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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

wow bhoomi....u r really v imaginative...waise mujhe bhi lag raha tha dat they will end up marryin each other par contract marriage..hmm uske baare mein nahi socha tha meine...arey delhi mein kahaan log utaar aaye hain woh toh tumne hi bahar nikalwaye hain asit ki shaadi jo hui hai...dekhenge nahi kya newly wed couple ko..hehe..waise story has bcum quite interesting...keep on entertaining us:-)

wish u luck
tc
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Himani

Hi Himani dear... areey meri sweet HImani.. for u only i broguht Asit to Delhi and get married.aakhir tum wahan shaddi dekhlo... live...😆😆😆 wahi clue derahi thi last time....😉
So dear himani enjoygin reading the story ... haan imaginative to hun.. ab if u feel its sensible enough to make it a feel good story than am really glad.. all this story writign and all r just for u all.. i feel liek imagining as i have such warm people around me to share with u all..
ya everyone feels end mey shaddi hogi and live happy.. it has one more touch to the story..which is very simple but i will be explainign in teh next part...
hope u like the next part dear... luv u tc..cheti cheti milengey ..next part post karungi.. theek hai...
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

i m feeling like watching a film ... m feeling so distrbed whn u ending a part coz film toh contnsly chalti hai na..serial hoti toh intezar karsakti ... is film mein itni bar intrvl kyon aaying? uff...mujhe poori film dekhni hai in one go .................

Now theyll get to knw each othr thoda thoda karke .. will strt liking each othr... awwwwwww.... waiting to read all those sweet , nice moment they r going to face n realise.... luv u dear for giving such a fab teart ....

Hi Sara dear.. dear feelgin nice after reading the story ya phir dimaag yeh soch ke pareshaan hai..ke this time bhoomi is postign really slowly.. ok..after ur daat i will try and increase my speed.. 😆
Ya i usually dont liek to break the flwo of the story.. but u know this time mood ka locha hai...😉..bini to mujhe maregi hearign it.. .. mood lagta hai to i sit to write even if i write a line i finsih the whole part.. i will try and post the next oen for u ekdam spped mey theek hai...
film type laggin.not serial types.. thats nice to know..😃they start likign each otehr .. or not.. chit moti baatein hoti hai ya nahi..ab lets see wais ebhi story is not serial type long...thodi short hai lekin mey short stories jitni short bhi nahi... samjh ayaa...nahi.. 😉
luv u dear..enjoy adn hope u liek the interstign next part...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part VII

Asit and Kinnari gave one snap of their marriage to the press so that they stop saying they are in a live –in relationship. The newly weds Asit & Kinnari stepped in the house and sat in the drawing room of the 1BK flat. Kinnari and Asit were both in some thoughts. Asit looked at Kinnari and was wondering something; while Kinnari too looked at him and was in deep thoughts. They both were trying to realize did they ever think they would marry a partner like this. Both smiled thinking something and the conversation started, they wanted to know why both laughed silently.

Asit: hey Kinnari why laughing, u were thinking something?

Kinnari: Yes I am thinking... no actually wondering... never thought of marriage. When my friends use to talk to me about marriage I would tell them, Dad would kill me if I think of it. For 5 years, no marriage plans I use to tell them. They will laugh at me knowing I married within 5 days of saying that sentence.

Asit: I know… it happens.. After my girlfriend ditched me, I was like marriage NO!… I can let all girls throw their arms around me but am not going to fall in love or marry anyone now,I would keep saying this to myself. when fictional girlfriend lie started I would feel one fine day will say I left my fictional Girlfriend and shut their mouth but something else happened. I wanted no one should link me with anyone, I am having someone I have informed hoping they will not ask about other linkups…never knew it will turn like this…

Both laughed and felt destiny kismat plays such an important role in life. God has some other plans which we r'nt aware. Asit smiled and made the sofa cum bed ready for Kinnari to sleep in the drawing room and he kept her luggage and gifts in one of the cupboard in the bedroom. Both got freshen up and sat watching TV and taking the congratulatory calls. Food was delivered from the hotel both ate and sat chatting…

