna aur kallu ka punch 🤣🤣🤣

Pls pragyu aisi hi achi story ke saath vapas aana really your concept and writing way amazed me really you are a great story teller a big applause for you my baby 👏👏

Thank you so much Vanshu ❤️❤️❤️Tujhe story pasand aayi bas aur kya chahiye life me? Is baar maine socha tha ki more than romance, I'll focus on their friendship and teenage years. Yaar ITV me we rarely get to see second leads. Yahaan har hero ya heroine ko like karne wala as a villain hi hota hai.

Loved itragu...kHa se laati hai itni stories vonbhi itni achi

Pragya.. It was totally beautiful..

The teen romance bloomed.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

The three of them sitting at the dam waiting for bhoot to come and give answers..

Bhoot ko bura lagega Isliye Malhar ne chips nahi khaye.. 😆

Wait karte karte, Rajat and Kallu slept on Mallu's shoulders.. 🤣

Malhar finally understood that he might never get the answers for his brother's decision to end his life.. 😭

His sobs woke up Kallu and Rajat and they offered him the much needed comfort..

Awww... Kallu ne Mallu ke aankh bandh karke uske kaan me I love you bola..

And then she teased him if he could see properly.. 🤣

And Kallu gave Rajat the much needed encouragement to tell Malhar his feelings.. She also gave them the space to talk.. 👏

Rajat finally poured out the truth and was prepared that Malhar may end the friendship.. But Mallu was so overwhelmed by that genuine love... And he accepted his friend along with that flaw.. 👏👏

That acceptance alone made Rajat achieve the heights he wanted.. Though he knows he can't have Malhar as his mate, the bond of friendship strengthened him..

Mallu DM hai aur hamari kallu uski biwi is a writer..

Rajat Malhotra ka pehla pyar Malhar Mishra..

And Kallu wanted to know who is Malhar Mishra's pehla pyar..

He had the audacity to tell his wife Luna

Toh maar padegi na.. 🤣

I totally loved that Kallu and Mallu accepted Rajat's friendship and didn't make him feel small. They gave him the strength to lead his life successfully..

Superb Pragya..

Likhna bandh mat karo please.

This came to an end 💔.

But you gave this a perfect end👌❤️.

Kalma r married🥳❤️.& Malhar is a DM 😎🔥.

And Rajat he is a sweetheart🥺🤗❤️ , & now an entrepreneur 😍😘.

I loved it💯❤️.

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Loved itragu...kHa se laati hai itni stories vonbhi itni achi

Thank you Praku 💜💜💜

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Pragya.. It was totally beautiful..

The teen romance bloomed.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

The three of them sitting at the dam waiting for bhoot to come and give answers..

Bhoot ko bura lagega Isliye Malhar ne chips nahi khaye.. 😆

Wait karte karte, Rajat and Kallu slept on Mallu's shoulders.. 🤣

Malhar finally understood that he might never get the answers for his brother's decision to end his life.. 😭

His sobs woke up Kallu and Rajat and they offered him the much needed comfort..

Awww... Kallu ne Mallu ke aankh bandh karke uske kaan me I love you bola..

And then she teased him if he could see properly.. 🤣

And Kallu gave Rajat the much needed encouragement to tell Malhar his feelings.. She also gave them the space to talk.. 👏

Rajat finally poured out the truth and was prepared that Malhar may end the friendship.. But Mallu was so overwhelmed by that genuine love... And he accepted his friend along with that flaw.. 👏👏

That acceptance alone made Rajat achieve the heights he wanted.. Though he knows he can't have Malhar as his mate, the bond of friendship strengthened him..

Mallu DM hai aur hamari kallu uski biwi is a writer..

Rajat Malhotra ka pehla pyar Malhar Mishra..

And Kallu wanted to know who is Malhar Mishra's pehla pyar..

He had the audacity to tell his wife Luna

Toh maar padegi na.. 🤣

I totally loved that Kallu and Mallu accepted Rajat's friendship and didn't make him feel small. They gave him the strength to lead his life successfully..

Superb Pragya..

Likhna bandh mat karo please.

Thank you so much Rekha 💖💖💖💖

I'm so glad you liked the story.

Originally posted by: Asha_Bisht

This came to an end 💔.

But you gave this a perfect end👌❤️.

Kalma r married🥳❤️.& Malhar is a DM 😎🔥.

And Rajat he is a sweetheart🥺🤗❤️ , & now an entrepreneur 😍😘.

I loved it💯❤️.

Thanks a lot Asha ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Beautiful yaar

Good that kalma accepted and understood Rajat than shooing him away or breaking their friendship with him

It was beautiful malhar collector bana and kallu artist perfect

Actually kalyani as a charechter itne serious he hi nhai ki usse ek civil service post de de

I always felt she would have a an interesting career like writer editor or even a business woman or lawyer or teacher

Jisme ukse naadani and masti bhi Chalke

So mujhe yeha sab perfect laga other than ek thing

Ye akhri ff kyom he

Serial band huva toh aur nahi likhoongi kya 😭

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Beautiful yaar

Good that kalma accepted and understood Rajat than shooing him away or breaking their friendship with him

It was beautiful malhar collector bana and kallu artist perfect

Actually kalyani as a charechter itne serious he hi nhai ki usse ek civil service post de de

I always felt she would have a an interesting career like writer editor or even a business woman or lawyer or teacher

Jisme ukse naadani and masti bhi Chalke

So mujhe yeha sab perfect laga other than ek thing

Ye akhri ff kyom he

Serial band huva toh aur nahi likhoongi kya 😭

Thanks a lot Gayu ❤️❤️❤️

Sach me making Kalyani DM without any seriousness in her nature was the place when the show started going downhill.

Is time workload bahut hai, and show nahi h to naye tracks ke idea bhi nahi aa rahe. To kucch din tak writing me zyaada active nahi rahoongi, but forum daily visit karoongi.

Do u know tumane kya kar diya hai Pragya ???Agar kal yeh story agar sehe ban ko pata chali na usaki short flim ya 10 episodes ki ek serial ban jayegi.Your imagination is ahead of our thinking.Those vives of 80 n 90's no body wonted to let go.You that kind of writer a special one which is meant for intellectual people in terms of story but your story telling your way of writing made commoners to understand you concept properly.What I comment Pragya your ment for something big in novel or writing industry.You do parsue career in Different field but at the some point of your life start writing...n u have already started.so many thing to tell u.m 80's kid so I had watched so many serials on Doordarshan like Malgudi days,Ramayan,Mahabharatn other which 90's kid doesn't know.Though I was 5-6 years old girl that time still remember those serial even circus,Fauji,potali babaki...yar sab bohot emotional kar dete hai.Yeh serials you tube pe maujud hai abhi.Rajani buniyad sab dekhe hai.kuch month pehele 20 episodes ki serias thi The stone boy muze mili...it was emotional moment for me n same happen when I read this story.Tum ko mein kya boli...fir bolungi meri kabiliyat nahi hai...but would like to thanks for this.plz do write more..n m waiting for that...love u🤗

i must say u are so much talented girl.