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Naani Maami, Naani Maami, Maan Jao


"Ayyyee, Ruk , Ruk ne bhaiii....." Prafulla who saw Shiva on his bike, was bewildered after seeing a baby with him. "Huffff.. yeh ..Raksas .. Bhaag gya"  Prafulla panted at the moment, catching her breath and resting with the support of a tree nearby. "Bhogilal Maharaj!, woh Seeva hi tha ne?" Prafulla talked to herself being confused. "Fir baccha?? Rishita ka toh baccha hi nahi hua..." Prafulla with some hand gestures tried to connect the dots in her mind and her eyes wide opened after her 'Khayali Pulaav conclusion" .


"Hayyye Mhara Bhogilal!!!!" She screamed at the top of her lungs , yelling loud enough to scare the entire Somnath. Everybody passing that way watched her with amazement. She smiled nervously and excused herself from their.


"Meri beti ko dhoka deke, yeh Jungli baap bhi ban gya, Chee chee chee.. Sachka Jungli hai ne woh!! meri phool si bacchi ko phusla ke kisi aur se.." Prafulla didn't complete her sentence when an auto rickshaw stood there.. "Kya hua kaki, Daudha chadha hai kya? kahun toh chod aaun pagal khaane.." Prafulla fumed in anger & took out her chappal to hit him but he left.


She threw the chappal & cried loudly "Raaaaavvvviii!!!!"


...


"Dekh dekh ..arrey ab toh dedo mujhe bacche" Shiva was trying to get his pendant back from the clutch of Puchki but 'Is anyone even capable or strong enough to get something out of a baby's hand? Surely not' & thus even 'Chattan Pandya' failed to get his locket back. Raavi who was busy with the preparation of her promotion & was currently telling her followers about the same chuckled at the cute antics of the duo.


"Aap na bahut zeedi ho" Shiva hummphed in fake anger & Little Puchki with her black orbs was throwing sparkling stars to him with the cuttest puppy eyes. Raavi went to the sofa table of the hall & asked him "Tune Puchki ko aap bola???" Raavi asked surprised. 


Shiva smiled a little and said  stuttering "Woh.. woh haa.. kya haina, yeh itni choti si hai, isko tu bolne ka mann nhi karta hai" Raavi awwed at this side of Shiva & pinched his cheeks which he swatted away instantly. 


"Hayye mere Cuttu Bhootu, Mujhe nahi pata tha, tu Papa banne ke thought se aisa softie ban jaayega. Warna Rishita se pehle hum..." Raavi blushed and lowered her head all shying. Shiva was all the darkest shade of red. 


"Tu... Tu na Zyaada, hawe mein matt udd samjhi, Humme Bhulna nahi chahiye ki iski maa abhi bhi hai, bas beemar hai, kuch dino ke baad..!" But he didn't know what stopped him to complete the sentence.   Raavi's face fell down hearing that. She felt an unknown burden in her heart , but let the thought not to linger in her mind at the moment.


"Tu woh sab chod, aur chal, Puchki ko nehlana bhi hai." Raavi kept her phone stand & phone aside and went to her room , to bring the hot water . Shiva who was playing with Puchki, near the well side almost shrieked in fear by the yelling of Maami "Meri bacchi, meri Raavi, Kaha hai tu?!!"


Puchki laughed at the expressions of Shiva, and Shiva glanced at her but then pecked her cheeks to which Puchki cooed in delight. Prafulla came inside the house and watched the particular scene .

 

"Matlab mera shaq sahi tha, yeh jungli...." Prafulla glared at Shiva and held his collar & was constantly shaking him. Shiva was extremely confused by the sudden attack of Prafulla on him. "Ayye maami, satak gyi hai kya teri, chod mujhe" Shiva with his free hand tried to get out of hold of Prafulla But she didn't stop. "Meri bacchi ko dhokha dega, uski zindagi barbaad karega..."


One side Shiva was trying to get out of Prafulla's hold other side Prafulla is not leaving Shiva & in the whole chaos Shiva-Maami & Puchki are moving in a circle. "Chod Maami" "Nahi chodungi'" , Shiva grinned in anger "Chod" Prafulla glared at him "Nahi chodungi". 


Puchki was enjoying the ring around the roses ride she was getting, but soon frowned as she saw the discomfort in Shiva's eyes. She was on the verge of tears & thus kicked at Prafulla's face and started crying loudly.