Asit: Kinnari u know there are so many female actors in this industry who always asked me to come with them to some party , and I would just ignore them , at that time I had my girlfriend with me. I never thought I would end up marrying someone like u. U know one of my female friend she works in television, she has stopped talking to me knowing I got married. She is heart broken all tell me. She love me I came to know. I never knew she liked me so much. Aww .. (He smiled feeling great that someone likes him so much.) She is so beautiful... I hope she waits for a year... (He laughed)

Kinnari: Good u can plan after a year as well... but I am caught in a situation where I feel terrible…

Asit: U r so lucky, I mean u came for an autograph & photograph a mere glimpse of Asit Bhasin the star and here u have so much time, a whole year to spend with me. (Smiling with a lot of pride)

Kinnari a bit uncomfortable and not able to understand: Excuse me.. Who told u I came to see and meet u at ur shoot. I just went there to see the shooting without knowing which serial or film shooting is going on. I didn't even take ur autograph or photograph like my other friends did. I didn't even look at u more than once. I was so disappointed that I wasted my time standing near the gate to see the shooting; it would be worth standing instead in the queue to collect my MBA form, which I had to do later.

Asit: What u want to say I can't get it…

Kinnari: what! simple.. I don't like u as an actor.. actually please don't mind but I don't like the work u do I don't watch ur serial and I feel terrible that a person like me who is so intelligent and smart , by chance I was just standing next to u and have to pay for it like hell. I mean if destiny had to play games than kuch aur hota koi aur hota… I just hate ur serial and when I hear ur patent dialogue 'Maa ki khichdi mamta ghee se bhari, Biwi ki khichdi mey kya mehak hai; Kammal yeh kahani, gano se bhari Zaivaro se sajji kya chakachak hai'

I hear this and I feel like throwing u I mean the character u play in the near by well and say chullu bhar pani nahi puraa Kuwaa lelo but get ur senses back. At every two months u I mean the character u play have some women in ur life and u have some majuburi to be with her….God save the woman I would feel who is ur girlfriend? she has to bear a person who will be working 16 hours on such a crap story… I use to wonder u have a really bad taste in work and was wanting to know what choice u make in ur personal life….but what I knew.. My destiny will make me go through such such hardships... Oh, other smart girls like me would be sympathetic towards me ..I know.. ohhh God has been really harsh to me…

Asit got shocked and stunned he looked at her with anger..

Asit: U don't know.. I have .. aa I have so many female fans they do all sort of things, many call themselves by my name, send me gifts, make fan clubs, become my official net wife's and keep me updated on each of my scene and response to it.. They love me as I am their family part… I and my serial get so many TRsp.. It's the no .1 show u know.. My fans r not only in India but all over the world.

Kinnari : I wish some of ur female fan should have followed u and be the one to marry u, it would be such a relief…. And if it had to happen with me.. Why not some actor whom I like.. Kaash Shahid kapoor hota.. Height would have matched properly , I would have forgiven about his initial choice of girlfriendsalso …Kaash Karan grover hii hota .. I wouldn't have mind his onscreen love making scenes or his off screen female fans getting jealous of me… Kaash Salman Khan hi hota.. I would have not mind the age difference…. Kaaash Rajeev Khandelwal hota…. I would have managed all his net wife's and even his link ups… ….but U…of all.. .

She made a face trying to console herself. Asit who was upset with her words said with a matter of fact attitude…

Asit : Oooo Kinnari… U still don't know females r crazy about whom? waise there are many similarities among all the actors who mentioned with me… I am a step ahea actually but u wont realize…. Ur choice is like that … Anyways.. I don't care whether u like some other actors… even I would have wanted some great beautiful smarter girl to be in ur place… destiny made me be with u …

Asit made a small face and took a deep breath, which irritated Kinnari. Kinnari getting a bit upset as she feels she in her right is far more intelligent, smarter and beautiful as well.. said..

