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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part dear loved it tooo tooo gooood..mindlowing hope aryan gayab hojae rayan aur saima ki kindagi seh 😆 😆 😆 lol continue sooon can't wait more 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
as always awesome part ruku... i too hope aryan gets out of their life and saima & rayan lives happily
update soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Gr8 part 👏👏👏i really hope k rayan & saima k beech sab jaldi se theek hojaye.

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Posted: 16 years ago

thanks for all the comments. They mean a lot to me 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

 thanks a ton dear!!! 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey awesome part yaar 👏 😉 😛 😉 👏!!!!!!  ye kya se kya hogaya 😭 😕 😭, rayan kya shak sach me badal gaya aryan aur saima ko ek saath khanna mansion me dehke 😭!.......bechari saima in sab batoo se anjan hai 😭, in the evening saima was really worried abt rayan as he hasn't arrieved n wasn't picking his phone either 😕....after a while he gets home all drunk  . . . . . . . . . . i think saima got the hint that maybe rayan got to know everything 😭!.....bechari rayan ke pass zamin pe behte behte so jati hai 😭......the next morning rayan behaviour was kinda same wt saima, he was just ansering her questions 😕.....they talked a bit abt yesterday night.....rayan ne apna haat mirror pe marliya 😕......saima couldn't to anything 😭!!!!!!!!!     at the office rishab n sahil were watting for rayan 😊, as soon as he entered both start with there questions 😆 😕 😆!........i totally agree with rishab 😊, he should talk to saima abt all this calmly 😊......par ab rayan ko samchae kyon 😕!      bechara rishab to samche samcha ke thak giya hai 😭......rishab leaves the office all frustrated 😭 😕 😭!!! . . . . . . . . . . . .  he goes to aryan house n asked him why is he playing with 3 lives??? .......bechare aryan ko to pata hi nahi tha ke kya horaha hai 😕!!! ........i think it was a day of shock's for aryan 😲 😆 😲 😆 😲!!! .....1st rayan n saima been married 😉 😲 😊!  ....2nd raina suspecting of saima, coz of him 😲 😆 😕!!.....3rd saima love confession 4 aryan in her diary 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲!!!!!!!!!! .................poor aryan kese bardasht karraha hoga inte sare shock's ek shaat 😲 😉 😲!!!............can't wait for the next parrt yaar 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭!!!!!!!..............what's gonna happen next ????????????........what will aryan do?????.....rayan decition???? saima reaction????????.................waitting egerly for the next part !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey awesome part yaar 👏 😉 😛 😉 👏!!!!!!  ye kya se kya hogaya 😭 😕 😭, rayan kya shak sach me badal gaya aryan aur saima ko ek saath khanna mansion me dehke 😭!.......bechari saima in sab batoo se anjan hai 😭, in the evening saima was really worried abt rayan as he hasn't arrieved n wasn't picking his phone either 😕....after a while he gets home all drunk  . . . . . . . . . . i think saima got the hint that maybe rayan got to know everything 😭!.....bechari rayan ke pass zamin pe behte behte so jati hai 😭......the next morning rayan behaviour was kinda same wt saima, he was just ansering her questions 😕.....they talked a bit abt yesterday night.....rayan ne apna haat mirror pe marliya 😕......saima couldn't to anything 😭!!!!!!!!!     at the office rishab n sahil were watting for rayan 😊, as soon as he entered both start with there questions 😆 😕 😆!........i totally agree with rishab 😊, he should talk to saima abt all this calmly 😊......par ab rayan ko samchae kyon 😕!      bechara rishab to samche samcha ke thak giya hai 😭......rishab leaves the office all frustrated 😭 😕 😭!!! . . . . . . . . . . . .  he goes to aryan house n asked him why is he playing with 3 lives??? .......bechare aryan ko to pata hi nahi tha ke kya horaha hai 😕!!! ........i think it was a day of shock's for aryan 😲 😆 😲 😆 😲!!! .....1st rayan n saima been married 😉 😲 😊!  ....2nd raina suspecting of saima, coz of him 😲 😆 😕!!.....3rd saima love confession 4 aryan in her diary 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲!!!!!!!!!! .................poor aryan kese bardasht karraha hoga inte sare shock's ek shaat 😲 😉 😲!!!............can't wait for the next parrt yaar 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭!!!!!!!..............what's gonna happen next ????????????........what will aryan do?????.....rayan decition???? saima reaction????????.................waitting egerly for the next part !!!!!!!!!

 awww.... thanks for this one honey..!!

 as my exams are goin on wil not be able to upate soon..Wil continue after a week or so..😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

                                         Part-35

Recap-
 Saima aur Rayan ki galatfehmi aur badhti hai, aur Rayan Saima se alagh hona ka faisla leta hai.. Rishabh Aryan se jakar Saima aur Rayan ki sachchayi batata hai aur use unki zindagi se dur jaane ko kehta hai.......