Prafulla cried in pain as the kick directly hit her nose. Shiva tried to stop his laughter but he can't & ultimately started laughing. Everyone after hearing so much noises came out of their room & found Puchki crying, Shiva laughing & Maami wincing clutching her nose.

 

Rishita muttered in a low voice "Waah, ek saath teen teen expressions. Lagta hai firse Shiva vs Maami dekhna hoga, chal Rishita beith ke Drama dekhte hai, lamba chalega" Rishita sat on the sofa & found Raavi's phone. She took it & saw the live on. "Not again Raavi." She immediately ended the live & sighed in relief.


Raavi too came out of the room running after hearing noises. She found entire family gathered in the aangan & her Maasi maa throwing daggers to Shiva & wincing in Pain. She heard Puchki's crying voice and ran to handle her but she was caught by her Maasi maa who engulfed her in a too tight hug.


 "Maasi, kya kar rahi ho, chodo" Raavi tried to freed herself from the clutch of Prafulla but She was in no mood to leave . Raavi pushed Prafulla a little and she finally left her. "Chal Raavi yaha se, chal Mein tera samaan le jaungi baad mein yaha se kuch nahi chutne dungi, tu bhai bas chal" . Raavi became confused with her  rambling .


Shiva soothed the throbbing in his forehead from his fingers & turned Maami. "Tu meri biwi ko kis khushi mein yaha se le jaa rahi hai??" Shiva asked in a low but tensed voice. "Tere kartuton ki khabar chal gyi hai mujhe, Tu meri beti ko behla fusla sakta hai pann mein nahi phusalne waali! Dhokha de raha hai tu usse.. aur meri beti ko bhi mujhse yeh baat chupaane ko boli. Hayye Mhara bhogilal, .. Ohh bhai, ab bas. Tu chal raavi" Prafulla held Raavi's wrist tightly & started dragging her.


Puchki who was still crying saw this and clutched Raavi's mangalsutra when she just passed by Shiva & Puchki's side. She started yelling more loudly. Raavi stopped in her tracks gathering all the energy required & found Shiva's hand on her other hand's wrist stopping her. Maami turned to see Shiva red eyed. He pulled Raavi closer to him & Prafulla's hands jerked and left Raavi's wrist. 


Raavi took Puchki in her arms from Shiva and embraced her tightly in her frame. Puchki stopped crying & started coughing. "Naa baccha , naa naa, Ro mat babu, Puchki.. Hmm shh shh" Raavi patted her back trying to calm her down. Puchki sniffled and buried her head on Raavi's chest seeking peace, comfort & warmth.


Suman wheeled and stood in front of Prafulla "Kaagdi hai tu maanti hun, pann iss tareeke se humare ghar mein tamasha karte hue sharam nahi aati, Suman Pandya ke ghar mein aake ussi ki bahu ko kheench ke le jaa rahi hai" she shouted in an angry tone. Prafulla retorted back "Meri beti ko shaadi karke diya hai iss ghar mein ( glancing to Shiva)  Arrey yeh Jungli meri beti ko dhoka dega aur mein meri phool si bacchi ko  uski sazaa bhogne dungi??" Prafulla acted in a dramatic way.


Everyone were confused with Prafulla's nonsense "Kya bol rahi hai Maami, akkal kya bech ke aayi hai, naa subah subah bhaang chadhake aayi hai?" Shiva asked with a fierce angry tone. But Maami just glared at him . She turned to Raavi & saw her taking care of the baby.

 

"Ayye dobi, tere mein sachme akkal wakkal hai ki nahi! Arrey isske bacche ko tu kyun sambhal rahi hai?" Raavi rolled her eyes in confusion and asked "Aap baaton ko imarti ki tarah gol gol ghumana band karo aur saaf saaf batao, subah subah yeh tamasha kyun kar rahi ho, aur to aur aapko dikh nahi raha hai ki 'Meri bacchi' kitni dar gyi hai" Prafulla was about to yell again but stopped hearing . "Kya bola Tune?? 'meri bacchi' ikle, yeh jo hai, teri bacchi??"


Not only Prafulla but the Pandya fam too were stunned by Raavi's words. 


"Haa toh haina, Socha tha , Puchki ko uski naani se...ek minute par aap to Shiva ki maami  bhi hona toh , double Rishta hogya " Raavi pouted thinking that & Krish intervened "Arrey Aapke baby ki toh Maami , Naani aur Daadi maami dono hogi."


