Find my love world part - 15 updated ( 18th march)

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _Asfii_
So beautiful update geetha!
I loved how he was lost in kanak!
Thanks for the update!
Update soonish!

Hai asfia.

Thank u dear.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

By this evening, i will update the next part dear

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya
Thank u dear.
Happy birthday dear
I am sorry for the late reply,
Sure, i will update the next part by this evening.
It will be ur birthday present.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
Once again, sorry for the late reply

Thank you so much Geetha!

Thats okay! I look forward to reading it!

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Part - 4

I dedicate this update to maya.

Happy birthday maya.

I hope, u will like my present

Uma reaches his house, a voice from the backyard, "maasa, dhadhusa has came... Maasa"

It is a girl voice. She runs into the house, she reaches the pooja room.

She stands near doorsteps, maasa... Dhadhusa has came.

Maasa turns, and looks at her.

Flames: koushalya, mother of uma shankar, who was a widow, Who always in light sandal saree wears rudrakshamala in her neck. Her heart is pure like a gold and loves everyone.

Maasa: chandrajyoti... Give this prasad to everyone.

Chandrajyoti gets prasad plate from maasa's hand.

Flames: chandrajyoti who is a orphan, who was a servant in the house, but maasa treat her as own her daughter.

Chandrajyoti runs into uma.

Chandrajyoti: dhadhusa, takes this prasad.

But uma was lost in his own thoughts. Chandrajyoti looks at him,

Chandrajyoti: dhadhusa... Dhadhusa

Uma comes to the reality, and answers her. Maasa comes to the living room. She looks at uma, she slowly walks towards him. Uma gets the prasad from chandrajyoti. Uma moves, but maasa stops her steps after hearing the delight noise. Maasa looks uma carefully. Uma comes near to maasa. He touches her feets.

Maasa blesses him.

Maasa: i wish the thing in ur mind, come true.

Uma looks at her.

Uma: maasa...!!!

Maasa:did u meet someone.

Uma thinks about kanak. And he looks at her.

Maasa comes near to him. She takes the earring which is hanging in his dhoti. And looks at earring.

Uma was surprised to see the earring. He remembers that, it was kanak's earring. Maasa looks at earring very closely.

Maasa: uma, i haven't seen such design like this before

Uma: but, it is a earrings maasa.

Maasa: you didn't know, but in my life time, i never saw such design like this.where did u get this.

Uma goes to his room, maasa follows him. He sits in the bed.

Maasa: what happened,

Uma: today i met a girl in the river side, and this earring also belongs to her. He didn't see her face.

A smile appeared in maasa's face.

Uma: i holded her too closely, her chandan fragrance attracted me, i lost myself in her.

Uma looks down,

Uma: maasa, i touched her. i frightened her, she disappeared, because of the fear.

Maasa: uma...

Uma: how stupid, i am ... How i behaved like this.

Maasa: uma... Calm down.

Maasa gives earring to uma and goes. Uma holds the earring in his hand. The fresh wind passes through, the earring dances and makes a lovely noise, which delighted with the fragrance of chandan. The scent of chandan runs into his breathe. Uma closes his eye with a delight pleasure. The feel of his heart was reflected in his face.

Maasa comes to the pooja room.

Maasa: thank u god. Finally, u accepted my prayer, u have send a girl in uma's life thank u shivji.

Flames: the things which happens around u may not clear to u. But it is destiny that was decided.

Uma still holds the earring

Flames: destiny has made him the owner of the thing that he holds.

You cannot run from the thing what is meant for u.

Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Hi Geetha! Thanks so much for dedicating this to me!

It was beautiful and I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Mayakhan12
Hi Geetha! Thanks so much for dedicating this to me!
It was beautiful and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hai maya.

Thank u dear.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments

Happy birthday dear

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Divyaamurali

@Divyaamurali

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Hi Geethu wonderful update dear lovely conversation between massa and uma beautiful rapport between ma and beta. Uma is lost in thoughts of kanak😳that earring line was awesome dear he is going to own that earring soon😉Pls update next part dear 😊

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali
Hi Geethu wonderful update dear lovely conversation between massa and uma beautiful rapport between ma and beta. Uma is lost in thoughts of kanak😳that earring line was awesome dear he is going to own that earring soon😉Pls update next part dear 😊

Hai divya.

Thank u dear.

Thanks for reading

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

Soon, i will update the next part.

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Manasa Rekha

@manasa.123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Beautiful update dear.

Really loved the way you narrated uma's blissful expressions.

Thank you dear for the update.

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: manasa.123
Beautiful update dear.

Really loved the way you narrated uma's blissful expressions.

Thank you dear for the update.

Hai manasa.

Thanks for reading

I am happy to hear that

Thank u so much for the lovely comments dear