Kinnari: U have similarities with the actors I mentioned .. oh really … apart from the fact that they r actors tell me at least one similarity and one point u have and they don't…

Asit tried to avoid but as he saw her face smiling with pride …he answered …

Asit: Ok… Shahid Kapoor .. similarity his girlfriend left him same in my case and one point advantage in my case.. My height .. (he laughed…)

Kinnari face had an expression as if what big deal about it…

Asit continued: Next … Karan grover.. Similarity …aa we both have good physique… (Kinnari in her mind was saying.. just measure ur biceps and his….she smiled with that thought) one point I have and he doesn't….he thought and said… Oh… aa.. girls go gaa gaa over him… but in my case… girls, guys and gays all goo gaa gaa over me…

He winkled and raised his eyebrow Kinnari had an expression of eeww chii what rubbish he is talking….

Asit: Hmm Salman Khan. Similarity… aa.. we both do a lot of social service..

Kinnari quipped : I havnt seen ur socialservice…

Asit: didn't I pay ur hotel bill…

Kinnari looked at him with anger… she asked what about one advantage point..

Asit: I don't drink and drive, I haven't ever lift my hand on a woman….and I don't enjoy hunting as a sport.

Kinnari looked at him with a helpless expression..

Asit : ..Now done.. (feeling extremely happy he tried to go to his room)..

Kinnari screamed..: Oooo… what about Rajeev Khandelwal….

Asit looked at her: I thought that was enough..

He thought for some time and then replied…

Asit: similarity .. Aa our initials.. See his name intials RK are the initial of the legend Raj Kapoor as well… same with me.. AB… living legends Amitabh Bacchan too.. isn't it?

Kinnari heard and was amused

Asit..: About a point in advantage… He smokes and I don't…
Kinneri told softly.. 'really u dont smoke...' Asit whispered... mom dad woudl kill me if i smoke! Delhi pollution was enough they said to kill ,no need of this added poison in the air..and waise bhi while modellgin my diet chart impllied not to smoke..teeth look good..lips healthy..and..
Kinneri: Stop..it hear... . .. ! fine.. go.... i am feelgin sleepy with ur answers ...

He went towards his room, Kinnari felt she missed this opportunity to prove him dumb…. And the serial he works in a real waste show…

Both slept and wondered How! Can they go through the 364 days left together… They slept deciding they would ignore and avoid any conversations….'Together by chance, not to converse by any chance…'

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bhoooooooooooooooooooooomi..... i donno what to say .... this is somthing i didnt expect but i had a grrrrrrrrrt time.. all smiling face ...laughing thr out ..hehehehehehehehe..... i was expecting something sweter, lightr but this was toh lol ... but Fab yaar..the way Kinnari got irritated..the way he kept increasing her anger, the way she put acrss her pov that she didnt go to see him n all....ah i love her attitude ... n den finally she tuk all the actrs name ...lol ..i was like ..omg...kya horaha hai? n Asit's comprsins were toh jhakkas ekdam .... that salman khan one was prfcet ...lol..i was almost falling off frm my chair whn i read .. abt that social work bit , didnt i py ur hotel bill..that was hilrious ... one can hardly exprience such convo in their first nite ... gosh..this was something.... i wish i cud see this scene big screen pe ....

n Kinnari , get a life darling , ur choice is not so gud atleast in tv ... the mn u r having with u I guess he is better dan KG ...chalo.i wont say much ...kya pata usika bhi koi fan ake yaha mujhe mare ... n Bhoomi ji..yeh Rajeev khandelwal kaun hai? naam kahin suna hai lagta hai ..lol...

yeh part bhi inni jaldi khatam ho gayiiiiiii....why???? wanted to read more ......

