I Havent Let Our Love Extinguish (Kanuma FF) Part 15 Updated Complete

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"Arun Rathi, you have handled this clothes shop for many years alone, where is the rest of your family" asked Nina
Arun sighed, putting the packing away to the side "i have a grandaughter, Kanak Rathi, after her parents death we sent her away to a boarding school, after some time she fell in love with a highly religious man, after they got married, Kanak wanted to continue her dancing career, and he wanted to follow his religion"
Nina nodded, intrigued "and then what? Where did your family go"

"Uma, her husband left after finding out the priest who did their marriage wasn't a priest, she dances every night to the same song in hopes Uma will come back to her and marry her again, when he left he told her he never loved her, and we all told her to walk away, find someone else, but she has never lost hope for him, so my family left and i stay here to look after her"
Nina wiped away a tear "how long has he been gone, do you think he will come back"

Arun looked up at the calender "today marks 5 years, no one knows anymore, but if Kanak believes then i will to"
Nina stood to wrap her arms around Arun "ill see you tomorrow morning Arun"
Patting her on the head he nodded as he watched her leave.


The hall of the mansion was lit with many candles, the windows bare, no curtains.
The light of the moon shone brightly giving the room an essence of calm.

Mausam ney lee angdaayi aayi aayi
The weather stretches
Lehraake barkha phir chaayi chaayi
The rain is creating ripples and its covering all
Jhoka hawa kaa aayega aur yeh diya buj jaayega
There will be a gust of wind and this lamp shall be extinguished

Many women began to dance as the music got louder. All women but one wore black, heads covered they danced around the many people that had came to watch.

Silsila yeh chaahat ka na maine bujhne diya (x2)
I haven't let our love (here the lamp is symbolizes it) extinguish
Oh piya yeh diya naa bujha hai naa bujhega
Oh Beloved, this lamp hasn't extinguished nor it will be extinguished
Mere chaahat ka diya, mere piya, ab aaja re mere piya
This is the lamp of my desire, My beloved, Come to me now, My beloved

The woman who stood in the middle of the other women stood alone wearing red. Removing the scarf from her head the woman looked into the light.
Whispers could be heard of her name "Kanak"

Oh mere piya ab aaja re mere piya (x2)
Oh My beloved, Come to me now, My beloved
Is diye sang jal raha mera rom rom rom aur jiya
With this lamp each part of my body is burning, and so is my heart
Ab aaja re mere piya oh mere piya ab aaja re mere piya
Come to me now, Oh My beloved, Come to me now, My beloved


Kanak spun around on her feet, her scarf spun with her. Lifting her hand she picked up a candle in one hand as she continued to spin around the many guests, dipping low then coming back up.
Her dancing, always the most beautiful, but only for one person.

Faasla tha doori thi, faasla tha doori thi
There was a distance, hence there was a separation
Tha judaai kaa aalam intezaar mein nazrein thi
The atmostphere was of detachment and my eyes were waiting
Aur tum wahan the tum wahan the tum wahan the
And You were there, You were there
Jhilmilaatey jagmagaatey khushiyon mein jhoom kar
Shining, sparkling, swaying happily
Aur yahan jal rahe the hum (x2)
And here I was burning


Kanak handed a candle to a woman as she ran to the window, pushing it open she looked up to the moon as she wiped away her tears.
Putting her hands together she closed her eyes, once again praying for the man she will always love to return.

Phir se baadal garja hai garaj garaj ke barsa hai
Once again the clouds have started thundering, after thundering they
are showering rain
Ghoom ke toofan aaya hai par tujhe bujha nahin paaya hai
Even the hurricane came along, but it couldn't extinguish your quench
Oh piya yeh diya chaahe jitna satay tujhe yeh saawan
Oh beloved this lamp, even if this rain troubles You
Yeh hawa aur yeh bijliyaan
So do these winds and lightining
Oh mere piya ab aaja re mere piya (x2)
Oh My beloved, Come to me now, My beloved

As Kanak turned, she saw the many couples dancing together. Once again she felt like her heart had broken.
Running outside she continued to dance, alone, in hopes that the lord would see her plight and call her love home.

