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ShiVixPuchki Diaries - (DRABBLE SERIES) New Update on Page 8 (1/10/22)

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Since with the new entry of Puchki , My heart was doing somersaults with Baby fever so gave my first ever try to it. Don't throw joota & chappals on me , if it didn't match your expectations. (also a redemption for Tera Ehsaas Hi Kaafi Hai😃)


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Shopping with Puchki


"Shiva, Sunna... Rishita ko meine bola, pann woh apne baby keliye khareeden hue samaan nhi de rahi hai, ek kaam kar, Jaake Baby ke liye le aa samaan...." Raavi asked Shiva with expectant eyes, She handed Shiva a list of all the baby products which she made, under the strict observation Of Mahasaas, The Suman Pandya .


Shiva took the list & his eyes widened. "Itna saara samaan, abbey Baccha hai ki dinosaur, itne saare samaan ki kya zarurat??" Shiva asked almost horrified with the length of the items and after reading the names of the product he gulped "Arrey, aaj tak jin samaan ka naam hi nahi sunna hai, Usse khareed ke kaise launga!, Kisi bhi tarah yeh kaam chipkali pe chipka dena parega. warna Maa tere izzat ka falooda shake banake pee jayegei"


"Aisi baat hai toh theek hai, mein hi jaati hun, Tu sambhaal Baby ko" Raavi handed Shiva the baby & was about to go, but baby held Raavi's hair in her palm causing Raavi to hiss in pain. Shiva laughed at the antics "Arrey, waah, tune toh Chipkali, ki poonch, mera matlab hai uske baal hi kheench diye, sahi hai... Tuna abse meri team mein" Shiva cooed at the baby, swinging her but the baby was in tears & was about to yell & cry. Raavi took the baby, and swayed her around. The baby gave the brightest tootheless smile.


"Aee Markundi, rehne de.... Yeh jo meine 4 4 bete janne haina, sab ek number ke ujless che.. Tu bacche ko leke chali jaa dukaan, Yeh bhagodi ki beti ke saath nahi chodungi chote se bacche ko, aur Patrani toh gyi baahar. Jaa leke chali jaa" Raavi eyes widened while Shiva silently thanked Somnath to save him from the toughest job 'Baby Sitting'.


"Aur tu.. " Suman pointed towards Shiva " jaa.. Dukaan jaa" Shiva happily came to Suman took her blessings, While Raavi glared at Shiva.. and Shiva gave the tongue expression & ran towards the exit.


...


As Planned Raavi was wandering with Baby in her arms, swaying her around. The baby was sticking to Raavi , and cooed in delight whenever people come & gave her a beautiful smile. "Kaise dekh rahe hai sab isse, Nazar na lag jaaye meri Puchki ko" Raavi suddenly beamed and said "arrey waah Raavi, puchki, Kya naam socha hai tune.. " Raavi smudged some Kohl from her eyes & gave a small teeka behind the ear of the baby. "Ab perfect hai."


The baby buried her face on Raavi's chest because of the discomfort from the intensity of heat & light from the sun. Raavi patted the Baby's back & wiped away the little sweat around her forehead. She from her mouth fanned The baby and the baby with her 'Marble black orbs' watched Raavi fondly . Suddenly the baby smiled and kept one of her hands on Raavi's upper mounds and one on Raavi's shoulders and cooed at her.


By these small gesture of the baby, a sudden motherly instinct gripped Raavi. She felt ecstatic by the untold emotions surging through her. She very protectively cocooned the baby around her arms and swayed her gently. "Alle Mela baccha" Raavi happily walked to the shops holding Puchki protectively.