Make the parts biggr yaar ....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey bhoomi sorry couldnt read it till now!!!!
all d parts r fab!!!!!!
just loving d way it's progressing!!!!!
love
nihita!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey bhoomi!!!
nice part..............👏
so the first day itself the difference of opinions started.......good........the more they differ the more they'll luv eact other later😆.....hehe..........i kno dumb logic.....but well, "oppisites attract"....rite??😉........hehehe.......
but seriously sharing a house with a person whoz complete opp.from u, that too forcefully is really hell........
and u said kinnari's dad has some past??? will be waiting to kno more.......
bye
take care.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nisisanjh


Bhoooooooooooooooooooooomi..... i donno what to say .... this is somthing i didnt expect but i had a grrrrrrrrrt time.. all smiling face ...laughing thr out ..hehehehehehehehe..... i was expecting something sweter, lightr but this was toh lol ... but Fab yaar..the way Kinnari got irritated..the way he kept increasing her anger, the way she put acrss her pov that she didnt go to see him n all....ah i love her attitude ... n den finally she tuk all the actrs name ...lol ..i was like ..omg...kya horaha hai? n Asit's comprsins were toh jhakkas ekdam .... that salman khan one was prfcet ...lol..i was almost falling off frm my chair whn i read .. abt that social work bit , didnt i py ur hotel bill..that was hilrious ... one can hardly exprience such convo in their first nite ... gosh..this was something.... i wish i cud see this scene big screen pe ....

n Kinnari , get a life darling , ur choice is not so gud atleast in tv ... the mn u r having with u I guess he is better dan KG ...chalo.i wont say much ...kya pata usika bhi koi fan ake yaha mujhe mare ... n Bhoomi ji..yeh Rajeev khandelwal kaun hai? naam kahin suna hai lagta hai ..lol...

yeh part bhi inni jaldi khatam ho gayiiiiiii....why???? wanted to read more ......

Make the parts biggr yaar ....

HI my dear Sara...Areey am so glad that I posted it soon andit made u smile ..and thats feels so nice... laughin throguhout.. heheheh it was a bit weirrd converseation ...kya.. 😆...ya when u r said u like a choice which u hate u become too loud.... so thats how Kinnari reacted.. and its assumptionof actors to feel all girls like them..usually good looking guys with good body have this preassumtion...😉.. yup that line of social serive was meant to do that... am glad u had fun reading... u want this on big screen i wish we get some nice stories to watch..
abut Kinnari and her choice.. yaar telly very few popular men r singles ..and there are just few so i took the name of Rajeev & Karan.. many other popular actros not doign saas bahu sagas r not single like Iqbal and few more... & films as well.. very little choice as most actors enter with girlfrind anmed already😳. so hard ot pick u see..😆
oyee itna lamba part that .. i thoguht it will help u to sleep..dont worry next wala sulahidega its really a logn one ...
luvu u dear... tc
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: nihita

hey bhoomi sorry couldnt read it till now!!!!

all d parts r fab!!!!!!
just loving d way it's progressing!!!!!
love
nihita!

HI nihita dear... so good to see u ... so read the parts..and like the way the story is turnign into....am reall happy that u r reading and liking the story.. dont say sorry.. u replied and comments feels great.. tc dear..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hey bhoomi!!!

nice part..............👏
so the first day itself the difference of opinions started.......good........the more they differ the more they'll luv eact other later😆.....hehe..........i kno dumb logic.....but well, "oppisites attract"....rite??😉........hehehe.......
but seriously sharing a house with a person whoz complete opp.from u, that too forcefully is really hell........
and u said kinnari's dad has some past??? will be waiting to kno more.......
bye
take care.........

Hi dear Kitu... so glad to know u liked the part.. difernceof opinion... heehh it was a eyeopener for Asit to know she isnt a fan .. so dotn expect her to be happy just been with u....😉... ab love when it can progress or make them feel to love it will take time... opposite attract... hmm lets see. opposite do attract but really? thats a question very confusing... 😆
abotu Kinnari's dad did i say he has a past.. ? i did say abt pain..and yup as the story goes a lot of things happen jut hope u like my treatment to the charcters and their thoguth how i try to justify them...
yup next part will be logn one... hope u like reading them as well... tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome bhoomi...the two of them getting hitched by contract marriage...a year together is surely gonna be eventfull..going by the convo of the newly weds....it was hillarious...just too good ... the twosome better continue to converse by chance n keep us entertained....
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Originally posted by: binidoshi

Awesome bhoomi...the two of them getting hitched by contract marriage...a year together is surely gonna be eventfull..going by the convo of the newly weds....it was hillarious...just too good ... the twosome better continue to converse by chance n keep us entertained....

