Kalma ff :- nafrat ya pyaar(chapter:-4 updated 02-08-2021)

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Phlo

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Posted: 4 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: rekha_crm
Nice update Vanshu..
I was late in reading it..
KalMa... Donon on fire
I hope Kalyani khud Moksh ke baare me batayegi...
Sampada ki haalath... 🤣🤣
Anu, Sarthak aur Avni.. 😆😆
AS I don't feel bad for.. Unhe ek chota sa punishment milna hi chahiye..
Phir bhi Malhar has not stooped so low as she did. 👍🏼 That's the speciality about MJ, gussa nafrat sab hote hue bhi he still has that conscience left in him.

Lovely update..

thank you di 🤗🤗❤️❤️

Glad to know you liked it 😸 😸😸

Yaa malhar is best in his own ways 😃😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: rekha_crm
Nice update Vanshu..
I was late in reading it..
KalMa... Donon on fire
I hope Kalyani khud Moksh ke baare me batayegi...
Sampada ki haalath... 🤣🤣
Anu, Sarthak aur Avni.. 😆😆
AS I don't feel bad for.. Unhe ek chota sa punishment milna hi chahiye..
Phir bhi Malhar has not stooped so low as she did. 👍🏼 That's the speciality about MJ, gussa nafrat sab hote hue bhi he still has that conscience left in him.

Lovely update..

Malhar only stoops low where Kalyani is involved/concerned... galti chahe kisi ki bhi ho, woh sazaa Kalyani ko hi dega aur baad mein koi idiotic excuse ke sath usse mana bhi lega.... aur Kallu bevakoof ki tarah fatafat maan bhi jayegi.

Vanshu, please things a lil different here and don't let him get away with his actions this time... CVs were partial, lekin please don't Kallu become even more of a mini Anu than she's already been shown to be, mujhse bardash nahin hoga!

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Posted: 4 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Kalma92

Malhar only stoops low where Kalyani is involved/concerned... galti chahe kisi ki bhi ho, woh sazaa Kalyani ko hi dega aur baad mein koi idiotic excuse ke sath usse mana bhi lega.... aur Kallu bevakoof ki tarah fatafat maan bhi jayegi.

Vanshu, please things a lil different here and don't let him get away with his actions this time... CVs were partial, lekin please don't Kallu become even more of a mini Anu than she's already been shown to be, mujhse bardash nahin hoga!

I will not make make Kalyani mini anupriya Riya this story is totally different from show naa yaahan main malhar ko bilkul sahi dikhaungi na kalyani ko dono ek simple insaan hai jinsein past main khoob galtiyan hui hai jismein dono ko repent karna hoga kisi ek ko mahan aur doosre ko like a jerk a big no

They both have flows ..par the main thing is dono ko pyaar hai par apni pahltu ki nafrat ussein Dana rahe hai

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Posted: 4 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Kalma92

Malhar only stoops low where Kalyani is involved/concerned... galti chahe kisi ki bhi ho, woh sazaa Kalyani ko hi dega aur baad mein koi idiotic excuse ke sath usse mana bhi lega.... aur Kallu bevakoof ki tarah fatafat maan bhi jayegi.

Vanshu, please things a lil different here and don't let him get away with his actions this time... CVs were partial, lekin please don't Kallu become even more of a mini Anu than she's already been shown to be, mujhse bardash nahin hoga!

Riya my comments were only about the chapter.

And especially reserved for what AS did to Malhar's sister.

I haven't commented anything about Kalyani and Malhar's differences.

It's Vanshu's story and she can develop her characters as she sees fit.

I'm not interfering in what she writes.