KALMA FF- Yahi Rahoge Tum Mujhme (CHAPTER-5 UPDATED 19/10/21) - Page 3

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CHAPTER - 2

Sarthak was somewhere in the park sitting on bench....fighting with hundreds of thoughts and emotions in his mind....he broked down due to what happened at avni's baby shower....he said cryingly to himself....

Sarthak - kya vo aurat jo b...bhi keh rhi thi sb sa..sahi tha???....kya sb kuch meri galti hai....agar ye sach hai na to maine kalyani or anupriya ki zindagi...barbaad krdi hai....barbaad krdi hai....kalyani to meri beti jaisi thi....thi....thi...main sach main pagal hu kalyani meri beti hai....meri beti hai vo or anupriya....vo meri biwi hai....KALYANI MALHAR ANUPRIYA HUM SB EK FAMILY HAI...EK FAMILY SUNA SBNE EK FAMILY HAI HUM....KOI ALAG NHI KREGA HUME KOI NHI....

He was letting out those emotions out which he was hiding from everyone....he let those tears flow out...he vented out his anger on the bench by punching his hands on it and blood was oozing out from his hand and said...

Rane parivaar ko koi alag nhi kr skta...koi nhi....

He calmed himself down....and said

Par malhar or avni ne itni badi baat chupayi kyu...malhar ka to samjh aata hai ki kaise usne kalyani ke jane ke baad khud ko hi kho diya tha...use na to jeene ki ichha thi or na hi demotion se or kahi na kahi uske iss badalte behaviour m mera bhi haath hai...kaise maine use kalyani ke khilaaf krne ki koshish ki thi par vo bhi pagal....ishq jo krta hai kalyani se kaise mujhe patti pdhata tha ki main Anupriya ke pass vapas chal jau usse maafi ma...magu or main bevkuf insan kbhi samjh nhi paaya ki kyu mujhse haath jodke kehta tha ki main Anupriya ke pass vapas chala jau....kalyani ke jane ke badd kbhi uss samjh hi nhi paya...

He said laughingly....

Kaise samajhta.....kaise vo to kisi apne ko khone ke dard se guzar chuka tha...isliye anupriya ke pregnancy ke wakt sbki kitni badduae lagi use ....kaise bina kisi se kuch chala gya ghar se....par ab nhi....mujhe ab bohot kuch sahi krna hai....anupriya main janta hu ki tumse maafi maangne ke layak nhi hu par tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga main use zarur maanuga....or malhar kalyani ....umeed krta hu ki vo dono apne darmiyaan sbhi galat fehmi ko mitaa de....or avni....avni ka bhi....

A married couple was taking rounds of park where they saw sarthak's hand oozing out with heavy blood....

Man- arey...bhaisahab...aapke haath se khoon nikal rha hai kaafi dard ho rha hoga....chaliye mere ghar yhi pass m hai....main first aid kr deta hu....

Lady- haa....aap chaliye humare saath...

Sarthak- iss haath ki baat kr rhe hai aap....kitna dard pohonchaya hai maine iss haath se AND HE ONCE AGAING PUNCHES HIS HAND ON THE BENCH....HE WRITHES IN PAIN...AND SAID...kitna dard....kitna dard...kitna dard....

Man- bhai sahab bas kriye....ruk jaiye...he pulls him backwards....

Lady- dekhiye aapki haalat dekh ke lagta hai ki kuch bura hua hai...aapke pass wakt hai jaake sb sahi kr lijiye...kahi der na ho jaye....

Man- ha....jaiye....kahi koi humesha ke liye door na ho jaye....

Sarthak- haa...haa...main ja rha hu ab or der nhi krni mujhe....

He lefted from there in his car and the couple was smiling....

Somewhere on the stranded road covered with trees with cold breeze....there was hardly any people there

Kalyani and malhar was walking hand- in - hand not realizing that they were holding hands of each other and was just enjoying each other's presence which were most soothing to them at the present

Kalyani- ahmm...ahmmm....dekhiye aapke kehne pe main aapke saath raat ke 10 baje baahar aayi vo bhi iss sunsaan jagah pe or abhi baj rhe hai 11:30....hmm or mere sawaalo ki list bohot lambi hai malharji....or agar aapko esa lagta hai na ki iss jagah pr mujhe laakar ye thandi thandi hawaayein se main sb kuch bhul jaungi to apni....

