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Posted: 17 years ago

PART VI

[Nasik] [Next Day] [9 a.m]
Daya had done some makeover with his look today....he was feeling a little weird about it....but what could he do....afterall for the sake of duty they have to do everything....he wore a rose red baggies full sleeve t shirt...with a black jeans....& his hairstyle was too very suitable..he didn't comb his hairs at all so that they tangled like this.....wore a sunglass to cover his eyes...& just headed towards his destination.....
[Stay Fit Gym]
Daya entered & straight went to the reception.....& asked the lady receptionist---excuse me Maam...
Receptionist: yes sir...how can I help you?
Daya:Maam I just want to talk to you about the gym
Receptionist: yeah..please sit down
Daya: Thanks...
Now Daya opened something from his bag...& gave it to the receptionst--maam , this is my resume...maine suna ke yaha pe.......ek gym instructor ki zarurat hain......to main...
Receptionist: ha lekin experince ka zarurat hain..barna...
Daya interrupted her though very politely---Maam..experience hain mera....Mumbai me main..kuchh din ke liye....do teen gym me...personal trainer ka kaam kiya hain....
The receptionsit was reading the resume though not very thoroughly & sometimes she was squinting her eyes towards Daya....& everytime Daya was cowering his head to be modest......
Receptionist now a bit curtly asked him--kaunsa celebrity ko train kiya?
Daya was confused at first but then he answered---dekhiye....ek successful trainer hone ke liye...zaruri hain kya ke .....celebrity ko train karna hoga....his voice was a bit rough...
Now the receptionist said with a bit smile-- nehi sir, aap Mumbai se aye hain...isliye....puchh rahi thi...by the way...sir..aapko thora wait karna parega...Manager se baat kar lete hain...
Daya smiled again very politely....& the lady called someone inside & talked ....for sometime...after that she told him--sir aapko Manager ke sath milna hoga....manager ke room me chale jaiye....
Daya went to the manager's room with his resume...& now the manager asked him----aiye......please be seated
Daya sat..& gave his resume to the manager.....while manager was going through his resume..Daya was talking about himself---sir..main...puri responsibility or care se kaam karunga....
manager now sighed--hmmmm.....Rohit Shetty...from Mumbai.......khaffi achchha resume hain aapka.....
Daya again cowered his head....
Manager: waise....main aapko ek hi baat puchhna chahta hun........
Daya asked very modestly--ha sir puchhiye....
Manager: aap Mumbai se chale kyu aye?...Mumbai is such a big city..the facilities & range is wide....so aap jaise ek robust young man....I mean....as far as money & facilities are concerned....
Now Daya interrupted him & answered with a very calm but steady voice---sir,har kisi ke zindegi me ..money sabse zada important nehi hota hain....kuchh aur bhi responsibilities hote hain hamara....
Manager frowned & asked --jaise???
Daya now smiled lightly & with an uneasyness & said--sir..mera chachaji ka tabiyat ..kuchh thik nehi hain...doctors ne kaha hain...Mumbai ke pradushan, dhul se unhe dur rehne ke liye...so...
The manager was a bit ashamed & now without asking him any more question he told--thik hain...to aaj se aap humara naye instructor.....dekhiye..hamara yaha pe...sirf dus instructor hain....aur...clients zada...so....kabhi bhi aapko duty dena par sakte hain.....
Daya said modestly--okay sir...
Manager: philhal aap ko naye clients ko tackle karna parega..thik hain..baad me aapka kaam dekh ke...hum age barenge..
Daya:Okay sir...
Daya stood up.....& shook hands with manager....
Manager: aur ha...remuneration ke bareme ...aap ko kya expectation hain?
Daya smiled lightly & answered---as per the norms & rules of gym whatever you think is appropriate for me....I only expect that...
Manager again frowned & smirked & said--aap kaffi intelligent hain...I hope you would remain with us..for a long time....good luck
Daya again smiled & went out of the gym....

[Mumbai] [11.A.M] [Bureau]
Abhijeet,Freddie & Vivek was busy with the Juhu Murder case....vivek was preparing the file while Abhijeet was analysing minutely some evidences they gathered from the crime scene....
& ACP now entered with his noisy romping steps..everyone greeted him--Good morning sir....
ACP said in hurry--Good morning...Abhijeet, mere cabin me aao.....
Abhijeet said obediently--yes sir...
As he entered into the cabin....ACP just stormed out---ye suresh aur Reema tumhare kaun lagte hain?
Abhijeet cringed down & he was just preparing to tell everything about them...but...before that ACP again shouted out---bolo...kaun lagte hain woh log jo tumhare birthday party pe tum unlogo ko invite kiya????????
Abhijeet was confused but was continuously trying to overcome his nervousness & said---sir...suresh mera collge ka dost hain....par Reema.....
ACP: ha Ree maaaaaaaa!!!!!!!....usdin bheer bhar me maine use thik tarike se dekha nehi.....par woh...ek number ka cheat hain..dhokebaaz....logo ko dhoka dekar paisa kamati hain woh.....kayi baar pakre gaye..lekin enough evidence ki kami ke wajase chhut gayi.....woh tumhare dost ke sath kya kar rahi thi?
Abhijeet: sir,ye baat mujhe bhi maloom nehi tha...sir..maine socha tha Reema Suresh ka wife hain....lekin....
ACP: lekin aisa nehi hain...haina??????
Abhijeet again cringed down & answered---ha sir....aur sir...woh hi.....sir...Pritha ko...Daya ke ghar me...bheji thi...taki....
ACP again yelled out---wah!!! fantastic!!!!!! tum log marvao ge kya mujhe???? is case ki bareme maine sirf tum logo ko hi bataya..aur woh log..tum logo ki andar baithke..achchhi tarike se...apna kaam kiya ja raha hain....
Abhijeet remained silent in guilt & shame....
but ACP continued--aur to aur...ye baat inform karne ki bhi zarurat nehi samjha tumne??? Reema ko kaise tum sab ki bareme itna kuchh maloom hain?
Abhijeet now said in feeble voice--sir..maine is liye Reema ko kuchh bhi nehi kiya...taki unlogo ko ye shak na ho jaye...ke hume uski aasliyaat pata chal gaya hain....
ACP now thought something deeply though his face was still twitched in irritation ......& then ordered him---nazar rakho un dono pe....mujhe un dono ka har din ka activites ka every details chaiye....samjhe???
Abhijeet: yes sir...
ACP: aur ha...Rohit ko phone karo.....samjhe? dekhte hain..ke woh saab kitna dur tak ja paye hain....
Abhijeet got surprised a bit ..but he didn't dare to ask ACP anyhting....but ACP was sharp enough to understand that....--kya huya..lagao phone...
Abhijeet again feebly asked --ssir...Rohit...matlab......Daya..
ACP again shrieked out--Abhijeet Rohit matlab Rohit..samjhe...? Inspector Daya chhutti me hain ye tumhe kitni baar kehna paregaaaa?
Just at that moment Vivek entered ...with a case file..& stared upon ACP..
ACP: ha Vivek...kya huya?
Vivek: ssir....ye..file..taiyar hain....bas...aapka..ek..sign chaiye..
ACP told him very roughly---table pe rakh do...main..parke sign kar dunga.....
now Vivek asked --ssir...Daya sir...chhutti pe...chala gaya hain...?
Abhijeet didn't answer...but ACP said--curtly--ha...
Vivek again asked--ssir..unka...tabiyet to thik haina???parso bhi to....office..me aye the.....hume...to.kuchh....nehi.....
Now ACP reddened his eyes & said---kyu? tumlogo ko puchhke chhutti lena parega useeeeeeeee?
Vivek was hurt...& with wrinkled face he said--nehi sirr..I'm sorry....
ACP: jao...jake kaam thik tarike se karo.....abhi tak Mrs.Malhotra murder case ka koyi suraha nehi huya......detective agency ka pata chala?
Vivek answered ruefully--yes sir...lekin..waha..bhi detective...Bhavesh Joshi ka murder ho gaya hain...
ACP just startled & said--kya!!!..ek ke baad ek murder hote ja rahe hain....aur..tum log....he snarled in anger....
Vivek once looked at Abhijeet but Abhijeet too was helpless infront of ACP's anraged rave....he informed ACP--ssir...lash forensic me hain...
ACP again snarled & ordered--ha to jao....forensic se report lao...
Vivek said--yes ssir..very obediently & headed towards forensic...
[Forensic] [2.P.M]
Vivek & Freddie entered into forensic & saw Dr.Tarika was sitting on her computer table & was doing something with deep concentration....
Vivek came infront of Tarika & asked--Dr.Tarika...
Tarika saw them & said--Dr.Salunkhe lunch pe gaye hain....& she came near the detective's dead body to tell them about it...but before that Vivek asked her--Daya sir chhutti par hain...unka tabiyet to thik haina?????
Tarika turned her face towards Vivek.....& then turned back....she didn't answer him.....Vivek glanced over freddie....& now freddie whispered--ye vivek...shayad ...dono...ki..beech me ...jhagra huya hain....anman..yaar...
Vivek blinked at Freddie to make him stop......but Freddie was unstoppable..he asked her ---jhagra chal raha hain? Tarika's face became stern....but she started to tell--iska maut 0.22 calibre ki goli se huya hain......aur kareeb kareeb kal raat aat baje se lekar gyara ki beech me huya hain......
Freddie burst into a chortle & again tried to madden---pehla pehla anman....bohooooooooooot khubsurat hote hain...vivek was trying to stop him desperately..but freddie continued---mujhe yaad hain....jab....main....mera wife ki sath pehli baar jhagra kiya tha...tab...
now Tarika shouted--Fredrie...
Freddie was unperturbed---haaa..sach.....aap..dekhenge....jab gussa utar jayega....tab Daya sir....aapko...pyaaaaaaaaar..se...
Tarika now gave a loud blow on the table & shouted---Fredriee.....
Freddie got into the reality...& on the verge of crying infront of Tarika's anger..
Tarika now turned towards vivek & asked him roughly--tum log yaha pe murder ke bareme jankaari ke liye aye ho..ya pher.....
Vivek interrupted being ashamed & said--sorry Dr.Tarika..Freddie sir ke bato se aap bura mat man na...ha....aap.bataiye......jo..kuchh bhi...keh rahe the....
Tarika was still panting heavily ...but soon she controlled herself....& said--ha...aur...iska nakhun me...khun bhi mile hain....
Vivek: kayi ye khoon khooni ka to hain nehi?
Tarika told Vivek--aap log ek kaam kijiye...ja kar...pure Malhotra khandan ki sare members ka aur jitne rishtedaar, freinds is case me jura huya hain..unlogo ka....blood samples leke aiye....match karne ki koshish kar rahi hu...dekhte hain....milta hain ya nehi....
Vivek nodded his face & went out from forensic..but Freddie....told before going out---Daya sir ko hum bohoooot miss kar rahey hain....jaldi se use chhutti se wapas ane ke liye ......Tarika glanced at Freddie & freddie just ran out of forensic.......
Tarika now kept musing about the words of Freddie & thought--kya batau use? mujhe khud ..hi...kya maloom hain...kab ayega woh....kya kya karna par raha hain...waha par...usko...aur...eventually her eyes went on the body of Detective....& she saw....it..as.if....it's....Daya..
--naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.......she wailed out in the mixture of fear & pain.......she was feeling totally dizzy & wasn't being able to keep her balance......everything was dangling infront of her........Dr.salunkhe....just rushed to her...& clenched her within his arms & yelled--Dr.Tarika......Tarikaaa....kya huya tumhee? Oh my God.....
[ To be continued]
Edited by suchi_dev2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Suchi...what can I say abt ur work...its fab like always bt yea why do you make ACP shout and be angry always...I get so so so so so so scared... I actually move away frm the screen whenever I read ACP angry as I could hear him say the dialoges as I read them..well thats the way I read anything....bt ACP gets so angry and I get so scared...

bt still its awesome...
I would really wanna see Daya in that gym trainee outfit as he would look - hot! in that....

and well the last was pretty sad...poor Tarika...

write more...am eagerly waiting to know what next...
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Posted: 17 years ago
😃Shruti, actually situation ke mutabeeq ACP gussa ho raha hain yaar, us ke upar itna pressure hain, to bechara kya kare😃😃 aur tum darti kyu ho, aise bilkul nariyal ki tarha hain woh....upar se bohot sakt, aur andar se bohot narm...he is a sweetu, age main zarur koshish karunga taki woh thora kam gussa kare😃
& thnaks very very very much for your comment, mujhe pls batate rehna ke kaise main aur bhi improve kar sakti hu, thik hain? 😃
p.s: oh u didn't see it???? in the case of Jewel thief Daya had worn that track suit for more seveal times & yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh he was looking justtttttttttttttttttttttt toooooooooooooooooooooooo hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt......agar ho sake to dekh lena, he was looking indeed very good specially when he was lifting the weights..😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART VII

