KALMA FF- Yahi Rahoge Tum Mujhme (CHAPTER-5 UPDATED 19/10/21) - Page 5

Thank you rekha di gayu and vanshu....sarthak ke haath uthane par bhi ek twist hai....jaldi update kr dungi

Wow!!😍 Prakriti it was amazing sb k sb happy hain❤️.

Pr kaka ne kyu kallu ko thappad mara??🤔.

Please update soon⏳.

See?? Itna mushkil nahi characters ko redeemable rakhna! That's how they should have written Sarthak, Ahir and Avni... Sarthak's being a father figure for Kalyani and being able to see her side of things/support her was a major reason why fans loved his character,; Ahir should've never been written like a total villain and Avni would've been better received had she been written as positive, or a vamp who didn't have an agenda against KalMa specifically or kept at a redeemable level and let go sooner than they did.

Very excited for the upcoming!! Keep writing😍

Originally posted by: Asha_Bisht

Wow!!😍 Prakriti it was amazing sb k sb happy hain❤️.

Pr kaka ne kyu kallu ko thappad mara??🤔.

Please update soon⏳.

Glad you liked it asha...jaldi update kr dungi

Originally posted by: Kalma92

See?? Itna mushkil nahi characters ko redeemable rakhna! That's how they should have written Sarthak, Ahir and Avni... Sarthak's being a father figure for Kalyani and being able to see her side of things/support her was a major reason why fans loved his character,; Ahir should've never been written like a total villain and Avni would've been better received had she been written as positive, or a vamp who didn't have an agenda against KalMa specifically or kept at a redeemable level and let go sooner than they did.

Seriously yaar...kaka ne itna galat kiya tha show m or writers ne unka koi realisation hi nhi dikhaya....jb vo paralyse hone ka naatak kr rhe the i was happy ki kam se kam ab kuch acha shuru hoga par nhi....humare great cvs ....aaj jo ho rha hai unhi ki badaulat hai

Originally posted by: Jara567

Very excited for the upcoming!! Keep writing😍

Thank you jara....will update soon

Finally an FF where AauSaheb is positive.

Par Kaka ko kya hua? Koi kaka ka mask lagakar aa gaya kya?

Nice update Prakriti 👍🏼

Filled with lots of positivity 😊

Saari misunderstanding clear ho gayi, sab kuch thik ho gaya..

Kash show me bhi aisa dikhaya hota…

Malharji ko unki zindagi kya mil gayi ye to naughty ho gaye 😆

Janta jawaab chahti hai kaka ne kallu par hath kyu uthaya…

CHAPTER - 4

Malhar- kaka.....y.....ye aap kya kr rhe hai.....abhi bhi aap....

Sarthak- ek dum chup.....main yaha kalyani se baat krne aaya hu.....

Anupriya thought that he realised his mistake ....but angrily stepped in and said

Anupriya- dekhiye sarthak aap iss tarah se meri beti ko.....

Sarthak- maine kaha na......bilkul chup.....

Kalyani was just looking towards him and demanding an answer from her eyes

AS POV- parmeshwara iss ghar m kbhi kuch thik hoga bhi ya nhi.....dekhke laga ki kitni saari khushiyan ek saath aa gyi hai.....par....

Her POV got broke when sarthak talked to kalyani

Sarthak ( shoutingly) - or tum kalyani.....har vakt kya kaka kaka krti rehti ho......koi self respect nhi bachi hai kya tumhare andar.....nhi hu main tumhara kaka.....samjhi tum.....nhi hu main.....

He said cryingly..... nobody expected this kind of break down of sarthak.....anupriya and malhar was shocked to see sarthak in this state......AS too nver thought that sarthak would break down like this

Sarthak falls on her knees and folds his hand to apologise to kalyani

Kalyani- kaka....kaka....kya kr rhe hai aap

Sarthak- maine tumhe kitna kuch bhala bura kaha....par tum ho ki.....maine tumhe apni beti maanne se bhi inkaar kr diya....tumhe moksh se door krne ki baat kahi.....malhar ke pass na jaa sako isliye restriction orders le liye.....or tum humesha meri chinta krti rehti jaise main tumhara kaka nhi atul hu......itna sb hone ke baavjood ye sb kaise kr skti ho tum kalyani......

Kalyani- please kaka.....shaant ho jaiye....aapki tabiyat bigad jayegi......swara...paani leke aana jaldi se....

Swara- haa.....