 

Story further........
Rishabh ki baatein sunkar Aryan ko samajh nahi aata ki wo kya kare. Wo iss sach se anjaan tha ki Saima usse kitna pyar karti hai...  Use Rishabh ki har baar chubhti hai, khaas kar ye ki aaj uski wajah se Saima apni shaadi shuda zindagi mein takleef mein hai. Wo ek baar Saima se milkar saari galat fehmiya
dur karna chahta tha.... Per Rishabh ki baato se wo aisa nahi karta aur waha se chala jata hai...

Garewal Mansion....
Evening time.........
Saima apne kamrein mein gumsum si khadi thi, tabhi Rayan waha aata hai... uski kadmo ki ahat sunkar
wo palatti hai..
Saima: aap?
{rayan bas saima ki taraf dekhe jaa raha tha aur uski taraf badh raha tha. rayan uske behad kareeb
aata hai, aur uski aankho mein dekhta hai. Jin mein shayad aaj wo tha jo rayan kab se dekhna chahta tha, per kehte hai na ki shak ke aage kuch nahi hota. Insaan wahi dekhta hai jo wo dekhna chahta hai. Rayan ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua tha}
Rayan: main tumse kuch kehna chahta hu
{saima bas rayan ki taraf dekhti rehti hai}
Rayan: na to tumse koi sawaal karna chahta hu aur naa koi shikayat. Aksar thokar khaane per kuch pal
ke liye hi sahi per dard hota hi hai. Main zindagi se kuch jyada hi umeed karne laga tha. Wo maang baitha jo kabhi mera tha nahi. Mujhe maaf kardo saima.
Saima: yeh aap kaisi baatei kar rahe hai
Rayan: ha saima, meri wajah se, adi ki wajah se aaj tak tum iss bojh ko sambhal rahi thi, per ab aur nahi...
tumhi apni zindagi jeene ka haq hai. Main khudgarz ho gaya tha, apni khushiyo ke aage kuch dekh hi nahi paya..
Saima: aisa kuch bhi nahi hai rayan.. aur aap kis bare mein keh rahe hai?
Rayan: tumhare aur aryan ke baare mein. {turns towards the otherside, trying hard to hide his tears..
{saima was extremely shocked to hear this, she was completely shattered, but still said nothing}
Rayan: na to main tumse kuch puchna chahata hu aur naa hi kuch janna chahta hu. Tumse koi shikayat
nahi hai mujhe. Bas jaane se pehle ek aakhri ehsaan kar dena, in papers pe sign kar dena.. {hands her the papers, saima some how gathers all her strength and opens the papers, they were their divorce papers}
Saima: Rayann... ye...
Rayan: hamara saath bas yehi tak ka tha... mujhe aur kuch nahi kehna... tum jaa sakti ho
{saima bas rayan ki taraf dekhti hai aur roti rehti hai}
Saima: aapka har faisla hume manzoor hai, hum apki zindagi aur iss ghar se chale jayenge per hum in
papers pe sign nahi kar payenge. Aap bhale hi humse saare rishte tod de per kam se kam Adi ke liye to..... {cries bitterly}
Rayan: is rishte mein waise bhi ab bacha hi kya hai....
{saima bina kuch kahe, waha rakhi unki tasveer {saima, adi aur rayan} lekar chali jaati hai... aur rayan
bhi tut jaata hai...
Rayan: kyu saimaaaa..... kyun dhoka diya mujhee....... kyunnnnn............{he turns behind and was shocked to
see dadi standing there}
Dadi: Rayannn.........{aur wo behosh hokar gir jaate hai}
Rayan: dadi...dadiiii.... aankhei kholiye dadi.....
{rayan jhat se dadi ko hospital le jaata hai}