[Nasik] [7 days later] [11.A.M]
Daya was busy with a client for making him understand about Squat....&
suddenly he was informed that Manager was calling him.......He went to
Manager's room & the manager said--ha Rohit...ajao...tumhe isliye bulaya
tha...ke...aaj south Nasik ka sare gym o ka Instructors ka ek conference
hain.....to humare yaha se panch instructor ja nehi pa raha hain......main
chahta hun ke Rohit tum chale jao....
Daya smiled & said--o.k sir..I will...lekin...sir...ye experience to mujhe
pehle kabhi nehi hain...sir..
Manager: isliye tum chinta maat karo....aur log bhi to haina...aur tum to
kaffi mehnat aur dhyan se kaam karte ho....clients ka kya kya problems hote
hain....mere khayal se tum zarur keh sakoge.....aur..dusre gym o ka
instructors se bhi baatcheet ho jayega...jisme....bohot faida hain...
Daya smiled lightly & bashfully & then said--o.k sir..I will..
Manager was happy & let him leave...
Within half an hour Daya along with other three instructors headed towards the
conference....& when they reached there...Daaya noticed that it was really a
big affair...the conference was helding on the big pasture near Arts & science
college.....atleast fifty other gym instructors had come there..though it
wasn't very well organised..like he saw in Mumbai....one was giving speech
over the topic related to health...but the listeners were talking with one
another.....Daya was looking minutely the whole affair..though he attended
this type of conferences in Mumbai..but as a client...not as an
instructor.....Daya was looking at here & there...& suddenly.....something
stucked him.....he took his cell & again & again matching something
with......before he could do anything....he saw a lady aged nearly 27...was
coming towards him...her face was pervaded with a flirtious smile....Daya kept
the cell in his pocket....& ready to face the lady....the lady now came & sat
just beside him..& said a big Hiiiiiiiiiii..
Daya too smiled & shook hands with her & said--hello....
Lady: Neha...
Daya: Rohit
Neha: wow..nice name....
Daya smiled lightly...but didn't say anything...
Neha was curious--aapko...is conference me pehli baar dekh rahi hun?????
Daya answered courteously--jee ha..main pehli baar aya hun..
Neha was making her eyes seductive & asked again flitiously--kaunsa gym?
Daya: Stay fit gym....
Neha again told seductively--wow....that's nice...so we work almost nearer...
Daya frowned at her...& now she almost leant over Daya...& whispered--I'm from
slim & slender gym......Daya shrugged but didn't say anything...
but Neha was continuously giving him rougish looks & now she again
asked--ladkiyo se baat nehi karte hain kya?
Daya was getting irritated by the behaviour of this lady..but he recalled that
he is Rohit...not Daya....so..he moved on---aapko kya lagta hain?
Neha: aap jaise handsome agar ladkiyo se baat nehi kare...to..woh ladkiyo ka
luksaaan hain....
Daya smiled rougishly & said--thanks..
Neha: for what?
Daya: for giving complement.
Neha was moving her eyes here & there..& then told--chaliye...complement jo
aapko achchha laga......
Daya now asked --mere achchha lagne se aapko kya faida huya?
Neha curled her eyebrow & said--hmmmm, smart..question.....
Daya: this is not my answer......
Neha again leant over Daya & whispered--what answer do you wanna listen to?
she then smiled very mysteriously...at Daya...
Daya took sometimes & then said--only truth....
Neha burst into laughter...& said glancing at Daya rougishly--hmmm, ladkiyo se
baat karne se to aap maheer hain.....aur ladkiyo ke sath coffee peene me????
Daya was smiling inside to see her alluring behaviour....but now he didn't say
anything...just once again frwoned at her...
Neha was trying to provoke Daya by her tempting smile...& now she again asked
him--chaliye....yaha pe hi ek coffe shop hain....She stood up....to go..
but suddnely Daya recalled the words of ACP sir--dekho...har waqt ka training
main nehi de sakta hun....right situation me kya karna parega....woh tum log
zada samjhoge....samjhe???..
--kya huya? kya soch rahe hain? ek anjan ladki ke sath jana chaiye ya nehi????
finishing her words she again burst into luscious smile.....
Daya answered with a bantering voice--aaj yaha pe....pehli baar aya hun
na...pehla experience......ek hi din me.....do do pehla experince.....he
blinked eyes at Neha & continued---itna jhatka ..le nehi paunga....
Neha was stunned & to some extent depressed....she was going to tell
soemthing..but before that...another insturctor named Nikhil called
Daya--Rohit ..ajao...aab hamare clinets ke bareme...batcheet karenge...
Daya shrugged at Neha....& said with a smiling face---o.k,bye.....

[Mumbai] [same day]
ACP went to his freind & doctor Sadanand Agashe's home......& Mr.Agashe was
damn surprised to see the friend of his young age....being nonplused he
asked---arrey!!! Pradyuman....tummm?????
ACP smiled & answered--ha...sadanand...main.....
Mr.Agashe just hugged ACP tightly & then both took their seats....now
Mr.Agashe told ACP--to???kya baat hain..dost? ACP saab mere ghar me? apna sab
kaam ko chhorke? yaar..yakeen karne me...taqleef ho raha hain.....
ACP smiled & answered--ha yaar...kya kare..aur..main tumhare pas ek kam lekar
hi aya hun...
Sadanandji again smiled & said--hmmm.to kaam ke liye aye ho..mere liye
nehi?????
ACP wasn't at all abashed but said frankly--yaar...kya kare....duty hain na?
now Agashe burst into chortle & said--aur ACP saab duty ka banda
hain..haina??? bolo..kya kar sakta hun main tumhare liye?
ACP: mujhe...tumhara ek patient chaiye....
Agashe: patient?????? kaisa patient?????
ACP smirked & continued........

[Borivali] [4p.m]
Abhijeet was keeping his eyes over Suresh & Reema's activities since
morning......till now he didn't find anything odd as far as Suresh's
activities were concerned...he headed towards office at nearly 9A.M in the
morning....& he entered his office at right time...which was informed by
Abhi's informer Dabbu....but he was following Reema's activities by
himself....after Suresh headed for his office...there were several people
....entered into their home ....probably to meet Reema....among
them...Abhijeet could recognise one..whom he caught nearly seven eight years
ago..for fraud.....& now.....he suddenly noticed that a goon was coming &
entered into the home.....Abhijeet squinted his eyes to see minutely their
activities..& saw Reema was talking with the goon & handed over a bandil of
rupees to him...the goon came out & with his bike he was passed by the
residence....Abhijeet too was following him..though very cleverly......he
could understand that the goon was given some work by Reema....& what he was
going to do......Abhijeet was very keen to know that......& he noticed that
the bike was going towards Malad west......& as they were heading.....Abhijeet
was surprised.......the goon stopped his bike...coming nearer the residence of
Daya...& got off the bike........Abhijeet was stunned &
surprised...--woh.....to Reema ne ye kaam diya hain is gunde ko.......
The goon was loitering on the road just outside Daya's residence.....& trying
to peep...here & there...
Abhi too stopped the car a little far from the goon's bike & was watching the
goon minutely......& he watched that the goon was calling someone from his
cell.....within ten minutes...the goon finally opened the small gate to enter
into the lawn....Abhi was more surprised--ye gunda kar kya raha hain????? itna
himmat hain ise ke ek CID officer ke ghar me ghus rahe hain??????....The goon
now went nearer the main door & tried to peep out inside through the
window.....now the goon tried to open the door by dashing it......now Abhijeet
got off the car...& very carefully & gingerly went towards the door...but
...as he entered into the lawn....bullets started to come in ....in
flocks...Abhijeet just laid down on the ground....& he too started to fire
bullets.....& now the goon who was sent by Reema...too started to fire
.....but Abhi was continuously wallowing around the ground .....& now his
bullet injured the goon..the bullet fired from Abhi's gun straight went into
left leg of that goon..he was hobbling towards the back side of the
house...with his injured legs...& now Abhi was heading crawling on the
ground..still bullets were firing like rain from outside......he sat beside
the small tiny gate...& noticed two other goons there...who were using
stenguns.....there was no time for Abhi...in one hand he couldn't move..cause
if he did..then in any moment ....just one bullet would be enough to end his
life..but otherhand.....the injured one would be able to escape.....his
thinking power had gone dumb....he told by himself---sochne ka time nehi hain
Abhijeet...jo kuchh karna hain...abhi..barna kabhi nehi....he stood up &
without thinking anything fired at least five bullets in a row...& the two
goons fell down on the ground..but.....he couldn't save him...from injuring
himself.....one bullet from their stengun.....left him injured....he was
yelling..in pain...but......running towrads the backside.......the goon was
hobbling down....the road....& Abhijeet toowas running behind him.pressing his
upper hand with another arm....the goon went out through the backside gate &
now he was plodding on the narrow road...attcahed with the home......
he was still firing .....truning at back...but Abhi saved everytime
himself...very cleverly.......
meanwhile Tarika was coming through another road..& ..she was totally stunned
to see what was happening....she got off the car & rushing towards
Abhijeet....& the goon fired upon her......Abhijeet plunged & just pushed her
away from the path......& fired another one to the right leg of the goon...&
it stucked at once.....the goon this time fell down on the ground...& Abhijeet
caught him...
Tarika too fell down on the ground....& was speechless in utter shock....
Abhijeet was panting heavily.....& now he asked--kyu re? ek CID officer ki
ghar me...kisliye aye the...ha? bol? jaldi bol?
Abhi snatched the gun from him...& took him to his car....
the goon was crying badly....with stark pain & also...infront of the
interrogation of Abhijeet....he said..with difficulty---saab...main kuchh nehi
janta hun..saab......saab..mujhe chhor do saab....saab..main
Now Abhijeet shrieked out --kya karne aya tha idhar? ha? tujhe maloom hain ye
kiska ghar hain?????
Goon was crying & said--nehi saab...main chori karne aya tha saab...chhor
do..saab
Abhijeet was desperate--achchha???? chori karne aya tha..ha????????to pher
Reema ke ghar me kya karne gaya tha???? paisa kis baat ke liye diya gaya
tujheeee? ha ??????bol????barna goli se ura dunga......isbar sidhe goli tere
bheje ki andar jayega..samjhe?????
the goon was crying...but he wasn't saying the truth...
Abhijeet was on the peak of anger ..he snatched the collar of the goon &
said---kuchh bhi maloom nehi hain tujhe.....thik hain..chal....bureau me
jake..dekhta hu...kaise....sab kuchh ugalta hain tu..chal..chal.....he was
getting onto the car..but now Tarika ran into Abhijeet & said--Abhijeet...aap
wounded hain...aapko chot pauchi hain...pehle aapko dressing karne ka...
Abhijeet interrupted Tarika with one hand & said--nehi Tarika....main thik
hun.....tum...khudka...aur..Jhumu ka khayal rakhna.........within some
moments....his car vanished away from Tarika's sight.
[To be continued]
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PART VIII

[Next Day] [10.A.M]
( Stay Fit Gym)
Daya was busy with his clients in the hall...& suddenly he was informed that someone had come to meet him in guest room...Daya was very much surprised...& a bit worried too.....in this unknown city who ...had come to meet him....he went to the guest room with much anxiety & uneasyness...& saw .........Neha was standing there.....a flicker of tempting smile was there in her lips....Daya conrolled his inner thoughts & emotions..& in a overwhelming voice he said--ohhh. what a pleasant surprise!!!!!! aap?
Neha curled her lips & eye brows together seductively & said--pleasant ya nehi...ye to..nehi janti hun........par....aaj....main....tumhe...yaha se coffee shop me lekar hi jaungi.....
Daya smiled lightly & said--itni subha subha...aap coffee shop me jayenge?
Neha again said with a husky voice--o.k,kaha jana chahte ho tum? bolo?
Daya didn't answer & just smiled wryly....
Neha too was giving Daya alluring smile...to tempt him....& after a pause she said---kal....mere offer ko.......thukrake.....she was eventually rubbing her long nails against one another...tum to.....mujhe.....adha....mar..hi diya.....she was squinting at him while talking.....aab....mujhe......pura mar dalne ka.......plan hain kya???
Daya now straight looked at her.....& suddenly she came closer & just reclined upon Daya & whispered---Roheeeet.......U r cuuuuuuuuuute....
Daya wished to slap the girl in irritation....but he .......resisted himself....&.......he couldn't ....cause.....he wasn't Daya...but Rohit....he was giving her feighned smile.....
Neha continued to whisper seductively---aaj tak...koyi bhi....aadmi...mere offer ko..thukra nehi paya....bbbuuut..u.....
Daya now sputtered after a long pause---lunch????
Neha was damn surprised & burst into a luscious smile..& said---wooooooooow....that's grrrreat....
Daya continued--lekin ...aapko....wait karna parega....I've my clients....un logo ke session khatam karke hi ...main...aa..paunga...
Neha was overjoyed & said--no problem....jaan ...& then again she leant herself over Daya & whispered---I can wait for you.....till..my last breath.....
Daya shrugged & with a wry smile...he went towards the hall.

