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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 7-
Kanak sat in her room, jewellery adorned her neck, arms, hands.
Anyone would say she looked beautiful enough to be a bride, but someone who really knew Kanak would know this pain she had carried alone for 5 years far outweight the heaviness of the jewellery and that practice makes a fake smile perfect.

Kanak was taken out of her day dream when her landline rung loudly.
Picking up she rested the phone to her ear "Hello"
When she heard nothing she was about to put the phone down when she thought better of it.

"Uma, Uma is that you" Kanak asked, her fingers gripped onto the phone tighter, like it was her lifeline.

Kanak allowed herself to drop to the floor "please just talk to me Uma please"
When she still heard nothing she couldn't hold in her tears and began to cry down the phone

"Kanak please dont cry" Uma said
"Why, it doesnt matter to you any other time" Kanak's response was bitter
"Everytime you cry, my heart breaks Kanak"

Kanak sighed heavily "you broke my heart Uma, what about mine"
Uma was interrupted as Rahul walked into Kanak's room "Kanak are you ready" he asked

Uma gripped the phone tighter "is that who you will marry" his voice so loud Rahul smirked
"Yes" Kanak said as Kiran put her thumbs up

Uma slammed the phone down as Kiran hugged Kanak "See, hes jealous and soon you'll see that and he will realise and come back to you"
Kanak nodded "but what if he finds out that Rahul isn't called Kiran and that the only Kiran I know is Rahul's wife"

Kiran shrugged her shoulders "then Kanak he will have shown his jealousy by then"
Kanak nodded "Okay, we can do this"


It was a few hours later when Kanak arrived at the function of Holi.
Surprise, surprise Palomi was stood with colours in her hand ready to surprise Uma.

Kanak was pulled behind a barrier as she came face to face with Uma.
His hand rested on her waist, fingers stroking slowly across her stomach.

"Close your eyes" Uma whispered
Kanak couldnt help but do as he said, Uma grabbed some red powder and wiped it on her cheeks "this time if you blush later on, no one will know"

Kanak opened her eyes, to see Uma had gone.
Looking around Kiran faced her and shook her head "one point to Uma, 0 to Kanak"

Kanak huffed loudly before grabbing some powder and going over to Rahul "Happy Holi" Kanak said as Uma glared at them

Kiran laughed loudly "you won that round but how about a dance off with Palomi"
Kanak nodded "Okay, i can do that, did you put powder on Rahul before i did "
Kiran showed her hands "of course, now go, ill pick the song"
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Part 8-
Laal dupatta
red scarf(dupatta)
Laal dupatta ud gaya re bairi hawa ke jhonke se 2
my red dupatta was blown away by a gust of the cruel wind
Mujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se
and my lover saw me, oh, by accident!
Manaake mujhe dil dega voh, magar meri jaan lega voh 2
I've accepted that he'll give me his heart, but he'll take my own away!

Palomi and Kanak began to dance, both circled around eachother, before holding hands and spinning.
After spinning out, Palomi fell into Uma's arms as Kanak fell into Rahul's.

Laal dupatta
Your red dupatta,
Arre laal dupatta ud gaya re tera hawa ke jhonke se
oh, your red dupatta was blown away by a gust of wind
Laal dupatta ud gaya re tera hawa ke jhonke se
Tujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se
and your lover saw you (just at that moment), by accident
Manaake tujhe dil dega voh, magar apni jaan dega voh 2
You've understood that he'll give you his heart, but he'll take your own

Oh oh oh oh oh

Hey hey hey hey, la la la la la

Rahul grabbed Kanak's red scarf, and putting it over the head, picking her up he spun her around as Uma stood glaring as he watched.

Laakh chhupaaye baithi thi main apne chaand se chehre ko
So many times I've sat silently, hiding my face from the moon
Ek pal mein hi tod diya bairan hawa ne pehre ko
and in one second, a hostile wind broke through all my defenses

Ho, tere chehre ka jaana kuch aisa jaadu chhaa gaya
Oh, darling, your face cast some magic spell,
Mere chaand ko dekhkar chaand bhi sharma gaya
and when the moon saw my own moon, it blushed for shame

Kanak watched as Uma spun Palomi around, dipping her he brought her back up then twisted her outward.

Mujhe sharm si aaye, o mera dil ghabraaye
I'm embarrassed ; my heart troubles me;

Kanak looked away, ready to walk away but Kiran put her thumbs up , and shaking her head.

