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chandu update dedo na yaar
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dear plzzzz update next part🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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PART 4: SHUBMANGAL SAAVDAAN


at malhar' house:


avni falls unconscious, kuch hi dher mein pawar waha malhar se milne pahunchta hai, he sees avni on the floor. usse utane ki koshsish karta hai, but avni remained unconscious. pawar usse hospital lejata hai.


at mandap:


vikarm goda ki maang mein sindoor bharta hai, shaadi sampann hota hai, uske baadh vadhu aur var sab ke aashirwaad lete hai.


damini: hum bahut kush naseeb hai jo humare ghar mein tum bahut bankar aa rai ho.


goda doesn't reply because she knows ki loge awaaz sun kar pehchaanlenge. everyone thinks ki woh sharma rahi hai isiliye kuch bol nay pa rai hai.


AS: damini ji chaliye hum sab khana khalete hai, mehmaan bhi intazaar kar rahe hai.


everyone goes to eat.


pallavi: AS ab goda har waqt ayise ghungat mein tho nay rehsakti na, jab iss shaadi ka sach sab ke saamne aayegi tab hum kya karenge AS?


AS: hume kuch karne ki zaroorat hi nay padegi pallavi, tum bas woh karo jo hum tumse karenekeliye bolenge, tum jaake apne naye daamad ki kaatirdaari karo, usse yeh juice pilao. aur humareliye ek acchi si chai leke aao.


pallavi thinks in mind 'itni tension main bhi iss budiya ko khane peene ki padi hai, aur yeha tension se mera dimaag phat raha hai'


at the store room:


malhar is on cloud nine after hearing kallu's words. kalma hug each other.


they sit down on the floor, malhar places his head on kallu's lap and starts playing with her fingers.


malhar: tumhe pata hai kalyani, uss din uss haatse ke baadh, sab ne kaha ki tum kabhi waapas nay aaogi, par mera mann nahi maan raha tha, main yeh maan ne keliye hi tayaar nay tha ki tum kabhi muje chod ke jaa sakti ho. jaise jaise waqt guzar ta gaya aur tum nay aayi, mera dimaag ne uss baath ko accept karliya ki shaayad humara milna kismat mein tha hi nay. par yeh jo dil hai na woh kahina kahi jaanta tha ki tum aaogi.. mereliye...humare pyaar keliye.. aur tum aayi.


he kisses her hand. kalyani smiles.


kalyani: kekin muje kabhi aapki yaad nay aayi..


malhar: kya? main maan hi nay sakta, jhoot bhol rai ho tum.


kalyani: nay nay sach bol rai hoon main, aapki thoda sa bhi yaad nay aayi muje.


malhar makes puppy face.


kalyani: q ki yaadh tho unhe kiya jaata hai jise hum bhoolgaye ho, par aap tho humesha mere dil mein rehte hai, phir mein aap ko yaadh q karoongi.


malhar smiles and hugs her.


kalyani: waise aap ko pata hai, inn 5 years main na bahut si ladkon ke muje propose kiya tha. unh mein se tho kuch ladke ithne hot the na ki main kya bataao. aur ek ki height tho aap se kaafi zyaada thi.


hearing this malhar gets annoyed.


malhar: humesha mere height ka mazaak udana zaroori hai kya kalyani nay. tum ne kudh ko dekha hai? inn 5 saal mein pizzas, burgers kha kha ke kithna phoolgai ho pataa hai. dekho pait bhi bahaar aaraha hai.


kalyani starts hitting malhar and he trys to stop her.


malhar: are mazaak kar raha tha, tum kaha moti ho kalyani tum tho katrina jaise hot ho, aur tum hi mere height ka mazaak uda sakti ho kya, thoda mazak main bhi kar sakta hoon.


kalyani: ek min, ek min iska matlab katrina aapko hot lagti hai. pehle tho aap movie ke naam pe ithna chidte the, abhi katrina aapko hot bhi lagne lagi hai. pata nay inn 5 saal mein mere peeche kya kya kiya hoga aapne.


malhar: are kya bole jaa rai ho, kuch bhi. main sirf tumhe dekhta hoon kalyani, katrina ho ya kareena ho, mere nazron mein tum duniya ki sab se pretty ladki ho.


kalyani blushes.


malhar gets a call. it's pawar. he tells malhar everything and that he brought avni to hospital.


malhar: kalyani muje hospital jaana hoga, avni table se ghir gai aur abhi woh hospital mein hai.


kalyani: malhar ji main bhi chalti hoon, abhi shaadi bhi ruk gaya hoga, hum wapas aake sab samhaal lenge. abhi hospital jaana zaroori hai. avni ko humari zaroorat hai.


malhar: teek hai kalyani. chalo.


at AN:


