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I would definitely try shruti..to request in their site....& the rest is the wish of the Almighty.... 😃 & thanksssss sooooooooo much for encouraging me always...

see who try never fail! and I am sure u will succeed! Best of Luck

Shruti I've posted my request there on behalf of all of us...that to try our stories for even in a few episodes...but don't knwo whether after revising by the administrator they will put it in the forum or not......so far I've checked they didn't put it in the CID forum.....anyway..hope for the best & if failed this time again I will write......I'll write to them asmany times as possible

PART III

Suchi I will tell you something...whenever anyone of reads a fan fic...we ofcourse need to visualise this and that and get all the details mentioned bt ur fan fics are too awesome...
I can visualise it perfectly even if there is something missing cause u may skip the physical surroundings bt you never skip the feel! and I love u for this!!


and abt keep sending the story thing...excellant never - say - die spirit!!!

firstly thanks for commenting abt. my story....cause it's encourages me everytime....even before visualising a scene I just can't write it....

PART IV

PART V

[Next Day] [Nasik]

Daya reached at 11.A.M & straight he went to Poonam Apartment at Gurusaday road...& after entering into his ninth floor apartment(which ACP Pradyuman ordered secretly) he just dialed the number of interior decorator....ha Mr.Khanna,main Rohit Shetty ....Mumbai se...woh..jo..Mr. madrekar saab.apko kaha tha
Khanna: areyy ha ha.. boliye
--ha main aapko inform kar raha tha ke main Nasik pauch gaya hun...to agar order kiya huya furniture bagera aap de jayenge...to bohot achchha hoga sir...
Khanna:o.k Mr.Shetty, aap thora intezaar kijiye...main abhi bhej deta hun...thik hain
--o.k. Daya cut down the line .......& called ACP--ha sir, pauch gaya hun...Mr.Khanna ko phone bhi kar diya hain..woh thori der me hi aa jayenge sir..
--Dayaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....a very loud & angry voice of ACP he heard.....is tarike ke galti karoge....to lota kambal leke chale ana parega waha seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..samjhe??????
Daya was stupefied & said fumbling---sorry ssir...par..main to.....
ACP with sombre voice ordered him---ye phone band karo...aur abhi jake ek naye sim kharido, samjheeeee? aur.....bhul jao tum Daya ho.....koyi Daya vaya nehi hain waha pe.....jo hain woh Rohiiiit....samjheeeeeeee Rohit
Daya was ashamed & answered--yes sir...I'm very sorry sir...
ACP: agle se aise galti nehiiii hona chaiyeeeeeee......samjhe?
Daya: Okay sir...
ACP cut the line very harshly....
Daya sighed with distress...& coming beside the large window pane he lost into muse--chal Daya...bhul ja apne aapko....apna naam, kaam,apni..dost,.....patni....aur yaha tak...beti...ko bhi...within a few seconds he felt his eyes were getting moisted...by his ...tears...quickly he wiped it off & switched his cell off...& again started to think...nehi Daya...ye emotional ban ne ka waqt nehi hain....just do your duty.....
He drank some water & then was about to go..but suddelny the door bell rang..very loudly....he opened the door & saw a middle aged...bald man standing infront of him....to see him the man said with smiling face---arrey....aap abhi aye hain....aap zarur Sudarshanji ka beta hain.....
Daya giggled for courtsey & answered--ji nehi, main unka bhateeja hun...
The man now raised his hand to shake with his....main Shantaram vashisht...is housing society ka malik
Daya continued to giggle...& then said--mera naam...he stopped just for a litlle while...& told--Rohit Shetty...
Shantaramji was smiling & then asked --tumhara yaha to kuchh bhi nehi hain...khanapina kaha karoge? arrey..dekha ..tum bol diya...matlab...
Daya interrupted being ashamed--thik hain...aap mujhe tum keh sakte hain...
Shantaram was happy & again told--khana....
before listened to anything more...Daya answered--aap chinta maat kijiye..main..main kha loonga.....
but Shantaram was obstinate--arrey beta ye kya keh rahe ho?..tum aaj yaha pe naye aye ho..hamara farz banta hain..ke tumhe..
Daya was wrinkled with hesitation & said--nehi..uncle ji...aur kabhi...darasal...main aab bahar ja raha tha..main ....raste me kuchh kha lunga....
Shantaram smiled again & then told--thik hain...lekin raat me tum hamare sath dinner karoge, thik hain?
Daya couldn't answer initially...but as he saw Shantaramji was waiting for his answer he very disconcertingly tried to answer--woh magar..
Shantaram: Koyi agar magar nehi hain..main tumhe raat dus baaje phir se bell dunga..okay? he turned back to go away...
Daya too went to the lift to go away from the apartment....
First he went to a mobile shop....& bought a cell along with a new sim in the name R.K Shetty.....& activated it by producing documents(which for sure..had brought by ACP Pradyumna secretly)...now he started to walk...because he didn't know this city well......& continued to wander for about one hour.........& he got a park near & entered there ....the park was associated with a big lake.....he sat on a bench being tired....the atmosphere was very nice & peaceful....birds were chirping & chanting...cold breeze was made the trees to shed their dry leaves....Daya wiped off his sweat from the forehead..& eventually some lines of that gazal came into his mind
Ek Akela is Shahar mein
Raat me aur dopahar mein..
Abudanaaaaaaa dhun ta hain
Ashiyaana aaa dhun ta hain....
Daya was reminiscing those moments when he went to Mumbai from Pune's Mamta Foundation to get the job in CID....in those days he used to feel so lonely..& ..strange...but suddenly he awakened & stood up to came back at home.....