Malhar was simply admiring her and listening to her non- stop cute and innocent talks when he interrupted her....

Malhar- (in a low voice) kaha kho diya tha maine tumhe hmm....5 saal door rahi mujhse ek baar bhi mera khayal aaya tumhe....kaisa hu kaha hu...kya kr rha hu jee rha hu ya mar.....

Kalyani softly slapped malhar and holding his collar said....

Kalyani- kya haa.....kyaa...kyu faltu ki baatein krte hai aap....kyu...kyu....jitna aap ke liye mushkil tha na mere bina rehna utna hi mere liye tha malharji....

SHE CRYINGLY SAID...MALHAR COULD NOT SEE HER IN THIS STATE BUT DECIDED TO LET KALYANI SPEAK AND LET HER FLOW HER EMOTIONS TODAY WHICH SHE HAD HIDE FROM YEARS AND DIDN'T INTERRUPTED HER AND WAS SADLY LISTENING HER...

Kalyani- main aayi thi.....main aayi thi aurangabad aap sbse milne....aapse milne mere malharji se milne par mere malharji to vha se ja chuke the....main jb aayi thi tb ghar jal chuka tha or vha ke naye padosiyon ne btaya ki aap log 7 mahine pehle hi ghar khaali kr diya tha....main...main aapke purane wale ghar bhi gyi thi vha bhi pta chala ki aap nhi hai vha....main toot gyi malharji...main toot gyi

Malhar- ka....(but he stayed quiet)

Kalyani- koi nhi tha mere pass ...kuch din ke liye pune chali gyi thi purane wale ghar m....fir aapka sapna pura krne ke liye main delhi gyi apni aage ke padhai puri krne...DM banne ke baad sb kuch paa liya maine...vo sb jo aap chahte the....jo main chahti thi par ek sawal m ulajh ke reh gyi ki uss din.....aap....apne mujh pr goli kyu chalayi pichle 3 saal tak yahi maanti aayi ki vo haadsa tha...jarur koi majboori hogi ya fir galti se chal gyi hogi par ......meri aankho ne jo dekha use bhi jhootla nhi skti thi...or uss haadse ne....

They both said together HUME JUDAA KR DIYA

BOTH LOOK INTO EYES OF EACH OTHER THEY WERE LOSTED IN THEM when malhar interrupted

Malhar- ( he hesitantly asked....guilt of losing his love can be clearly seen in his eyes) us...uske baad....

Kalyani- fir....baad m pta chala ki meri first posting Aurangabad m hai....mujhe bohot khushi hui thi par fir vhi haalat yaad aa gye....jitni iss baat ki khushi hui thi ki main aapse milungi utna hi iss baat ka dard hua tha ki main aapse milungi.... Uske baad....aap...aap bhi mujhse jhoot pe jhoot bolte gye....or ye sb janne ke baad aapko lagta tha ki main aapko btati ki main kaha thi....kya kr rhi thi....haa???

Malhar- (he was also crying....in a low tone said) .... It...itna dard hua tha to ek baar kyu nhi puchne aayi ki esi kya vajah thi ki main avni ke saath reh rha hu....tumhe ussi din samjhna chahiye tha ki jb pandit ji ne kaha tha ki September ka mahina shaadi ke liye ashubh hota hai....

Kalyani slowly shouted on malhar and said.....

Kalyani- uske baad kisne kaha tha ki mujhe hi avni se shaadi krne ki jaldi thi...avni jaisi patni kaha milti mujhe....kisne kaha tha...aapke bhoot nee.??

They both were crying now...both wanted to wipe their tears but decided to let them flow....let them flow with pain, anger, sadness, loneliness which they were hiding from the world and was proving them that they both are strong enough but they both know that at present HOW WEAKEST THEY ARE TODAY

Malhar- vo to tumhe sa....

Kalyani- haa jisse main aapko sach btati ya fir jealous feel krwana chahte the aap haa.....btaiye....

AT AHILYA NIWAS

Swara- kya hua maai....aap itni pareshaan kyu hain???