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"Arrey, Sneha, tu toh bolti thi tu ek zamaane mein Raavi ki bestie thi, itni bari baat Raavi ne tujhe nahi batayi?" Manushi asked Sneha who was currently busy eating Pani puri.. "Bhestt.. frand.. thi..ab (while chewing golgappa) ab..nohi haa"


Manushi waited for Sneha to finish her Pani Puri treat and asked "hogya ab bol" , Sneha rolled her eyes & said.. "Arrey, I meant thi Best friend... Humari dosti toh kabka toot gyi." Sneha made a sulked face. "Tab bhi, mera toh samajh aata hai mumbai se abhi aayi hun, But you were here na" Sneha nodded her head & was gulping water


"fir bhi tujhe Raavi ke pregnancy & baby ke baare mein Pata nahi chala" . Sneha who was gulping her water almost spilled & chocked herself. Manushi Patted her & made her sit "Whatt?? baby, baccha, Raavi, maa". Sneha asked almost horrified . Manushi gave a nod & smiled.. "chalna, Raavi yahi market mein hai, meine usse dekha tha, she was looking so cute with the baby, mujhe dekhna hai, waise bhi I planned to meet Raavi, anyways abhi hi mil lun"


Before Sneha could recover from the shock of Raavi becoming mother all of a sudden. Manushi almost pulled her to the shop where she saw Raavi , Sneha's eyes widened with horror as she watched a new born Baby in Raavi's arm, and Raavi buying Napkins & diapers. "Rishita Ko toh aaj Subah hi dekha tha, uska toh abhi bhi baby bump hai, Dhara Bhabhi toh pregnant hi nahi ho sakti!! That means, Raavi & Shiva ka baby!!" Sneha almost hyperventilated and acted fainting.


Meanwhile , Over excited Manushi reached to Raavi & gave a pat on her back. Raavi turned around & found Manushi, almost after 3 years. "Manushi, tu??" Raavi with one hand hugged Her. "Meeting you after so long is such a bliss, I mean, See, tu life mein kitni aage badh gyi & kitni khush hai. " Manushi was continuously awing at the baby with Puppy soft eyes.


"Naam kya rakha hai iska?" Manushi asked with her almost all concentration on Puchki. "Waise toh isse mein Puchki bulati hun Pan..." Manushi awed in response & kissed the baby's cheeks. "Awwwieee, Puchki" She pinched her cheeks softly, But baby frowned & clinged tightly to Raavi, with a cranky face, "Alle, mela,, baccha, kya hua... Kuch nhi, kuch nhi.. shh.." Sneha who was standing at a distant place was with opened mouth, watching the whole scenerio.


Raavi took her items & started chatting with Manushi, while Sneha sulked. "The baby, ditto rang tera chadha hai uspe, Itna gora, Aww" Raavi smiled and said "Gori hai, Ladki hai" Manushi hummed in response & said "Then toh aur bhi achaa, Iske honth ekdum teri tarah Gulabi, Pann iski Naak.. woh Pakka Jiju jaisi hai, Aur Iski aanhein ekdum Kannchon jaisi , kaali, jiju ki bhi aisi hi haina..." Raavi was damn confused with the comparision but was surprised too by the so many common factors they both share with the baby.


"Waah, Manu, meine toh itna notice hi nahi kiya, jitna tune kar liya" Raavi & Manushi with Sneha behind them were walking & talking. Manushi flipped her hair & said "I'm like that, mujhe sab pata hota hai, school time mein bhi mein hi thi jo bolti thi, tere aur Shiva mein chemistry hai, uske saath try karle ... pan nhi, tab mein bahut buri thi, aaj dekha, ussi Shiva ke saath tu Life mei khush bhi hai, aur tum dono ki zindagi ko chamkaane wala bhi hai." Raavi became more confused with Manushi's talks but she shrugged it off anyway.