[Mumbai] [Bureau][Same day]

ACP was in his cabin & talking with someone---ha ha main ACP Pradyuman CID se....mujhe samajh me nehi araha hain ke aap log ek file dene me kyu barbar inkaar kar rahey hain? hume woh file ka zarurat hain...woh case ek aise case se jura huya hain.....
Abhijeet stopped just coming beside the door & waiting for ACP's permission to enter. ACP nodded his head to give Abhijeet the permission & continued--ha us current case ke investigation ke liye hume woh file chaiye.....ha main DCP sir se baat kar liya hain.....woh file hume chaiye...abhi isi waqt...aap log waise hi bohot der karva diya.....he cut the line down with irritation & said--ha Abhijeet, maine tumhe bulaya tha ...kal Devyana kisi Pritha naam ka ladki ko....
Abhijeet lowered his voice & said--ha sir
ACP: magar kya kiya hain usne? woh kaha Daya sir ko pata hain....magar jab main Daya ko contact karne ka koshish kiya tab uska cell unavailable tha...
Abhijeet now lowered his eyes down & said--ha sir kal Devyana ke sath main bhi gaya tha Daya ke ghar me use arrest karne ke liye...
ACP frowned & asked--ghar me? criminal Daya ke ghar me kaise?
Abhijeet now asked ACP instead of answering--sir...apne dekha hain us ladki ko?
ACP: nehi abhi tak nehi dekha ...lekin kyu?
Abhijeet: sir woh Daya ke beti Jhumu ka governess
ACP goggled his eyes & could only splutter---m y Gaaaawwwwwwwwwd....
Abhijeet continued---ssir..aapko ek baat karna tha sir......woh...he mumbled..
ACP was very much astonished & asked --kya baat hain Abhijeet? aise kya ho gaya jo tum...
Abhijeet gulped his fear inside & said--sir usdin mere birthday party se woh gol dabba usi ne hi churayi thi sir...jhumu ko lekar woh bhi to maujud thi...
ACP was totally bamboozled...he couldn't understand how to handle shocks one after another....--kkya??? woh CD chori ho gaya?
before ACP could say anything Abhijeet spluttered--magar magar sir...woh CD woh log khol hi nehi paye..CD me password diya huya tha....aur CD pritha ke hath se unlogo ki tak pauch ne se pehle hi ..sir..Daya ne use pakar liya....
ACP gave a hard blow on the table--damn it!!!!! Abhijeet tum aise laparva kaise ho gaye the? pata nehi hain tumhe..ke woh CD ka kya importance hain!!!!! yaha hum log itna mehnat kar rahe hain..raat din head quarter se phone aaa rahey hain..case ki bareme.....aur tum log...!!!! ACP distorted his face being very much irritated
Abhijeet was going to splutter--ssir..woh..CD...
ACP shoued in anger--shut up...agar woh log cd ko khol lete to kya jabab dete tum mujhe???
Abhijeet went silent infront of ACP"s enraged anger, his face was reflecting the utmost guilt
ACP kept ranting on but a little mildly this time---kitna himmat aur bharosa karke maine ye kaha tha ke ye mission me mere Abhijeet aur Daya zarur kamiyaab hoga...
Abhijeet now again dared to speak--ssir...honge na hum...kamiyaab..zarur honge..sir...please..sir..humpe bharosa rakhiye....
ACP's anger was a bit mollified ..but before he could say anything a phone rang & ACP was informed about a murder.cutting the line..he ordered Abhijeet--juhu me ek murder huya hain..jao...jake investigate karo..
Abhijeet said--yes sir very obediently & go out of ACP's cabin...but ACP was toing & froing restlessly...phone kyu nehi kiya woh abhi tak? koyi booth se bhi to ek phone......he was disturbed & sat on his chair to call Daya.....
--this mobile has been switched off...he again & again heard only that...& his worry was burgeoned gradually---kyu ek phone nehi kar raha hain woh.....aab kaise contact karu use?....