Anupriya- pareshaan nhi hu swara bas ache haalaton ki dua kr rhi hu....kl ki subah shayad 5 saalon m sbse achi subah hogi...

Swara- maai kalyani ko sb jante hai....aaj itna bada sach aaya hai uske saamne dada ko vo nhi chodegi....( She smilingly said)

Anupriya - (smilingly said) haa swara....bas in dono ko apni khushiyan vapas mil Jaye mujhe or kuch nhi chaiye....

Swara- maai....aap befikr rahiye vo dono mitaa denge apni beech ki dooriya....acha maai ab main jati hu kamre m kaafi raat ho gyi hai n.....

At malhar's home

Avni was sleeping though she was not Fully asleeped she got up from the bed to take water

Avni - arey ...yha to paani hi nhi hai...main hi rakhna bhul gyi hongi kitchen se le aati hu....

On the way to her kitchen she heard someone knocking the door....

Avni POV- raat ke 12 baje kon aaaya hoga....mera veham hoga itni raat ko koi....

She again heard the door bell

Avni- dekh leti hu ek baar....

SHE OPENED THE DOOR AND SEEING SOMEONE ON THE DOOR SHE SAID LOUDLY tumm

AGAIN AT THE ROAD

Kalyani- btaiye.....shaadi tak to dekha nhi ja rha tha or aapne mujhse kya kaha ki avni aaa....aapke ba...bache ki maa banne wali hai ....ye bolte hue ek baar bhi mera khyal nhi aaya hoga na....

Malhar- (roaringly said) chup bilkul chup ( he pinching her to the tree said) ...itne saalo se jinda hi thi na ek baar call nhi kr skti thi...tumhari body nhi mili na isliye khush tha....kyu ki mujhe vishwaas tha ki tum jinda ho isliye maine apna phone no. Bhi nhi badla ye socha ke ki tum mujhe call krogi....par nhi.... pyaar m insaan apne dil ki sunta hai kalyani or tumhara dil to bohot pehle hi jaan chuka tha na ki maine tum pr goli nhi chalayi thi fir kyu nhi aayi tum....

Kalyani keep sushed....as she didn't want to tell him now that she was in coma for 10 months and when she started to regained her memory she didn't fully get it....but she decided to tell him some another day because for now she wanted him to vent out his anger so they could have a beautiful morning after few hours

Malhar - kaha kho gyi....hai jawaab tumhare pass....

Kalyani- nhi hai jawaab mere pass aapke sawalo ka or aapne bhi nhi btaya na....kyu chupayi itni badi baat mujhse....boliye

Malhar- haa...nhi btaya maine tumhe....mujhe laga tumhe koi fark hi nhi pdega...

Kalyani- haa....kitna sahi socha hai malhar ji aap....

An old lady comes towards the kalma and said....

Old lady- be...beta ....

Malhar- ( he concernedly said ) ji kahiye...kuch madad chahiye aapko???

Old lady- nhi beta....m...main to yahan ek pass wali bench par baithi hui thi...tum dono ki saari baatein suni maine...

Kalma turned to each other and remembered how they were confronting each other and lowered their eyes...

Kalyani- a...aunty vo to bass....

Old lady- koi baat nhi beta....tum dono ko dekh ke lag rha hai ki kaafi dino baad mil rhe ho....ek baat btani chahti hu main tum dono ko agar bur na maano to

Kalma said together JI KAHIYE NA....

Old lady- ab kbhi ek dusre se juda mt hona....tum dono ki jodi to jannat m pehle se hi banke aayi hai....mere pati ne to meri beti ko uske pyar se alag kr diya par tum dono mt hona beta....sachha pyar sbke naseeb m nhi hota par aap dono ke naseeb m hai....dono humesha khush rehna.....galatfehmiyon ko itna haavi mt hone do ki do log chah kr bhi ek na ho sake par bhagwan to khud yhi...ch... chaahta hai ki tum dono ek ko kyu ki tum dono hi ek dusre ki manzil ho....bhagwan se yhi dua krungi ki tumhare jeevan m khushiya hi khushiya ho....

Acha beta main ab chalti hu....subah hone wali hai...

Malhar- par aap jayengi kaha??

Old lady- yhi pass m ghar hai mera....