"Chal ek picture click karni hai, Mein tujhe tag karungi, tere new account mein. " Raavi chirpped at that & they both clicked some pictures, Raavi asked Sneha to come for a picture, But Sneha was the most confused soul , who was busy in decoding the time


"Raavi ki shaadi , Dusri waali March mein hui, agar tabhi Raavi pregnant hoti toh zyaada se zyaada 4-5 mahine hone the, Itna bara Baccha kaise?" After some thinking Sneha's eyes widened "Iska Matlab Raavi, pehle se pregnant thi, jab uske aur Shiva ka divorce chal rha tha... Raavi ne itni jaldi apni Shaadi uss Jungli se consumate kar liya tha" Sneha ewwed at that thought and at that moment Manushi & Raavi clicked a good amount of selfies with the star of every picture 'Puchki'.


Sneha came out of her thoughts & turned Raavi.. "Tu Pregnant kab hui??? Aur yeh itna bara baccha, I mean, tere aur uss Jungli Shiva ka baby, waise dikhne mein toh cute hai, Yakeen nahi hota ki yeh uss jungli ka ansh hai. Teri qualities aayi hai isme" Raavi was about to clarify & even understood why Manushi was so excited but the next venom Sneha uttered & Raavi was shattered. Manushi too frowned at those words.


"Sneha!!!! (in a loud voice) Khabardaar jo 'mere Bacche' ke khilaaf ek shabd bhi bola toh, Bhul jaungi ki tu kabhi dost thi meri, Kya kaha tune, Yeh Shiva ka ansh Nahi ho sakta, pehli baat toh tu mere Shiva ko jungli bulana band karde, Aur dusri, Mein 'mere bacche' ke khilaaf ek shabd nahi sunungi!! "Raavi had tears in her eyes & watching Raavi like that Puchki too sulked & started crying. "Naa bacche, ro mat, naa naa" Raavi swayed her in her arms, continuously rubbing her back, to calm her down , and the baby reached to wipe Raavi's tears. Raavi's heart pondered for that gesture & she planted multiple kisses on Puchki's face.


Manushi pulled Sneha & left the place before any thing major happens. Raavi too shopped for the remaining items & left for Pandya Niwas. Puchki was already in a deep slumber , sucking her right thumb & keeping her hands on Raavi's mounds. As soon as Raavi entered Dhara went to snatch Puchki, But before Suman could stop her , Raavi took Puchki with her in her room keeping the items on the sofa table.


...


"Yeh chipkali ka phuntru ek din sabko leke Doobega," Shiva was now agitated with the multiple calls he was getting from the evening.. Also the Dm's in his almost inactive insta account. Shiva almost reached Pandya Niwas ' entry gate when a boy of Shiva's age stopped him , Shiva turned and grinned in anger watching his old coaching mate who mocked him during his coaching days. " Waise maan naa parega aapko," he tried hard to stop the laughter but continued , "Kuch din pehle khud baccho ke saath padh rahe the, ab kya? Apne bacche ke saath bhi padhenge,," The Lad laughed hard & Shiva was a snap away to punch & smash his face. "Sahi hai waise, congratulations, Papa bann ne ke liye" The lad laughed more hard , Shiva was about to punch but the lad ran away on time. "Chamkadar kahinka."


Shiva entered the house & called for Raavi, but she didn't came. So he washed his hands & straight went to his room. Shiva was in mood to finally end the chapter of Raavi's 6 inch ka dabba, but the sight he saw made him all heart eyes.


Raavi laying her head on the bedpost with closed eyes & Little Puchki was cooing in her arms, sucking Raavi's hair & burying her head deep in Raavi's Breast seeking warmth. He silently sat on the bed & for the very first time instead of running away from Little baby, he himself carried her in his arms, when Puchki turned around him with open arms in expectance to be carried by Him.


Shiva very gently took her in his arms & She cooed in response clutching his trident pendant. Shiva looked straight to her eyes & found her Marble jet black eyes to be cranky & wet. "Bhook lagi hai tujhe??" The baby started sucking her thumb in response & Shiva smiled at her antics. He took her in his arms, almost covering her entire body in his arm frame. He saw Rishita in the kitchen and asked her to warm milk for Puchki. Rishita did so. She even offered help to Shiva to make her drink, But Shiva refused & told Rishita to take rest & took Baby back to the room.