Raavi smiled hearing that and continued "sahi kaha krish. Haa toh Socha tha ki aapko iss Brand new member se jald milwaaungi. iske NAANI MAAMI se, Pann aapne Puchki ke saamne apna first impression hi bigaar diya" Raavi frowned and continued to sway Puchki .


Prafulla hold her head "Yeh, ayye, Mereko chakkar aa raha hai, tera baccha, mei Naani Maami, Ayye bhai mereko toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai" & Prafulla fainted finally. 


"Lag gayi Lanka, ab isko manao" . Shiva muttered under his breath.  Whole family looked to ShiVi, expecting for answer, and Shiva went, where Raavi was standing with Puchki and smiled nervously... "haha.. woh Pehle yeh Puchki ki Naani Maami ko Manale, fir aap sab ko bhi Batate hai"  Raavi muttered "Aur manate bhi hai".  


While Puchki was laughing & giggling watching Maami lying unconscious .


*** 

Ik though Puchki, Puchku i.e Azaan nikla but nevermind. Mere liye toh Puchki always Puchki hi rahegi💖😍🧿. Another shot in diaries. 

Edited by Shru_thebaadal - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Lovely update Shru❤️

Enjoyed reading it

Absolutely loving this side of Shiva. I have always imagined that Shiva would be the rough and khadoos gunda boy for the world but when it comes to his Raavi and Puchki he will be the Cutest Softie Pandya. Shiva and Raavi both missed out on their childhood, Raavi because she had lost her parents at such a young age and had to listen to society's taunts and Shiva because of his decision of quitting college. I hope this child will bring back the child in them, the innocence, the masti. 

Looking forward to the next update❤️

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This was adorable. ❤️

Shiva is so totally confused about Mami's accusations. And then Puchki's reactions to Shiva-Mami's fights. Aur phir aayi Raavi, claiming her bacchi. Mami ko to behest hona hi tha. 😆

But why did Raavi say 'her' bacchi? Is it because she and Shiva are taking care of the baby?

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TThis was hilarious. Never thought of what Maami reaction would be, but this is exactly what she'd do. Lol Shiva cheating on her phool so bacchi and then fainting😂😂.

Nani and Maami...openly claiming her as theirs. ❤️❤️

P.s. I couldn't help but visualize Dora's reaction at this. Maybe it's karma and this is what she gets for stealing a baby last time.

Can't wait for the next installment where you include my Khayali pulav! Love these! ❤️

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Originally posted by: Butterflybot

Lovely update Shru❤️

Enjoyed reading it

Absolutely loving this side of Shiva. I have always imagined that Shiva would be the rough and khadoos gunda boy for the world but when it comes to his Raavi and Puchki he will be the Cutest Softie Pandya. Shiva and Raavi both missed out on their childhood, Raavi because she had lost her parents at such a young age and had to listen to society's taunts and Shiva because of his decision of quitting college. I hope this child will bring back the child in them, the innocence, the masti. 

Looking forward to the next update❤️


Aww Anuwa, yk how much I love and adore your beautiful comments on my posts. Everything you said I'm sure is felt by all the fans of ShiVi in one way or the other.❤️


Baadal lobs you *smoosh* 

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This was adorable. ❤️

Shiva is so totally confused about Mami's accusations. And then Puchki's reactions to Shiva-Mami's fights. Aur phir aayi Raavi, claiming her bacchi. Mami ko to behest hona hi tha. 😆

But why did Raavi say 'her' bacchi? Is it because she and Shiva are taking care of the baby?


Maami toh maami che. Kuch bhi ulta seedha sochti hai🤣


@/Boldred : the reason of Raavi claiming Puchki as her is clear in the first drabble. Shiva & Raavi both wants to handle each & every responsibility of Puchki as their own kid. Though they don't claim her legally but they want to be her parents. Maybe the next part clears ur confusion, Just like the Pandya's .

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TThis was hilarious. Never thought of what Maami reaction would be, but this is exactly what she'd do. Lol Shiva cheating on her phool so bacchi and then fainting😂😂.

Nani and Maami...openly claiming her as theirs. ❤️❤️

P.s. I couldn't help but visualize Dora's reaction at this. Maybe it's karma and this is what she gets for stealing a baby last time.