At the hospital...............
Rayan, Sidharth and Raina were waiting anxiously for doctors to come out. Rayan was extremely
worried as he feared Dadi knew everthing about him and saima.
Rayan: {to himself} agar dadi ko kuch bhi hua to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga...
{doctors bahar aate hai}
Saidharth: doctor, ab kaise hai ma?
Doctor: filhaal to wo thik hai, minor attack tha..
Raina: koi khatre wali baat to nahi na?
Doctor: bas khyaal rahe ki unhe koi mental stress na ho, ye unke liye acha nahi hoga, thodi der mei unhe hosh aa jayega phir aap unse mil sakte hai. Ex-cuse me
Sidharth: pata nahi achanak maa ko kya hua? Jab aaye to thik thak the, Saima aur Rayan se milna unke
kamrei mein gaye..phir pata nahi kya hua...
Raina: per Saima kaha hai? Rayan kaha hai wo?
Rayan: mama, wo... Saimaaa.....
Nurse: patient ko hosh aa chuka hai, aap unse mil sakte hai..
{raina aur sidharth immediately ander jate hai, per rayan wahi khada tha. Wo jaanta tha ki unke kisi
bhi sawaal ka jawaab uske paas nahi tha..}
Rayan: {to himself} kaise kahu inse ki ab Saima kabhi nahi aayegi.... Kya jawaab du inhe... {just than his
cell rings}
Rayan: ha Rishabh
Rishabh: i hope tumhe yaad ho ki hume Mr.Wilson ke saath ek conference ke liye jana tha... wo aa chuke
hai bas tumhara hi intezar kar rahe hai..
Rayan: ha, main shayad aa nahi paunga.. Dadi ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi to unhe hospital lana pada.
Rishabh: oh, anything serious?
Rayan: nahi, ab wo thik hai per is waqt main nahi aa paunga
Rishabh: koi baat nahi i'll manage. You take care.
Rayan: hmm....

after an hour.......

Sidharth aur Raina ghar chale jaate hai, aur rayan wahi hospital mein rukta hai. Per wo dadi se milta nahi, kyunki wo unka saamna nahi kar pata. Wo isi kashmakash mei hota hai ki wo kya kare, dadima ke
sawalo ka kya jawaab de.... tabhi wo dekhta hai ki hospital mei kuch log daudte hue aate hai, doctors,
nurses sabhi kahi jaate hai aur kisi patient ko laya jaata hai, aur usi waqt waha Rishabh aur Sahil aate hai..
Rishabh: Rayan, ab dadi kaise hai?
Rayan: thik hai..
Rishabh: per ye gadbad kaisi?
Sahil:  kisi ka bahot bura accident hua hai
Rishabh: oh, acha Rayan per yeh sab hua kaise?
Rayan: sab meri wajah se... aaj dadi ki jo halat hai uska zimmedar main hu
Rishabh: kya matlab?
Nurse: ex-cuse me sir, patient Mr Rayan se milna chahte hai
Rayan: ji...
{kisi tarha se rayan ander jaata hai}
Dadi: rayan... kaha tha tu? idhar to aa....
Rayan: ji dadi main... wo...
Dadi: Saima nahi aayi?
{rayan bilkul hairaani se dadi ki taraf dekhta hai}
Dadi: mujhe pata hai, tum dono mei jhagda hua tha na? Per ab jao aur meri beti ko le aao
Rayan: dadi, aap aaram kijiye..doctor ne aapse baat karne ko manaa kiya hai
Dadi: mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, tu bas saima ko le aa
Rayan: acha aap aaram kijiye main use le aata hu
Dadi: jaldi laana...
{rayan kisi tarha dadi se nazrei churakar kamrei se bahar aata hai}
Rishabh: kya hua Rayan, wo thik to hai na?
Rayan: Dadi... Dadi saima se milna chahte hai
Sahil: to main abhi unhe phone karta hu
Rayan: nahi Sahil
Sahil: kya matlab?
Rishabh: Rayann... kahi tumne....... waise Saima iss waqt hai kaha?
Rayan: wo... wo meri zindagi aur mere ghar se hamesha ke liye jaa chuki hai...
Rishabh: what????
{sahil aur rishabh ye sunkar hairaan rehte hai}
Sahil: per sir, aap dadi se kya kahenge..
Rishabh: to ab samjha ki dadi ki iss halat ka zimmedar tum apne aapko kyun keh rahe the
Sahil: ye waqt behes karne ka nahi hai, hume abhi bhabhi ko yaha bulana chahiye, main abhi unhe phone
karta hu.. {sahil saima ko phone karta hai per phone off hota hai}
Sahil: off hai
Rishabh: ghar ka try karo
Sahil: ha.. {sahil wo bhi try karta hai per waha bhi koi nahi uthata} koi nahi utha raha.. Sir kya aapko
pata hai ki iss waqt bhabhi kaha jaa sakte hai
{rayan bina kuch kahe bas waha se chala jata hai}
Sahil: main kanaka jaata hu, shayad bhabhi waha ho
Rishabh: thik hai.., agar kuch pata chale to inform me
Sahil: tum bhi..
{sahil rushes out while rishabh still keeps trying saima's cell}

 

..............End of part-35..............

 

Comments awaited!!!

luv,
 ruksaar

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey tremendous........... jiska accident hua hai shayad vo saima hi hai........... i think so cont soon..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki saima ki accident huva hai any ways cont soon