By that time Raavi was awake as well as frightened on not finding Puchki with her. She was panickly searching the entire room. Just as she was about to search in hall. She collided with Shiva causing Puchki to almost get a headbump , But both Shiva & Raavi place their palms on her head , giving cushion & protecting her. Raavi took Baby from Shiva, and gave kisses to her forehead murmuring sorry.


She took bottle from Shiva's hand & fed Puchki. FInaly Puchki slept feeling contend & satisfied . Raavi made Baby comfortable on the bed and made her sleep, with pillow fort around her.


She turned to Shiva & asked him "Tu kab aaya?? Ruk , tujhe shaam ke snacks laake deti hun" Raavi was about to go but Shiva stopped her by holding her wrist. "Tune Apne 6 inch ke phuntru mein , yeh kyun diya ki yeh bacchi humari hai?" Raavi's eyes widened and realisation struck her. She immediately took her phone & looked at the post which Manushi collabed her in with caption .


"A pic with Somnath ki sabse Sundar ladki & uski ladki.... #LikeMotherLikeDaughter " . She further the read the comments on her collabed post & almost facepalmed with the numerous 'OMG💓' & 'congratualtions Raavi ji✨❤️', with even some comments like 'Meine Woh sink waale live mein hi guess kar liya tha👀, yeh aapki aur Shiva ki baby hai'😁, She even saw many people tagged Shiva & congratulated him too by mentioning him.


Shiva gave a brow raised expression & Raavi explained him about the shopping Mishap , & kaand that took place.


"Pata hai Shiva, uss Sneha ne iss Nanhi si Jaan ko, kya kuch nahi kaha, tera naam leke!!, Mein toh sab sach bataane waali thi, Pan fir mujhe bhi Gussa aagya, aur meine keh Diya ki..." Shiva looked at her with expectant eyes & repeated "Ki" , Raavi bit her lower lips & blushed a little hiding her smile & said "Ki, Puchki humari beti hai...Taaki uss chudail ka muh band kar sakun!" Shiva's lips curved upwards at her reasoning & he smirked a little, but then spmething struck him & he asked "Ab yeh Puchki kaun hai??" Raavi chirped & replied "Yeh, jo chotti si hai, pyaari si, Puchki" Shiva & Raavi both smiled at her sleeping form, & at the same time kissed her forehead, causing the baby to smile in sleep.


The baby in sleep held Shiva's little finger from her Palm & Shiva smiled looking at that & kissed her palms. They both in their respective place laid along with Puchki.


"Chal, yeh bhi theek hai..." Shiva said to Raavi holding her palms , drawing circles & Raavi too clasped his veiny hands. "Toh yeh final Humari beti?" Raavi beamed in happiness & excitement & Shiva muttered "Lag gyi Lanka". Raavi slept & Shiva smiled looking at the two of the girls with heart eyes.

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INDEX OF DIARIES :

Shopping with Puchki : PG - 1 

Early Morning Nautanki : PG - 2

Vaccination : PG - 4 

Naani Maami, Naani Maami, Maan Jao : PG - 5

Puchki ka Locket : PG - 6

Restaurant Siyaapa : PG - 7

Welcome Chutki : PG - 8

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Loved it. It was so cute! ❤️

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Oh my god! This is Soo cute!!

I almost wished that Shivi would go shopping together, but if that happened, Raavi wouldn't have had a chance to claim Puchki as their daughter. And that soft scene at the end of Mummy/Papa and puchki! It had my heart!


Needless to say, I loved it!! We need part 2 for this. Any idea of turning this into something longer?


If you're open to it, here's an idea--


Like Shivi have considered her as their daughter, and we can get more such scenes with the two getting more attached to her. Suman keeps Dhara away. Both Shivi start reading about how to take care of the baby, and once when Dhara sneaks in to take care of the baby, she does something incorrectly. Raavi's maternal instincts kick in and she scolds Dhara (in fear of baby and is done unintentionally). Dhara thinks she's right and yells at Raavi for being Dobi. But Suman gives her reality check. Raavi also, respectfully, gives her back saying that "Maana ki main apse choti hoon, par bacche sambhalne main dono ka experience nahi hai."  And she has been reading to take care of the baby, so she knows what she's doing."