AS and pallavi goda ko acche se samjaake kamre mein bejte hai, jaha vikram already dulhan ka wait kar raha hai.


vikarm: are darwaaze ke paas q kadi ho, andar aao kalyani. aao.


goda walks towards vikarm, vikram makes her sit on the bed.


vikarm: ab yeh ghoongat utarogi bhi kalyani? mujse kya sharmana, ab tho humari shaadi hochuki hai aur main timhara pati hoon. waise bhi ek DM par ithna sharmaana suit nay karta.


he smiles and ghoongat utata hai


ghoongat ke neeche goda ko dekh kar he gets shocked.


vikram: goda, yeh sab kya hai, tum yeha kya kar rai ho? aur kalyani kaha hai. sach sach batao chal kya raha hai.


goda: vikram ji, yeh aap kya kehrahe hai? hum doni ki shaadi huyi hai, main aapni patni hoon, kalyani nay.


vikram: dhoka, dhoka kiya tum Deshmuks ne milke. ithna bada dhoka. main abhi jaake mom ko sab batata hoon..


he walks towards the door to open ki but beech mein behoosh hojaata hai.


goda usse utakar bed pe sulati hai.


at AS room:


pallavi: kya plan banaya aapne AS. saano bhi mare aur laati bhi na toote. aap ka jawaab nay AS.


AS gives an evil smile.


on the other hand first night goes well for newly married couple 😂😂😂 without groom even knowing it.


at hospital:


kalma reaches hospital


malhar: pawar sab teek hai? avni kaisi hai.


pawar makes a sad face.


doctor comes


doctor: we are sorry Mr rane. hum bacche ko bachanay paaye. internal bleeding ki wajah se hospital pahunchne se pehle hi bacche ki death hogai thi.


everyone gets sad listening to this.


malhar thinks in this situation avni needs someone from her family to be with her and to handle her when she gets to know the bitter truth.


he informs her family and avni's parents reaches the hospital.


malhar: avni ko abhi tak humne kuch nay bataya, woh abhi tak hosh mein nay aayi hai. main yeh baat apne mooh se usse nay bata paaonga. main aap se request karta hoon ki aap hi usse yeh sach bataye.


avni's dad: hum samaj sakte hai baita, tumne bahut kuch kiya avni keliye. shaayad ithna hum bhi nay kar paate. reputation ke mooh mein hum apni hi beti ki kudh se dhoor rake aur bina koyi rishte ke tumne usse apna kar uske mushkil waqt mein uske daal banke kade huye. hum humesha timhara shukr guzaar rahenge.


nurse aakar kehti hai ki avni ko hosh aagaya.


malhar was about to go inside. but avni's dad stops him.


avni's dad: beta tumne bahut kuch saha hai. aur avni ki zimmedaari lekhar usse poori imaandari se nibhaya bhi. lekin ab hum tumhe aur takleef nay dena chahte. abhi humari baari hai avni ki zimmedaari leneki. tum ab se avni ki zimmedaariyon se aazad ho. usse hum sambhaalenge. tum ab bina koyi boj ke apni zindagi mein aage bado. apne kushiyon ko gale lagao.jaao beta. kalyani ke saat ek nayi zindagi ki shuruat karo.


malhar: lekin uncle avno ko iss haal mein chod kar kaise..main..


avni's dad: beta, hum jaante hai, iss waqt uski haalat naazook hai, uska hum extra dyaan rakhenge, dheere dheere woh iss kadwa sach ko bhi apna legi. usse bhi aage badna hoga. tum jaao, pareshaan mat ho.


kalma leaves


next morning


kalma reaches AN, they were expecting to be showered by questions. but kalma were sure ki unhe kya karna hai, kaise handle karna hai.


kalma ne raaste mein decide karliya tha ki avni ka sach sab ko pata kar, mandap se kisiko bina bataye jaane keliye maadi maang kar, sab ko yeh bhi bayenge ki woh dono shaadi karna chahte hai.


malhar: kya hua kalyani,ithni pareshaan q ho? kabhu na kabhi tho insab ka saamna karna hi hai na, aur waise bhi, pyaar kiya tho darna kya.


kalyani: malhar ji, iss situation mein bui aapko mazaak sooch rai hai? yeha tension ke maare muje heart attack ane ke symptoms dikh rahe hai yeh soch kar ki aaayi kaise react karegi..


malhar: kuch nay hoga kalyani main hoon na.


malhar holds kalyani's hand, assuring her that everything will be fine.


AS sees kalma together and gets angry. but controls herself and shows fake love and concern for kalyani.