[Nasik][ Same Day]

Daya returned to his home & he felt his stomach was churning up with hunger.....he opened the tiffin carrier which Tarika packed for him while he left Mumbai....it was his favourite meal.....muli ka paratha...dum aloo,shahi paneer & imli ka achar......Daya was eating slowly to think about Tarika & muttered within himself---Tiku,pata nehi...pher kab ...aise...tumhari hatho ka banaya huya khana khayunga.......suddenly he reminisced that he should call once ACP..he took his cell & called ACP
ACP: hello, ACP Pradyuman here
Daya: ha sir...main..
ACP sighed & said--thank God...tum ab tak kya kar rahe the???kabse tumhara ek phone ka intezaar kar raha tha. main....kuchh kaam huya?
Daya: sir, abhi tak to nehi...soch raha hu..kal..niklunga....barna...
ACP: ha ha thik hain...zada..jaldbazi ka koyi bhi zarurat nehi...aram se waha par apna ghar basao.....Khanna aye the?
Daya: ssir, abhi tak to nehi aye hain.....shayad thori der me aa jayenge...
ACP:o.k, take care...aur....contact karte rehna....
Daya: o.k sir...both cut the down...& now the doorbell rang again loudly...Daya thought Mr.Khanna had come & he opened the door...but...instead of Mr.Khanna he saw a young,beautiful lady was standing infront of him...she was smiling ...with curious glint in her eyes....
Daya too gave her a nervous & short titter & asked--jee...kahiye...
The lady now raised her hand which contained a tiffin box & said with crooning voice--ma bhej diya...kha lijiye ga....
Daya was surprisingly looked at the lady.....now the lady again smiled & said--main Rani....vashisht jee ka beti....ab to pehchan pa rahey hain aap?
Daya was a bit abashed & answered in hurry--arrey ha..ha..par...maine to kha liya hain....
The lady curled her lips mysteriously & said--thik hain...ma ko jakar bata deti hun...ke maa..humare naye parosi...bohot ghamandi aur khudgarz hain...woh nehi...
Daya interrupted her & again said with bashful voice--nehi...thik hain..aap dijiye...main kha leta hun....
The lady now smirked & said--kiske liye ye meherbani karenge aap?
Daya was again surprised not to twig the words of the lady & only muttered--jee???
The lady was continuously twisting her one finger with another & again curling her upper lip she said--ma ke liye...ya....mere liye???
Daya just got a heavy shock..his face flushed immediately though not fully with shame...but with ....a total surprise & a bit of irrtation....
The lady was waiting for his answer with a glint of mischief in her eyes....now Daya quickly overcame the reticense & with a light & mischivous smile he answered---kisi maa ka hath me banaya huya khane ki pass......he stopped & glanced at the lady....aur koyi bhi cheez ka jagha nehi hota hain...the lady made her face peeved & went away..now Daya shut the door smiling his heart out........
He then sat with his laptop & was watching the road maps of Nasik very minutely.......next day he had to work hard...he sank into the informations & data in his laptop.