Swara goes to bring water.....anupriya could not hold her tears anymore.....pallavi and vivek were again fed up of this drama and were watching the scenario from upstairs......swara came back and handovers the glass to kalyani

Kalyani- kaka....paani....paani pi lijiye

Sarthak ( looking towards her) - nhi kalyani.....jis ghar m jis ghar ke logo ka itna apmaan kiya maine usi ghar ka paani kaise pi sakta hu.....

Kalyani- kaisi baatein kr rhe hai aap kaka......

Malhar- kalyani sahi keh rhi hai kaka.....aap ab or dosh mt dijiye khud ko.....

Sarthak- malhar.....malhar main tumhaara bhi doshi hu.....jaante hue bhi ki kaise tumne ye 5 saal bitaye hai kalyani ke bina fir bhi.....fir bhi tum dono ko alag krne ki koi kami nhi choddi maine.....kbhi maaf kr bhi paaoge mujhe tum.....

Malhar- kaka....dekhiye.....hum sabne aapko maaf kr diya hai.....hum sb apni zindagi ek naye sire se shuru krenege.....hum sab jante hai ki beete mahine kisi ke liye bhi sahi nhi the.....par hum abhi bhi sb kuch thik kr skte hai....aap or maai fir se ek or mauka dijiye ek dusre ko.....

Sarthak looked towards anupriya who was crying.....and goes towards her wiping his tears.....avni and ahir looked towards each other.....they were holding hands and were hoping for the best......

Both sarthak and anupriya keeped sushed for a while both said.....

Anupriya- aap.......Sarthak- tum

All of them smiled a bit as the atmosphere at AN was on the verge to get good from worse.

Swara POV- bappa aapka bohot bohot shukriya.....iss pal ka main pichle 5 saal se intezaar kr rhi thi....yhi sochti thi ki kbhi rane parivaar or Deshmukh parivaar fir se ek ho payega ya nhi.....

When ahir saw swara crying and indicated her to stop crying....seeing him she wiped her tears and both smiled looking towards each other

Sarthak holding anupriya's hands....not abling to meet his eyes with hers.....but finally looking towards her he said.....

Sarthak- itna sb kuch hone ke baad kbhi maaf kr paogi mujhe.....hmm....humare beti khone ka doshi maanta rha tumhe.....jbki main to vahaa tha hi nhi jb tumhe meri sbse jyada zarurat thi.....tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga main dil se maanunga use....koi zabardasti nhi.....tumhari har baat izzat se apnaunga......

Anupriya( holding his hand) - beete hue kal ko kal hi rehne dijye sarthak....use itna bhi yaad mt kijiye ki aage ki zindagi bhi ek bojh bankar reh jaye....hum fir se ek saath grahasthi basaa skte hai....ek naye sire se zindagi shuru kar skte hai.....

Sarthak smiled seeing her talking about once again being committed.....

Anupriya- vaise bhi sarthak aapki galti ahir se badhke thodi na hai

All of them smiled a bit to calm down sarthak....avni and ahir faces awkardness and ahir said.....

Ahir- maai....vo....main ia.....

Anupriya- arey ahir.....main mazaak kr rhi thi.....bura mt maano.....or kahi jaoge bhi n to iss baar nhi jaa paoge kyu ki iss baar tumhare kaan, haath,pair sb kheenchne wale hai iss ghar mein....samjhe tum

Ahir- ji maai....iss baar avni ko chodd ke kahi nhi jaunga....he said seeing avni....

Avni- tum jaa bhi nhi paaoge kyu ki main apna right pair tumhare left pair se baandh dungi fir jate rehna jaha tumhe jana hai.....

AN was again filled with laughter......mahar intertwined his hand with kalyani's seeing that no one is noticing them......

Kalyani- kya kr rhe hai aap malharji.....koi dekh lega choddiye mera haath

Malhar- dekhne do.....hone wali biwi ka hi to haath pakda hai kisi paraye ka thodi na pakad liya.....

Kalyani- malharji choddiye na....please.....

When ahir and swara saw them......they talked through eyes and goes towards kalma who was busy in their nok jhok ...... Swara get hold of their hands and everyone looks towards them.....

Swara- vo kya hai na dada......humare yaha hone wala dulha or dulhar ek dusre se milte nhi hai or aap dono to hath......

Malhar- babdi!!!!! Kya bole ja rhi hai tu....kuch bhi mtlb....

Ahir- kuch bhi nhi dada......iss jurm ka main iklauta gavaah hu......maine ye scene khud dekha hai.....

