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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part - 3

Flames: in our life, sudden miracle can happen to anyone in any time. We will lost our heart in that miracle.
Uma lost himself, chandan ki mehek spreads in the air. He goes closer and closer to her, he touches her shoulder, that made her shaken. His face was so close to her shoulder. A drop of water from his head drops in her shoulder. She gives a jerk. She tried to release herself from his hold. The grip of his, in her stomach was too tight. She tried to remove his hand. The tries of her made the water to shake. The waves were created in the water. Uma realised that she wanted to release. Immediately, he takes off his hand. Kanak lost her balance and falls on the water. And uma too. Large shake in the water.
Uma comes to the surface. She also comes to the surface.
But he couldn't find her. He searches her in the water. She didn't find anyone around her.
Both of them were clueless. She searches in the water. But she couldn't find him.
Some voices in the banks, calling her.
Kanak,...kanak...come soon, we are already late to the college.
Kanak looks around. She looks at her friends. She walks, and comes to the bank
Flames: look at her. A young girl who carries charming beauty, delightful eye which twinkles like a star and Little pink lips. Innocent face like a baby. Her skin glowes like a gold. And always carry a smile in her lips.
Uma looks around, then comes to the banks, takes a towel and covers his body.
Kanak's friend gives her a towel. She wipes her face.
Uma and kanak once again looks at the river. They remembered the thing happened.
Friend of kanak says, kanak, come lets go.
Kanak sits in the scooty.
A bullcart comes near to uma.
The man in the cart says, dhadhusa, come i will drop u at the house. Uma nods and sit in that
Kanak travels and her eye were still on the river, they pass through the river bank.
Uma looks at the river, cart shakes because of the up and down in the soil road. Uma was lost in his thought, he lost himself, the cart goes through the market place, the noise of people in the shop, sounds of horse and bulls in the roads. The temple elephant pass through the street. The street was fill with different types of shop. The young girls buying ribbons and bangles.The ladies carries large pots in their head.
Kanak was sitting in the scooty. Sounds of vehicles and people didn't reached her ears atall.

Flames: miracle can changes the world.






Iceblue thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
I can't drink alcohol but Geetha your stories are as good as coke/ Pepsi! Love and hugs dear friend!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update Geeta,

You made me very curious with the prologue itself and this update made me more intriguing..

Eagerly waiting for your next update. 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
My oh my! This is amazing!
Can I ask for an update as a birthday present?
The way you describe how he was lost in Kanak was beautiful!
Sorry I didnt see this earlier!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome story Geetha... It's really well written. Thanks and update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
So beautiful update geetha!
I loved how he was lost in kanak!
Thanks for the update!
Update soonish!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

I can't drink alcohol but Geetha your stories are as good as coke/ Pepsi! Love and hugs dear friend!

Hai ice
Thank u dear.
I am glad that u like the story.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Beautiful update Geeta,

You made me very curious with the prologue itself and this update made me more intriguing..

Eagerly waiting for your next update. 🤗

Hai manasa.
Thank u dear.
Thank u so much for the lovely comment.
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Mayakhan12

My oh my! This is amazing!

Can I ask for an update as a birthday present?
The way you describe how he was lost in Kanak was beautiful!
Sorry I didnt see this earlier!

Hai maya
Thank u dear.
Happy birthday dear
I am sorry for the late reply,
Sure, i will update the next part by this evening.
It will be ur birthday present.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
Once again, sorry for the late reply

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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Awesome story Geetha... It's really well written. Thanks and update soon.

Hai mansi
Thank u dear.
Thanks for reading.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
By this evening, i will update the next part.

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