Arre aa baahon mein chook na jaaye aise mauke se
Oh, come into my arms, don't let this opportunity be missed!
Tujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se
Your lover saw you, oh, by accident
Manaake tujhe dil dega voh, magar apni jaan dega voh

Manaake mujhe dil dega voh, magar meri jaan lega voh

Rahul spun Kanak so that she would spin into Uma's arms.
Faking a phone call Rahul walked away as he watched Uma catch Kanak as she nearly fell.

Haai maheka maheka yeh sama kehne laga aa pyaar kar
This moment is scented, fragrant; it's whispering to us love each other
Mere sone yaar tu dilbar se ikraar kar
My beautiful beloved, say yes to your lover

Ho, tere pyaar ki khushboo meri saanson mein sama gayi
Oh, the perfume of your love has suffused my breath
Le sajna sab chhod main tere peechhe peechhe aa gayi
Look, my love, I've left everything to follow after you

Tujhe pyaar ho gaya, ikraar ho gaya
You've fallen in love; you've accepted me!

Uma continued to look down at Kanak as he pulled her up properly, he focused on the plate that somebody had thrown with red powder that landed on them.

Arre ab to roke na rukoon main kisi ke roke se
Oh, even if I am held back now, even if I am prevented by someone, I won't stop!
Mujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se
Manaake mujhe dil dega voh, magar meri jaan lega voh

Manaake tujhe dil dega voh, magar apni jaan dega voh

Laal dupatta ud gaya re bairi hawa ke jhonke se

Hoye, laal dupatta ud gaya re tera hawa ke jhonke se
Tujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se


Uma remembered when the same thing had happened before. This time Kanak made no move to wipe it away, instead pulled back and walked away.

Manaake mujhe dil dega voh, magar meri jaan lega voh

Manaake tujhe dil dega voh, magar apni jaan dega voh
You've understood that he'll give you his heart, but he'll take your own

Uma watched as Kanak walked away.
Palomi continued to talk to him but he couldn't seem to focus.
Had he been wrong? Did Shiv Ji still wish for them together.


Anger took over his emotions as he saw a man remove the powder in Kanak's hair.
Kiran smiled at Uma "thats who shes marrying"
Uma's hand formed into a fist, missing Kiran hide her laughter as she walked away.
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Part 9-
"Okay Kanak, i have an idea, me and Rahul are going to go home and you ask Uma to drop you home" said Kiran
Kanak shook her head "but what if he says no"

Kiran raised her eyebrow "oh come on, he will love extra time with you"
Kanak nodded "okay, i can do this"
Kiran smiled at her before waving goodbye.

"Uma, i have no way to get home" Kanak said as she approached him
Uma looked away "what do you want me to do about that, go and ask that guy, Kiran"
Kanak tried to hold her laughter in as she sighed "he had business to do, please take me home"

Uma nodded before informing Palomi who couldn't wait to join them.
Palomi sat in the front seat as Kanak sat in the back.

Uma made several glances into the mirror to see Kanak, whos focus was out of the window.
Tapping the steering wheel with his fingers he waited as traffic moved ahead slowly.

Kanak watched as Palomi lifted her hand and placed it onto Uma's.
When she realised Uma made no move to make her stop.

Kanak couldnt handle being in the car anymore and was happy when they came up her street. Grabbing some money from her bag she threw it at him before pushing the door open and walking away.

Uma opened the door, and ran after Kanak quickly.
"Kanak, Kanak wait" Uma shouted as he grabbed her arm

Kanak yanked her hand back and ran forward to the figure on the floor, her bhabosa lay on the floor, blood trailed from his mouth , but luckily there was a pulse.

"Kanak, Kanak look at me" Uma said
But Kanak wouldnt move.
Lifting her up he walked out of the house and waited for the doctors to arrive.

"Mr Shankar we need to take Arun Rathi to hospital"
Uma nodded "i will pay any of the expenses"


Kanak held on to Arun's hand as he was wheeled into the ICU.
"We're sorry Ma'am but you have to stay out here" the nurse instructed

Kanak sat on the chair as she began to cry "i dont even know how to contact the rest of the family" Kanak sobbed
Rahul walked in with Kiran, we came as first as we could.

Kiran wrapped her arms around Kanak as she cried.
Nina ran in quickly "Kanak i found your familys numbers"
Kanak thanked her quickly as she watched Nina call them.



