A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
oooops!! sorry. i think i losing it. im writing the next part rite now.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

part 9

here u go.

RECAP:
g: anyways where the h*ll r u

a: rite behind u sweetheart. he taps the girl on the shoulder.

and she turns around. and the both shut their phones at the same time.
and they start laughing. as some of u might of guessed. it is alyiah.
alyiah = aa.

aa: anged tum bhi na, ur to much

a: is that a coplement.

aa: a bit anoyed AAAAANNNNNGGGGGEEEDDDD!!!!

AND NOW...

they just walk around the store looking at things trying to choose something
but aliyah just doesn't like anything. then she sees a heart shaped piece made of glass.

that has a poem on it.it goes something like this:

A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.


as soon as aliyah sees it she says: wow! this is perfect.she calls anged who is still wandering the store.
aa: anged come here
a: ok. he comes.

a: tumhe kuch mila

aa: haan look it so beautiful.

a: ok so lets get it packed.

aa: yeah let's go.

they get it packed and go for coffee.

AT THE CAFE

a: aliyah tumhe bhi prithvi ke liye sabse aacha gift kyun
layna tha

aa: because he's the best bro.

a: wut eva

a: ok tum kya lo ghi

aa: coffee

a: anything else

aa: no
anged calls the waiter.
a: 2 coffee

prithvi and kripa also come to the cafe. they gunna go
to another table but aliyah sees them and calls them to
their table.

aa: prithvi, kripa why don't u join us.

k+p: ok.
they take at seat.

sorry guys i have to go do chores. i write around 15-20mins later.


Edited by **lil_playa** - 18 years ago
**lil_playa** thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#63
sorry guys i got guest so i can't cont.
radz thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#64
gr8...................likho naa plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
that was great, plz continue soon
**lil_playa** thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#66
hey guys.
u don't have to wait much longer, im writing the next part rite now.
**lil_playa** thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#67

part 10

RECAP:

AT THE CAFE

a: aliyah tumhe bhi prithvi ke liye sabse aacha gift kyun
layna tha
aa: because he's the best bro.
a: wut eva
a: ok tum kya lo ghi
aa: coffee
a: anything else
aa: no
anged calls the waiter.
a: 2 coffee
prithvi and kripa also come to the cafe. they gunna go
to another table but aliyah sees them and calls them to
their table.
aa: prithvi, kripa why don't u join us.
k+p: ok.
they take at seat.

AND NOW...

anged order two coffee's for kripa and prithvi.

p: so wut r have u guys been doing?

a: nothing, tumhari bahan ko shopping kar va ra ha ta

k: tho alyiah kuch buy kiya
their coffee's r here by now.

aa: a bit mad at anged, and nervous cuz she didn't want
prithvi to know about the gift.   kuch nahie

k: kyun

aa: kuch passand nahie ayaa. she gets a call on her cell
aa: excuse me.

everyone: ok. she goes outside to answer the phone. it's
her mother.(damini)

aa: hello.

d: hello beta

aa: oh mom app

d: hain, miene phone tumhe kiya hai ke tumhe or prithvi ko
abhi ghar ana hai.

aa: y mom

d: beta tum bhool gaye ke aaj sameer wapis ara ha hai.

aa: wut mama r u seriuos

d: yes beta, ab jaldi tum or prithvi ghar aa jao, phir hum
sab milke usko recieve karne ja enge.

aa: mom vo kya hai na ke... mom aap airport jayie mein bahi
ko le kar aati hoon.

d: ok beta. par jaldi ok

aa: yes mom. she goes inside to tell prithvi.

aa: bahi mama ka pone aya tha, hum duno ko airport jaana hai.

everyone is a bit conufed: kyun??? 😕

aa: bahi aap bhi bhool gaye

p: still a bit confused. kya?? 😕

aa: bahi. sameer is coming back today.

now prithvi is really happy. p: wut r u saying, omg.
anged has met sameer before but kripa is still confused.

k: 😕 ye sameer kaun hai.

p: kripa remeber i told u about me childhood friend.

kripa now remembers prithvi telling her of someone named sameer.

k: oh so he's coming. anged isn't paying much attention
he is just drinking his coffee.

aa: we're getting late bahi. hurry up

p: lekin kripa ko kaun ghar drop karega

aa: of course anged hain na.
hearing his name he comes back to reality.

a: kya...

aa: anged kya tum kripa ko ghar chor do gay.

a: yah sure.

aa+p: bye

i will make up for the past few days. later.
ok then guys bye, lil.

PREVIEW: AT THE AIRPORT.

Edited by **lil_playa** - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
M I THAT BAD 😔

😭no one liked it!!!!!😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
awesome part.
Hopefully Kripa will dump Prithvi and get together with Angad.  😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
noooooooooo, that was a good part, now cont soon w/ some angad kripa scenes 😛