Pulling a fast one! - Page 2

Originally posted by: -TIARA

hi tia,😃 good to see you..
Palomi can see that Maasi ,Suman are not too fond of Kanak. Exactly nor do we like her...especially suman..she started to irk me...

bure training mil rehe hai suman ko... bored teenager..

He slips and their eye contact. It didnt gone unnoticed by me the way he was worried of her being hurt.poor guy really loves her. He showed it again and again. The hankie scene, the main jake aata hu scene..everything spoke about her importance in his life. As maasi rightly says uma ka chehra kanak ko dekh ke damakta hai...

yes.. hoplessly in love with her... its his first time😆

Kanak...she is just behaving like her age girl should behave. She has come from hostel where liberty modernasation and open mind think comes hand in hand.

She is total misfit in uma house and also in his expectation

oh,I totally agree.. independant.. fends for her self..

Everyone needs to in understand that you can change appearance of people but not their main root chatacter. She is modernised female struck in cave man age...

I think inthe main its the coming together of the old and the new.. in some form of new lease of life..

Poor my girl...some one save her

she is good at salvaging herself

Wonderful post once again by you...

thanks mate

Tamam koshish krle ye kayanat sari...

Furr ho jayegi paper ke sath kanak humari😆

👏 jolly good... keep the verses coming

I know that was bad...

Lets try one more...

Had ho chuki hai ae dil tere aitbar ki..

Sanam nahi janta ab tak kadar mere pyar ki..

Kaha tu roz uski dua me hath apna uthata hai..

Uski kisikahani ke harf ka main koi hissa nahi...

ohhh the sad woes of Uma shankar... the slow consuming of as yet unrequited love..

Uma and kanak😭 thank you for your great comment.. , drizzled with the taste of verses... will ckh.. chapter 2 ,of your FF... Tia, much love hammie

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Still Maasi Alot. And US Too.
Hopefully Kanak Escapes Unseen By Maasi&US.

Originally posted by: geetkumar

helooo Geetkumar!😃 great to hear from you mate!

Perfect title Hammie. The depth to which you can perceive and interpret, is truly amazing.

Its like a game of chess. Everyone is ready to outsmart the other one.

US nullifying the uses of a mobile phone, kanak trying to escape with the papers, Massisa trying to thwart Kanak's efforts. And Palomi has her own agenda. Looks like our Kanak will take the trophy in this game of wits."Chidiya apne pinjre se ud jayegi, Massisa kitne bhi pehare laga de!!!!!!!!!!! "
bravo!👏 what a fabulous comment Geet! full paisa vasool.. for my writing.. truly encouraging.. yes.. the story line and characterisation engages me.. hence the writing.. yes.. Massi 's shades are becoming more obvious by every progressing episode... whatever next.. listen Geet, continue reading and would love to read your feedback as well... much love hammie

Originally posted by: alex1

ALEX!!! 😃😃 Hiya mate... saw your like on my post and whizzed to find your comment... sooo brilliant to see you here... yes mate hanging my head... will reply to your pms... please dont give up on laid back hammie...

@Hamlet53, you are excellent at what you do in terms of writing. Maybe you have become better from learning from your readers and more so you have become better from learning, continuous writing and reading yourself over the years. Not all of your interpretations may be on the right path or correct on any given day.that is so true..hope they show flexibility..
The writers have their own way of telling their story depending on the situation of each of the cast member, PR and channel and the realistic happenings of each individual part of the package that is shown overall, this much knowledge I have learned during the years.PRwas inspired by an iconic fictional character.. the actor veered me to writing.. the character still ispart of my writer's soul.. doubt if I can ever shake the character off.. . We all learn from YOU and others who comment as well. I have yet to feel the storyline and not yet in a mood to regularly watch anything on teleland although I do glance through your "Takes" periodically. Thank you ever so much. This is not the place to inform you but it is my only form of communication to you as you inbox (PM) is probably so full and you may not notice that I have sent you a PM. Do take a took when you can and yes, I did send a PM to swansong as well. Thank you again, Hugs, Alex
listen dearest mate. hammie always expects this pat on the back from you where ever I travel across IF..as for the pms.. will honour them right away... do forgive me Alex.. will always love you , we go back a long way.. Iam loving it onthis forum ,some brilliant writers and creatives.. and some valued loyal readers.. I feel much blessed... lovely to her from you ,now going to reply to you pms... much love hammie