It was a few hours later when Bhaboo and Meena and Vansh had arrived.
The rest of the family would come the next day.
"See the mess you brought your bhabosa by waiting around for that man and he never came " muttered Vansh
Bhaboo hugged Kanak "now is not the time to argue over that man, Kanak knows she has made a mistake and she will come back now hmm"

Uma looked toward Nina "she stayed for me and fell out for her family over me"
Nina glared up at him "so youre the man that broke her heart, oh dont you have any guilt showing your face here"

Walking away from him Uma went to tell the family that Arun had woken up.
As soon as Vansh saw him he went up to him grabbing his collar

Kanak stood infront of Uma "its not his fault, he helped bring him here please Vansh" Kanak begged
Uma looked down at Kanak "ill leave if me being here is hassle"

Kanak shook her head "even if for a short while you were my husband Bhabosa wouldnt want me to give up on what i want"

Meena and Bhaboo gave their blessings but Vansh said nothing and gave them both a strong glare.

Kanak knew she couldnt win every fight, and she couldn't give up on this one either.
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Part 10-
The next day Bhabosa was allowed to go home.
Vansh had gone back home while Bhaboo, and Meena had decided to stay with Bhabosa who didnt want to leave Kanak.

Kanak sat outside the shop by herself, she watched as Uma approached her.
"Kanak i" Uma spoke but was interrupted as Kanak jumped up and hugged him

"This is all my fault, i should have left with him instead of being stubborn and my family still hate me and for what, you will still marry somebody else"
Uma wanted to say something that would make this better, but what could he say?

He didnt want anyone to think he would marry her out of pity, the truth was he wasn't good enough for her

"Kanak, i have to leave, i dont want to bring you any more pain by staying here"
Kanak looked up at him, eyes teary "is that what love is, letting someone go even though it hurts just so that they will be happy"
Uma had no answer for her as she cupped his cheek

"I cant force you to stay with me if it isnt what you want, but i have to tell you one more thing, Kiran is a girl and is my best friend, shes married to a man called Rahul, the man you thought i was going to marry, i spent so much time thinking that playing games would make you admit that you love me but clearly i was wrong, so ill let you go but i will always wait for you, hoping that one day youll come back for me"

Kanak stood on her tiptoes, pressing a soft kiss to his lips she closed her eyes as she went to walk away

"The Kanak i know doesnt give up on her love that easily"
Kanak turned to face Uma who was now on his knees.
"I have made many mistakes, losing you and leaving you was the biggest but if you have any place in your heart to forgive me then Kanak ,i love you, marry me"

Kanak smiled "you really mean that, you wont leave this time"
"I promise you"
Uma picked Kanak up, spinning her around.

Palomi glared at the happy couple.
"You will marry me Uma and nobody else"
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Part 11-
Palomi ran over to Uma as he walked back into the house
"Will you really marry someone else" she asked
Uma froze "im so sorry Palomi, i know what i have done is wrong but its okay now you can marry someone that will love you as much as i love Kanak"

Palomi began to cry "i love you Uma, i will be the best wife for you, please just give me a chance, will you really break another promise to another woman" Palomi asks

Uma shakes his head "Palomi, im sorry i didnt think of it this way, of course i will marry you, forgive me"
Palomi wiped her tears "its okay Uma we all make mistakes "

After Uma had explained the situation to Kanak she accepted. With no words Uma walked away.

"Lets see for how long can you deny me Uma, love happens just once for me and i wont lose you this quickly " Kanak promised to Uma's retreating form.

3 Days Later-

"Kanak what are you wearing"
"Dont you like it Uma? Its a dress"

Kanak twirled around "i wore it just for you"
Uma looked astonished "Kanak i am marrying someone else"

Kanak nodded "i know, but you are my husband, im not marrying anyone, so im not doing anything wrong"
Uma grabbed Kanak, pushing her into tge cupboard "youre doing this on purpose"

Kanak smiled "what are you gonna do about it"
All to quickly Uma's lips were pressed against Kanak's, biting into her bottom lip he gained entrance quickly, as he pushed closer up to her.

Trailing kisses down her neck , Uma stopped and pulled back.
Kanak was breathless, eyes shut he blew air onto her face before walking away.

Uma smiled at his reflection "even i know how to play games Kanak"

The last thing on his mind was Palomi, his future wife.
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Part 12-
"Palomi i need to talk to you"
Palomi looked toward Uma "of course, you still love Kanak and want to marry her "
Uma looked dumbfounded before nodding
"Fine, i agree, but i have one request"

"Anything" Uma assured
"Kanak cannot know you are marrying hee until the last moment, i want to make her jealous "
Uma looked confused "but why would you want to make her jealous "

Palomi smiled "just a joke between friends is all, and if she is still there for the wedding then its Shiv Ji's sign that you are both meant to be"
Uma was quiet for a while before agreeing


Suman looked over at Shiv "Shiv, its our turn now okay to get Kanak Bhabisa and Uma Dadusa together, i dont trust Palomi so are you with me"
Shiv smiled and high fived Suman.


