Fanfiction: Yours stupidly - Page 5

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

It’s awesome Pragya

Anupriya is so good here…

I really liked how you given minute detailing to everything…

Loved it

Thank you Priya. In the next chapter, I'm going to focus more on KalMa with Malharji channeling the chupa hua Shera inside him.

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Thank you Priya. In the next chapter, I'm going to focus more on KalMa with Malharji channeling the chupa hua Shera inside him.

I’m already excited

Will wait for it…..

Going great Pragya..

I like the description of professional atmosphere..

Anu and Sarthak have a decent friendship.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Going great Pragya..

I like the description of professional atmosphere..

Anu and Sarthak have a decent friendship.. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot Rekha.

Chapter-7

Technically it's still four and being summer the weather is still hot but not as hot as the weather inside Young Blud club. Tabhi ek Mitsubishi motorbike ek wheel par screech karte huye rukti h.

"Chaar baje...really Malharji...ye koi time hai itne happening club m aane ka."

"Kalyani, shaam aath baje se pehle mujhe tumhe Ahalya Niwas ke gate k andar dekhna h. Aur btw, are you sure Sampada yahan ayegi? Aur tumhe kaise pata?"

"100 percent sure. I've my sources ye sab pata lagane ke liye."

"Mujhe ye sab bahut ajeeb lag raha h Kalyani?"

"Chup rahiye aap aur ab apne sunglasses utariye aur vo jo ladki jaa rahi na...red top vali...use dekhkar wink kariye..."

"Pagal ho gayi ho kya Kalyani? Pitwana chahti ho mujhe?"

"Jaisa main bol rahi hoon vaisa kariye."

Pehle Kalyani bike se neeche utarti h. Dark Kohled eyes, curly hair, wearing a blue shimmering dress and knee length boots. Malhar takes a deep breath and finally descends out of bike, simultaneously taking off his sunglasses and winking at a girl. Some girls whistle.

They enter the club being welcomed by gaping faces.

"Ab kya karoon main?" Malhar says

"Mere liye ek soft drink order kijiye."

"Excuse me. One link for the beautiful lady please."

Tabhi Sampada club me enter karti h with a tall guy.

The guy comes straight to Kalyani, "Hi beautiful! Tumhare vlogs are my comfort watch. My name is Atharv." And the guy kisses her hand.

"Ma...Malhar ...tum... ye ...kaise?" Sampada could still not believe her eyes.

Malhar pulls Sampada towards him and whispers looking into her eyes, "Kyun mujhe miss kar rahi thi kya? Vaise naam kya tha tumhara...Sangeeta something?"

"Sampada naam h mera...kyun yaad nahi kaise Maine tumhe shaadi ke ek din pehle chor diya tha," Sampada was fuming.

"Ah Sampada. Wo kya h na baby tumhare jaane ke baad main itni gorgeous ladkiyon se mil chuka hoon ki naam mix up ho jate h mind m."

"Chalo Atharv," Sampada ne atharv ka haath pakda aur use le gayi.

Suddenly music started playing and everyone started dancing: https://youtu.be/HP0L_U8buwY

Malhar ne full plan banaya tha ki jab vo aur Kalyani dance karenge tab vo Sampada ka jale parathe jaisa face dekhne ka koi mauka miss nahi karega lekin Kalyani ki aankhon me khone ki vajah se use kuch yaad hi nahi raha.

Malhar ne Kalyani ke face par aaye baalon ko haule se hataya aur kaha, "Kalyani main..."

Tabhi achanak sabki applause ne un dono ko reality me laa diya.

"Excuse me, can I dance with you?" Ek ladki blush karte hue Malhar se boli.

"Vo main..." Tabhi kalyani ne Malhar ko ishara kiya.

"Sure, pretty lady." Magar us ladki ke saath dance karte huye bhi Malhar ki nigaahein Kalyani par hi thi.

"Mere paas tumhara ek Raaz hai Kalyani," kehkar kisi ne Kalyani ko andhere me kheench liya.

Bandook meri Laila 🤩

I really enjoyed this part..

Kalma dance

Sampada’s jealousy 😆

I really like how you describe small details in your stories it become very easy to visualise everything… 👏

Loved it…

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Bandook meri Laila 🤩

I really enjoyed this part..