[Mumbai] [ 7.p.m]

Abhijeet was passing by Daya's residence & suddenly he stopped the car ...& slowly went towards the lawn of the residence...& surprisingly he noticed Tarika ....She was riveted there helding a tree...Jhumu was in her lap....
he called with hesitation--Tarikaaaaa...
Tarika turned back & seeing Abhijeet she was a bit worried--kya baat hain Abhijeet.....aap..is.waqt.....
Abhijeet smiled & said--kyu nehi asakta hun?
Now Tarika was ashamed & said--aaiye na...andar aaiye...
--nehi...main ye jan ne ke liye aya tha...ke..aap log ....thik to haina? Abhijeet asked with an abashed smile...
Tarika smiled very ruefully & answered--ha...thik hi hun....
Abhijeet was feeling uncomfortable.....to understand Tarika couldn't remain in peace....but..still he asked her---aaj lab me nehi gayi thi?
Tarika sighed & said--nehi.....
Meanwhile Jhumu suddenly asked Abhijeet--uncle....pappa kab ayega?
Abhijeet smiled & lovingly gave a pat over jhumu's head & said--dekhe...kam khatam hote hi papa ajayega..thik hain.......
Jhumu got off from Tarika's lap & with her three-wheeler toy car..she became busy to play in the lawn....
Abhijeet smiled to see Jhumu......& then said with much hesitation---dekhiye......mujhe maloom hain..ke aap.....aap.....
Tarika was staring vacantly at the ground.....
--aap....ko..bohot chinta ho raha hain.....par....aap....chinta...chinta...maat kijiye......aur agar aapko Daya ke bareme kuchh bhi jan na hain....to....aap...bureau me phone..kar lijiye..ga....hum...
--kiya tha aaj phone...Tarika said unexpectedly & with cold voice...
--ha...to....kya...Abhijeet couldn't ask anymore..
--ACP sir ne bataya...ke woh...kisi Daya ko nehi jante hain....aur...Tarika couldn't say anymore .her voice was being choked....
--kya ????ACP saab ne...ye bataya? Abhijeet too was surprised....
--itne din imandari se kaam karne ka ye inaam hain Abhijeet? jaan ki bazi lagake.......Tear drops were falling from her eyes....woh...CID ke liye...kaam kar rahey hain.....aur....aaj...ACP sir..uska...naam tak.....She started to whimper in pain.....
Abhijeet wasn't feeling well......but still he was tried to pacify her---aisa nehi hain Tarika.....,darasal..ACP saab jo kuchh bhi kar rahey hain...woh Daya ka bhala ke liye hi.......
Tarika wiped her eyes off with her fists roughly & said--aap log kya kar rahey hain...woh aap log hi jante hain......lekin...agar mere ....Daya ....ka..kuchh huya.......to..pher....to.....main bhi......main...jee...nehi...paungi...Abhijeet...she couldn't controll herself more & rushed towards inside....to hide her vehement....emotions...

after this...you still say that you cant be an excellant writer?? I donno anything, just gimme a few years, lemme earn some fortune then I will contact the actors to make a parallel CID where u are the writer!

well shruti, CID ke writer to tum hi banoge, par agar kabhi film director ban jate ho, aur tumhe koyi love story ka zarurat pare😉😆 to mujhe contact kar lena, mere dimag me hamesha ek na ek love story chalte rehte hain

Thanks very much for your comment freind,U all r my inspiration