dill chura liya AR PART 15[pg81 ]28/05 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_5

hey gr88888888 part........really good.......do continue soon........ ๐Ÿ˜Š

thanks a lot pinky and thanks for ur pm

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Posted: 16 years ago

thanks a lot swansea i will try to do it today though it is not as nice as ur ff iam very glad that u all liked it. thanks a lot

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Posted: 16 years ago
welll who is ammy?????????????????
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Posted: 16 years ago

ok guys this is part 5
recap:introduction af nisha and rajan and keerthi anounces they r going to lonavali
after their work ridz,arman and anand plans to eat dinner out side so they will go in anands car then suddenly car stops
ridz:kya hua anand
arman:what will happen u sat in the car it might have got damaged
ridz:shut up
arman:u shut up
ridz:first u keep quiet
anand:will u people please keep quiet and we should now walk
ridz:theek he chalo
they all starts walking then suddenly rain starts
ridz:mujhe ice cream chahiye anand please mujhe ice cream chahiye
arman:kya ye ice cream kaane ki mausam he kya
anand:ridz ko vaarish me icecream kaane ki aadhat he
arman:great habit
ridz:thanks, anand i want icecream now please please
anand:ok tum log yaha kisi ped[tree] ke neeche baito me taxi aur ice cream lekar aatha hoon
ridz:cho sweet of u go soon
arman:ye ladki bilkul bachon ki jaise behave karthi he theek he anand jaldhi aana
anand:ha theek he bye saying this he will leave and arman and ridhima goes to near by tree and stands there
ridhima is totally wet and suddenly a thuder strikes and ridima hugs arman tightly

arman felt a different feeling though many girls hugged him he did not feel like this he will take ridhimas hair and kisses her lightly on her cheek
arman [comes back to his senses]:iam sorry i didnot mean it
ridz[ slightly blushing]:its ok and even iam sorry
arman:u r welcome
they will look to each others eye for few seconds then anand comes back with icecream and taxi
anand:lo theri icecream
ridz:taking that ice cream she will jump like a small kid
arman[to himself}:ye ladki me kuch special he
anand:ab chale warna late ho jayenge
arman and ridz together:ha chale
they will sit in the taxi ridz will sit in middle and slowly she will go to sleep and keeps her head on arman
arman felt very happy he dont know y he is feeling happy
and she is getting disturbed on sleeping on armans shoulder as it is taxi so arman makes her to sleep on his lap
anand:thanks arman u r helping my friend a lot
arman:is me thanks bolne ke zaroorath nahin he
and finally they deccide not to take dinner out side so they will reach ridz house
arman:ridhima utho
ridz in sleepy voice:sone dho na please
anand:ridhima hum tumare ghar pahunchgaye ab utho
ridz suddenly gets up and realizes that she is sleeping in armans lap
ridz:oh iam sorry u would have woke me up
arman:its ok no problem
ridz:thank u
arman:u r always welcome
anand:ok ridz now go
ridz:ok bye anand bye arman
ar and an:bye and tommorow be ready we will pick up u
ridz:thanks a lot i will be ready
ar and an:theek he
and they will leave while arman is thinking about ridhima how he kissed her and how she hugged him and thinks to himself what is happening to him

tommorow they will be going to lonavali then i will tell u all about ammy

part6 on page 8

Edited by urmila_17 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swansea

welll who is ammy?????????????????

hey sweety wait till next part i will tell u then

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Posted: 16 years ago
IS Ammy n Armaan r same person in ur FF ๐Ÿ˜•
thanks 4 update
plzz continue
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hdpatel

IS Ammy n Armaan r same person in ur FF ๐Ÿ˜•
thanks 4 update
plzz continue

thanks a lot for ur comment and how can i answer to ur question it is suspense๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† and by the way it may be arman or anand or rajan or a new person so i cant give any clue any way. iam very happy that u have read my ff and u can give me some advices about anything.

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Posted: 16 years ago

thanks a lot swansea i hope u dont mine calling u as swansea as i dont know ur name iam calling u with this.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

thanks a lot mahi i did not expect that u will like this and i  will definetely try to pm u after completing next part


hey sweety
thanks 4 da pm
 i'll read n comment sooon
jus read it OMG..... i cant wait 4 da next prt now its so interesting yaar ๐Ÿ‘
plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont super sooooooooooonnn
rite a bit longer๐Ÿ˜ƒ
luv ya n tak care
mahru(my name is mahru not mahi๐Ÿ˜ƒ)
Edited by mahi4u - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4u


hey sweety
thanks 4 da pm
 i'll read n comment sooon
jus read it OMG..... i cant wait 4 da next prt now its so interesting yaar ๐Ÿ‘
plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont super sooooooooooonnn
rite a bit longer๐Ÿ˜ƒ
luv ya n tak care
mahru(my name is mahru not mahi๐Ÿ˜ƒ)

oh iam sorry for refering u as mahi ๐Ÿ˜ญ.any ways iam very happy that u have liked it i will definetely try to make more longer and if u can give more advices i will be very happy .once again thanks a lot mahru.