Kalyani- hum aapko chodd de aapke ghar???

Old lady- nhi beta.... Bas tum dono khush rhena...chalti hu....

After she left kalma look into each other's eyes both wanted to hug each other and say sorry for what they hide to each other causing them to this much pain....

Kalyani- aab....ma...

Suddenly malhar hugged her tightly ...kalyani was stunned but few seconds later she too reciprocated and hugged him tightly

The hug continued for minutes and they find peace in each other's embrace and kalyani hugging him said

Kalyani- (cutely said) kitna sataya na aapne mujhe...

Malhar- or tumne jo sataya vo kam tha kya....

Kalyani and malhar smiled a bit...

Malhar- iske liye to saza to milni hi chahiye....

Kalyani- sazaa....kya sazaa denge...???

Malhar- jaldi pta chal jayega aapko....

Kalyani- hmm...ab chalein subah hone wali hai....

Both walked holding each other's hands and this time they were feeling each other's touch...a soothing touch....their hearts free from guilt of losing each other from years....

The sun rised and they headed towards the sun....the ray of sun was on their face .....their was a glow on them ...they were enjoying the moment beautifully when malhar turned to her and said

Malhar- to....

Kalyani turned to him and said.....to kya. ???

Malhar- tumhari sazaa???

Kalyani- btaiye meri sazaa ...kya hai meri saza....

Malhar- sunna chahti ho....

Kalyani- bilkul

Malhar- 7 janmon ke bandhan m fir se bandhna chahogi????

Kalyani was shocked and happy at that moment she could feel butterflies in her stomach....she said

Kalyani- mal....malharji....

AND THE SUNRISE MARKS THE UNION OF THE TWO LOVE BIRDS....



HOW WAS CHAPTER GUYS???

WHAT WILL BE KALYANI'S ANSWER???

WHOM DID AVNI SAW???


please tell how was it and give your reviews tooo....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ahir toh nahi tab jisko Avni ne dekha

Just loved a

Kalma convo

Vo lady kayi durga maiyya toh nahi a divine intervention

And such a lovely update

Keep writing and keep entertaining us

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very beautiful update Prakriti.. 😍😍

Sarthak's breakdown and realisation...much needed.. It was absolutely great.

KalMa cleared all their misunderstandings..

Malharji proposed to Kallu..


Awesome..

Of course Kallu Haan kahegi..

And I think Avni saw Aheer..

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Praku praku....kya mast chapter tha sachamin Sarthak has realised his mistake anu and swara are praying for the couple union ❤️❤️❤️

Kalma always take a cherry on the cake their pure emotions for each other are really heart-wrenching 💕💕💕

I hope kalyani Malhar ko bata dein ki vo coma main thi and her decision for marriage I am waiting

Jaldi jaldi update dena praku baby 😻😻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The chapter was so amazing dear

Plzz update soon😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Ahir toh nahi tab jisko Avni ne dekha

Just loved a

Kalma convo

Vo lady kayi durga maiyya toh nahi a divine intervention

And such a lovely update

Keep writing and keep entertaining us

Thank You gayu.....glad you liked it

I think you guessed something which is going to happen in next chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Very beautiful update Prakriti.. 😍😍

Sarthak's breakdown and realisation...much needed.. It was absolutely great.

KalMa cleared all their misunderstandings..

Malharji proposed to Kallu..


Awesome..

Of course Kallu Haan kahegi..

And I think Avni saw Aheer..

Thank you di....❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Praku praku....kya mast chapter tha sachamin Sarthak has realised his mistake anu and swara are praying for the couple union ❤️❤️❤️

Kalma always take a cherry on the cake their pure emotions for each other are really heart-wrenching 💕💕💕

I hope kalyani Malhar ko bata dein ki vo coma main thi and her decision for marriage I am waiting

Jaldi jaldi update dena praku baby 😻😻

Haa vanshu...jaldi de dungi....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

The chapter was so amazing dear

Plzz update soon😍😍

Glad you loved it....dear main jaldi update krne ki koshish krungi

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Ok....so please tell Me how was tha sunrise scene...main humesha se chahti thi ki cvs esa kuch dikhaye ya to sunrise ya sunset...par ...humare cvs bhi laajawab hai [:S]

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