[Mumbai] [11.30 A.M] [Bureau]
The goon was taken in the interrogation room ....& he was continuously being questioned by Abhijeet......& he didn't allow to enter anyone..in the room though he was injured ....everyone was surprised...& also worried for Abhijeet...but....Abhijeet wasn't listening to anybodyy...even...he was refused...to...obey.....Devyana....
ACP entered into the office & everyone greeted him-Good morning sir.
ACP: Good Morning...Abhijeet kaha hain?
Vivek: ssir...Abhijeet sir..interrogation Room me hain...par ssir..woh..injur..ACP didn't listen any more...& straight went to the interrogation room...& asked--Kya baat hain Abhijeet? tumhe kal goli laga...aur...
Abhi: sir...goli Tarika ne nikal diya.....aap chinta maat kijiye...sir...pehle isse sare details nikal lete hain...uske baad main aapki cabin me ata hun sir..
ACP nodded his face worridly & went straight to his cabin.
Now Abhijeet again started the interrogation---bol...kyu gaya tha..Inspector Daya ke ghar me?
Goon: wwoh saab...main ek chor hun...chori....
Abhijeet gave a sharp blow on the table--jjhuuut!!!!!!.....he shrieked out with his utmost energy---sach bataaaa......barna ...goli mar dunga tujhe...aur....sabko maloom hoga...ke tu encounter me mara gaya...
now the goon started to cry....
Abhi: Bol
Goon: Reema madam ne kaha tha saaaaab.....mujheeeeeee chhor do saaaaaaab...main paise ke liye....
Abhi was flaming in anger---paise ke liye tu kuchh bhi karegaaa??? ha????? kya kahi thi us Reema ne tujhe?
Goon: saaaaaab.....usne kahi thi.....woh....Daya saab....ka bachchi ki....aya..ko......
Abhi: aya ko kya?
Goon:uuu uuuse madam ko ek cd dena tha...woh...nehi...diya....gayab..hain.....
Abhi: to usko dhun ne ke liye...tu unka ghar ka darwaza kyu tor raha tha??sach bol aur kya boli hain tera Reema madam...ha????his nostrills were puffing violently in anger....ha???Inspector Daya ke family par attack karne ke liye boli thi usneee???? ha?
Goon just burst into cry--nehi nehi saab...main...to.......bas......us,....cd...ke liye.....
Now Abhi raise his middle finger & threatned the goon---dekh ....agar....kabhi...Inspector Daya ke ghar ki upar apna nazar galti se bhi dala ..........to......jaan se mar dunga main tujhe....samjhe?????
The goon was crying noisily...
Abhijeet came out & ordered--Freddie....is gunde..ko...Malad police station me le jaao.....aur..waha OC ko kehna...CID INS.Abhijeet ne pakra hain ise....ek police officer ke upar goli chalane ki aur ...kisi police officer ke ghar me chori karne ka plan banane ki jurm me....le jao..ise....
he was sweating like hell....Devyana just once glanced at him....her eyes were full of worry & anxiety.....but Abhi didn't talk with anyone...& straight went to ACP's cabin....--may I come in sir?
ACP: ha Abhijeet aao...
Abhijeet: sir, us Reema ka itna himmat, woh is gunde ko Daya ke ghar me bheji thi.....
ACP's face was already distorted..he thought something deeply & then said--tumhe jo goli laga tha.....
Abhijeet: ha sir...woh..Tarika...kal raat bureau me ayi thi...woh.goli nikalne ke liye....kyuki sir use shayad ye maloom tha ke mere pas hospital jane ke liye waqt nehi hoga....
ACP then worriedly asked --woh aur Jhumu thik to haina?
Abhijeet said--yes sir...
now ACP said--Abhijeet...ye..gunde...jhumu ke governess ..ye sab to chhoti machhli hain...infact...Reema khud bhi mujhe lagta hain..ek chhoti machhli..hain....
Abhijeet now suprised & asked--ssir...Reema chhoti machhli hain?
ACP nodded his head with a wry smile--haaaa Abhijeeeeet...woh ek chhoti machhli hain.....uska kaam sirf....itna hi hain...ke chhote mote gunde...ya pher aur kisise....ye sab kaam karvana......
Abhi again asked with stark astonishment--to pher sir...bare machhliya....hain...kaha??aur.....
ACP again smirked & said--yaha ka bare machhliya to......abhi...bhi...gehre paani ke neeche ghum rahe hain Abhijeeeet....tab hi upar ayegaaa.......jab....waha...ke....bare machhliyaaaaa...koyi......signal...dega........his face became stern & eyes became fixed just to think about those unknown criminals..

[Nasik] [1.30 P.M]
It was a lavish restaurant....totally air conditioned...dark deem atmosphere...light music.....they were sitting facing each other in a table......Neha already ordered for egg chowmin, chicken manchurion & one cup of beer for herself only.....Daya was sitting there...silently.....occassionally giving Neha very rougish gaze.....after a long silence ...Neha sputtered---Roheet....tum itna kam kyu baat karte ho?
Daya again gave her that killer smile & said--zada baat karne see........atmosphere ka....maza..hi chala jate hain....
Neha: wooooooooow....means????
Daya: means...itna romantic atmosphere ......baat karke....ise..kharab kyu kare????
Neha was rolling her eyes here & there.....again to tempt him & then said--hmmmm....kaffi romantic ho tum.......kal dekh ke hi samajh gayi thi.......
Daya: aur kya kya samjhi???
Neha was feeling happy inside...& said--hmmmm....ye....samjhi ke....tum ...ek....bachelor ho...right?
bachelor.....for a moment...Tarika's face came infront of him......but soon he went into Rohit's character---tumhara....mind kaffi sharp hain.....
Neha again busrt into loud chortle & said--ye main mind se nehi samjhi????
Daya knew the answer still he asked her to razz--to kaise samjhi?
Neha whispered---deeeeeel seeeeee........
Daya was behaving as if he was very shy ....to get the appreciation from Neha....
Neha:u r probably the most eligible bachelor in Nasik.....
Daya: bas.....itna tariff ek sath karoge.....to....
Neha bent down & whispered--to kya?
Daya: mar jaunga....he too smiled mysteriously at Neha...
Neha blinked her eyes & said--wo Roheet...tumhara hasi....kitna...khubsurat hain.....aise....hasoge.....to...
Daya now curled his eyebrow & asked--to kya??
Neha Whispered--mar jaungiiiiiiii.....
Now both busrt into loud laughter.........& continued to take lunch....

[Mumbai] [Headquarter] [3P.M]
DCP Sahay: Ha Pradyuman, kya progress hain?
ACP: sir hum process me hain...bas...
DCP: ek hafte se zada ho gaya hain....abhi tak tumne mujhe koyi satisfactory report nehi de paya...
ACP was helpless & tried to defend--sir hum koshish to kar rahe hain.....sir..hume to to maloom tha...hamara jal phailane me bhi to thora waqt lagega sir...sir Inspector Daya..waha pe aapna jaan ki baazi lagake kaam kar rahe hain....Inspector Abhijeet bhi yaha pe unlogo ko trace karte huye. aapne aapko injured kiya hain..sir..hum log
DCP was furious--main result chahta hun Pradyuman....CID matlab hi jaan ka khatra....ye koyi nayi baat nehi......par result kya dikhaya tumne? abhi tak Nasik se koyi report kyu nehi arahey hain?
ACP: sir...ye kaaam itna asaan to nehi.....kam se kam ek mahina
DCP shouted out--Pradyuman.......ek ke baad ek mar rahey hain...aur ....tum keh rahey ho ke ek mahina!!!!! how dare u!!!...
ACP: magar sir..jo jal..inte dino se bichaya gaya hain....usko pakar ne kiye...hume...thora sa dheeraj to......
DCP again shrieked out--bhar me gaye tumhara dheeraj....ek ke baad ek masoom logo ka jaane ka rahey hain..aur tum mujhe dheeraj dikha rahey ho????
ACP cringed down...& didn't say anything......
Now DCP Sahay again said--suno....chahe kuchh bhi karna pare...kisi ka bhi jaan jaye....in logo koo jaldi pakro..samjhe? I want result ....within the least time period...
ACP wasn't happy..specially the last line said by DCP made him .....angry...he asked in a dejected voice--sir..main aapka ek permission chahta hun....sir..mere department ka sabhi officer ko aab is case ke bareme bata dene ka waqt agaya hain.....I can't keep it secret anymore...Daya already bahar hain...aur...mujhe....bhi....
DCP answered in a bitter voice--kuchh bhi karo...lekin case solve karoo....be result oriented...
ACP: yes sir......
[Nasik] [4p.m]
They were in a boat within the baiju lake's serene water....cold breeze was blowing ....& Daya was cogitating deeply...about his honeymoon with Tarika........how Tarika was gazing at him..with rapt attention with the eyes full of love,reverence & passion.....how she .....was sprinkling the cold water upon him....to chaff....suddenly he felt a weight upon his shoulder....as he looked very slowly he saw Neha...just leant her head upon his shoulder.....Daya closed his eyes..in guilt....& irritation.....within himself he said---Tiku....mujhe maaf kar dena....tumhara Daya hamesha....tumhara..hi...
--Roheeeet..He just startled to hear the husky voice of Neha...she then clenched his one arm tightly & whispered---kitnaa suhana mausam hain.....
Daya said with sombre voice--to?
Neha: kuchh achchha bolo na.......
Daya:kya achchha bole?
now neha just tossed her head up & touched Daya's chin--kya huya jaaaan.....mujhpe itna khaffa kyu ho rahey ho?
Daya controlled himself though with very difficulty.....he understood that his voice went a bit rough....& tried to smile--nehi...actually I was thinking....
Neha:kyaaaaa?
Daya: ke gym me wapas jana hain sare pach ke andar...
Now again Neha clenched Daya's had tightly & crooned--tumhe chhorne ka maan nehi kar raha hain.....
Daya smiled & said--kal phir milenge na....
Neha's eyes sizzled & she asked --kaha??
Daya thought to chaff with her---yehiiiiii jaha koyiiiiiii ata jata to nehiiiiiii.....
they both burst into laughter...& now Neha said---kal tum silm & slender me chale ana....aur apne bike ke upar baithe rehna....thik hain?
Daya answered mischivously--o.k....chalo tumhe slim & slender me drop kar dete hain...
[Mumbai] [Daya's residence] [10.30 P.M]
Abhijeet:Tarika,tum ek kaam karo...kuchh din tum is ghar se dur raho....
Tarika became ruminative & she couldn't controll tears coming into her eyes...but couldn't say anyhting.....
Abhijeet was feeling uncomfortable....as he understood that Tarika was getting emotional...he again said slowly---Bandra me tumhari........jo flat thi...waha pe....
--main nehi ja sakti hu....now Tarika busrt into tears..---main ye ghar chhorke kahi bhi nehi ja sakti hun Abhijeet.....--chahe ......chahe....mujhe......kuchh bhi ho jaye.......mujhe...........mujhe........yaha....yaha pe...hi....she was crying her heart out.....
Abhijeet couldn't understand how he would give solace to her....what to tell her.......
--kya karungi main meri chinta karke????.............mujhe ........mujhe......kuchh....bhi......
now Abhi came beside Tarika & kept his one hand upon her head to console & said with hesitation--chinta maat karo Tarika, Daya .........Daya.....bilkul.......thik .....
Tarika was going to tell something..but before that her cell was blinking....she took it with blurry eyes...but saw an unknown landline number on it.....hello
--tiku....a wavering voice was calling her...
Tarika was mad --bujaaiiiiiiiiiiiii.....she again started to cry.....kaise hoooooo?????
--achchha hun....tum kaisi ho tiku? the voice was choked....& again again trembling......
---jake ek phone kiya ke nehi...bas....itne din ho gaya.....ek phone nehi....apne cell bhi..band kar diya....
--I love you tiku....I'm yours.....Daya told in a drenched voice.....but Tarika was a bit surprised....as Daya never said it so straight.....never....whatever he told her not by words..but with his brimming eyes.........clod of agony within the heart was melting as tears & coming out in the eyes of Tarika...she forgot everything...even forgot the presence of Abhijeet.....she too reciprocated with a whisper--I love you too......she was sobbing in pain......
Abhijeet was watching all these with mute astonishment & reverence for their love.....at the same time he was feeling very sad to see them apart & their pain to...
--kab lautoge?..now Tarika asked in a quivering voice...
--kam abhi bohot baki hain tiku...khatam hote hi .........tumhari pass chala ayungaa.......bhaisaab jaldi kijiyeee.....Tarika heard another voice...
Daya now told--aab rakhta hun tiku....main..baad me .....tumhe...
Tarika was restless--suno...mat chhoro....ek number to do...tumhara...pls....taki main tumhe phone kar saku.....aur...aur.....aapna khayal rakhna.......sardard to nehi huya beech me...bukhar to nehi aya?? barish me bheegna maat ...aur..khana....
--ha..Daya answered curtly as he was continuously tapped by the next caller....
--aur aur...khana samajhke khana.....aur.aur...sardard hone se....
--ha, ha.thik hain...he was forced to cut the line down...
Tarika remained in trance for sometime.........Abhijeet's eyes were became moistened.....he too was affected by their intense converstaion ..he came very slowly infront of Tarika & asked with choked voice---kaise hain woh?
Tarika got back into the reality & answered--achchha hain......Abhijeet said quickly--apna khyal rakhna & then he soon scarpered from there to hide his torrid emotion....
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[To be continued]
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PART IX

[Mumbai][Bureau] [9A.M][ Five days later]
Abhijeet reached at the office a bit early today,..in the past five days ACP sir was abnormally unperturbed, he didn't enquire about Nasik or any other cases, he was totally busy with his working diary & pen...Abhijeet asked him several times but didn't get any appropriate answer.
As Abhijeet entered into the office..the total atmosphere of the bureau seemed a bit weird..Freddie's face was twitched in pain, Vivek too was standing with a sad face, Abhijeet was surprised & asked Vivek--kya baat hain?
Devyana answered instead of Vivek--ACP ssir..
Abhijeet was restless--kya huya hain ACP sir ko?
Devyana: ssir...woh...ACP sir aapko cabin me bulaya hain..
Abhijeet nearly ran towards the cabin...ACP was smiling a lot & before Abhijeet could ask him anything he uttered --aao Abhijeet, aao...
Abhijeet entered & saw a middle-aged robust official was there, Abhijeet was confused..ACP continued--Ajitesh, ye hain senior Inspector Abhijeet....aur Abhijeet, ye yaha ka naye ACP Ajitesh Bhave.
Abhijeet was so much surprised that totally forgot to shake his hands with his new boss.
--hello, welcome...aapki baat kaffi suna hain, lekin....ab ek sath kam bhi karenge...
Abhijeet gave him a feigned yet modest smile but he couldn't resist himself to ask ACP sir--sir, aap..
--Abhijeet main ek lambe chhutti pe ja raha hun...mera tabiyat kuchh thik nehi ja rahe hain...isliye...par fikar maat karo...he squinted at ACP Ajitesh Bhave...tumhe Ajitesh ke sath kam karne me koyi taqleef nehi hoga..
Abhijeet was speechless in utter shock. He couldn't find any linkage between ACP's behaviour even seven days ago & now his attitude...ye kaise ho sakte hain?? Itna important mission ko adhura chhorke ....ACP sir....kaise...kaise....ja sakte hain?????