Can't wait for the next installment where you include my Khayali pulav! Love these! ❤️


I was just randomly thinking that WHAT IF MAAMI GETS TO KNOW ABOUT THIS!! She is such a grey comic character & she would exactly do something like this🤣.


Aaahhhhh. I'm a devil when it comes to Mahaan Bhabhi Dora😈 We know na Karma hits hard, so it will do the same with Dora mahaan also... You'll get to see in the next update


Your khayali pulaav was so awesome that I just scribbled every type of imagination I want. Infact thanks ML coz of You I have written a way long drabble.❤️

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Puchki ka Locket




The following OS (since It's that long to be called a drabble) , was actually a Prompt idea By ML i.e. @Mountains_Lakes . I'm honestly thankful to your Khayali Pulaav'ssmiley27



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BACKGROUND: Since the Series revolves around ShiVi & Puchki so you won't find similarities in this like the show. Moreover in my series everyone knows about Raavi's SM Kaands & also about her earning money. 

Same as the show Dhara & Rishita are against Raavi, but I won't be giving much importance to them. :) Also here everyone knows that Raavi does Promo shoots, so no tension & kaands in that case.


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"Ayyye Markundi, Yeh tune mere aadarsh bete ko bhi apna petticoat chaap toh bana hi diya hai, ab iss nanhi si bacchi ki zimmedari li hai toh ache se sambhaalna." Suman glared at the duo & especially pointed towards Raavi. "waise bhi Mahasaas ki toh koi izzat hi nahi hai, Kisine batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha tha, iske Mummy-Daddy khelne se pehle" Suman taunted Both Shiva & Raavi, And the couple bowed down their head. Raavi tugged Shiva's elbows to let him diffuse the 'Mahasaas bomb' while Shiva was himself afraid of the wrath of his mother.


..


After the truth of Shiva & Raavi's decision to handle Puchki as their own child, Dhara was fuming. Even Rishita disagreed with Shiva & Raavi's decision of adopting or fostering the child in future. 


She stated though the child's mother gave the responsibility to the Pandya fam, but that doesn't change the fact that The baby's mother is still alive. Meanwhile Dhara was in her own world stating, that 'Raavi is naive & is incapable of handling a new born baby. Also Shiva can never take such a big responsibility as he is still a kid'. This statement hurt Raavi to the core, But Shiva retaliated.


He stated that 'even Dhara is not a master in handling babies. Moreover, they are just looking after the baby accepting the baby as their own, they aren't legally claiming her as their own unlike Dhara did previously.' 


Shiva held Raavi's hand and stated, That 'As long as they could, they wouldn't let Puchki feel to be abandoned.'


 Raavi had unshed tears on the brim of her lashes. She knew how it feel to be alone in this huge world, without someone whom you could claim as your own. She knew how it feels to be abandoned, She knew the pain of Little Puchki & this gave the answer to Raavi for her Motherly instincts for the little Baby .


So Raavi too agreed to Shiva's facts & said 'they want to take the best care of the baby, as moreover Rishita herself has lots of responsibilities & honestly no one in the house believes that Dhara could handle a new born',  glancing towards Gautam.


 Dhara was now radiating all the anger and fury through her eyes. Shiva further said that 'Even Dev isn't that responsible till now, but still everyone is happy for Dev & Rishita so Why not him & Raavi!?'


Shiva was hurt .Extremely hurt by the fact that his family thinks him so incapable that he couldn't look after his wife & a baby. It wasn't only about Puchki , But about them too.


 He also wants his little happy family. But Dhara's words broke him, which was masked by his anger & Suman could easily read the pain of Shiva. She glanced at Raavi and saw she was silent. Dhara was angrily glaring Both Shiva & Raavi , she came to take Puchki from Raavi, But before anything could escalate Suman came for the final verdict.


According to Suman's decision, 'it wasn't a bad idea if Shiva & Raavi so selflessly wants to take the responsibilties of the child. Moreover in distant future she needs 'Her pote & potiyon ki line' , for which they need training & Puchki will be like an elder sister for the other kids of Pandya Niwas. Moreover regarding the legal procedures, & adoption/fostering etc. for that Suman wanted to talk to ShiVi in alone.


