FF:Pyar Ki Ek Kahaani Prt 50 Pg 145 - Page 83

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Archi,

that was just fabalous,the story just took a u-turn.Pia i have no comments for her. 🤢 🤢 Poor jai and bani both love each other so much but still apart.hope now after reading her diary he gets some sense and finds her.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh nooooooo Bani lost the child!!! 😲and its all becuz of that Piaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😡 😡 😡 She put something in her juice then poisened Jai's mind against her. 😡
Poor Bani she lost her child 😭 ...the trust of her husband...when she needed his supoort the most. 😔

She left the diary...he read the last entry... 😭 😭 😭 he knows the guy Bani fell for was him 😭 😭 I'm gonna cry...that letter was too sad 😭 😭

Flashback has ended...i hope Jai does something to get his Bani back...and i want Pia to be taught a lesson of a lifetime! 😡 😡

Fanstatic update...had to catch up...but loved reading through...superbly written 👏 👏 👏

Tazoo 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey archi
gr8 parts 👏
hope jai finds bani soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hai Archi,
That was an awesome update 👏 ..The emotions in Bani were brought out so nicely, really did a good job 😃 😃 😃
I really can't believe that Jai broke her heart in such a way 😭 ...especially when she was in such a emotional state 😭 😭 😭
Pia is such a heartless person 😡 I am quite sure she is the one who mixed the abortion pills in the drink 😡 😡 😡 ...
Please bring Jani together soon 😳 😃 ....and pls cont soon also 🤗
Edited by melonie - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
coolgurl_2005 - thanks... i was going to make the twist a little more gradual, but then decided against it since i was bored of the flashback... yeah, i hate repto too... she will be out of their live forever!! and jai... umm, you will find out soon enough. will update soon...

Tazoo - yeah.. Bani had a miscarriage... and even jai's trust... i was almost in tears when writing the part too taz... usually i am not that good at writing emotional parts... jai... well you will find out... and dont' worry about repto... she will be sent somewhere special...lolz will update soon

janu_2006 - thanks hun... yes, jai will do something for sure... will update soon

melonie - thanks mel...jai broke her heart once again... but it was repto's fault...and yes, pia is the one who mixed the pills... and about jani... well, you will find out soon enough... will cont soon...
Edited by -Archi- - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
woah!! nicely written part
this like the first time my eyes ever got moist 😭 😭 readinga ff
awww.. i feel so sorry for bani and jai is an ass for listing to pia
anyway love to give u more feed bak but have to finish typin my essay 😃
p.s. cont.. soon very soon lol
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: xxainy

woah!! nicely written part
this like the first time my eyes ever got moist 😭 😭 readinga ff
awww.. i feel so sorry for bani and jai is an ass for listing to pia
anyway love to give u more feed bak but have to finish typin my essay 😃
p.s. cont.. soon very soon lol

thanks xxainy... i don't write temotional stuff... but it just came to me, when i abandoned my music report... lolz... yeah, but jai will pay for it and pia... umm, you can wait till the next update... i will update as soon as i can...

archi

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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 😭 😭 so sad
update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
archu!!!...omg...i finally got my computer working...but omg...guli came over and was telling me about your update...and i was so 😡 because my computer wasn't working...😡....but now we r good to go...so i read and here is my comment... 😉😉😉

haila...😲....how could jai come into the words of repto...🤢...yeh ladki naa...meri hatoon marega 😡...chodungi nahin...🤬...chi...how could he believe her...how could he not trust bani...abortion pills...😲...once again pia has crossed all levels of scum and managed to find something lower than that 🤢🤢🤢...chi...but haila...after all this torture...and i mean ALL this torture 😉😉😉...the raaz is out...stupi jai...duffer kahin kaa...aab jaao...baite baite kya kaar rahe ho...go find your wife...😳...but first kill your stupid saali 🤢🤢🤢...no...scratch that...go find bani...ill do the honors of killing ms. repto 😃...lol...

great update archu...cant wait to find out what is going to happen next...woo hoo...cant wait...😃...and yes...you did update...and so i will too...should post something tomorrow...😃😃😃
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Melonie!!!!!!!!!!!

Firstly sorry that I didn't comment b4 .
But really amazing parts 👏 very well penned👏 👏.

Loved it.
Please do continue soon.

Take care,
Sukh 😃 😊

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