Kalyani- ahir.....choddo na....sb dekh rhe hai..... tumhare dada to hai hi ese

Everyone watched them and understood what happened.....they all were laughing insidely......when mukku' nani( aparna) came inside and said......

Kalyani- aap yha....kya baat hai.....

Nani- vo baat ye hai ki.....main mukku ko le jane aayi hu.....

Anupriya- le jaane aayi hain mtlb.....kalyani ne to to mukku ko god le liya hai na......or ab vo usi ke saath rahegi.....

Kalyani- a....aai ek minute....

Nani- vo meri iklauti naatin hai.....bachpan se ma....maine hi use paala posaa hai......ese kaise dur reh skti hu main usse.....

Kalyani- dekhiye main samajh skti hu ki aap kya keh rhi hai par......main aapki naatin ko achi zindagi de skti hu ....vo school jayegi....uske bhi kuch apne sapne honge.....

Nani POV- offo ye kalyani ko kaose manau.....ek baar moksh ko yha se le jaun fir ye shehar chodd ke humesha ke liye chali jaungi......main yha tumhe ,malhar or iss parivar ko barbaad krne aayi thi....par......

When mukku runningly came from kalynai's room and says aai fi and hugs her when she saw aatya and said.....

Mukku- amma tum yha pe kya kareli ho???

Nani- mukku main tujhe yha se lene aayi hu.....chalegi n mere saath

Mukku- nhi amma....mereko yhich aai finke saath rehne ka hai.....mujhe nhi jana

Nani- samjh na mukku.....main akele....k....kaise rahegi tere bina.....kuch din ke liye chal na mere saath for main tujhe yha par chodd dungi.....

Mukku- par.....

Kalyani finds nani' odd behaviour......but asks mukku to go as after one week she herself will come to pick her.....mukku goes with her nani......

Nani POV- kya socha tha tumne kalyani.... Mukku ab tumhe nhi milegi....main jaa rhi hu use bohot door leke....tumhari pohonch se bohot dur....

Ahir- vahini ye dono kaun the......

Kalyani tells him the whole story about how she find her.....and about her nani....

Ahir- to iska mtlb.....moksh abhi bhi zinda hai.....

Malhar- haa ahir.....itne dino se usi ko to dhoondne m lage hai.....

Swara- dada vo mil jayega.....hum itni koshishein kr rhe hai.....bas ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna hai ki uske pet par surgery ke marks hai......yaad hai na kaise humare 15 lakh ke inaam par vo shyaam apne bache ko moksh bana ke le aaya tha.....

Malhar- haa babdi.....ye to sahi keh rhi hai tu....

Kalyani- aap log chinta mt kijiye....pillu ko hume milna hi hoga koi nhi cheen sakta use humse......

AT NIGHT

Everyone was sipping tea.....and was busy in their chit chats......

AS- kl hum pandit ji ko bulakar tum dono ki shaadi ki tareekh nikalva lenge.....

Kalma and avni- ahir were happy listening this.....

AS- or ek or baat ....shaadi tak na avni or ahir ek dusre se milenge or nahi kalyani or malhar.....

Malhar- par aaosaheb ye to.....

AS- poornaviraam!!!! Humne keh diya mtlb keh diya.....

Kalyani teasingly saod malhar and said

Kalyani- haa aaosaheb.....bilkul nhi milenge....aapne kaha or hum maane nhi esa hipo hi nhi skta.....

Malhar was glaring towards kalyani......

Kalyani- kyun malharjinsahi kaha na maine.....

Malhar- haa Kalyani tum galat hoti kb ho.....bilkul nhi milnege......

Anusar was happy seeing their banters.....pallavi comes downstairs and said

Pallavi- maai....aapne mere or nal ke baba ke liye chai nhi banai.??

Anupriya- kitchen m hai jaake le lo....

Pallavi- maa.....

She stopped seeing AS growling her.....

Pallavi- theek hai theek hai....jake le leti hu.....

Pallavi POV- maai kw bhi par nikal aaye hai....bas ye aaosaheb ab ghar se bahar na nikal de......

AS- chalo ab ....sb log jaake apne apne kamre m so jao.....apne apne kamre m suna n sbne......she said looking towards kalma and avir.......

Everyone retires to their room......and as was left in the hall....

AS- kl bohot se shubh kaam hone wale hai.....

Saying this she called someone on phone and said.....

AS- hello!!!!

Whom did AS called????

What was aatya's plan????

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