Kalma dance

Sampada’s jealousy 😆

I really like how you describe small details in your stories it become very easy to visualise everything… 👏

Loved it…

Thanks a lot. I really like the amalgamation of bgm, songs in an episode and while daydreaming about the favourite scenarios I would like to take place in the real show, I create a whole scene. And apne fav characters ke liye Spotify par Playlist banana bhi meri hobby hai.

Hey pragya this is too good 🤩🤩

Tumhari story padhkar to sach main maja aa jata hai 😘😘

Really you have described in proper teenager looks 👍👍

And you are really shaping their character well 👏👏

I hope kalyani ka koi dark past na ho

My favourite song you have you have used 😻😻

Total dhamal 😺😺🐱

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Hey pragya this is too good 🤩🤩

Tumhari story padhkar to sach main maja aa jata hai 😘😘

Really you have described in proper teenager looks 👍👍

And you are really shaping their character well 👏👏

I hope kalyani ka koi dark past na ho

My favourite song you have you have used 😻😻

Total dhamal 😺😺🐱

Thank you so much Vanshika ❣️❣️❣️❣️ This is my favourite song too but sadly both the song and the movie are underrated. Honestly I'm craving a fun, drama-filled show but TV par ya to saas bahu sagas h ya fir OTT par over gritty web series so FF likhkar dil ke sare armaan poore kar leti hoon.

Chapter 8

Kalyani: "Tum to vahi ho na jo sampada ke saath the. Atharv, right?"

Atharv: "Haan, aur main janta hoon Tum Ahalya Niwas kyu aai ho? Anupriya Deshmukh tumhari sauteli maa hai na?"

Kalyani: "Kya bakwas kar rahi ho?"

Atharv: "Jhooth bolne ka koi faayda nahi h Kalyani. Tumhare baap ne to tumhari maa se shaadi karne ke liye ghar chor diya, lekin Pallavi chachi ka naam to tumne suna hoga. Main unhi ka bhai hoon."

Kalyani: "Mujhse kya chahte ho tum?"

Atharv: "Engagement?" Atharv ne Kalyani ka elbow touch karte huye kaha.

Kalyani ne apna haath churaya aur kaha, "Kya bakwas hai? Tum to Sampada k saath ho na."

"Shakal thik thak h Sampu ke paas, magar paisa...paisa to tumhari sagi aur sauteli dono maao ke paas bhara hua h."

Flashback:

Kalyani's mother in flashback: Kalyani, main tumhare baba ki legal wife nahi hu. Tumhare baba ki shaadi already ho chuki thi jab ham mile the... Magar ham dono pyaar me itne paagal the ki... Mere marne ke baad please Anupriya ko kehna I'm sorry...uske har dukh ke liye"

Kalyani apne aansoo ponchte huye boli: "Theek hai. Main taiyyar hu."

"Kalyani?" Malhar ki awaz sunte hi Kalyani ne apne apko normal karne ki koshish ki.

"Kya hua Kalyani? Tum ro rahi thi kya?" Malhar was concerned.

"Nahin... dekhiye kahaan h mere aansoo."

"Kabhi kabhi dil ki udaasi itni gehri hoti h ki aansoo dikhaii nahi dete," Malhar ne Kalyani ke sir ko thapthapakar kaha.

"Sampada kahan gayi Malharji?"

"Pata nahi. Tum nahi dikhi to main itna dar gaya tha ki Sampada ka khayal hi nahin aaya."

"Mere liye Aap sampada ko bhi bhool gaye..."

Malhar aur Kalyani bike par vaapis ghar hi laut rahe the ki Saawan ke tez hawa ke jhonke halki boondabaadi me badal gaye.

Kalyani thinking to herself: "Mujhe kisi se pyaar nahi h fir kyun Atharv se shaadi karne par mujhe us par gusse se zyada ek ajib sa dard, ek ajib si ghabrahat ho rahi h."

Malhar thinking to himself: "mujhe Kalyani bilkul bhi pasand nahi h, fir kyun uske mere paas na hone ke khayal se hi main itna dar jaata hoon?"

And the episode ends with this song:

https://youtu.be/9XXgAQiBaEw