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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Wah.. Wah..

Kalyani aur Malhar ka club me pravesh..

Kallu asking him to wink🤣

Sampada jealous..

Aur phir KalMa dance.. Beautiful

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Atharv Blackmailing Kallu.. 😡

Malhar ko sampu yaad bhi nahi aayi.. 👏

Bike ride and KalMa Ka mind voice was so sweet

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Autumn09


I myself have stopped watching the show on TV. I only watch some initial episodes especially the ones with Atharv and Shera. You know, actors' chemistry can only work as an additional charm but it can't carry a show alone without the support of a good plot.


@bold..100% true.. Actors chemistry and romance all add to the charm only if the story is good and sensible.

Even I enjoy Shera epis.. And I also prefer to think it was Malhar under cover.

CVs left many plots without closure

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm


@bold..100% true.. Actors chemistry and romance all add to the charm only if the story is good and sensible.

Even I enjoy Shera epis.. And I also prefer to think it was Malhar under cover.

CVs left many plots without closure


Yep, can't believe they had a good actor like Varun and they used him for that bhoot track. Like they should have just brought SamThu back to take custody of Moksh. Like if Malhar have the police pardon, and Athu ended up being the biological dad, why not bring him back with Sampu or even Swara to get back custody of Moksh?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sas79


Yep, can't believe they had a good actor like Varun and they used him for that bhoot track. Like they should have just brought SamThu back to take custody of Moksh.


Very true..

Bhoot track was utter nonsense.

It would been better if Samthu had joined forces for custody.

And yes they really wasted Varun who did a good job as Atharv.

Edited by rekha_crm - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: rekha_crm


Very true..

Bhoot track was utter nonsense.

It would been better if Samthu had joined forces for custody.

And yes they really wasted Varun who did a good job as Atharv.


CVS never take the obvious way out LOL. I really thought 5 year leap means memory loss for Kalyani, when Mamta was brought back, I thought she would be twin that may try to take Madhuri's place but they made her a Naxal, when Baapji and family was brought back, I thought they would do old thoughs versus new age, gen Z of Kalyani but they made a murder mystery of it LOL.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Wah.. Wah..

Kalyani aur Malhar ka club me pravesh..

Kallu asking him to wink🤣

Sampada jealous..

Aur phir KalMa dance.. Beautiful


Thank you so much Rekha.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please update regularly ab aap logo ka fanfiction hi thr ko zindaa rakha hain . I really liked your concept

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackqueen

Please update regularly ab aap logo ka fanfiction hi thr ko zindaa rakha hain . I really liked your concept


Thank you very much. I'll try to update regularly.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guys! I'll finish this FF soon because things are a bit stressful at work. I hope you're enjoying this FF:


"Atharv thoda door khade ho," Kalyani ko Atharv ke saath selfie lete huye bahut uljhan ho rahi thi.


"Kalyani, mujhe tumse baat karni hai," Anupriya ne awaz di.


"Dekho Kalyani, main jaanti hu ye kehne ka mera koi haq nahin banta magar tumhari engagement...tumhe nahi lagta sab kucch bahut jaldi ho raha h."


"Jab do log pyar me ho, to kya jaldi kya late..."


"Phir bhi," Anupriya ne kuch uncomfortable hote huye kaha, "Vo ladka...Atharv...mujhe theek nahi lagta. Sach batao Kalyani, tum kisi...kisi tarah ke pressure me aakar to ye sab nahi kar rahi ho na? Tum khush ho na..."


Kalyani ki aankhen na chahte huye bhi bhar aayi, "Meri ma bhi meri aisi hi parwah karti thi..."


"Karti thi?"


"Meri ma ab is duniya me nahi rahi," Kalyani se aage kucch kaha nahi gaya.


Kalyani jaise hi apne room me aai, uske mobile me ek notification aaya. Atharv ke saath uski selfie par Insta par kisi ne comment kiya tha


"Tum aise cheap ladke se engagement kar rahi ho? Paagal ho ye pata tha magar tumhara dimaag itna kharab hoga ye to maine bhi nahin socha tha?"


Kalyani ne phone lagaya, "Dimaag apka nahi mera kharab h...mera matlab mera nahi apka dimag kharab h. Koi Insta me ye sab likhta h? Aur kab banaya aapne Instagram par account? Abhi last week maine apko search kiya tha tab to nahi tha."


"Matlab tumne mera account search kiya tha? Vaise maine aaj hi Insta par account banaya tha. Kal se tumhe call kar raha tha tum phone pick nahi kar rahi thi..."


"Vo main busy thi. Accha bye."


"Kalyani suno to..."


Sampada ka paccheeswan missed call Malhar ke mobile me tha. Finally Malhar ne call back kiya


"Hi!" Sampada aise boli jaise Hadapsar se nahi Los Angeles se aai ho.


"Bolo Sampada,"


"Kya hum kal mil sakte h?"


Malhar naa hi kehne vala tha ki usne kaha, "Lekin jagah main decide karoonga."


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