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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Hi Geetha
Your replies to others are making me more curiouser and curiouser on what happens next.

Please update it soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part - 9


Uma follows her. He runs behind her. He could see her running in a distance. But, A sudden mist came in his way. And covers the whole place. Uma was stuck in the mist. He waves his hands to clear the mist. He couldn't see anything properly. But he still clears the mist by his hands.

Flames: The sudden mist will be cleared, when the time comes. The time will create the magic. The magic will bring them together. They have to wait for the time to come.

Finally uma clears the mist around him. He started to run. But he stopped. He couldn't see the girl. Uma looks around, don't know where she goes. The word disappointment hurts his heart.

Flames: disappointment is not the word here, but it is a world. Kanak and uma were the two pieces, they have to form together and become one.

Uma comes home, and sits in the wooden chair. Chandrajyoti gives water to him. Uma gets the water from her hand. But he didn't drink the water
Chandrajyoti: dhadhusa, what happen?
Uma was lost in his thought.
Uma didn't gave any answer to her.
Chandrajyoti goes from here. She directly goes to maasa and informs her about uma. Maasa comes to the hall. And sits near to uma. She signals chandrajyoti signals to go. Chandrajyoti obeys her.
Maasa: what happened uma.
Uma looks at maasa.
Uma: maasa, today i met that girl.
Maasa smiles on hearing those words.
Maasa: where?
Uma: near by the temple. But she disappeared.
Maasa: what...
Uma: i saw her face. She was so pretty. She was so different from others. Her dressing manner also very different. I never saw any girl dressed like that.
Maasa: what! How she looks
Uma: she didn't tired her hair. But her hair was properly arranged in right manner. In the bottom, it was curly. Her dress also, the colour of dress, i never saw such colour. In her shoulder, she has bag. But it was totally different.
Maasa was surprised, on hearing that.
Uma: She got scared after seeing me.
Maasa: what
Uma: she run away from there.
Maasa: whatever ur saying is unbelieveable. As if u saw an Angel.

Uma: Angel...Angel...











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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Hi Geetha

Your replies to others are making me more curiouser and curiouser on what happens next.

Please update it soon.

Hai manasa
Thanks for reading.
The story will unfold in a different way with some interesting with some fantasy things.
There will be confusion also. But it will be in a sweet manner. I have updated the next part. I hope u like it.
Thank u dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai manasa
Thanks for reading.
The story will unfold in a different way with some interesting with some fantasy things.
There will be confusion also. But it will be in a sweet manner. I have updated the next part. I hope u like it.
Thank u dear.


Thank you Geetha for the update.

It's very interesting.

Eagerly waiting for next update where hopefully they meet again.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: manasa.123


Thank you Geetha for the update.

It's very interesting.

Eagerly waiting for next update where hopefully they meet again.


Hai manasa
Thank u dear.
Thanks for reading
Yes, they will meet for sure. But this time, their meeting will change everything,
Their relationship will get a new name and new identity.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
By evening, i will update the next part dear

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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai manasa
Thank u dear.
Thanks for reading
Yes, they will meet for sure. But this time, their meeting will change everything,
Their relationship will get a new name and new identity.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
By evening, i will update the next part dear


Waiting for that meeting part now where every thing will be changed.

My would be Thank you for the quick would be update then..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: manasa.123


Waiting for that meeting part now where every thing will be changed.

My would be Thank you for the quick would be update then..

Hai manasa
Thank u dear
May be, that would be take place,
It would be different also.
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Waiting for the update Geetha

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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Waiting for the update Geetha

Hai manasa
Sorry dear for my late update.
Happy valentine's day.
I am on the way to college, by evening i will update the next part.
Once again sorry dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Happy Valentine's Day guys

Part - 10


At night in the hostel room, kanak was in the bed, she was looking at the window side. The moon was already there in the night sky. But the sleep of kanak didn't arrive. Kanak still looking at the moon.
She turns and looks at preethi, she was already slept. Kanak closes her eye, and tries to sleep. A few minutes later, she opens her eye, she goes near to the window. She stands near to the window. The lovely moonlight touches her milky face. In the room of dark, her pretty face shines like a diamond. The north wind disturbs her hair.

Flames: The wind of chill breeze can find out your hidden love, which your heart was searching.

The wind blows heavily , kanak tries to close the window. But she cannot able to close it. Finally, she closes the window, while closing, she turns on hearing a sound, the papers in the table flies in the air, because of the blow of the wind. Kanak closes the window, then she comes to the table, takes the paper which scattered in the floor. Kanak arranges the papers, and keep it, on the table. When she about to move from the place, suddenly she stops, her eye widen like, as if she gets a solution.

Kanak takes one of the paper and goes to the drawing board, keeps the paper in the drawing board, nail the paper in all side. She started to draw. The drawing in her heart made it visual in the paper.

Finally, she completes the drawing, kanak looks at the drawing. It was uma's face.

Flames: drawing will be perfect only, when our thoughts are clear. The moments of meeting can be few seconds, but heart of our mermories, never forgets the moment of destiny.

In the morning, kanak was in college,

Preethi : kanak, u came early to the college without informing me.
Kanak : just i came.
Preethi : what happened kanak.
Kanak : yesterday, i met someone.
Preethi: who?
Kanak: wait, i will show u.
Kanak takes out the drawing from her bag. Kanak opens the folding, when she was about to show the drawing, the hard wind blows, the paper in her hand flew away.
Kanak runs to catch the drawing. The drawing flew up in the air. Kanak runs behind.

Flames: the time of the truth only revealed only the time comes,
The fate has assigned already, the things will happens according to their duty. Let your love fly to him...

Kanak follows the paper, her eye only follows the way of
drawing. Finally, her legs loses their balance, kanak sees the ground, the land of hard stones and sand.

Kanak looks around, the place where she was standing was unfamiliar to her. Then, she looks for the drawing, the paper finally, made it way stable and ready to land down. Kanak smiles, runs towards it. The drawing finally lands, kanak runs but she was stopped. she saw some one 's feet near to the drawing, the hand picks the drawing, and looks at the drawing. The person is none other than uma. Uma looks at the drawing. He was surprised to see his own drawing.

Finally, uma noticed the girl of chandan ki mehek was standing infront of him. Uma was surprised and shocked also. Kanak was under the shock too, the things near to her was very strange. She notice the atmosphere around her was very different, the world around her spins her head. Kanak slowly loses her conscious. Before she could land on the floor. Uma hurried and holds her in his arms.

The girl of his, was in his arms. Chandan ki mehek spreads all over him. Uma lifts her. Her head touches his hard chest, her curly hair falls down, uma looks at her face, the flower of pink colour was resting in his shoulder.

Uma takes her to his house, but no one noticed him, he takes her directly to his room. Kanak was in his arms but he didn't feel her weight atall.

Uma: she is like a feather. Why is she so light?

Uma puts her in the bed, he adjusted the pillow, made it comfortable fo her, he goes ner to her legs, he looks at her pretty legs, her sandals was in golden colour, uma tries to remove the sandals, but he don't know how to release the buckles.
Uma tries to pull them. But the buckles stuck in the white stone. Then uma release the buckles from the stone edge. Kanak was wearing a thin golden colour anklet with a unquie design. Her pink hairpolish in her nails didn't differentiate her skin and the nails. Her flowery skirt covered only up to her knee. Her bear pretty legs were so pure. Uma covers her legs with blanket. Uma touches her soft hand. Uma adjust her pink pearl bracelet, to check her pulse.

Uma looks at her pretty face...












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