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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ashprincess

heyyyyyyyy urmila sweeeeeety!!!!
jst caught up wid yr ff!!!!!
it waz chooooooooooo GOOD!!!!!!
luved it chooooo much
nys start n meeting point!!!!!!!!
cont soon sweety
cant wait 2 read more!!!!
n wen u do can u plzzzzzzz pm me
n let me no dat u'v updated
luv ya n yr ff loadz
take care
ash.

thanks a lot princess iam very happy that u liked it i will surely pm u

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Posted: 16 years ago
good start
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: panjwani

good start
continue soon

thanks a lot i will continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

thanks a lot for ur compliments 😳 😳and i have written part 3 iam very sorry if it dissapointed u 😭 😭

this part was really sweet and cute😳😳😳

and dont worry sweety i love long parts

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Posted: 16 years ago

guys iam continuing because i cant come tommorow
recap:arman and ridhimas match, arman gives ridhima lift and they will be assigned duties together and arman staring at ridhima while anjie is taliking

part 4

anjie:arman, arman this time she shouts arman

arman comes back to his senses:ha anjie y r u shouting

anjie:u r not listening to me thats y

arman:ok tell what

anjie:nothing lets go

arman:ok
same day in sanjeevani:
ridhima is reading some files and was about to cross the door then she suddenly gives dash to a young,smart handsome boy called rajan[rajan is a rich,intellegent and soft natured boy.girls will die for him but he dont care about them>]
arman who is watching this comes to her and says
arman:arey basket dhek kar nahi chal sakthi kya pehle mujhe dash kiya ab is bechare ko
ridz::shut up and turns towards rajan and says iam extremely sorry
rajan:its ok dont worry by the way iam new inturn here may i know where can i get dr.keerthi
ridz::great iam also inturn here iam ridhima and u can get dr.keerthi in room no 5
rajan:thanks a lot iam rajan
ridz::nice to meet u. ok bye i have some work
rajan:ok bye
ridhima does her work and all will meet in canteen
ridz::hi guys how was the day
anand:not bad actually arman i need to talk to u can u come with me
arman:ya sure bye basket
ridz:jaldhi aana
arman:y will u miss me
ridz::actually i need an entertainer thats y
arman:what am i entertainer
ridz::any doubt
anand:u guys please stop querelling and he drages arman to some room which is empty
arman:kya hua bhai kuch problem he kya?


ha yaar bahut bada problem
arman:kya hua sab theek he na
actually problem is not for me it is for ridhima

kya hua ??????
anand:actually ridhima ka behen he na uska ek friend he nisha who is a wicked girl and always makes ridhima cry
ok tho problem kya he
anand:wo bhi yaha ka inturn he ab ridhima ko roj rona padthi he iam not getting what to do because of her once ridhima got severe accident
no problem brother we r there to rescue her we wont leave her alone ok now cool down
anand:thanks a lot arman lets go ridz should be waiting
ok lets goat the same time in canteen anjie and nisha enters
nisha:hey anjie where is ur emotional behan
anjie:there she is and they will go there
nisha:hey ridz how is ur dayridz:hey nisha its goodmean while rajan enters and says hi to ridz
ridz:hi rajan
nisha:how come to know all boys first r u mad of boys pehle in school ur all friends r boys and now also same cant u change ur behaviour
ridz was about to cry then arman and anand enters and see each other faces seeing ridhima
arman:hey ridz tum tho kamal ki ladki ho when u r sad also u will look beautiful
ridz starts smiling
they will hear anouncement and go to dr keerthi room
keerthi: guys tommorow we r going to lonavali to celebrate and to check kids also
hearing the word lonavali ridz and arman gets over excited and shouts wow great
keerthi:control urselvesridz [ to herself>:wow god thanks a lot u did this in correct time i can meet ammy there
lonavali is the place in which ridz does her primary studies
who is ammy? y ridz is interested to meet him? will she able to meet him?
to know this wait till next part

next part 5 on page 7

Edited by urmila_17 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
iam sorry guys i know it is little bit boring but in next part i assure u that there will be more romantic scenes between arman and ridhima
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Posted: 16 years ago
very very very goood urmila
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
and PM me the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swansea

very very very goood urmila
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
and PM me the next part

thanks a lotttttttttttttttttt for ur comment  i will continue soon and congrats for ur goldenie and please continue ur ff iam waiting for ur ff

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shalika

awesome please cont soon

thanks a lot for ur compliment and i will continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

thanks a lotttttttttttttttttt for ur comment  i will continue soon and congrats for ur goldenie and please continue ur ff iam waiting for ur ff

i'll try to continue next week probably monday or tuesday or