[Same day] [Nasik] [5P.M]
Daya was sitting on his bike just outside the Slim & Slender gym...suddenly he noticed his school friend Hritesh was passing by...Daya quickly turned his face away..but he didn't skip to notice Daya & with an overwhelming smile he was coming towards Daya....Daya was trying to shun him in every possible way..he turned his face opposite & pretended to be talking with someone in cell...but Hritesh just hit a bang on his back & said----arrey Daya, tu yaha pe?? kaise??? kab??? kaha rehte hain??kya??he was questioning him with bated breath..in excitement....Daya was feeling very guilty...but he had to do his duty...he turned back & said again pretended to be embarrassed--shayad aapko koyi galti ho raha hain....mera naam Rohit hain..
Hritesh was gaping at him with sheer stupefaction--kkya??? Daaya tu??
Daya smiled modestly & said--sorry bhaisaab, aapko koyi galti ho raha hain....
Hritesh couldn't believe it--Daya..tu
Now Daya was forced to get rough--ah, please aap mujhe disturb maat kijiye, main koyi Daya vaya nehi hu, samjhe aap?he then started his bike & went a little away from the gym...suddenly he heard that known croon of Neha---Roheeeeet....
Neha was running towards his bike & after gettin up into the bike she said--thori si der huya ke nehi, tum chale ja rahe the? itna abhimaaaaaaan huya hain tumhe?
Daya smiled & answered--nehi jaan, tumse mile bina chale kaise jate?
Neha didn't speak anything..but only clenched Daya with her arms from the rear & reclined her head upon his back.....
Daya wasn't speaking anything..he just couldn't...a bitter feelings pervaded his mind badly...after so many days he met his school freind but.... he had to pretend as....
Pretence, pretence & only pretence.....what else had he done here in Nasik?
--kya huya baat kyu nehi kar rahe ho? itna naraz ho gaya mujhse? he heard a very tempting as well sonorous voice of Neha...
Daya controlled himself & answered trying his level best flirtious--nehi jaan, tum bhi to mere liye kitna din wait karte ho, haina?
--mmmm, Neha only cooed
Daya: Achchha kaha jayenge?
Neha answered feverishly--jaha le jayoge...

[Mumbai] [6P.M][Bureau]
ACP Bhave: o.k Abhijeet, jaise tum log us robbery ke case me age ja rahe the...aise hi age barte jao...aise....mujhe..us case file aur photoes & videos chaiye....I hope ke wh mujhe mil jayega....
Abhijeet said modestly--yes sir, certainly, freddie, jao, us andheri jewellery shop robbery ka case file bagera leke aao...
Bhave's cell rang loudly & he talked for nearly two minutes very silently & then he turned back--ha Abhijeet, to tum log ye photoes achchhi tarike se analyse karte raho...kyuki mujhe lagta hain..isme kuchh pradyuman ne miss kar gaya tha...thik hain...
Abhijeet answered with sombre voice--okay though he didn't like the way ACP bhave talked About ACP Pradyuman...
Bhave: mujhe head quarter me ek meeting attend karna parega, o.k,
Abhijeet: okay, bye sir,
ACP Bhave left the bureau & now Abhijeet released his pain & worry upon the others--tum log khare khare mere mukh kyu dekh rahe ho?? jao, abhi jake photoes aur videos leke analyse karna shuru karo...ek bhi photo chhutna nehi chaiye, samjhe, jao....
He stormed out of ACP's cabin & slumped down on his seat....he was sweating like hell..& he yet to understand what was happening here & there....he was cogitating deeply--ye kaise ho sakta hain??? ACP sir...kabhi bhi....Daya ko phone karu??? kya ye thik hoga??? .....within a moment the phone rang loudly, Vivek received it
Vivek: Hello, CID bureau,
otherside: hello, kya main ACP Pradyuman se baat kar saakta hun?
Vivek: woh to......achchha ek minute...
Vivek came to Abhijeet & said--sir, koyi ACP Pradyuman sir se baat karna cha rahe hain....
Abhijeet now held the receiver--hello
otherside: hello, are you ACP Pradyuman?
Abhijeet: aap kaun?
otherside: main satyabol kagaz ka repoter Varun Kataria..
Abhijeet: jee boliye, main senior Inspector Abhijeet
Varun: sir,main Mecure Hospital se bol raha hun, yaha kuchh der pehle mere dost ka maut ho gaya hain...
Abhijeet stucked by the name Mecure Hospital....& then said--ha, to, isme CID kya kar sakte hain?
Varun: sir, ye maut aise huya nehi hain sir, usko bas ek chhota sa chot laga tha., kal bhi thik tha, aur main aaj akar dekha comma me chale gaye hain...sir hum uska postmortem karvana chahte hain...
Abhijeet: to local police ko bulaya kya?
Varun: sir,woh log bhi to yehi bol rahe hain ke ye jhamela me woh log parna nehi chahte hain..sir, woh log hamare sath cooperate nehi kar rahe hain..ssir..aur thora sa der hoga to ...
Abhijeet:hmm, thik hain, hum aa rahey hain..

[Nasik] [7 P.M]
Daya & Neha were dining in Sweet N Sour Restaurant....both were looking happy....suddenly Neha told---kal kab miloge?
Daya smiled & answered--pehle aaj ka hissa to khatam hone do,pher kal ka sochenge,
Neha too smiled seductively & said--pata nehi Rohit,....jab se tumhe dekha hain kya ho gaya hain mujhe....raat din sirf tumhara hi baat sochte rehti hun....she was speaking in fervour--jab dur rehte ho tab lagta hain kab milungi, aur jab pas me rehte ho tab lagta hain...kitna tez waqt guzar raha hain...abhi bichhar jayenge.to pher...
Daya pretended to be bashful & gave her a very shy smile..
Neha: oh, plsssss, sweetu aise na haso...
Daya: hasu to?
Neha whispered--mar dalte ho us hasi se...
Daya squinted at her--marte to tum
for a second Neha's face became pale but she recovered from it very smartly--ha?? kya kaha tumne?
Daya smiled again & answered--tumhari us teekhi nazar hi to....aadmiyo ko mar dalte hain....
now Neha smiled bashfully & suddenly she said--oh....oh God
Daya: kya huya?
Neha started to bite her nails--oh no...Rohit, kal main tumse mil nehi paungi..
Daya smiled inside but again pretended to be very worried--kyu jaan?
Neha:ek NGO ke sath mera naata hain...to waha pe kal ek blood donation camp organise kiya ja raha hain na....I will give blood...aise...
Daya asked--tum blood donate karti ho?
Neha smiled & nodded her head--ha Rohit, sochke dekho, kitne log sirf khoon ke kami ke waja se .....I just can't bear it Rohit
Daya again pretended to be overwhelmed--tum wake hi bohot nek kaam kar rahi ho Neha...bohot achchhi kaam kar rahi ho....
Now Neha said--aise Rohit,tumne kabhi blood diya?
Daya: ha diya kabhi kabhi, kyu?
Neha rolled her eyes & said--nehii....aise hi..tumhara blood group O negetive hain kya?
Daya: nehi O Positive...par tum kyu puchh rahi ho?
Neha again rolled her eyes & said--nehi, darasal O negetive to bohot kam logo ka hain..to agar tumhara hota ...to main tumhe leke jaati...
Daya smiled again & said--to thik hain, main tumhari sath chal raha hun, tumse mulaqat bhi ho jayega aur...
Neha just shrieked out--nehi nehi Rohit...mera kehne ka matlab ye nehi tha...aise...mujhe maloom hain...
Daya whispered--kya?
Neha: tum ek veer purush ho.....par kal tum mere sath nehi ana...
Daya: kyu?
Neha was continuously moving her eyeballs--waja hain...
Daya:kya waja?
Neha: secret hain sir
Daya:I know madam..
Neha again got pale for a little while but very fast she recovered with her damn persona--kya jante ho sir?
Daya: koyi aur to nehi hain tumhari zindegi me?
Neha sighed with pretended astonishment & now she raised her spoon towards Daya--Roheeeeeeeeeet, I will kill you....tumne aise ..aise...socha...
Daya smiled inside & muttered..kehne ka zarurat nehi hain..I know that..but as Rohit he was smiling his heart out....

[Forensic] [10P.M]
Abhijeet entered into forensic where Dr.Tarika was cheking the X rays, USG reports & other pathological reports of the dead person...
Abhijeet: ha Dr.Tarika,post mortem huya is Vinay ka?
Tarika: abhi tak to pura nehi huya hain, par jitna dekh rahi hu usse to rongte khare ho ja raha hain.
Abhijeet frowned--kyu?
Before telling anything, Tarika gave the USG plates to Abhijeet & was waiting for his reaction...
but Abhijeet couldn't understand anything & asked--isme kya hain Tarika?
Tarika now gave the USG report to Abhijeet & said--just read the portion I've underlined...
Abhijeet was totally dumb to see that...--kkya????ye to?
Tarika nodded her head & said--jee ha Abhijeet, inka maut isi ki waja se hi huya hain..
Abhijeet spluttered--tab to Varun thik hi keh raha tha.....ye ek murder hain.....mujhe to......hospital ka naam sunte hi.... now he turned again towards Tarika & asked --aur kuchh, zahar ya ...
Tarika said--abhi tak check nehi kar payi, aab dekhungi ke zahar hain ya nehi...agar hain bhi to dose bohot zada nehi tha...just a tranqilizer....
Abhijeet was getting restless & said--iska pura post mortem report milna bohot zaruri tha Tarika...Dr.Salunkhe Kaha hain?
Tarika was checking the slides & answered--DR.Salunkhe chhutti pe chala gaya hain, Abhijeet....isiliye to itna time lag raha hain
Abhijeet was totally bamboozled again--kya?? Dr.Salunkhe Chhutti pe chale gaye? ye kya keh rahey ho Tarika?
Tarika was surprised to see Abhijeet's behaviour & said again--ha, woh aaj hi chhutti lekar gaya hain...ACP sir hi to woh Chhutti ka application sanction kiya hain....
ACP sir?????? Abhijeet was getting confused more & more...but he didn't reveal it infront of Tarika as she would be worried for Daya.....he was loitering here & there in restlessness...
Tarika felt something eerie--kya baat hain Abhijeet?
Abhijeet answered with difficulty--nehi..kuchh bhi nehi....ye reports taiyar hote hi tum mujhe phone kar dena. thik hain? he then strutted out of Forensic.
[Nasik] [11P.M]
Daya was in his room,he was checking the CD ..but he was damn tired...he himself couldn't understand why now a days he was becoming so tired....actually he had to handle tremendous mental pressure...all the time pretending to be someone else..wasn't easy...he wished to talk with Tarika ..but....he couldn't do that through Rohit's cell...how many days had passed , he didn't listen to Jhumu's voice....being a little dare he switched on his own mobile...& called Tarika.....but her cell wasn't responding......he again tried .....this time also no one received it...Daya got worried ..woh thik to haina? phone kyu nehi utha rahi hain woh?....now for the last time again he called her & finally Tarika received it --buju...tum? is waqt?
Daya sighed in relief & said--hey, phone kyu nehi utha rahi thi?
Tarika: post mortem kar rahi thi na...isliye
Daya was surprised--tum abhi tak forensic me ho?
Tarika: ha hun,bohot kaam hain na, Dr.Salunkhe bhi leave par chale gaye..
Daya: what???? salunkhe saab chhutti par hain?
Tarika: ha Daya...aur..to...
sudddenly & quite unexpectedly ACP Bhave entered into the forensic...he came so drustically that Tarika even couldn't cut the line ....
He roughly asked Tarika--ye kiska lash hain?
Tarika was totally stupefied...she asked in a rough voice--aap?
ACP Bhave:main yaha ka naya ACP Ajitesh Bhave,
--what!!!!!!..Tarika couldn't believe her ears
ACP Bhave was too much rough--jee ha, aab boliye, ye lash kiska hain aur kaha se aye hain? kaun ise yaha pe laya hain?
Tarika couldn't understand what was happening around her..
ACP Bhave: kya huya? can't you listened to me?
Tarika forced to answer--ye lash yaha pe senior Inspector Abhijeet leke aya tha..
--rubbish..ACP Bhave spluttered...shahar me itne maut ho raha hain, har ek ka post mortem karne se to hamara asli kam hi band ho jayega...
now Tarika said with a firm & rough voice--sir, ye ek normal death nehi hain, yuhi ise yaha pe laya nehi gaya hain...
ACP Bhave yelled out suddenly--shut up!!!!!!wohi karoge jitna kaha jayega....kiska permission lekar Abhijeet is lash ko yaha par laya tha????? bahar inka gharwale khare hain, case kar denge woh log hum pe, tab kaun samhalega ye sab jhanjhat? jaldi is lash ko unke gharwalo ke hawale karne ka bandobast karo, samjhi?
Tarika was totally confused--lekin ssir, main aisa kar nehi sakti hun..ssir
ACP Bhave didn't listen to Tarika anymore & stormed out of Forensic...
She was riveted there being speechless for some moments & now she noticed her cell...& picked it up..--hello
Daya was too much worried--kya huya hain Tarika...is anything wrong?
Tarika: ha Daya...main tumhe baad me phone karti hun. thik hain..
Daya couldn't cut the line but asked her in haste--suno,Jhumu kaise hain?
Tarika: tum Jhumu ka chinta maat karo Daya, maine use Pune me ma ki pas chhorke ayi hu...okay... main tumhe baad me .....she cut the line in haste & called Abhijeet.
Abhijeet: ha Tarika,sab reports aa gaya?
Tarika: Abhijeet aab isi waqt yaha pe aiye, isi waqt,
Abhijeet was surprised--kkya huya hain Tarika?
Tarika was panting in excitement--Abhijeet, aap aiye to sahi...pls..barna main iska pura post mortem kar bhi nehi paungi..
Abhijeet was stunned--kkya??? thik hain main..abhi....
before she cut the line, again ACP Bhave entered with Freddie & two helpers & ordered them--ye lash ko leke jao
Tarika was desperate--ssir..aap aise ise leke ja nehi sakte hain...ssir ye CID ka rules & regulations ke khilaff hain
ACP Bhave yelled out--kya???? tum..tum mujhe CID ke rules sikha rahi ho? how dare you? I'm ACP Ajitesh Bhave
Tarika wasn't scared this time--sir, Forensic ka bhi kuchh rules hain, jo aapko man na parega, is tarike se ek lash ko bina forensic experts ke permission aur reports ke bina aap nehi le ja sakte hain....
ACP Bhave reddedned his eyes at Tarika & ordered again--le jao in lash ko..
Tarika shrieked out--ssir.this is absolutely wrong, you can't do that..but....the body was already taken away by the helpers..& Tarika just slumped down onto the chair.
[To be continued]
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PART X