Hi Bini dear... ehhe seems like u enjoyed reading this part😆... ya hitched by contarct marraige.. ab year will be eventful but end mey will they want to be together by any hcance..woh to pata nahi..😉.. u foudn the newly weds ocnversation hillarious hahahahh i wanted this part to be light and enjoyable.. 😉😆.... they will converse warna main kaise unke dil ki baat aur jubaan ki baat bataungi...😆😆😆.. hope u feel entertain ..and enjoy reading the next parts as well... dear...
luv u . tc
Bhoomi
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Part VIII

From next day, they started doing their independent work and avoiding any conversation with each other. According to one of the point in the contract, Asit had to provide free shelter, food and clothing to her in this whole year. Kinnari would take calls and doorbells, respect the guests who came to meet him. They had set a fixed time each one will cook their food use the kitchen. They lived like housemates. The servant would come once in the afternoon so that he does not get slight knowledge of the arrangement in the house.

For couple of days the media kept talking about Asit not a bachelor anymore, about his career about Kinnari and her studies on the news channels, as if they are the Prime minister and President who recently got elected. After a week, the media became a bit silent on them and started giving some actual news as well. Kinnari started studying for her entrance exam and Asit was working non-stop for his serial's shooting.

Once, Asit's shooting schedule cancelled due to a short circuit on the set. Coming home, he was worried he will have to see Kinnari's face. He reached home and as he opened the door with his key and entered…. Kinnari saw him and she had an expression of utter disappointment... She saw him and went sat on the sofa reading a book. But in her mind she was cursing... she was enjoying her freedom in the house but with his entry she has to be in this drawing room and see his face, and bear the Chinese movies he watches…

After getting, freshen up Asit went in the kitchen and saw the kitchen was messy… He came out looked at her and again went inside, as he didn't want to start a conversation with her… Kinnari saw his looks and realized she had left the kitchen floor messy and with anger she went inside the kitchen and started cleaning. Asit stood aside and saw her cleaning and smiled.. even pointing where else cleaning is left…. Saying, 'yehan bhi theek se saaf karo, look there clean it properly' that angered Kinnari more…but she kept quite as she didn't want to start a conversation with him..

She was cleaning, the bell rang and Asit with his eyes told her to go and see. It's a point in the contract she will take calls and open door for guest…so she agreed and stamping her feet opened the door…she felt she has seen the person and realized the person at the door step is a television actor… Asit had an egg in his hand trying to make an omelet for himself… Kinnari asked the person her name and she replied 'Tanishka'… Asit heard her voice and got shocked, while he turned his face to look at her, the egg feel down and broke…Kinnari came inside the kitchen and saw the whole floor messy again…she had an expression of anger and as Asit was about to leave the kitchen to meet Tanishka … Kinnari told him to clean this first… Asit and Kinnari started arguing and Tanishka entered. She said 'Hi Asit! .I….'.and her feet slipped on the egg mess and was about to fall… Asit held her in his arms and helped her. Both looked into each other eyes and Tanishka smiled feeling Asit still hasn't left his past behind. Kinnari was observing this filmy scene with a lot of concentration, and was enjoying the moment. Asit cleaned the mess while Tanishka helped him, looking at each other Tanishka was glad Asit didn't show any signs of pulling himself away from her.