"Dadusa, Dadusa its Kanak, shes trapped in the storeroom" Shiv said
Uma immediatley threw his book down and ran toward the room.

Kanak looked around "Suman, why ask me to meet you in the storeroom, what was so important, Suman" Kanak shouted again but still no reply

Uma ran down the stairs of the store room.
Suman quickly slammed the door shut behind him as Shiv turned out the lights, high fiveing eachother again they ran away.

"Suman, Suman where are you" Kanak shouted, tears filled her eyes as the torch in her hand went out.
Strong arms grabbed her "Kanak, are you okay "

"Uma, what are you doing here "
"Shiv said you were stuck here "
Kanak nodded "i came down here to meet Suman, but she never came, maybe Shiv heard me in here and was worried, anyway lets go now"

Uma wrapped his arm around Kanak's waist "oh theres no way to get out unless someone opens the door, and they womt hear us so there's no escape tonight Kanak" Uma's breath warming Kanak as she shuddered

Kanak stood back "but what about Palomi"
Uma continued to walk back with her, until her back hit the wall, putting his hand by her head he rubbed his nose against hers "what about her Kanak, shes not here, its only you and me"

Kanak gulped loudly as she tried to move away
"Dont tell me my tigeress is scared now"
Kanak couldnt concentrate on his words as his intoxicating scent overwhelmed her, his hands rubbed down her arms, stopping at her waist he yanked her forward.

"May this night be a night of dreams" he whispered before bending lower and taking her lips in a kiss that Kanak couldnt help but fall into.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I usually say dear friends when I write but today, I'll say dear ma'am, you are truly amazing! This speed of writing so many parts so quickly and with such imagination. So much passion as well.👏
Do continue! Surely the creative writers will resign if they read this!😆
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Hai mayakhan.
Ur updating is superb👏
Awesome story
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Part 13-
It was early hours of the morning when Suman ran down the stairs to the store room.

"Bhabisa, Dadusa, how did you guys get down here, i said to meet in my room not the storeroom"
Kanak stretched, pushing herself up as Uma walked out of the room.

"Suman, i really want to go get ice cream, will you come with me " asked Kanak as she rested her hands on Suman's shoulders

Suman sneezed loudly "Bhabhisa, im not feeling well, maybe you should ask Dadusa to go"

Kanak sighed heavily "never mind, ill go alone"
After last night, there was no way she was going anywhere near him, he had way to much of an affect on her.


Suman ran over to Shiv "Shiv, you need to get Dadusa to take Bhabisa out for icecream"
Shiv saluted "yes boss"


"Dadusa, i really want ice cream" said Shiv
Uma turned to face him "then go and get it"
Sighing loudly he fell on the bed "but im sooo tired, can't you go and get me some "
Grabbing his hand he knelt down "please Dadusa"

"Okay fine, ill get it now" promised Uma


Shiv danced around happily as he thanked Shiv Ji for helping their plan go well.

Uma pulled his wallet out of his pocket, about to pay for the icecream when he saw Kanak out of the corner of his eye.

Inching closer to her, he tapped her on the shoulder.
Kanak turned quickly facing him, eyes widened.

"Uma, what are you doing here"
"I could ask you the same thing, you have ice cream on your nose" Uma said as he laughed
Kanak backed away "where, how"
Uma swiped it off with his finger , licking it off his finger he grinned "vanilla is my faviourate to"

Kanak was so embarassed she ran back to Uma's house to collect her stuff.


As Kanak readied to go home, she saw the vouchers for vanilla ice cream hanging out of her bag, a note by the side "for the times you miss me like i miss you"

Kanak smiled happily, she couldnt remember ever feeling this happy.
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Part 14-
Kanak arrived home later on.
Sitting down with her family, they swapped stories over the things they had done over the 5 years.

Bhaboo's heart had filled with pride knowing her grand daughters love was as strong as the love shared between Suraj and Sandhya.

Kanak bid everyone goodnight as she climbed the stairs to go to bed.
Opening her door she saw a giant sized teddy bear on her bed.

A letter sat upon it "to make up for when im not there "
Kanak blushed "who knew Uma could be so filmy"

The landline in her room rang, hurrying to pick it up Kanak held it to her ear "Uma"
Uma laughed loudly on the otherside "i see you got my present"
"Yes, thank you "
There was a short silence "you look beautiful tonight "

"But you cant see me" replied Kanak looking around to find him
"The image in my heart tells me"
"Oh shush you, stop being so romantic"

Uma gasped "why, am i embarassing you"
"Not at all"

And all night, they continued talking about the love they shared, their hopes and dreams.

Kanak held the phone closer to her as she heard Uma drift off to sleep.
She knew then and there , that was how love was meant to be.

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