[Nasik] [11.30P.M]
Daya was tremendous worried for Tarika & what he heard through his cell.....main yaha ka naye ACP?? iska matlab??....par ACP sir kaha hain?? Salunkhe saab bhi abhi hi kyu chhutti pe chala gaya?? he was continuously toing & froing on the floor....ye Tarika abhi tak phone kyu nehi kar rahi hain???? uski cell bhi engaged araha hain, forensic ka number bhi.....chal kya raha hain Mumbai me????he wasn't being able to concentrate on anyhting....suddenly he got startled by the doorbell....Daya's mind was in a tumult....itni raat me kaun aa sakte hain??? He went & opened the door & saw...Rani was there infront of him, she was hesitant & a bit shy..she mumbled slowly--maaf kijiye.., maine itne raat me aapko disturb kiya... lekin mujhe aapke sath kuchh bohot zaruri bateein karni hain..jo...din me possible nehi hota hain...kyuki aap..busy rehte hain....aur.....main..bhi....Daya was just awestrucked to listen to Rani...he hurriedly spluttered--aap andar aiyee, please...
Rani came inside, Daya locked the door & both sat on the sofa face to face....
Though Daya was totally confused but still he managed to ask her politely--ha, bataiye...kya baat karna chahti hain aap?
Rani too was confused & blus in embarrassment...Daya could understand that she was feeling really uncomfortable to talk with him....
He again asked her very modestly--aap keh rahi thi.....ke.....aap kuchh....batana chahti hain.....
---Jee ha Rohit..Finally Rani spoke out.
Daya: ha bataiyee.
Rani: dekhiye ...main janti hun....mujhe.......mujhe......aapka....personal life me.....interfere karna nehi chaiye.....lekin..lekin...mujhe aapko dekh kar...hamesha...yehi laga ke aap....aap....ek....shareef ghar ka ladka hain.....
Daya frowned at her but didn't speak anything...only was waiting to ehar more from her....
Rani: dekhiye....mujhe...laga..aapko kam se kam ek baar...mujhe...ye bata dena chaiye...
Daya was curious--kya baat hain?
Rani was silent for a couple of minutes & then she sputtered--dekhiye.....Neha ko ....aap jaise..samajhte hain..woh aisa nehi hain....
Daya was surprised & asked her--par aap Neha ko kaise janti hain?
Rani: main Slim & Slender gym ka ek client hun...aur achchhi tarike se is Neha ko janti hun.....
Daya thought something & asked--kya janti hain aap?
Rani: Peechhle chhay mahine me teen teen aadmiyo ke sath affair tha uski..aur aise phasaya ke woh teen Gym chhorne ke liye majboor ho gaya ....
Daya was gazing at the floor with deep thought & now he glanced at Rani & said--main vishwas nehi karta hun...sorry, I can't believe it..
Rani was desperate--mujhe maloom hain, kyuki aap....aap...usko pyar karne lage hain....aur....
Daya interrupted her--please...aap mere personal life ke bare me baat na karnege to hi achchha hoga....
Rani: main janti hun Rohit, lekin woh...aapka...luksaan pauchaigi..uske liye aap sirf ek khilona.....
Daya now yelled out--pls...mere bareme...aapko..itna sochna nehi parega...Neha ki bareme ye sab kehna band kijiye..aur...jaiye yaha se...
Rani was stunned, tears filled her eyes
Daya came infront of Rani & clenching his two palms together he said-- mere liye itna sochne ke liye dhanyabad...now pls...haat jorta hun..aapse...raat bohot ho gaya hain...jaiye yaha se.....
Rani went russet in insult..but she didn't get angry but only said with teary eyes before going out--Bhagwan kare aapka vishwas sach ho jaye.....
she went on her way...Daya closed the door & squirmed within himself with guilt.....he could clealry understand that Rani was saying all these for the well being of himself...she did it as a freind ...but.....he was too much ashamed about himself...Rani mujhe maaf kar dena....he whispered staring at the sky..
[Mumbai] [12.30 A.M]
Abhijeet rushed towards Forensic & as he entered there he saw Tarika was sitting on her table keeping her one hand upon head..
--kya baat hain Tarika,woh Vinay ki..Abhijeet was panting in excitement
Tarika sighed in distress & said with a tired voice--main aapke liye hi intezaar kar rahi thi Abhijeet, main jan na chahti hu ye sab kya ho raha hain?
Abhijeet was very surprised -kkya?
Tarika: kuchh der pehle ek aadmi akar Vinay ka body lekar chala gaya, aur kaha ke woh yaha ka naye ACP Ajitesh Bhave, ye sab kya ho raha hain Abhijeet? maine itne din ke andar kabhi nehi dekhi ke zabardosti koyi officer forensic se lash leke chale gaye....
Abhijeet's eyes became wider--kkya?? ACP Bhave?????
Tarika: ha ACP Bhave, mujhe ye samajh me nehi araha hain ke naye ACP.....iska kya matlab?
Abhijeet was thinking something very minutely & then he said--isme bohot chakkar hain Tarikaaa, bohooot gol gol chakkar hain..
Tarika was damn irritaed--matlab?? ACP sir kaha hain?
Abhijeet didn't answer her but..started to call Vivek---hello Vivek, jo bata raha hun dhyan se suno..............

[Nasik] [Next Day][ 10.15 A.M]
(Doctors' Point Chamber at Shakti nagar)
Patients were waiting for Dr.Preetam Raje for quite a long time, but till now Dr.Didn't arrive & everyone was sighed in irritation..among them one Mr.Ranjan Godbole was really angry--arrey kab tak baithna parega aur hume? mera bhaisaab zada beemar hain, kitne dur se aye hain hum....aur....
The caretaker was trying to pacify all of them but ......
Just at that moment Doctor Raje arrived & went inside his cabin..
Mr Godbole shrieked out--mera pehla number hain..main jaunga..
The caretaker let him go inside with his brother.
Now Mr.Godbole went inside & said--namaste doctor saab
Dr.Raje was preapring himself till then as he arrived just then & he said--namaste without noticing them minutely..
Both took their seats...within a few minutes Dr.Raje too took his seat & kept his eyes on them--ha, bataiye..
Mr.Ranjan Godbole said with a worried voice--Dr.saab..ye mera bare bhaisaab hain..Mr.Sudhir Godbole...
Dr.Raje:ha
Mr.Ranjan Godbole: dr.saab, bohot dino se ye beemar hain, maine bohot doctors ko dikhaya aur tests bhi kiya..
Dr.Raje: ha, kya problem hain?
Mr.Ranjan: Dr, inka do kidney hi damaged hain,
Dr.raje: oh no, pher to ....
Now Mr.Ranjan Godbole said desperately--Dr.saab mere bhaisaab ko bacha lijiye, please, jitni rupiyo ka zarurat parega ..main de dunga..lekin please Dr.saab mere bhaisaab ko..
Dr.Raje was trying to quell his excitement--arrey thik hain, aap itna zada ghabra kyu rahe hain?
Mr.Ranjan Godbole was very much perturbed--Dr.Saab, mere bhaisaab mere sab kuchh hain..aap..kuchh bhi kijiye par..ise bacha lijiye..
Dr.Raje nodded his head & said--aap inke peechle reports bagera laye hain?
Mr.Ranjan gave all reports to the doctor.He went through the reporst roughly & said --aapke bhaisaab ka kuchh test karvana parega..aur..
now Mr.Ranjan interrupted Dr.Raje & said--lekin sir,kidney??? kaun dega kidney mere bhaisaab ko? mera group bhi to match nehi ho raha hain, barna to main hi......
Dr.Raje pressed a bell & a nurse came inside--yes sir,
Dr.Raje: ha Sunita, tum patient ko test karvane ke liye le jao,
Nurse obeyed & took Mr.Sudhir Godbole outside for some tests..
Now Dr.Raje said after a big sigh--dekhiye..reports se lag raha hain aapka bhaisaab ka case to.......kaffi complicated hain..
Mr.ranjan Godbole was much worried & with a contorted face he asked--pher kya.......koyi..bhi.....
Dr.Raje interrupted him & smiled--arrey nehi nehi, itna depressed hone ka koyi waja nehi hain....
Mr.Godbole: to pher??
Dr.raje remained silent for some moments & then said--but it would cost much..
--kitne... kitne paise chaiye? main mere bhaisaab ke liye kuchh bhi kar sakta hun..Mr.Godbole said desperately
Dr.Raje was squeezing his one finger with another & again after a pause he said with a low voice--yehi kareeb kareeb bees lakh ....
Mr.Godbole once frowned to think something & said with a surprise--bees lakh!!!!
Dr.Raje smiled & said--aapka bhaisaab ke jaan se bhi zada hain kya?
Mr.Godbole gave him a short titter & said--nehi, woh to nehi hain...
Dr.raje was waiting to hear from Mr.Godbole--pher?
Mr.Godbole reluctantly said--thiiik hain, I will give it...lekin...mere bhaisaab ko achchha ho jana chaiye...
Dr.raje: certainly, aapko kya lagta hain? yuhi hi hum aapse paisa le lenge? aise..inme se donor ko hi to kitna dena parega...
Mr.Ranjan was curious--donor milega aapko?
Dr.Raje: of course, barna kaise hum kidney transplant karenge? aise is liye aapko thora aur taqleef uthana parega...
Mr.Ranjan frwoned --woh kya?
Dr.Raje:woh ye...ke...aapko Mumbai jana parega.
Mr.Ranjan worried--Mumbaiiii? woh to....par waha kyu? yaha pe bhi to?
Dr.Raje now tried to assure him--dekhiye..aap itna pay kar rahe hain, to kya hum nehi chahenge ke..you avail the best facility?
Mr.Ranjan was somewhat influneced--ha ofcourse..
Dr.Raje: Mumbai ke LifeLine Nursing Home aapko sabse achchha facilities dega..aur pher hamara associates doctors bhi rahega waha par....aapka bhaisaab ka are test ka reports hum waha pe bhej denge...aur pher aapke bhaisaab ke group ke kidney woh log hi to supply karenge...
Mr.Ranjan was looking somewhat assured & relieved--achchha, matlab waha par hi donor mil jayega?
Dr.Raje again smiled & answered--of course, aapko yakeen kyu nehi ho raha hain? you just don't worry & teen char din ke andar hi aap Mumbai chale jaiye ga aur jate hi aap waha LifeLine me inform karna...
Mr.Ranjan said with a confused voice--okay, thik hain...lekin paisa.....
D.raje now said without hesitation--kal aap mujhe paanch lakh rupiya deke jana, aur baki panhara lakh aap waha pe Lifeline me pay kar dena, thik hain?
Mr.Godbole obeyed like an obedient guy & said--okay,
Dr.Raje shook hands & said--all the best, don't worry, everythign will be fine..
Mr.Godbole slowly went out of the doctor's cabin.
[Mumbai] [11.A.M] [Bureau]
ACP Bhave was furious in enraged anger & was hurling Abhijeet again & again by his scathing scornful remarks--kisne kaha tha tumhe ye sab karne ke liye?
Though Abhijeet cringed down but inside he was very much disturbed, he just couldn't take all the pressures alone in the absence of both ACP sir & Daya & now ACP Bhave's strange behaviour was made him very much perturbed...no way he could find to reduce his agitation...but he was silent just to show some respect towards a senior officer..
--kiska permission leke tumne ye kiya? ha??? ACP Bhave was yelling out loud
now Abhijeet couldn't remain silent anymore--sir, itna permission to hume diya huya hain ke agar ek abnormal death ho jaye..to uska investigation hum kare..
---shut up, tum logo ke power aur duty ke bareme mujhe maloom hain...
--to sir aapko ye bhi maloom hoga ke forensic se kisi lash ko is tarike se uthake le ana .....ek jurm hain....jiske waja se ....CID officers ka badnam ho sakte hain...
--Abhijeeet!!!!itna himmat tumahara!!!!!!! ek senior officer ke samne kuchh bhi bole ja rahe ho!!!!!!! Pradyuman ne tumlogo ka dimag khakar rakh diya!!!!!!!!! khud ka bhi dimag kharab hain aur....!!!
--sir please, aap ACP Pradyuman ke bareme koyi ulte sidhe baat kam se kaam hamare samne maat kare to hi achchha hain...Abhijeet was calm & firm
ACP Bhave reddened his eyes..he was speechless for some moments as quite unexpectedly Abhijeet retorted back & refused to show any more respect towards him...
--itna ghamand achchha nehi hain!!!! head quarters me jakar mujhe report karna parega.....He just stormed out of the bureau....
Abhijeet was panting heavily in anger & excitement..he was continuously trying to call ACP Pradyuman....but everytime he could find his cell as switched off...
--damn it!!!!! Abhijeet called Vivek--ha vivek,abhi waha pe kya haal hain?
Vivek: sir haal to achchha nehi hain, par sir lagta hain..har jagha pe koyi na koyi bhut ghuske baithe hain..
Abhijeet: achchha???
Vivek: ha sir,Vinay ke office me bhi shayad kisiko kharida gaya hain sir..
Abhijeet's eyes widened --wooo!!! thik hain,jitna informations mila hain tum sab leke bureau me ajao....
Vivek said with an obedient voice--jee sir.

