Find my love world part - 15 updated ( 18th march)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai guys,
I am starting a new story, "find my love world". Love can cross anything, why not the worlds.
The foot steps of the people always there in the temple stairs. Temple bell sounds were never ending. Some prayers comes true. Some are not. But still they come.
They lights lamp in the prayers. The lamps were differ from eachother, but the flames are still same. Some flames burns and gives light, until the oil gets over, but some flames disappears with the wind. Why some of them, want to disappear with the wind, why! they don't wait for the oil to get over.
Some, still remains there and dances with the blow of wind. They want to immense in this pleasure. The wind shakes them and dash them but still, the flames enjoys the touches. The wind carries the cold breeze amd hugs the flames but they covert the cold into warm, and not giving up easily. They are playing hard to get.
The flames looks at each other and smiles. They talks with each other
Flame 1: we are going to disappear with the wind.
Flame 2: yes, we are going to disappear in our love. The love of disappear.
Flame 3: love of disappear!!!
Flame 2: yes
Flame 1: we are going to disapear for our oned ones.
Flames smiles.
Flame2: love is beyond everything. Disappearing is the beginning,
Flame3: beginnig.
Flame2: yes beginnig.
Flames starts the story, the love is beyond everything. Love exists in everything. Love can cross anything...

The sun slowly touches the earth, with its lovely rays. The man was sitting in the banks of the river. The mantras that he chants were echoing in the wind.
His bare body with hard muscles, janeu thread across his chest.
A rudraksha mala was in his hand. The mantras, he chant was clear to everyone. The sun rays falls on his face. His eye were powerful like a sun. A tilak on his forehead. A soft smile in his lips.
He says, " jai bholenath"


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manasa.123 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Geeta

The flames as narrators is such a brilliant idea and the way described flames is simply superb.

Uma's entry is phenomenal.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.

Is it the time travel story you mentioned? 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful narration of the first part geetha!

Uma's entry was very nicely said by you!

Waiting to read more.. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...the flames are narrating the story...this is interesting.
Uma's entry is lovely. Beautifully described by you.

Looking forward to it!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Geethu starting itself awesome dear the way u narrated about the flames was 👏extraordinary Uma s entry is stunning plz update the next part soon 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part - 2


Flame 2: in this world, each and everyone meant for someone. They were their soulmate. They meet each other sooner or later in their life time.
The man says, " jai bholenath". His face was pure and wise.
He looks at everyone,
He says, the prayer was over, u may all go now.
The group of the men nods their heads, and obeys him
Some voices were talking about him
Stranger: who is that man
Villager: his name was uma shankar.
Stranger: uma shankar...
Villager: a great devotee of lord shiv. A dharmic person with a wise knowledge. He preach dharam to the people.
Stranger: so he is a preacher.
Villager: he is not only a preacher but also a great vaid.
Stranger: what a man, his mother was blessed to have a son like him.
Villager: yes, but ...
Stranger: but what!!!!!
Villager: he is 30 years old now, but he refused to marry, he never looks at women.
Stranger: strange.
Villager: his mother's only praying was want him to get marry.
Stranger: i wish he will meet his soulmate soon.
The voices slowly disappears,
Flames: some prayers can come true.
Uma gets up from the floor, and walks towards the river infront of him. Suddenly, a little hand touches his large arms, uma turns and looks, it was his little brother shiv.
Shiv: dhadhusa, have u completed ur prayer.
Uma lifts shiv in his arms.
Uma: no, my sweet little, i have to do my suryanamaskar. U go first.
He puts him down and then he goes
Uma turns and looks at the river. The waves touches the river bank. The bubbles were like milk. Uma walks towards the river. His steps were slow and stead.
A sound of payal, rushing towards the river. She runs, her foot marks were printed in the wet sand. The beautiful legs were in hurry. Finally she reaches the tip of the river, but she stopped, she lifted her skirt. The skirt was golden yellow in colour, her payal was visible and pretty in her beautiful legs.
Uma places his foot in the water.
She slowly lifts her leg and tried to place in the water. It touches lightly in the water, but she takes back, and shakes her leg, her payal rings. Again she placed her leg in the water but this time, she never takes back. She walks towards the river.
Uma goes to the centre of the river.
She goes to the middle of the river.
Uma dips inside the river. The sun rays falls in his bare body shines. She turns immediately dips in the water.
Uma gets back to the surface, again he goes into the water. She comes up and again she goes down.
The sparkling water in the river, bubbles and shaking in the water. Uma forwards his hand tried to come to thed surface. He grabbed something, with a suddenly movement he comes to the surface.
The water in his head, blocked him to see what it is. He shakes his head to release the water from the hair.
He looks, to his surprise, it was a girl. He is holding her very closely. He holded her from the back side. He realised that he was holding a girl. When he was about to release her from his hold, she lost her balance and she dashes his face.
He closes his eye without knowing, and allows him to response. Her chandan ki mehek, enters into his breathe. Uma inhales the purest form of chandan. For first time in his life time, he experiences the scent of a girl. Her hair touches his face. He opens his eye, he sees the shoulder of her. Her skin was so pure, her half back was covered by her wet hair. Again she lose her balance, because of the soil under the river. Uma holded her. His grip was tight. He placed his hand in her stomach. His large hand wrapped her stomach by his hold. Uma feels the softness in her skin. She turns her head right and left. Uma sees her earings. It was golden earing with some pearls.











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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasa.123

Hi Geeta

The flames as narrators is such a brilliant idea and the way described flames is simply superb.

Uma's entry is phenomenal.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.

Is it the time travel story you mentioned? 🤗

Hai manasa.
Thank u dear.
Yes, it is time travel story.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Beautiful narration of the first part geetha!

Uma's entry was very nicely said by you!

Waiting to read more.. 😊

Hai asfia.
Thank u dear.
Thanks for reasing and commenting.
I have updated the next part, i hope u will like.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: M_Nira

Wow...the flames are narrating the story...this is interesting.
Uma's entry is lovely. Beautifully described by you.

Looking forward to it!!

Hai nira.
Thank u dear.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I have updated the next part. I hope u will like the part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai manasa.
Thank u dear.
Yes, it is time travel story.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments


Thank u geetha for the update..

Interesting update dear..

Eagerly waiting for next one..🤗

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