Later they both went in the drawing room and sat … Kinnari brought juice for her as it was part of the contract to welcome the guest… Kinnari sat in the drawing room and Tanishka looked at her from head to toe wondering what's there in her that Asit married her and loves her so much. Messy hair which she had tried hopelessly to bring together with a clip which had half of the hair… the track pants and T shirt looked cute on her but Tanishka knew Asit has a great taste in clothes, Kinnari was wearing mismatching outfit which wasn't properly ironed as well. Her unwaxed arms were a put off for Tanishka. Kinnari did notice Tanishka had observed her hairy arms… Kinnari remembered.. 'Her parlour wali must be having a good time discussing about her and Asit….She said news and it was spicier than any news channel she smiled wondering what she must be talkgin about her'. Kinnari looked at the silky hair of Tanishka and her glowing skin wondering how naturally beautiful these females are. Asit mistaking it Tansihka is uncomfortable with Kinaari in the room asked Kinnari to sit in the bedroom and take rest. Kinnari was more than happy to have her space and give them space and went inside…

Tanishka felt very happy with this gesture by Asit. They chatted about their work and later Asit got to know Tanishka's film is stalled for some time. Asit was smart enough to know she must have come for some selfish reason for sure. Tanishka tried to make him feel that she is not a heartless person, spoke very lovingly softly with a smile on her face. Asit didn't feel anything for her..No hatred No love.. as he was talking with her about other opportunity in the telly .. He saw from the corner of the room Kinnari looking at the things he had scrambled on the dressing table of his bedroom. He realized his personal diary kept there… Tanishka had observed him peeping into the bedroom in the middle of the conversation. Asit cut the conversation with Tanishka in middle and hurriedly went inside… Asit asked Kinnari why she touched his things. It's in the contract point no. 9 Not to touch each other personal and confidential documents, papers. Kinnari said she didn't knew it's his diary, she touched as the picture on the diary was good and the wordings were nice... He told her that the diary was gifted by his sister.. Kinnari smiled and said.. 'I knew u can never have such a nice taste'…

Asit got angry and told in harsh tone, 'give me my dairy back' Kinnari threw the diary on the bed hearing his rude tone and as the diary was thrown on the bed, the papers in it flew .. Asit got very worried now and he quickly went put off the fan as he didn't want the papers to be misplaced. He tried to collect all the papers and had pain in his eyes. Kinnari looked at his upset face. Asit sat there on the bed and counted one paper was missing.. He told her loudly… ' Kinnari these are letters written by my sister, on the Raksha Bandhan days when I wasn't in delhi, she use to send me letters along with Rakhis I read them often and some inspiration always comes. My elder sister was like a mother to me. Why did u… I can't find the 5th letter… ' Kinnari now felt extremely guilty of throwing the diary on the bed…she started searching along with him and with tears in her eyes she looked at him and said, 'I am really sorry I didn't meant to hurt u ..I can understand what the letters mean to u.. plzz forgive me I will try and search, its my mistake.. such a fool… I didn't realize ...' Asit did not say much… but her tears had made him be calm. Soon Kinnari saw the letter hooked at he edge of the huge photo frame over the wall.. she climbed the bed and Asit was glad the letter was there.. Asit felt Kinnari's hands will not reach the letter, and Kinnari went on her toes and removed the letter from the frame edge but as she turned.. she banged into Asit and both fell on the bed. Both yelled , ' Ouch! Sorry!' Tanishka came there and saw them on the bed with the bed sheets messy and they both smiling…. Kinnari was on top of Asit … Tanishka went in the drawing room extremely disturbed while Asit pushed Kinnari aside, placed the letter and diary inside his cupboard, and came out.