[Nasik] [3.30P.M]
Daya was busy with his client sessions & suddenly he was informed that someone had come to meet him..Daya could guess ..but still he went to guest room to find out who had come ..& as he entered Neha just ran into him & hugged him tightly..before he could react Neha started blubbering very badly...Daya was embarrassed, confused & couldn't understand what to do..he was trying hard to disengage himself from Neha but Neha was ..just inconsolable...after a few minutes Daya asked her--kya baat hain, kyu aise ro rahi ho? his voice wasn't at all mild & gentle...at least he didn't ask the way one lover should ask his lover....Neha was hurt--main tumhare liye pagal ho rahi hu........she was still sniffling--aur..tum...ho ke....mere parva hi nehi hain.....
Daya twigged quickly that ...he should have been a little more gentle..now he tried to rectify the error--kya baat hain jaan...achanak kya ho gaya hain, kyu aise pareshan ho?
Neha was wiping off her tears & then said --main yaha pe tumhe bata nehi sakti hu Rohit, please, coffe shop me chalo....
Daya was in a difficult situation as all his clients were waiting for him in the practice session room..he told--thik hain tum mere liye adhe ghante wait karo...main......session pura karke.....
Neha glanced at him with huff & said--achchha ...to tumhe tumhare clients ke pare hain..aur main....mera pyar...kuchh bhi...she was again on the verge of crying ...& now Daya understood that it would be difficult to avert Neha at this moment..he straight went to the reception & said--Mithu ji, pls turatnt mujhe bahar jana hain, it's an emergency, aap Vishal ji ko thora request karna taki woh mera session pura kar de....
Receptionist reluctantly agreed...& Daya just came out of the Stay Fit Gym helding one hand of Neha & went to the coffee shop just opposite of the gym.
After taking seats & offering coffee now Daya kept his hand over Neha's & asked her very gently--ab to bolo kya huya hain tumhe...pleeeeease...
Neha took Daya's hand within her & kissed it ...lovingly & said---I love you Rohit, I can't live without you.
Daya was smiling inside & he whispered--I know jaan, ye kehne ka kya zarurat hain?
Neha now shaked herself with excitement & said--zarurat hain Rohit....main tumhe shaadi karna chahti hun....
Daya was surprised & he was just trying to twig the situation clearly.....
To see him silent Neha spluttered in a trembling voice--kya huya...shaadi ka naam sunte hi tum itna chup kyu ho gaye..
Daya tittered nervously & answered--nehi Neha...infact main bhi to ye chahta hun...ke....hum dono ek ho jaye...par...
Neha asked in a affectionate voice--par kya?
Daya: itni jaldi kya hain Neha?
Neha: jaldi hain Rohit...tum mere Papa ko nehi jante ho....woh...mere...shaadi......kisi...NRI se taiyar kar diya hain...She was again started to sniffle miserably
Daya frwoned & asked--thik hain tum le chalo mujhe unke pas..main
--nehii, nehiii Rohit..Neha just shrieked out
Daya: kyu? main khud ja kar mangunga tumahri haat....
Neha was shaking her head violently & told--woh Rohit, tum kitne nadan ho....woh kabhi bhi hamare rishte ko manzur nehi karenge aur...woh tumhe apman karke ghar se nikal denge jo.........she started to sob....--jo mujhe achchha nehi lagega jaanu....
Daya: ha lekin isme jaldi kya hain, hum intezaar to....
Neha: nehi jaanu...waqt nehi hain, aaj hi sham pe woh NRI yaha pauch raha hain....aur..kal......she was sobbing in pain
Daya:kal kya?
Neha: kal uske sath Papa meri sagai kar denge.....
Daya sighed in depair--oh no....no....Neha...aise nehi ho sakte hain....
Neha again started to whimper--Roheeeeet, main tumhare bagair jee nehi paungi Rohit...meri yakeen karo jaanuuuuuuu, I will die......
Daya again kept his hand upon Neha's & tried to pacify her--relax Neha..relax....kuchh na kuchh to ho hi jayega....
Neha was wiping her eyes out & said--aab to eek hi rasta hain jaan....
Daya: kya? kaunsa rasta hain Neha?
Neha: chalo, hum Mumbai bhag chalte hain....
Daya: kkya??? hum bhag jayenge?par....
Neha: aur koyi rasta nehi hain Roheet....yehi ek rasta hain..jisse ....hum...hamesha ke liye ek ho sakte hain...
Daya: magar kab tak hum Mumbai me ghumte rahenge?
Neha:aab jake hume marriage register ko ek mahine ka notice dena parega...pher ek mahine ke baad....she tried to be flushed--humara shaadi ho jayega....aur....pher.....
Daya asked with eyes full of mischief--pher kya?
Neha went abashed --jao...mujhe sharm ate hain....
Daya smiled inside--sharm!!! aur tumhe!!!! & he smiled loudly outside too-- achchha??? lekin...kya tumhare parents...
Neha gazed deep at Daya & said--wo Roheet, tumhe mere gharwalo ka kitna chinta hain...you are such a nice guy....I'm so lucky to have u in my life....she was giving an overwhelming smile...Daya too sputtered--ha Neha...main bhi..bohot lucky hu.....ke.....tum....mujhe....itna....asani...se.mil gayi...
Neha flushed in crimson & then said--achchha mere sapno ke saudagar ji, aab tareef thora kam ...aur...planning zada karna parega....
Daya:hmmm....par kaise...kaha pe...hum
Neha: come on Roheet, tum to Mumbai se hi ho na....tumhe sare bandobast karna parega.....
Daya :okay
Neha: suno, kal tum subhe aat baaje..Slim & Slender ke saamne chale ayoge...,9.15 pe ek Mumbai Local hain, samjhe? usi train se hi hum Mumbai chale jayenge...
Daya was stunned & tried to say something but before that Neha again said--kaha rehna hain ye tum thik karoge samjhe...meri veer purush..she winked her eyes vulgarly after finishing her words.....
Daya pretended to be shy & tried to say something...but before that Neha stood up & said--main ja rahi hu Rajaji, kal tumhare sath jo...ek naye zindegi me pari dena hoga...haina....bohooot kam baki hain abhi,
Daya did know Neha wouldn't stop now still he called her--par Neha ...suno...to...
Neha: kal subha aat bajee, slim & slender ke samne...thik hain,She threw a flying kiss to Daya & went out of the coffee shop.
Daya sighed & called--ha, chiriya machhli ko leke kal dopahar me hi pauch raha hain.....
[To be continued]
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PART XI
Mumbai [ Reporter Vinay Joshi's residence] [ 7P.M]
Abhijeet along with Vivek & Devyana had come to meet the relatives & freinds of Vinay Joshi who was murdered just yesterday...the atmosphere was hard to bear, the grief stricken faces of near & dear ones of Mr.Joshi was indeed very sad & pathetic to bear, specially when everyone had to become helpless...still Abhijeet was determined to grind some information from them..he was embarrassed & sad to ask them any question ..but he did it...though very gently---Kab se ye newspaper ke office me kaam karta tha Vinay?
Vinay's wife & mother both were inconsolable..they were not in a state to answer Abhijeet...& now Abhijeet asked Devyana by his eyes to ask them....Devyana asked again--dekhiye..hum chahte hain ke VinayJi ka qatilo jaldi pakar jaye, aur.....isliye...hume...ye puchhna bohot zaruri hain.....
Now Vinay's wife was more shocked---quatil!!! matlab Vinay ko mara gaya hain, uska khun huya hain??????
Abhijeet cringed down & said slowly--jee ha...achchha aap...hume keh sakte hain...ke...kabhi uska organ transplant..ya aisa kuchh huya tha?
Vinay's wife was crying vehemently but within it she shaked her head violently to indiacte that it didn't happen ever.....
Abhijeet thought something deeply & then again he asked--aap logo ke paas, Vinay ji ka abdomen ka koyi x-ray,USG ya scan ka koyi reports ya plates kuchh bhi hain?
Everyone was crying so much that Abhijeet was feeling really embarrassed even asking any further question..he again gently said--dekhiye, mujhe maloom hain, is waqt aap log bohot ....bohot pareshani se guzar rahe hain...phir bhi hume ye pata karna bohot zaruri hain..ke Vinay Joshi jaise ek young or energetic reporter ke jaan kisne liya aur kyu liya....pls...aap.....log hamare sath thora co operate karne ki koshish kijiye....
Now Vinay's brother Vipul came & said--ha,ekbaar bhaiya ka pet ka scan karvana para tha...thik hain..main dekhta hun..he went inside...
Abhijeet again asked---achchha , aisa kya huya tha use jo Mecure hospital me admit karne ka zarurat para??
Vinay's wife just shrieked out--kuchh bhi nehi huya tha useeee, kuchh bhi nehi, subha bhi has has ke office me gaya...aur raat me...she again burst into tears...
Abhijeet was surprised--to pher admit hi kyu kiya gaya use?
Vinay's wife tried to splutter--humne thori bharti kiya use? uska collegues ne bharti kiya tha...
Abhijeet frowned & asked--matlab..use kya huya tha aap logo ko maloom nehi hain....
now Vinay's brother Vipul came in with the report of scan & answered--ha hume bataya gaya tha ke bhaiya ka chest me pain ho raha tha.....
Abhijeet took the report from the hand of Vipul & came in a corner of the room with Vivek & Devyana..& vivek said--lekin sir..Varun jo Vinay ka collegue hain , jo hume bureau me phone karke iske bareme kaha woh to keh raha tha ke Vinay ko ek chhota sa chot pauchne ki waja se...use hospital me bharti kiya gaya!!!!!
Abhijeet widened his eyes & said--woooo...to chakkar kuchh alag hi hain....iska matlab vivek, is newspaper ke office me koyi to aisa hain...jo..Vinay ko jaan bujh ke is maut ke hawale kar diya....
Vivek whispered--ha sir, main keh raha tha na...ke...har jagha pe koyi na koyi bhut ghuske baithe hain...
Devyana: magar sir, kisine kuchh kaha nehi?? aur khud Vinay kyu razi ho gaya? ek chhoti si chot ke liye woh kyu hospital me chala gaya sir?
Abhijeet thought something very deeply & then he ordered--Vivek, Devyana tum log ye Satyabol newspaper ke office me jao, aur ek ek information nikalo, har ek ko puchhtachh karo, ek bhi chhutna nehi chaiye,kal Vinay office me kab gaya tha, kaise chot paucha, kiske sath kam kar raha tha, aur kaun use ...hospital me leke gaya....everything...sab nikalo un logo ke muh se..thik hain..
Both obediently nodded & headed towards Satyabol Newspaper office....
[Next Day] [Mumbai] [1.00 P.M]
Daya & Neha reached Mumbai & straight went to Hotel Hindusthan Raj at sakinaka.
Daya: Excuse me we want to book a room, can there be any empty room please?
Receptionist Boy was a little surprised & asked--are you a married couple?
Daya looked at Neha & Neha was flushing..she averted her glance....
Daya said --yes..
Receptionist: yeah..what's your name sir?
Daya: Mr.& Mrs.Rohit Shetty..
Receptionist: okay sir, it's the key of your room,
Both went to the room & Neha slumped down on the sofa..-ufff,
Daya asked --tumhe darr nehi lag raha hain...apne ghar chhorke..itne dur...yaha pe....mere sath....
Neha smiled mischivously & said--tum jo sath ho Rohit, mujhe koyi darr nehi hain....
Daya: suno, raat me main pass me mere chachaji ke ghar me chala jaunga, tum yaha pe rehna..thik hain....
Neha: tum kitne shareef ho Roheet...she was pretended to be swooned over him...
Daya smiled & said--pher kitna kaam hain, marriage register ke pass jana parega...aur pher...tumhare liye..ek rehne ka...
Neha rolled her eyes & said--hold on hold on Mr., tum mujhe sirf itna batao ke marriage register ka office kaha par hain , main jaungi thik hain....
Daya: par Neha......
Neha: shhhh, koyi par nehi, shaadi ke liye besabr ho rahe ho haina? she reprimanded him through her eyes...
Daya again smiled bashfully & said--besabr to tum ho..isliye..to bhagake Mumbai leke aya...
Neha: hmmmm, jaise tumhara koyi interest hi nehi tha? achchha chalo bohot bhukh laga hain...kisi restaurant me chalte hain...
Daya said like a child--ha mujhe bhi, chalo, fresh ho jao, pher bahar chalte hain , thik hain...
Neha threw a flying kiss towards Daya & went to the wash room.
[Goregaon] [LifeLine Nursing Home] [ 2P.M]
Mr.Ranjan Godbole reached there with his ailing brother Mr.Sudhir Godbole....both were looking around the Nursing Home & then Ranjanji told his brother-bhaisaab , lag raha hain yehi woh nursing home hain,aiye, chaliye...
A nurse was coming from the opposite side & Ranjanji asked her--excuse me maam, hum Nasik se aye hain....woh Dr.Raje ne bheja....
Nurse interrupted him & said--aap us taraf jaiye, reception room me...
Ranjanji: us taraf?
Nurse: ha...
Ranjan ji went to the reception room with his brother..
Receptionist: yes sir, how can I help you?
Ranjanji: dekhiye, hum Nasik se hain, Dr.Raje ne bheja hain hume...
Receptionist: yeah, please take your seats..
Ranjanji now gave the reports to the receptionist & said--mera bhaisaab Mr.Sudhir Godbole, actually use..kidney transplant...
Receptionist: oh yeah yeah..... hume Dr.Raje se baat ho gaya hain humara aapke bhaisaab ke case ke bareme....all you have to do is ......she looked at Mr.Sudhir Godbole & continued---you admit him now...
Ranjanji: abhi??? abhi bharti karvana parega?
Receptionist: yes sir, abhi, just one minute...she took a diary & then said--main keh rahi hu, aap ek baar mila lijiye...name Mr.Sudhir Godbole, age: 63, Blood Group: O Positive..is all these informations are right?
Ranjanji tittered nervously & said--ha ha ..sab thik hain..
Receptionist: to abhi aap is form ko bhar lijiye, aur bharti karva dijiye....advance fifty thousands aapko dena parega is waqt...
Ranjanji looked at Sudhirji & then started to fill up the form..& said---pachas hazar????
Receptionist smiled & said--ye to kam hain sir...Dr.Raje aap logo ko refer kiya hain isliye..Dr.Pandey ne kam le rahe hain, by the way , aapko to baki panhara lakh bhi pay karna hain, aap yaha pe....
Ranjan ji tossed his eyes up & said--ha lekin, operation kab hoga?
Receptionist nodded her head to make him understand & said--operation ho jayega...donor milte hi..
Ranjanji insisted--donor kab milega? dekhiye main...
Receptionist: sir, donor bohot jald mil jayega...why are u getting worried?
Ranjanji: wah, mujhse sare ke sare paise aap ugal rahe hain..aur..jab kaam ki baat karta hun tab keh rahi hain..mil jayega ho jayega...ye kya hain...
receptionist was confused a bit & tried to quiten him---dekhiye aise nehi hain....aap form aur paise deposit kar dijiye....donor...bohot hi jald...
---nehi, jab tak donor nehi milega...main pay nehi kar sakta hun...aur main donor ko dekh ke hi pay karunga...
Now a nurse entered there & asked the receptionist about the incident & after listening that she too was trying to convince Ranjanji--thik hain aap admit to karvaiye aapke bhaisaab ko..pher donor milne se time hi nehi lagega...aaj hi mil jayega donor....
Ranjanji just snarled & said--itna asan hain!!! pure Nasik me kahi bhi nehi mila donor...aur aap log keh rehe hain...ki aaj hi mil jayega..thik hain abhi phone kijiye donor ko....
the nurse & the receptionist both were embarrassed & confused & then receptionist said--okay okay hum phone kar rahey hain.....please aap shant ho jaiye...aur nurse ....aap...patient ko bees number ke bed me leke jaiye.....aur aap pls bahar jakar baithiye..pls...
Ranjanji was furious--ha, bahar baitha rahunga main....tab tak...jab tak main donor ko nehi dekhunga....aur....ek paise nehi dunga main....he went to the thin benches at the entrance corridor & sat there.....& within some time he started to toing & froing onto the corridor....
[to be continued]
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PART XII
[Titanic Restaurant] [2.30P.M]
Daya & Neha were sitting face to face within the romantic atmosphere of the restaurant...Neha was watching Daya with her bewitching eyes & finally she uttered--Roheeet....aisa lag raha hain ke...jaise...koyi sapna dekh rahi hu...
Daya smiled lightly & said--kyu?? abhi tak to kuchh...huya nehi...jo...
Neha gazed deep seductively in the eyes of Daya & whispered---ha..magar hone to wale haina?
Daya this time smiled puckishly & after a sly glance at Neha he too uttered--ha.....woh to hain hi...bohooot kuchh honewale hain....anyway batao kya khayogi?
Neha rolled her eyes again & whispered--stuffed chicken,wet & soft cheese toast,steamyyyy & hotyyy tomato soup &....she looked slyly at Daya...
Daya too was giving a mysterious smile & he sputtered--and???
Neha: and sweet & sour orange juice......
Daya ordered for the food & drink & then stared at Neha....Neha was trying to be flushing....sometimes she was twisting her nails ....as well her eyes....
Suddenly Neha's cell rang & she received it with a sonorous & artificial voice--hello,yeah, speaking....yeah...yeah...yeah....yeah.....she was looking at Daya with deep tempting eyes while talking....
Neha: yeah...yeah.........yeah........okay...oooookay, byeeee.....
After cutting the line Neha sighed & said--Gawwwwwwwwwd....ye log mujhe....chain se marne bhi nehi denge..Roheeeeet....
Daya asked with a feighned curiosity--kaun log Neha?
Neha again gave a deceptive smile & said--ye NGO ke log....jab bhi dekhu sirf kaam aur kaam....swear Rohit, chain se mar bhi nehi paungi.....
Daya: jaan, aise marne ka baat kyu kar rahi ho????? mare tumhari dushman....tum aise...kaise mar sakti ho.....
Neha tried to be wrinkled with shame.....
Now finally Food & drink had come..& they started to sip the steamyyy & hotyyy tomato soup with the spoon.....Daya said--tumne woh film dekhi thi Neha?
Neha: kaunsa film jaanu?
Daya: jab kisi ke taraf dil jhukne lageeeeeee....he started to croon it with a low voice..baat zuba tak ake bhi rukne lageeeeeeee......
Neha whispered--akhooo akhoo me ......ikrar hone lageeeee....bol do agar tumhe.....she lowered her eyes & said--jao, mujhe sharm ate hain...
Daya smiled & said--kya huya jaan, tum kuchh kha kyu nehi rahe ho?
Neha: kha rahi hu na...tum khao,
Daya twigged that Neha was becoming a bit restless & impatient......still she was trying to simper artificially....he finally tried to give comfort to her & said very suddenly--jaan, mujhe ek phone karna tha....tum khao, main abhi ata hun....
--jaldi ayoge na? Neha tried to show her worry..
---of course jaan, main bas yu gaya aur aaya, thik hain...he went out of the front door & stood behind the left door from where he could watch Neha from the side.....& Neha exactly did what she was expected to do.....
Daya was peeping through the side of the door & called---ha sir,
ACP Pradyuman: ha...tumhara call ka hi intezaar kar raha tha....
Daya:sir...woh mera drink me kuchh mila rahi hain sir....
ACP was totally confused....he was biting his lips which made his face contorted....
Daya: sir, mera khana me bhi woh aab kuchh mila rahi hain....
ACP was silent...not a single word he could tell him...
Daya was too confused specially not listening any word from ACP sir.....
Daya now asked ACP--ssir khalu sir?
ACP uttered in a total confused & flummoxed mind--aab main kya bolu Daya???? ? tumhe kya sahi lagta hain???
Daya: sir..mere khayal se main kha leta hun sir.....barna woh log hamare hath ki itna kareeb akar bhi nikal jayega.......
ACP was sputtered like helpless---par Daya......ek case ki wajase.....main..tumhe ...tumhe kaise....kho du?????
Daya said with calm & firm voice--sir, mujhe nehi lagta hain..woh log aisa kuchh karega taki main abhi mar jayu.....pehle woh log aapna kaam pura karne ka koshish karega aur tab tak main zinda rahunga ssir...jab tak un logo ko aapna kaam pura nehi hoga....
ACP was silent...something was going wrong..he could understand it clearly but at the same time...to catch this gang ....it's imperative to....DCP sahay would be furious if the plan went unsuccessful..but at the same time......Daya????? he never thought that .....he would go through ....this kind of situation where....Daya's life would be ......
--hello, hello..hello sir..aap sun pa rahe hain mujhe? Daya's voice was worried but a bit low than usual...
ACP told in a anxious & sad voice--ha Daya.......he was reluctant ..still said--tumhe jo bhi sahi lage...wohi karo....aur.....he couldn't tell any more
Daya: okay sir...main kha leta hun......Daya cut the line....& again stepped into the restaurant through the front door & sat on his table with a smiling face--hi...
Neha was smiling a lot & now she was looking quite relieved ---itna der laga diya Roheet? kab se intezaar kar rahi hun...
Daya: kyu jaan? maine to bola tha tumhe khane ke liye..par tum...
Neha: ha tum bol diya aur ho gaya??? main akeli kaise khau??
Daya: okay, aab to agaya hu...aab khao..
Neha: hmmmm jaise tum kha rahe ho? pehle tum khayoge...uske baad main...samjhe Mr.? she again gave an alluring smile....
Daya took the spoon....looked at Neha with a smile.....Neha was looking at him intensely....& finally started to eat very normally....
Neha was smiling ..but this time wryly......she too was eating.....& now she said--mmm.jaan.....main tumhe tumhara drink...pila dungi......
Daya trying to resist her...but...she was too much obstinate...mmm nehi jaan...pila du main tumhe.....she took up the glass & trying to make Daya sipped the juice....Daya had ......started to......feel....extremely dizzy....he couldn't resist to sip the juice......& Neha was forcing so much that he got hiccups but.....he couldn't keep his balance....feeling extremely groggy...losing his grips...control...&......sweating profusely......
Neha now kept the glass away & asked gently--kya baat hain Roheet? are you okay?
Daaya was breathing shallowly....& said with difficulty---pata nehi.....Neha....ajeeb .....ajeeb lag .....raha hain......
He quickly called--waiter...waiter.....bill...
Waiter was too surprised & said--kya huya saab.
--bill.Daya shrieked out gathering the total energy
Waiter took the bill & said --it's one thousand three hundred fifty only sir....
Daya kept three five hundred rupess notes...& was plodding towards the Front door...but he was waddling from side to side...& sometimes he just falling here & there....
Neha was behind Daya & occassionally she was asking --kya huya Roheet??? oh my Gawwwwwwwwd....kya huya.....oh....no....
Daya could come outside the restaurant with difficulty ....but couldn't just plod anymore.......everything...was going......darker .....&.......once.....a splshing picture of Tarika oozed out infront of him.....he tried to call her..tttiii..........but he couldn't.....& fell onto the road...being senseless...