Dehko yeh pagli deewani duniya se hai yeh anjaani
Look at this crazy girl, who is unaware of the world
Jhoka hawa ka aayega aur iska piya sang laayega
A gust of wind shall come and take away her Beloved
Oh piya ab aaja re mere piya
Oh My beloved, Come to me now, My beloved
Silsila yeh chaahat ka na maine bujhne diya
I haven't let our love (here the lamp is symbolizes it) extinguish
Oh piya yeh diya
Oh beloved, this lamp
Silsila yeh chaahat ka na maine bujhne diya
I haven't let our love extinguish
Oh piya yeh diya
Oh beloved, this lamp
Aye piya piya piya
O Beloved


As Kanak continued to dance, her scarf slid from her neck, falling from the balcony it landed on somebody.
The man pulled the scarf off his head and scrunched the scarf into his hand.
Lifting the scarf he lifted it to his nose, the scent of chandan very strong.

Throwing the scarf to the floor he walked into the mansion.
Kanak fell to her knees in the rain as she began to sob heavily.
Was love meant to be like this?

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thats interesting.I like it 😳
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Hai mayakhan.
Superb story, i loved it
Keep on writing dear.
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Part 2-
"Bhaji, bhaji come on" a woman spoke from behind Kanak
Kanak wiped her tears before allowing the woman to take her back inside.

Sitting her down she wrapped a towel around Kanak's shoulders "what will you gain from giving yourself this pain everyday" the woman asked Kanak
Kanak shook her head in response, not willing to explain her love to anyone.

The man walked up to one of the main business men "does a woman named Kanak Rathi work here"
Rahul shook his head , nodding he went to turn away.
"But a Kanak Toshniwal does"
The man stopped , she had kept his name.

Kanak stood up, she would recognise those eyes anywhere, running forward she bumped into a man who held her up.
Had he really came back for her.

She watched as he went to walk out of the building.
No, not again, she couldnt lose him now "UMA" Kanak shouted
The man stopped, turned and tried to find the voice that would always calm him.


A hand covered Kanak's mouth and dragged her away.
Putting her down she came face to face with her best friend Kiran "after he just left you, are you really just going to run to him, run into his arms like nothing happened"

Kanak didnt have time to talk right now, pushing past her she ran out of the room and down the stairs.
Shouting his name as she ran after his car, till she couldn't anymore.

Falling on her knees she took deep breaths as she realised she had lost him again.
Bright lights burnt her eyes, as she raised her hand to hide her eyes, she heard a car door slam.

Kanak moved her hand, looking up she saw the man she loved look down at her.
She could barely move as she felt him pull her up.
It all felt to good to be true, he had come back for her.

Her Uma.
Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Part 3-
It seemed as though, somehow through all the darkness of the 5 years spent lonely and deserted that Kanak didn't care why he was back or if he would stay it was just for now.

For the way he held her , head laying on his chest, hand knotted into her soaking wet hair, the other griping her waist so hard she was sure it would leave marks.

For the way his scent lifted and covered them both, taking her and possesing her, pulling her in.

For the words that went unspoken, because sometimes silence said more. Maybe now all she needed was for him to just be there with her, no apologies, no explanations, no promises.

Just him and just her.

Because love has no bounds, in darkness or in light it will grip your heart and plunge it into insanity. But youll still feel like youre in heaven. Because when your soul entwines with another, you will never be alone again, no matter where you go.

The rain continued to pour, but Kanak's fingers tightened onto his collar, in a silent plea to make him stay.
His head remained dug into her neck, the only scent that could calm him, she was as close as physically possible but that wasn't close enough, it never would be.

In one moment, how do you make up for 5 lost years?
Maybe you couldn't but right here, right now, it was enough.

Crazy, unecessary, a starvation for the kind of love that only these two kindred spirits could share, Uma and Kanak.
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Uma pulled away from Kanak.
The rain dripped down his face as he blinked fast, trying not to miss a second of her beauty as he gazed down at her.

All to quickly Kanak had lifted her hand, swiping him across the face.
Her hands formed fists as she hit his chest.
"Why, tell me why you left me" Kanak begged

Resting her head on his chest she began to sob loudly
He wanted so badly to comfort her, but what could he say?
"I did Shiv Ji wrong, i had a relationship without marriage"

Kanak looked up at him helplessly "we could have got married again, you didnt have to leave"
Uma pinched the top of his nose as he closed his eyes "we weren't meant to be"
Kanak stood back quickly

"Then why did you return, i waited for 5 years for you to return, now youre back and you hold me like youve missed me but you tell me we aren't meant to be here, then why did you come back " Kanak shouted as she shoved his shoulders back

"Im here to say goodbye" Uma's voice was a whisper but Kanak heard
Glaring into his eyes, she grasped her chest.
Was it humanly possible to feel your heart break?