Dev, Gautam & Krish whole heartedly Supported ShiVi , while Rishita was still confused whether to support or not. Dhara felt betrayed & anger surged through her. To which Suman added ghee stating 'it would be better if Dhara concentrates on taking care of her sons, as Dhara herself claims to be the mother of her kids, so why need more... moreover even Dhara is getting old and it's better that the new generation takes the responsibility.'


Dhara was tongue tied with Suman's one statement & even her 'all time petticoat chaap husband' wasn't supporting her. She glared at Raavi who was swaying Puchki & went upstairs to her room.


Suman on the other hand was extremely upset with the fact that her Beta & Bahu are hiding such important things from her, & thus the taunt session got a free pass, From that afternoon.


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"Maa, woh toh jaaye hum??" Shiva asked stuttering, smiling sheepishly , inwardly chanting that his mother doesn't hit him, as her taunts are enough for him. 


"Ab naa bolungi tab bhi, yeh Markundi ko le hi jaayega na, Toh jaa, Petticoat chaap #3" Suman gave back with her typical attitude , adjusting her Pallu & handling Puchki to Raavi. Raavi very carefully took Puchki from Suman, and lulled sleeping Puchki. She with the help of Shiva carried Puchki in the carrier bag & Then Both Shiva & Raavi left for the Restaurant.


Suman watched the trio & smiled a little but then frowned, "Mujhe toh dar tha ki kahi Bhagodi ki Beti ko Iss bacchi se lagaav na ho jaaye, Pann Markundi aur Siva ko dekh ke ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai" 


Suman joined her hands and wheeled her chair to the Shiv-Gauri Ganesha idol, "Hayye Baba Somnath.. Mere dono bacche bahut bhole hai, inn dono ne apni zindagi mein bahut dukh jhele hai. Ab Puchki ke aane se inki zindagi mein ek nayi khushi aayi hai, AIse hi unn khushiyon ko banaaye rakhna, Dhyaan Raakh jo,"  


Suman bowed down to the idol of Bholenaath & thought in her mind, "Dhara ko bhi sochne samajhne ki shakti dena ki mein kyun nahi chahti usse iss bacchi se lagaav ho," Suman sighed and wheeled back to her room.


..


Shiva was driving the bike in a minimal speed & Raavi placed her one hand on his shoulders, while patted Puchki's back with the other one. While passing through the busy lanes everyone known unknown for once was glancing them. Some were amused some smiled to little Puchki. 


Shiva was watching the expressions of Raavi to the passer by. She was glowing. Her natural radiance always forms a sweet smile on his lips & to top that , her holding Puchki was like something far beyond his dream. 


He always imagined of a family. Though others would have thought that 'Shiva toh Brahmachari rahega' but no! Even he wished for a simple and beautiful family.

 

Dhara's words hurt him & Raavi to the core that day. Raavi broke down after coming to their room, only by the thought of losing Puchki!!. She is attached, deeply attached to that little ball of Sunshine. Even he is. But, his mind always gets struck to Dhara's words. Are they really incompatible for a baby? He was busy in his thoughts when he missed a speed breaker & they almost jerked high up.


Puchki started crying loudly and even Raavi was tensed, "Shiva, kya hai, dhyaan kaha hai? tu theek haina???"  Shiva stopped the bike and got down. He saw Puchki crying & that made his heart sink. 


Raavi swayed, lulled Puchki but no use "Naa Babu, please sorry, galti hogyi, mat rou aap, Shh Shh"  Raavi hummed softly & fanned Puchki's forehead to make her comfortable. But Puchki was crying her lungs out. 


"Shiva, Kya hua yeh Chupp kyun nahi ho rahi hai, Isse chot toh nahi lag gyi kahi" Raavi asked with a sad face. 


Again because of him , The shine of Raavi was gone. His little Puchki is crying, 'couldn't he be more careful'. "Bike chod Raavi, Auto se chale jaate hai safety ke liye, Mein nahi chahta mere laaparwaahi..." But she was stopped By Raavi. "Shiva isme laaparwaahi ki koi baat nahi hai, Ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi, Aur waise bhi.. Ab zyaada dur nahi hai, chal paidal chalte hai" Shiva nodded and they started walking.


It was just a matter of few minutes, They were walking on the busy road. Even Puchki by now automatically stopped crying & was sucking Raavi's mangalsutra. Raavi was busy in adoring the new shops while Shiva was watching the activities of Puchki & smiling. "iske liye ek chain khareedni paregi, warna yeh mera locket aur Raavi ka mangalsutra khaa jaayegi ek din." Shiva chuckled at his own statement. 


