Find my love world part - 15 updated ( 18th march)

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Manasa Rekha

@manasa.123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai manasa
Sorry for the late update.
I am stuck with my college work.
Thanks for reminding me.
Soon, i will update the next part
Once again, sorry dear.

Geetha That's ok dear

You are always kind enough to update us as soon as we ask you.

Take your time and update us when u get time..

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Geetha That's ok dear

You are always kind enough to update us as soon as we ask you.

Take your time and update us when u get time..

Hai manasa

Thank u dear.

By this evening, i will update the next part.

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Manasa Rekha

@manasa.123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Waiting for your update dear Geetha

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Sorry guys for my late update, actually i was stuck in a remote area, there i didn't get internet connection. Now only i came back.

Part - 8

Kanak looks at a huge figure, who is standing infront of her. Kanak's heart beats fast. She was lost in her thought, and forget the whole world.

Uma who looks at her with immensed pleasure. In whole of his 30 years, he never tasted the feel like this. The girl, he waited for his whole life, was standing infront of him.

Kanak looks at his eye. Her eye refuse to blink. That look of him pulls her towards him. The leaves from the trees showers like rain. The wonderful sight, the fallen leaves showers her, her hair swings in the air. The wind brings the scent of her. Uma inhales her chandan ki mehek, by closing his eye. A lovely smile rised in his lips. Then he gently opens his eyes. His legs moves inadvertently towards her. His steps were soft and gentle. A beautiful statue infront of him attract like a honey breeze.

A warm tears falls on her cheeks. That makes her to comes to sense. Finally she blinks, she touches her cheeks. And sees her tears.

She looks at sides, she noticed that she was in the middle of woods with meadow landscape. And notice that uma coming towards her. His rudraksha mala in the neck, dashes his chest according to his moves.

Kanak holds her bag with a tight grip. He legs cemented in the sand road. His steps towards her was too close. The fear in her eye falls like a rain. She tries to step back. Her legs didn't support her. Her heart feels a thrill pleasure inside.

The flowers on the branches, fans its petals, and spread its wings and flies with the wind, the fallen flowers perfectly placed themselves in kanak's hair.

Kanak hardly moves her leg backward. Again she steps backwards. Uma notices her moving backward, he increased his steps, kanak runs backwards, finally she turns, and started running, uma runs behind her. Kanak's steps were with force. Her each steps were printed in the sand.

Uma couldn't accept her moving. He follows her. Her loose hair swings in the air. The fallen flowers in her hair dances, kanak runs fast, each hair of her flies in the air, the fallen flowers fights with the wind, and refused to seperate themselves from her hair. The flowers falls one by one from her hair.

Kanak keeps on running, she sees the change in the atmosphere, the meadow was disappearing little by little. Kanak turns back, uma was behind her. Uma runs fast but his fast didn't help him.

Kanak finally sees the meadow disappears, and the sand road, she was running turns into tar road. Finally, she could see the college infront of her. Kanak turns back and noticed her college buses and students.

Kanak finally stops, her legs were arrested, she keeps her both the hands on her knees and rested, her hair falls on her shoulder. Her heart beats in a fast manner. Kanak coughs, and she could feel a pleasant scent near to her, she noticed a flower stuck in her hair. Kanak takes the flower from her hair. A white flower...

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: manasa.123
Waiting for your update dear Geetha

Hai manasa

Sorry dear for late update.

I was stuck in a remote area, i didn't get any internet connection there. Now only i came back.

Sorry dear.

I have updated the next part. I hope u like it

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Mansi_jg

@Mansi_jg

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Beautiful geetha!! I love every small detailed you mentioned, it's very well written ...and very interesting plz update soon. Thanks!! And other ff too!!

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Beautiful geetha!! I love every small detailed you mentioned, it's very well written ...and very interesting plz update soon. Thanks!! And other ff too!!

Hai mansi

Thank u dear

Thanks for reading.

I am glad that u liked it.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments

Soon, i will update the next part

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Iceblue
What imagery Geetha!

Hai ice

Thank u dear

Thanks for reading

I am happy to hear that

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

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Divyaamurali

@Divyaamurali

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Wow Geethu so poetic and the scenario way you narrated was beautiful.👏Geethu do you write poems too. Beautifully penned dear. But why kanak is so frightened what will be uma's next move will he tried to find about her personal details too so that he can approach her family for her rishta 😳

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali
Wow Geethu so poetic and the scenario way you narrated was beautiful.👏Geethu do you write poems too. Beautifully penned dear. But why kanak is so frightened what will be uma's next move will he tried to find about her personal details too so that he can approach her family for her rishta 😳

Hai divya

Thank u dear

I love poems, but this is first time i am trying the poetic lines in the stories.

I am glad that u liked it.

Kanak's frightening will be unfold in the next chapter. Uma will next move will be different.

Kanak's identity will opens in a unique way. With lot of confusion.

Thank u so much for the lovely comments

Soon, i will update the next part dear