[Bureau] [3.P.M]
Abhijeet was tremendously worried ...not just worried but he was feeling something eerie.....a frisson of excitement he was feeling continuously...he couldn't reduce it in any way....He was checking...in the net about Satyabol Newspaper office & related matters...just then Freddie came & told --sir,Dr.Salunkhe aye hain..
Abhijeet got a shock & quickly he asked Freddie--kaha hain woh? but before Abhijeet went to him..he entered into there with a irritated voice--ye sab kya ho raha hain Abhijeet?
Abhijeet too was confused--ha sir, wohi to baat main aapko puchhne wala hun ke ho kya raha hain....is waqt jab kaam ka pressure itna zada hain...to aap chhutti par kyu chale gaye the?
Salunhke answered with a bitter voice--Abhijeet main masti aur aiyashi ke liye chhutti nehi liya tha...mujhe Delhi pe ek conference attend karna tha jo ke bohot important conference tha..isliye gaya tha....magar ACP saab lambe chhutti pe chale gaye..matlab?
Abhijeet bit his lips & said--matlab......yehi matlab to mujhe bhi nehi maloom par raha hain doctor saab....I think woh koyi chhutti par nehi gaya hain....
Freddie: par sir, pher ACP sir hain kaha? aur to aur..woh hume jhut kyu bola>
Abhijeet just went infront of Freddie & said with a stern face--freddie, ye waqt betuka sawal puchhne ka nehi hain samjhe?? main tumhare age hath jorta hun..galat waqt pe galat logo ke samne tum aise bachcho jaise sawal maat puchhna...agar tumhe kuchh samajh me nehi ayega..to mujhe baad me puchh lena..lekin...
Freddie interrupted Abhijeet & said--sir, pata kaise chalega kaun sahi hain aur kaun galat?
Just at that moment Vivek & Devyana arrived there ...Vivek said--sir, sabko puchhtachh kiya hain...par sir..do reporter waha pe nehi tha...
Abhijeet: to pher kaha pe hain?
Vivek: sir ek to kandivali me weight lifting show ko cover karne gaya hain...aur dusre ki tabiyet thik nehi, isliye nehi aya...
Abhijeet: pher kya pata chala waha se?
Vivek: sir, usdin Marine drive ke pas ek bare art exhibition ko cover karne ke liye..charo ko bheja gaya tha...sir ek to tha Vinay, dusra woh Varun jo hume infrom kiya tha, teesra sir ye Pankaj jo aaj weight lifting show cover karne ke liye gaya hain....aur chautha hain Dipak jo aaj office me nehi aye..
Abhijeet goggled his eyes...Devyana said--sir iska matlab ye Pankaj aur Dipak ye dono ne hi kuchh kiya hain...
Vivek: magar sir, Varun bhi to waha par tha..woh in dono ko kyu nehi roka?
Devyana: ho sakta hain sir Varun ko Pankaj aur Dipak ke plan ke bareme maloom nehi tha...
Vivek: sir , is Pankaj ko uthake le aau?
Abhijeet: nehi, tum ek kaam karo, Varun ko bureau me leke aao, dekhta hu use kaha tak maloom hain...
Dr.Salunkhe was getting restless & he said finally--Abhijeet, main tumhe ye puchhna chahta hu ke ACP saab kaha hain? aur naye ACP Bhave ko itna permission kisne diya hain ke woh Forensic se bina report ke bina post mortem ke lash ko lekar chale jate hain?
Abhijeet tried to mollify Salunkhe's excitement--ssir, main bhi yehi soch raha tha sir, ke
Salunkhe now burst in anger--abhi tak soch rahe ho Abhijeet??? sirf sochne se kuchh bhi nehi honewala hain?
---to kya karu main??? Abhijeet just shrieked out in a mixture of dejection & stress.---ACP saab ka phone nehi lag raha hain, Daya bhi yaha pe nehi hain, itne sare cases, itne sare pressures..main bhi to ek insaan hun... he sighed after releasing his flaming anger ..
Salunkhe could understand & said--ye ACP saab jaldi hi kuchh karne wale hain..tum dekhna...before salunkhe could finish the phone on the table rang out loudly..Abhijeet received it--hello, senior Inspector Abhijeet here..
--Ha Abhijeet suno.....
Abhijeet was surprised totally to hear the Voice of ACP Pradyuman--ha sir, aap kaha pe hain?
ACP: Abhijeet, tum log taiyar rehna...aur sare aur cases ka chinta chhor dena...main zarurat parte hi tum logo ko bulaunga....kahi bhi bula sakta hun main, samjhe?
Abhijeet was stammering in excitement--mm mmgar sir..kaha hain aap, aur kaha pe bulayenge.....
ACP : Abhijeet wo to main tumhe baad me bataunga...par taiyar rehna..each & everyone should get ready with arms..thik hain.. he cut down the line in haste.
[To be continued]
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PART XIII