Just then he saw a small street shop of pendants & his eyes fall on a beautiful small trident pendant with 'S' written over it. He almost walked to the shop but Raavi stopped "Kaha jaa raha hai tu?? " Raavi asked him being confused. Puchki too turned and looked up to Shiva's side. 


Shiva came to Raavi and asked , "Ek minute de Puchki ko," Raavi handed Puchki to him. "Bas ek minute ruk, fir tu khud dekhna" Shiva said smiling widely being excited. "Isse kya hua?, aajkal mere waale Bhootnath ko khatarnak mood swings ho rahe hai. Abhi ghar se nikalne se pehle theek tha, fir udaas ho gya ab ekdum se chehekne lag gya." Raavi chuckled at that.


After 2 minutes Shiva came along with Puchki who was smiling ear to ear as if she got a treasure. She was giggling and swaying on Shiva's arms, Gyrating her whole body to show her excitement and happiness. Cooing loudly and laughing, she kissed Shiva with a wet kiss on his cheek. First Shiva made a face and glared at Puchki, and Even Puchki was scared as if thinking 'Baapu why so Gussa now :( '. She was almost on the verge of tears by Shiva's glare but Shiva immediately kissed her on her forehead and pecked her both cheeks. 


"Iske bhi aankhon ka nal khul jaata hai phataak se". Shiva laughed at that. Raavi was amused to see the affair. "Ab bolega bhi, yeh teri chatanki tujhpe itna pyaar kyu luta rahi hai?" Raavi awed at the father daughter duo. She always get to know and witness a new part of Shiva whenever he is with Puchki. He is a sweetheart for her.


"Aap hi batao iss chipkali ko, Itna khush kyu ho aap, hmmm" Raavi pouted with the mention of chipkali but the next moment she was all wide eyed to see Puchki sucking a trident pendant. 


"Shiva tune apna Locket de diya??" Raavi asked almost surprised coz as much as she knows Shiva isn't the one to part with his locket, But him giving the locket to someone was a big thing. She carefully saw the locket but found it small and different. Also Shiva had his locket with him. 


"Mera nahi hai Gadhedi," He tried to remove the locket from Puchki's mouth "Woh uss din jab vaccination ke liye gaye the, tab isse apna locket diya tha, shaant hogyi thi, Aur aaj jab fir tera mangalsutra chuste dekha toh laga ki , iske liye bhi ek le lun warna pata chala ki..." Raavi smiled widely and looked here & there and immediately pecked him on the cheeks, and then Puchki. Shiva's stopped midway & his heart skipped a beat also he was all red due to blushing.


Raavi laughed and started to walk fast . Shiva on the other hand regained from the sweet shock & followed her "Ayye Chipkali, kahinki ruk... Meri izzat ka toh..." 


While Puchki was all laughing & chirping watching their nok-jhok, sucking her brand new Pendant & being in the protective arms of Shiva, her protector. 


***


I never ever want my cute ball of Chotu sa sunshine to be fostered by Bhabhi Maa & petticoat chaap #1🥲. So here is a marham patti for all. Mere liye toh jo hai woh bas ShiVi hai☺️😌.

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Hey!


Thanks for the dedication, but not needed. I am loving this so much! ❤️


Literally, dream come true. Like my smile just kept growing bigger and bigger. And ngl, I love to hate Dora probably just as much as I love Shivi. So I loved it when Suman and Shiva gave it back to her. The cherry on the cake was Shiva acknowledging that his Bhabhi is wrong and kind of defended himself.


Considering how deeply he's connected to her/more like biwitched by her Bhabhi spell, he's bound to feel disappointed with what she said, and it did bother him. Hopefully, when time comes he'll also defend himself and even Raavi fiercely against Dora. But this was ❤️❤️ nonetheless.


Also, my Shivi+Puchki scene!! I loved every bit of it. The little family outing and Shiva buying her a locket similar to that of Shiva & S on it as well. And Puchki's nautanki like her momma. 


Also, I didn't realize how much I like the line/dialogue from Suman about the two playing mummy daddy with Puchki. It gives sookoon in a way. Weird, I know, but can't really explain it.


P.s. Shiva being ref.ed as Baapu has a special place in my heart!

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So beautiful and cute❤️