Tanishka asked Asit that he doesn't have time to do anything for her ..looks like he is too busy with his married life… she said this with certain jealousy.. She was pretty glad by the way Asit had held her when she was about to slip which made her feel she still holds the magic to attract Asit but with Asit running towards Kinnari and looking at them on the bed she felt like a failure. Tanishka continued with teary-eyed face that how her dreams have shattered and how much she still cares for him… Asit was understanding her act. Asit didn't say anything but just heard her stories… Tanishka realizing that she cant get any reaction from him.. told him that looks like his heart doesn't care for her anymore. Asit smiled and said, ' Oh my heart is not mine now.. I am married had to give it to my wife… U know after a very long time I got an off, newly married ..so… u could see where my heart & mind are..just at the right place like all normal men… with my wife..' Tanishka was hurt by his words… Asit was feeling great how she had hurt him by flirting with Ronny in front of him… he felt he can see the same pain on her face today. Tanishka smiled and as Kinnari came out of the bedroom.. Tanishka looked at her with jealousy and said, ' I will leave.' . As she left the house…she turned & looked at him said, ' We loved each other when we were no big stars, We both are popular now and can get people who love us… but we should never forget the time we spent together…for the beautiful moments we shared.. Sometimes do think about me as well…' Asit nodded his head and smiled. Tanishka had a smile on her face with those words and she went feeling there is still chance while Asit had smiled with her attitude to not let her hopes die be it for any thing in life.

Asit and Kinnari sat; Kinnari asked him why he had spoken as if he has a romantic start to his married life, which is not true… Asit told her why she wants to know, Kinnari replied him that Tanishka isn't just thinking about Asit but about her as well, she has every right to know why he made Tanishka to think about her like that.. Asit told Kinnari everything about his relationship with Tanishka… the break off and about Ronny as well.

Kinnari: she is the onscreen Seema, Pativrata bahu of ur serial… apne pati ke sivay she has no work or goal in life… just to make him be with her…

Asit: Yes, Aadarsh bahu… she has won so many awards…

Kinnari: Oh… real hard work to show what u rnt an inch in ur real life… she deserves all… (She smiled cheekily) She does look very beautiful…

Asit: Her Mom runs a parlour…

Kinnari: Wow! That's so nice.. but onscreen she looks pathetic.. off-screen she looked much better..U know when my aunt came from Behrain we were watching Tv the volume was on mute.. as she saw Tanishka's face, she tried to guess, she asked me it was a Jewllery store ad? Or a Saree Ad..? Later when she saw the eyes expressions changing in a minute.. Surprise shock and grief on the face in one frame itself… she understood it's a typical saas bahu scheme serial… and frightened by the fact she immediately told us to change the channel immediately....

Kinnari laughed loudly and Asit smiled…

Kinnari after a long time saw a smile on his face that was real and for the first time she felt he was relaxed. She could understand the pain today he gave to Tansihka had made him feel relaxed.

Kinnari told him she needs money to buy small things for her like going to the parlour.. Tansihka reminded of it … but she doesn't feel like taking it from him like that… then she asked him, she will do Khari Kamaee that way she will feel she earned the money… Asit asked her.. Khari Kamaee in the sense.. Kinnari told; like she will make tea for him in the morning he will have to pay 20 rupees.. Asit said, Rs 20/ with a shock expression. He asked her she was charging too much… Kinnari relplied he will be privileged to be served tea by a merit rank holder. Asit laughed and said what about a glass of water.. how much .. She said Rs5/ , Asit felt relived that glass of water was cheap…. Kinnari replied saying.. but cold water from fridge will cost him Rs 10/ Asit smiled and .. he asked her to bring cold water.. and as Kinnari got up to bring.. he said. 'I need to save some money, I haven't paid the final installment of this flat…. bring just half glass of cold water.. That will be Rs 5/ right ' Kinnari laughed and so did Asit.

Asit drank the water gave her the money and was seriously thinking.. Kinnari asked what happen.. He said, if in Indian household every wife starts this Khari Kamaee.. he is wondering about the condition of the Men … Both laughed loudly. They discussed the crush they had and Asit got to know Kinnari watches the news channels as she has a slight crush on a news anchor, she said she doesn't know his name but he really looks good and speaks so intelligently. Asit told her the next time to do let him have a glance at this chap. Both discussed about their choices … They felt like they don't fear to hide any embarrassment while they chat with each other, comfortable and no fake behaviour. They both asked themselves…'Is friendship growing by any chance?'

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