[Lifeline Nursing Home] [4P.M]

Neha reached there with Daya in a taxi & after reaching there she was just rushing inside towards the reception room & came back within one minute with two ward boys & then tried to drag Daya inside...it wasn't easy to drag a person like Daya...but they had to try hard for this, while they were dragging Daya inside then Ranjanji was asking worridly again & again---kya ye donor hain?? ha?? iska kideny...mere bhaisaab ko diya jayega??? ye donor hain? A nurse told him to be quiet & advised him to go to the reception...Ranjanji went to the reception & asked the receptionist---abhi abhi jo larka larkharate huye aya.....woh.....woh....donor hain?
Receptionist smiled & said--donor mil gaya hain Mr.Godbole, aab aapko pay karna parega....barna hum treatment shuru nehi kar payenge....
--paar abhi is waqt? Ranjanji was a bit hesitating
now receptionist said curtly--ha isi waqt, paisa dene ka naam pe aap chillane kyu lag rahey hain?
Ranjanji was a bit confused & said with reluctance--thik hain ...main ek ghante ke andar bandobast kar raha hun....woh...
---abhi tak bandobast nehi kiya aapne? ye kya hain? hum kaam kiye ja rahe hain...aur...aap....
now Ranjanji answered with rough voice---ha thik hain thik hain, main de raha hun...magar donor should be taken a good care of.....he gave cash worth rupees ten lakh & said--baki paanch lakh mera bhaisaab ke operation ke baad milega aap logo ko.....
The receptionist was taken aback & said---magar aapko pura panhara lakh dena tha...
--ha milega keh diya na...par operation ke baad. Ranjanji again was curt to answer & after paying the cash he went out of reception & coming into the corridor Ranjanji aka ACP Pradyuman called Abhijeet--ha Abhijeet, isi waqt pura force lekar Goregaon ke LifeLine Nursing Home me chale aao, right at this moment...he cut the line & goggled his eyes to think about the criminals...


[Bureau] [4.30 P.M]
Abhijeet along with the team was ready to head for Lifeline Nursing Home but before that Abhijeet was just revising the plans & giving everyone the last minute advice---hoshiyaar rehna, hume maloom nehi ke waha pe kitne log hain, par kitne bhi log ho, hume kamiyaab hona hi parega , all right?
--yes sir...very confident voices were reverberating again & again...Abhijeet was about to leave with others....but......suddenly ACP Ajitesh Bhave appeared there with gun in his hand, there are other two people with him..both were ready to start the fight with arms in their hands....
The team was just stupefied, nonplused...& gobsmacked with the happenigs of incidents around them....ACP Ajitesh Bhave was romping towards Abhijeet with a slow walk, his eyes were reddened, finally he reached just infront of Abhijeet & gazed at him with a basilisk stare....Abhijeet too was firm & calm...his face didn't reflect what was happening within him......now before Abhijeet could say anything ACP Bhave ordered---koyi bhi kahi nehi jayega.....sab....yaha par rahega......is it clear to all of you???
Abhijeet said with a low yet calm voice--woh...to sir.....is ghinone...khel me...aap bhi shamil hain...aur....
--shut up!!!!!!!! everyone got startled by the ear piercing shriek of ACP Bhave......---bohot zada samajhdar ho gaye ho, haina Abhijeet???? senior officer ke order ko nazarandaz karke...kuchh bhi kar rahey ho...jo apne man me arahey hain...wohi kar rahey ho.....haina??????
The whole team was speechless in shock, specially Dr.salunkhe, he even didn't know ACP Bhave....but ....was totally confused why that man was behaving like that.....
ACP Bhave again screamed---sab apna apna gun waha table par rakh do....barna aaj..shayad pehli baar is CID office me goli chalega...rakhoooo....
Everyone was stunned & writhing with anger, Vivek couldn't bear it anymore , he retorted back--nehi sir, hamare pas ACP sir ka order hain, hum aisa nehi karenge, chahe aap jo bhi kahe......he couldn't finish..& ACP Bhave fired a bullet which went pass just by the side of Dr.Salunkhe's ear.....Dr.Salunkhe was bowling with fear--ahhhh....stop this, what are you doing?
.....now Abhijeet kept his gun over the table & ordered everyone to keep their guns on the table......everyone was reluctant to do it.......specially Vivek was too much obstinate....& as well Dr.Salunkhe---ye kya bol rahe ho Abhijeet? sharm ana chaiye tum logo ko....koyi bhi ake aise daraiga....to tum log aise chuhe ban jayoge kya?????? gun uthao, ura do in logo ko....aur apne mission me chalo......
ACP Bhave was smirking like a shrude criminal & said with swagger---hmm, Dr.Salunkhe, koyi bhi nehi....ACP Ajitesh Bhave......ACP Ajitesh Bhave ne order diya hain....aur apko ye maloom hona chaiye......ke.....aab main hi yaha ka working ACP hun.....kyuki Pradyuman ko head office se lambe chhutti pe bheja gaya hain......uska order ka aab koyi keemat nehi hain, samjhe aap log????
now Abhijeet told---sir, aap jo kuchh bhi kar rahey hain woh thik nehi kar rahey hain....
ACP Bhave again reddened his eyes & said---kya sahi aur kya galat ye mujhe tumse sikhna nehi parega Abhijeet.....tum sabko main suspend karva dunga..samjhe?????? main kya hun ye aab tak tum log aur tumlogo ka ACP Pradyuman ko maloom nehi hain......aur mujhe tum logo ko itni jaldi ye dikhana parega ye to mujhe maloom nehi tha....
Abhijeet again said--ACP saab ke sath aapka jo bhi dushmani hain woh aap baad me unse nipat lena...magar aab hume jane dijiye..it's an emergency.....
ACP Bhave again sneered & shrugged--kyu? kaunsa emergency hain aapko? zara mujhe bhi to bataiye....
Abhijeet: main aap ko bata nehi sakta hun....jab mujhe ye maloom hain......ke aap ek......
ACP Bhave: ek kya??????
Abhijeet was silent....
ACP Bhave again shouted out---bolo ek kya?????? jaise guru waise unke chela.....tum logo ko kya lagte hain....mujhe kuchh bhi pata nehi hain????? sab pata tha...mujhe......lekin thora der ho gaya....barna....barna main pehli hi......himmat to dekho uska......apna officer ko saap ke ghar me ghusa diya....aab dekhta hu kaise bachate ho use tum log.....
Abhijeet couldn't expect so much...he was getting worried for .......he started to breath heavily with sheer helplessness & after a pause he asked---to is racket ke sath aap bhi jure huye hain....chhi..sir, sharm ana chaiye aapko...ek CID officer banke....aap.......aap aise kaise kar sakte hain?????? aapko ekbaar bhi laga nehi ke.....Abhijeet couldn't find any word to reproach ACP Bhave......
ACP Bhave burst into a loud & never ending chortle which was being unbearable for them....Everyone was watching their wrist watches...but.....ACP bhave finished his chortle & said--- ACP Pradyuman ko khatam karne ke liye........main kuchh bhi kar sakta hun.....kuchh bhi.....
Vivek: ssir...ye....aap....kya keh rahey hain????? ssir aap ACP sir ko.......kyu ssir????
ACP Bhave again smirked & said---Inspector Daya ke maut me to zada der nehi hain.....aur unke maaut ye mission ko na kamiyaab bana dega....aur..ACP Pradyuman......................will be sacked........he again started to laugh loud....
Everyone was got startled & Salunkhe just shrieked out---kya????? Daaya???? kaha hain woh? kis hal me hain?
ACP Bhave was laughing very loud & saying again & again---ACP Pradyuman is finished......he is finished................his era is finished...........a bullet straight went to ACP Bhave's hand & his gun fell down from his hand......& without making him understand what was happening....another bullet was went straight into his right leg.....he got injured & fell down onto the floor with a sharp pain of agony......& his two army man too was injured by the flocks of bullets fired by Abhijeet, Vivek, Freddie & Devyana......
ACP Pradyuman came with a clapping & finally said---wah!!!!!, fantastic.....fantastic Mr.Ajitesh Bhave.....
Bhave was totally confused & he was writhing with pain too.....still he sputtered--tum!!!! tum
ACP Pradyuman: ha main, tumhe kya laga tha, Ajitesh bhave? mujhe kuchh bhi nehi maloom tha? corruption karne ke badualat tum jo teen saal CID se bahar the...ye mujhe maloom tha.......CID head quarter tumhe dobara mauka diya tha..apne aapko sudharke...sharafat se kaam karneka...magar...adat.....he goggled his eyes & looked at the team----adat kaha jayega..Mr.Ajitesh Bhave?????? zada paise ke lalaj me akar..tum...is ghinone racket ke sath apne aapko involve kiya....
Ajitesh Bhave was panting in excitement...
ACP continued with a jeering voice---mujhe to tab se hi shak tha...jab maine dekha ke baharwalo ko....mere officers ke bareme sab kuchh maloom hain,aur jisdin head qaurter ke special meeting pe maine tumko dekha...tab hi mujhe samajh me agaya tha...ke chakkar kya haaain......he bit his lips....in excitement.....
everyone was listening ACP gaping at him...
ACP continued---uusdin se tumhe is case ke bareme mehroom rakha gaya tha...Inspector Daya ke chhutti pe jana, mera chhutti pe jana aur tumhe yaha ka responsibilities saup dena...ye sab ek plaaaan thaaaaaa, samjhe Ajitesh Bhave????? mujhe maloom tha....ke tum .....climax me pauchkar kuchh na kuchh zarur karoge....haina....??? ACP smiled with self satisfection.....& again said---waise...tumhara kaam sirf itna hi tha..ke CID walo, aur police walo ko tum is case se dur rakho, haina??????
Ajitesh Bhave couldn't answer him...but he was screaming in pain.......but he was excited too & this time ACP Pradyuman's provoking comments couldn't keep him silent..he too screamed with the whole energy--haaaaaaaaaaaaa....haaaaa pradyumaaaaan....sach ka dhwajadhariiiiiiiiiiiii.....ghamandiiiiii......officer.....agar mujhe thora pehle ye plan ki bareme pata chalta...to mere haaaaaaal me tum hoteeeeeeeee.......Nasik me....Stay Fit Gym ka instructor Mr.Roheeeeet Shetty......aur koyi nehi....balki....tumhara left hand Inspector Daya hain......aur aab woh...thori deeeeeeeeer me hi......khatam ho jayega.....samjheeeeeeee ACP Pradyumaaaaan?
ACP's face became anxious & guilty....the whole team as well was totally stunned to hear about Daya & became numb to even react......now DCP Sahay entered there with a smirk--Very good work..Pradyuman....bahar se hum kya lare....pehle to unlogo ko nikalna hain...jo CID jaise ek prestigious organisation ke andar baithe baithe...apne hi desh ki logo ke sath is tarike se gaddari karte hain....masoom logo ka jaan lene ki ghinona plan banate hain.....
Now ACP muttered with a worried & a little trembling voice--lekin ssir..shayad isi chakkar me....maine apne ek jabaz officer ko kho dunga......
--kkya??????? Salunkhe gulped in a mixture of pain & anxiety.....& a thunderbolt came in CID bureau....

[ To be continued]

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