A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 - Page 8

Originally posted by: cheen2005

noooooooooo, that was a good part, now cont soon w/ some angad kripa scenes 😛

rite now it's focused on prithvi and kripa. but not for long.😉

good job lil cont soon luved it👏

Originally posted by: **lil_playa**

rite now it's focused on prithvi and kripa. but not for long.😉

GOOOOODDDDDDDDD 😛

itz really a good job👏 👏 👏
im loving it😊 😊 😊
plz continue soon 👏

i really loved it.............plz cont lil playa

it was gr8 plez continue cant wait

IM WRITING THE NEXT FEW PARTS RITE NOW.

part 11

RECAP:

p: lekin kripa ko kaun ghar drop karega
aa: of course anged hain na.
hearing his name he comes back to reality.
a: kya...
aa: anged kya tum kripa ko ghar chor do gay.
a: yah sure.
aa+p: bye

AND NOW...

they leave from there leaving anged and kripa alone.

k: anged kya tum sameer se pehle mile ho

a: hain, vo do theen dahfa mil cheka hoon

k: oh.chale

a: kider??(poor anged getting amnasia 😆 )

k: anged u have to drop me.

a: ok let me finish my coffee.

k: (childish tone.) anged!

a: (same tone) kripaaa.

k: i don't want to talk to u

a: fine. i don't want u to drop u home.

k: anged i hate u

a: thanx. i hate u to.

kripa is getting really mad.

k: she gets up. fine tum yahaan bet kar apni coffee piyo main kood ghar chali goan gi. saying this she leves. anged pays the bill. and follows her. she is standing near his car. he goes upto her.

a: kripa. she turns around.

k: kya hai

a: chalen.

k: kider

a: i thought ke tumhe ghar jaana hai.

k: she knods her head. hmm. they get in to the car n leave.

AT THE AIRPORT.

prithvi, alyiah, and damini bose wait outside for sameer.

aa:(getting impaitent) mama yeh sameer kab aaye ga

d: aa jaye ga beta. just wait.

p: mama muhje pata hai yeh inti impatient kyun ho hari ha

d: kyun

p: alyiah should i?

aa: don't u dare

d: yeh kya chupa hare ho tum dono.

alyiah gives a i gunna kill u look to prithvi.

p: mama kuch nahie.

part 12

by this time sameer has arrived. he will be played by amit sareen
(khitij frm kusum).

p: look sameer bhi agaya. sameer walks towards them.

s: hi guys. hi aunty

d: hi beta.

aa+p: hey

d: how r u beta.

s: aunty kaisa legra ha hoon.

aa: mama obviously. moota or kaala(lolz 😆)

s: haha very funny

aa: yeah i know

p: oh god. tum log phir shuru hogaye

d: let's go now

s+aa: sure.

mean while in anged's car

a: kripa

k: she is looking out the window. hmm

a: tumne kuch baath notice kyi hai

k: kya

a: jabse prithvi aur tumhari engagment ho e hai tum mere
saath sahi teraan se baath nahi kartii.

k: she turns and looks at him. wut do u mean??

a: kripa plz it's true

k: ok mr. anged khanna wut do u want to talk about?

a: that's much better.

k: anged.

a: kripa

kripa turns the radio on. (the song Aao na from the movie KYUN Hoge ya na. is playing.) anged is about
to change it but anged stop her.

k: anged renhe do na.

a: c'mon kripa

k: anged plz.

a: fine.


bye guys i getting sleepy i gunna go to sleep.
don't forget to post ur comments.
and i'll try to post regulairly.

byr 4 now, lil

that was good hun.
continue soon

don't make us wait too long!!!😉

😊Anamika😊