"Goodbye" Kanak questioned
Uma reached into his pocket, pulling out a card he handed it to her.
"Youre inviting me to your wedding, with that refugee Palomi"

Kanak's voice was strained from the shouting as she screwed the invitation up and threw it at his face

"How dare you come back and do this to me, it was my fault for ever believing you loved me, was this all a game Mr Shankar" Kanak's voice was accusatory.

Uma couldn't say anything, nothing was good enough.
He did love her, but he would still marry someone else and he didnt want to tell her this and break her even more.

Bending down he picked up the invitation, handing it to her "i hope you can make it Kanak"

With that, he turned on his heel and walked to his car, opening the door he re-started the car and drove away.

Kanak glared down at the invitation "i will prove to you Uma Shankar, that we are meant to be and if im right, i promise , Shiv Ji as my witness, i will be your wife not Palomi"

Turning around she walked back into the building, ignoring the passing looks of confusion.
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Kanak's fingers traced the writing on the board "engagment of Palomi and Uma"
Her fingers traced the flowers before grabbing them and scrunching them up.

Dancing was her passion, and she refused to come into this house as a visitor to watch them get engaged. She would dance, and if there was any sign in view that he loved her to she would fight for him.

Kanak walked to the stage, tapping the microphone "first of all congratulations to the happy couple to be, as we stand here today we must think of all that marriage is"
Kanak continued to look into Uma's eyes "marriage is a sacred bond, that kind of bond that wears but never breaks, it is a promise that you make to never leave someone, because the bond of marriage is that between two hearts and two souls not just a ritual, because what is the ritual without the people, for a marriage is a tradition, but dont we start this tradition"

The many guests clapped, having no idea of the deeper meaning behind the words.
Kanak stood back onto the stage, waiting for the darkness to fall before she would dance again.

hazaro manzilein hogi - There will be a thousand destinations
hazaro karwaa honge - There will be thousands of journeys
nigaahein humko dhundegi - (Your) eyes will search me
na jaane hum kaha honge - Who knows where i will be

Kanak walked off the stage, walking towards Uma she watched as he put his glass down.

saajan saajan saajan mere saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
teri dulhan sajaungi - 3 - I'll adorn your bride
wada diya tujhe jo bhi wada diya tujhe main - Whatever promise that i had made to you
woh wada nibhaungi main woh wada nibhaauungi - I'll keep that promise
saajan saajan saajan mere saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
teri dulhan sajaungi - 4 - I'll adorn your bride

Grabbing Palomi's hand she rested it in Uma's , he looked up in shock.
Grabbing Palomi, she spun her around, after she sat her down and draped a scarf on her.


jhilmil sitaaro ki chaiyya - In the shadow of the sparkling stars
lungi mein teri balaiyaa - I'll take all your problems
itna tujhe pyaar dungi - I'll love you so much
yeh jindagi waar dungi - I'll give up my life
muskurati hain najar - (although) My eyes are smiling
dil tadap ke rota hain - My heart is crying desperately
aur chot jab lagti hain - And when i get hurt
uff toh dard bada hota - Then, i swear, it hurts a lot
saajan saajan saajan mere saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
dard saare uthaungi dard saare uthaungi - I'll take up/bear all the pains
saajan saajan saajan mere saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
teri dulhan sajaungi - 4 - I'll adorn your bride


Standing back, she spun around, grabbing Uma she made him dance with her before sitting him down next to Palomi and spreading her arms wide, she swung around again, lifting her hands then her leg to show the anklets Uma had once gifted her.

