dill chura liya AR PART 15[pg81 ]28/05 - Page 2

Originally posted by: muskaan_2008

hey great 2 parts plz continue soon
good going 👏

thank u very much

hi dear 😊very nice start.👏 nice plot as well 😳.  loved there first meeting. nice going dear👏. 
pls do continue. will be waiting😊 

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

hey very nice part

thank u very much iam very happy that u liked it i will continue soon

Originally posted by: castrafa

hi dear 😊very nice start.👏 nice plot as well 😳.  loved there first meeting. nice going dear👏. 
pls do continue. will be waiting😊 

thank u very much  iam very glad that u liked it iam very happy with ur comment . i will continue soon.

Originally posted by: urmila_17

thank u very much iam very happy that u liked it i will continue soon

 

thanx for reply

plz continue soon

hi urmila that was a nice part.i must say ur ff has a bright future 😆
pls continue fast

ok guys like to write next part
recap: meeting of our hero arman and heroine ridhima and introduction of anand who is rich,handsome and has caring nature
part 3
ridz and anand talks about arman while jogging and leaves to their homes
in ridhima house
ridz:hi di good morning!
angali[sister of ridzz]:good morning we r getting late iam going to leave now to hospital u take auto and come
ridz:di please cant u wait for 5 min i will join u even i will get if i take taxi please
anjie:iam sorry ridz its ur faith saying this anjie leaves
ridz calls anand
ridz:anand can u please pick up me to hospital anjie told me to take taxi and went off
anand:ridz its ok i know about ur di i will pick up u be ready i will come with in 10 min
ridz:thank u anand i will get ready bye
anand:ok bye
ridz gets ready and anand calls her
anand:ridz iam very sorry actually i got in traffic jam
ridz:but anand how can i come now
anand:its ok no problem i will ask my friend who is also inturn of sanjeevani to pick up u
ridz:ok thank u do it fast
anand:ok bye
ridz:bye
mean while anand calls his friend and asks him to pick up ridz i think u have guessed it his friend is arman
arman goes to ridz house arman comes in bike wearing helmet so ridz could not discover him
ridz:hi so u r anand's friend
arman[to himself]:so basket mujhe pehchana nahi 😆 😆
arman:ha me anand anand ka friend hu ab ham chale warna late ho jayenge
ridz:ha chale saying this she will seat on armans bike she will seat in one side
anand:can u please sit in other way as we r getting late i will go little bit fast so aap girjayenge
ridz:ok saying this she will sit in other way while sitting she will touch armans shoulders arman gets a current shock
ridz:shall we leave
arman:iam sorry saying this he will ride very fastly and gives sudden brakes and ridz used to fall on him
atlast they reach sanjeevani
ridz:thank u very much i cant forget ur help aapne meri job bachaliya by the way iam ridhima saying this she will give her hand
arman: hi ridhima iam arman arman mallik saying this he will remove his helmet
ridz:kya tum
arman:ha me
ridz:tumko itni himmat mujhe lift dhene ke liya
arman:hello pehle tho thanks boli ab mujhe dant rahi ho
ridz:any ways thank u mr arman mallik saying this she will leave
arman and ridhima r first to reach sanjeevani as they came in bike they didnot had any problem with traffic jam
in locker room
arman:hamara match ab tak katham nahi hui
ridz:ha tho
arman:tho kal khelenge
ridz:kya kal bhi there saath game khelna nahin
arman:kya dar gayi
ridz:nahi phir hum sanjeevani ko late ho jayenge isiliye
arman:tho kya me phir lift dhene ke liya thayaar hu
ridz:nahi its k we will play on sunday
arman:theek he
they hear the anouncement and leaves to dr keerthi's room
keerthi:good morning baaki sab kaha he
ridz:good morning madam di she corrects and says anjali left before me i think she must have fixed in traffic jam and anand also got strucked in traffic jam
keerthi:any way iam happy with u both u r there in time
ar and rid:thank u madam
keerthi:aap ka duties aap dhono general ward me kaam karenge
ar and ridz:yes madam
saying this they will leave mean while anand enters
anand:hi tum aagayi thank u arman
arman:its ok anything for u
ridz:hi first go dr.keerthi is waiting for u
anand:ha theek he we will meet in lunch
he will leave and arman and ridhima r busy in their work
after some time anjali goes to keerthi and gets nice scoldings from keerthi
anjali to herself: ridhima bachi aaj tum nahi bachongi she says this thinking ridhima did not come to hospital
ridz:hi di aap aagayi
angie:par tum yaha kise i mean itni jaldhi
ridz:anand helped and his friend gave me lift
anjie was about to say something arman enters
arman:hi gorgeous iam arman
anjie:hi handsome iam anjali
ridz:ok di me chalthi hoon
arman:ye tumaari behan i cant believe this man u r very pretty and she and turns towards ridz while a chill wind moves and ridz hair will fall on her face and ridz  is strugling  to take her hair from her face  arman could not take his eyes off  from her and says she is very beautiful and ridz blushes😳 😳 little bit listening to him
anjie didnot like that 😡 😡and says arman but arman is still busy  staring at ridhima
part 4 on page 4


Edited by urmila_17 - 16 years ago

i think it is very long part but what to do i went on writing with out seeing time 😉 iam sorry if i have dissapointed u 😭 😭Edited by urmila_17 - 16 years ago

heyyyyyyyy urmila sweeeeeety!!!!
jst caught up wid yr ff!!!!!
it waz chooooooooooo GOOD!!!!!!
luved it chooooo much
nys start n meeting point!!!!!!!!
cont soon sweety
cant wait 2 read more!!!!
n wen u do can u plzzzzzzz pm me
n let me no dat u'v updated
luv ya n yr ff loadz
take care
ash.

Originally posted by: vidu93

hi urmila that was a nice part.i must say ur ff has a bright future 😆
pls continue fast

thanks a lot for ur compliments 😳 😳and i have written part 3 iam very sorry if it dissapointed u 😭 😭