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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Please continue writing ladies you are doing a good job. I just want to read something positive and romantic about my babies. Miss them so much and the CV just want them to suffer and not be happy with each other

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It’s beautiful yarr .... neera bhagu n rekha...

do write more...

One more thing if cvs try their hand on memory loss track they should just concern this story.... it’s that good it will look awesome on screen if they just copy paste.....

each part is so amazing....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

It’s beautiful yarr .... neera bhagu n rekha...

do write more...

One more thing if cvs try their hand on memory loss track they should just concern this story.... it’s that good it will look awesome on screen if they just copy paste.....

each part is so amazing....

we can boast off actually .Forum mein behetarin writers hai. We should indulge our writing skill here often . Mere kitne sare saheliyan kitni acchi likhti hai chupo mat ...come out And Chakde fatte !
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

we can boast off actually .Forum mein behetarin writers hai. We should indulge our writing skill here often . Mere kitne sare saheliyan kitni acchi likhti hai chupo mat ...come out And Chakde fatte !

yeah we have better writers....

kash mai bhi likh pati... my bad..,

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Continue this story writers

I am waiting for your update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: leelavathi845

Continue this story writers

I am waiting for your update

If u wish u can also write . We need multiple writers .
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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Please continue it is awesome 🙏

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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Please continue this story

Please I am eagerly waiting for your lovely update

It's lock down guys very boring

Please upload

Edited by leelavathi845 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Scene 11

Malhar was puzzled due to those flashes

Kalyani came with tea

Malhar- I am sorry Kalyani

Kalyani- Malhar ji! Aap sorry mat boliye. Kya hua

Malhar- Maine abhi flashes dekhe ki main tumpe bahut gussa tha. Tumhare saath bahut bura bartav kiya. He told only half truth and did not utter about marriage

Kalyani- Kuch bhi kya Malhar ji! Are nahi aisa kuch nahi hua tha. Bass bura sapna dekha hoga aur aap mujhe kyu datoge?

Malhar- Ha! Woh bhi sahi baat hai. Lekin sorry bolne se kuch nahi hota. Thanks for lighting my mood.

Kalyani left from there and somewhat happy that he remembered something about her

she was smiling

just then Sampada entered there

Sampada- Itna smile kyu kar rahi ho Kalyani?

Kalyani- Tumhein kya? Phir bhi bata deti hoon ki bahut jald Malhar ji ki yaddasht wapas aayegi. Phir tumhara kya hoga Sampada?

Sampada- Jyada uchalna mat. Tumhari ye smile main cheen lungi

Kalyani- jo karna hai karlo! I don't care

Sampada was scared and restless

in mind- Kuch na kuch karna hoga Malhar ko convince karne ke liye. Warna uski yaddasht wapas aayi toh meri khair nahi

she got idea

she went to his room

Malhar- Sampada tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Please go. Maine kaha tha pehle tumhari wafai sabit karo

Sampada- Aisa kyu kar rahe ho tum? Main keh rahi hoon na. Tumhein mujhpar vishwas nahi par uss sapne par jyada bharosa hai. Thik hai mera mar jaana hi behtar hai

she poured kerosene on her and was about to light matchstick

Malhar was shocked and stopped her

he hugged her and said - Sorry! I trust you

(He was not convinced fully, but due to this incident he had no choice)

Sampada smirked

After some time Kalyani came there but was shocked to see SamHar so close to each other

she coughed to make them realise

she was hurt

Sampada- Are tum! Thank you Kalyani. Malhar ab mujhpe bharosa karta hai.

Kalyani was surprised and left from there

she was crying

Sampada- I told you na! Your smile will fade away

she laughed evilly

10-15 days passed

Malhar somehow managed to trick Sampada and escaped from her close touches

KalMa were chatting casually

Malhar- Kalyani! Apne baare mein bolo jara. Tumhein koi boyfriend vagaira hai kya? Chinta mat karo. Mai ko main samjhaunga. He laughed

Kalyani was surprised and angry (apni patni ko uske boyfriend ke baare mein puch rahe hai. Abhi maza chakhati hoon)

Kalyani- ha! Hai na. Kal ghar pe bhi aayega coffee ko. Milna uss se

Kalyani convinced Rahul to act as her fake boyfriend. He is her good friend

Rahul came to AN next day

Rahul- Hi! Baby. Kaisi ho❤️. I love you so much and hugged her

Kalyani- Love you too babu

Malhar came there and laughed at their nicknames

Malhar- Hello! Main iske behen ka pati

Rahul- Hello sir. Nice to meet you! My name is Rahul! Naam toh suna hi hoga

Malhar- Nice jodi

KalRa- Yes! We love each other a lot. Abhi college khatam hone ke baad shaadi hi karenge

Malhar- Are career ke baare mein socho

Rahul- Ha! Don't worry sir. Meri baby khush rahegi

Kalyani- Ha re mela babu

hum dono bahut films dekhenge

Anu was uncomfortable to see all this

Sampada was happy and smirked

KalRa fed food to each other and they drank coffee from one cup only

Malhar was ok till timebeing, but this drinking coffee from one cup irked him

Rahul take their off

Kalyani went to drop him

she hit him

Kalyani- Kitni overacting ki yaar tumne! Kisi ko shaq hota toh

Rahul- Waise tera pati hai handsome. Are acchi acting ki maine. Ek toh tumhare saath woh lovey dovey acting karna kitna difficult hai. We are buddies. Aur meri girlfriend toh mujhe mar hi dalegi. Waise it is affecting your husband. Last ko coffee pite waqt unke expressions change hue

Kalyani- Sach?

Rahul- ha! Chal bye

Malhar was ok that day

but he felt little bit insecure next day as he was about to drop Kalyani but Rahul came and took her with him! He was little bit jealous also but could not figure out why he felt like that

Edited by Bacillusbadius - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Very nice and I like Malhar jealous

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