maana ke mushkil badi hain - I agree that there are a lot of difficulties
yeh imtehaan ki ghadi hain - And this is the testing time
pal main bikhar jaaungi mein - I'll break down in a moment
hadh se gujar jaaungi main - I'll cross my limits
hum haste hain toh unhe lagta hain hume aadaat hain muskuraane - If i smile, then they think that I have a habit of being happy
par woh nadaan itna bhi nahi samajhte gam ko chupaneki - But those ignorant people don't understand that i'm hiding my grief
saajan saajan saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
main yuhi muskuraaungi main yuhi muskuraaungi - I'll just keep smiling like this
saajan saajan saajan mere saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
teri dulhan sajaungi - 2 -I'll adorn your bride
wada kiya tujhe jo bhi wada diya tujhe main - Whatever promise that i had made to you
woh wada nibhaungi main woh wada nibhaauungi - I'll keep that promise
saajan saajan saajan mere saajan mere saajan - Darling, oh my darling
teri dulhan sajaungi - 4 - i'll adorn your bride

Kanak turned away from the crowd to wipe away her tears.
As she turned to face someone who had put their hand on her shoulder she saw Uma look down at her.
Shrugging his hand off she twirled around him , leaning closer to him she whispered in his ear "go to the one you will marry"

saajan o mere saajan - oh my darling ...

Uma froze for a while before turning to go back to Palomi.
But Kanak's ring got caught onto his sleeve making him stop.
Pulling her hand back she turned around and walked back behind the stage.


Arun sat waiting for her "you must not give up hope now, in every relationship there will be hardships but what will you do if you give up at the first hurdle"
Kanak nodded, taking his blessings she went to change her clothes.


When she came out of the changing rooms, her grandfather was nowhere to be seen.
Instead Uma was leaning against the wall, as he turned to face her she could see how red his eyes were, had he been crying?

"Why did you come here if you were just going to leave me again" he asked
Kanak looked confused, until she took the invitation out of his hand
"Kanak weds Kiran" Kanak read aloud
She watched as Arun winked at her from behind Uma.


Then Kanak realised, as she looked up at Uma, that he couldn't see her wed somebody else.
He still cared, he still loved her.
"Isnt that what youre doing to me, if you have a right to move ahead, dont i" Kanak asked innocently
Uma's eyes turned darker as his fist hit the wall "only I have a right on you Kanak"

Kanak pushed past him "go back to your to be wife Uma, theres no place for you here"
After hearing his footsteps walk away she hugged her grandfather "Bhabasa he loves me, he loves me"
Arun cupped her cheek "then you can win him back "
Kanak nodded happily and hugged him tightly
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Kanak awoke hearing a tapping on her window.
Opening her eyes slowly she climbed out of bed, stretching as she walked to her window.

"Uma what are you" Kanak asked, Uma climbed through, resting his hand over her mouth.
Twisting her around quickly he pinned her front against the wall.

The heat from his body radiating onto hers.
Uma's voice was husky as he trailed open mouth kisses on her neck "did you really think i would let you be with somebody else"

Kanak tried to ignore his sweet torture, as she felt his hand grab onto her waist, pulling her back so her neck would be more visible, his tounge darted out licking at the sensetive skin on her neck as she muffled a moan.

Biting slowly into her neck she couldn't help but moan out his name as he pressed a chaste kiss to the now forming bruise on her neck "i have many ways of proving that you are mine, do not test me Kanak"

Kanak turned, facing him as she yanked him forward "i am not yours Uma, no matter what you do, this changes nothing, i shall be somebody elses"

Uma went to say something but Kanak's fingers on his chest stopped him "unless youre willing to change who you marry" she offered

Like cold water had hit him suddenly he pulled back "forgive me Kanak, i never should have came in here without your permission or touched you like that"

Kanak smiled "youre forgiven, but one question before you go"
Uma hesitated then nodded, for her to continue " if Kiran was touching me that way would it bother you"

Uma stilled, nodding he went to climb out of the window "then think about how i feel, when i know Palomi will take my place in your life" said Kanak.


Uma sat up quickly, wiping the sweat from his brow he sighed, this wasnt the first time he had dreamt of Kanak this way, and it certainly wouldn't be the last.

He wondered why he wanted so much to make this dream of his a reality?
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Uma ka toh Pata nhi but My heart is thirsting for Even Moreee😳
Good work Maya👏
Fast & Furious 2 is a Super SE Uper wala hit with me😃
Uma dreaming about Loving Kanak was sooo☺️
If only Uma knew tha Kiran is a She🤣
Pyaar mein ego nhi hoti...Kanak proved this by trying to win him back despite his desertion😳
Continue soon
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Hai mayakhan.
Wonderful update.
Hats off.👏

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