AS: kalyani tum aagai, haye parmeshwara, humne kaha kaha nay doonda tumhe kalyani, bagwaan ka shukar hai ki tum sahi salaamat ghar aagai. hum jaante the, isine tumhe kidnap kiya hoga, hum nay chodenge isse. pallavi police ko phone lagao.


kalyani: nay AS rukiye, kisiko bulaneki zaroorat nay hai, malhar ji ne muje kidnap nay kya, main apne marzi se unke saat gayi thi.


anupriya comes there and is shocked to see kalyani with malhar.


anupriya: yeh kya ho raha hai? kalyani tumhe tho kamre mein vikram ke saat hona chahiye na? tum yeha malhar ke saat kya kar rai ho? bhoolo mat ki ab tumhari shaadi hochuki hai, istarah parai mardh se milna julna bandh karna hoga tumhe kalyani.


kalma are shocked hearing this


malhar: shaadi? kaisi shaadi? kalyani poora waqt mere saat thi kal se. koyi shaadi waadi nay huyi hai iska. yeh aap kya bol rai ho maai?


anupriya: apni bakwaas bandh karo, kal hum sab ke aankhon se saamne shaadi kalyani aur vikram ki shaadi huyi thi. AS aap kuch boliye na.


AS and pallavi stands there like a statue.


goda and vikram comes out from their room holding hands and goda is all shy and blushing.😂😂😂


anupriya is shocked to see them like that.


AS explains the whole thing saying she did all this taaki mehmaanon ke saamne Deshmuks and Deshpandes ki bezti naa ho. she says ki apni aur unki reputation bachane keliye yeh sab kiya.


kalma are happy to see goda and vikram as a married couple.


anupriya stares at kalyani angrily. and kalyani notices it.


kalyani: aayi main jaanti hoon tum is waqt bahut gusse mein ho, isse pehle ki tum muje madhuri ki beti hone ka taana maaro ek bhaar malhar ji baat sunlo. please aayi.


malhar tells everyone that avni is not his avni and under unavoidable circumstances he had to introduce her as his wife to the society and everything.


anupriya is still not happy as she thinks malhar is not right for kalyani as he shot her 5 years before and left her to die.


kalyani: main jaanti hoon aayi tum kya soch rai ho. main bhi malhar ji se bahut gussa thi isiliye 5 saal tak aap sab se dhoor rahi hoon main. par aayi, main kithna bhi apni feelings se baagon, kithna bhi koshish karoon iss baat se inkaar nay karsakti hoon ki main aaj bhi malhar ji se utna hi pyaar karti hoon. uss din hua woh nay hona chahiye tha. pata nay main uss baat ko kabhi bhool bhi paaongi ya nay. lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki apni aage ki zindagi malhar ji ke bina nay jee paaongi. isiliye humne faisla liya hai ki hum shaadi karenge.


anupriya is shocked. but at the same time even she knows ki kalyani malhar se kithna pyaar karti hai. and malhar se door rehne se kalyani kabhi kush nay rehpayegi. so she keeps quiet.


AS has nothing to say as she is still trying to figure out how shez gonna deal with damini when she gets to know all this.


kalma holds hands and smiles at each other and are ready for a new beginning of their life.


THE END


Thanks for patiently waiting and reading this FF. Love you all. Will be back with a new one soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Aree ye kya

Itne jaldi the end


Good update chandu

Waiting for more of your works

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Nice update Chandu ji

GoRam shaadi❤️

KalMa❤️

So cute

nok-jhonk and romance

AS and Pallavi🤣

GoRam SR☺️😆

Felt bad for Avni😭

But her family members accepted her❤️👍🏼

KalMa declared their love in front of everyone

Anu accepted

Happy ending ❤️

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46
itni jaldi end but jitna vi tha bahut maza aaya😍😍😍😍😍 plzzzzzz new story ke sath jaldi wapas aayega chandu🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Aree ye kya

Itne jaldi the end


Good update chandu

Waiting for more of your works


Woh na, actual story aage nikal chuki hai na, so muje yeh continue karne ka ideas and motivation nay mil rahe the. So thought of giving it a possible ending.

Thank you❤

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Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Nice update Chandu ji

GoRam shaadi❤️

KalMa❤️

So cute

nok-jhonk and romance

AS and Pallavi🤣

GoRam SR☺️😆

Felt bad for Avni😭

But her family members accepted her❤️👍🏼

KalMa declared their love in front of everyone

Anu accepted

Happy ending ❤️

Thanks for writing 👍🏼


Thank you bagu ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sehreemlove

itni jaldi end but jitna vi tha bahut maza aaya😍😍😍😍😍 plzzzzzz new story ke sath jaldi wapas aayega chandu🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏


Thank you so much. 🤗

Am glad that u liked it. ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice update Chandu Ji..

KalMa are together 😊❤️

Pallavi bhi khush GoRam shaadi se.. 👍🏼

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