And then they learn that baby's mother doesn't survive. (No Krish angle). Family considers to give the baby up for adoption, unbeknownst to Shivi. Dhara wants to adopt, but Shiva knows Raavi's too attached to Puchki (as well as him). The conflict for Shiva b/w Bhabhi and Raavi. Raavi voices her desire to keep the Puchki as well, but as Shivi's daughter. Suman sides with Raavi seeing her love. Dhara tried to manipulate Shiva, but Shiva makes objective decision based on how well Raavi took care of the baby vs the mistakes Dora made and tells her that she may have raised them, but she doesn't really know how to take care of a young baby! And gives examples of how the baby could have choked while she fell asleep feeding, not putting on diaper after the bath, trying to feed Puchki hot Khichadi, etc.), and giving examples of how Raavi managed to take care of the baby+ side earnings through phontru+ housework. And Puchki calling Raavi as Ma seals the deal! You can also show the adoption process/emotions attached to that) and finally Puchki being ShiVi daughter officially!


Sorry for my khyali pulav on your thread! But this was soo awwdorable, and I simply couldn't stop thinking ahead.


Please do consider my request!  

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Loved it. It was so cute! ❤️


Thank you so much ❤️

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Thank You. so much for always supporting my works.❤️

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Oh my god! This is Soo cute!!

I almost wished that Shivi would go shopping together, but if that happened, Raavi wouldn't have had a chance to claim Puchki as their daughter. And that soft scene at the end of Mummy/Papa and puchki! It had my heart!


Needless to say, I loved it!! We need part 2 for this. Any idea of turning this into something longer?


If you're open to it, here's an idea--


Like Shivi have considered her as their daughter, and we can get more such scenes with the two getting more attached to her. Suman keeps Dhara away. Both Shivi start reading about how to take care of the baby, and once when Dhara sneaks in to take care of the baby, she does something incorrectly. Raavi's maternal instincts kick in and she scolds Dhara (in fear of baby and is done unintentionally). Dhara thinks she's right and yells at Raavi for being Dobi. But Suman gives her reality check. Raavi also, respectfully, gives her back saying that "Maana ki main apse choti hoon, par bacche sambhalne main dono ka experience nahi hai."  And she has been reading to take care of the baby, so she knows what she's doing."


And then they learn that baby's mother doesn't survive. (No Krish angle). Family considers to give the baby up for adoption, unbeknownst to Shivi. Dhara wants to adopt, but Shiva knows Raavi's too attached to Puchki (as well as him). The conflict for Shiva b/w Bhabhi and Raavi. Raavi voices her desire to keep the Puchki as well, but as Shivi's daughter. Suman sides with Raavi seeing her love. Dhara tried to manipulate Shiva, but Shiva makes objective decision based on how well Raavi took care of the baby vs the mistakes Dora made and tells her that she may have raised them, but she doesn't really know how to take care of a young baby! And gives examples of how the baby could have choked while she fell asleep feeding, not putting on diaper after the bath, trying to feed Puchki hot Khichadi, etc.), and giving examples of how Raavi managed to take care of the baby+ side earnings through phontru+ housework. And Puchki calling Raavi as Ma seals the deal! You can also show the adoption process/emotions attached to that) and finally Puchki being ShiVi daughter officially!


Sorry for my khyali pulav on your thread! But this was soo awwdorable, and I simply couldn't stop thinking ahead.


Please do consider my request!  



Hey ML, first of all Thank you so so much for considering & liking my amateur skills of writing❤️. Regarding Part 2 & also your idea.... I really want to say that I can't do a commitment of a series fiction.. Since I have a lot of work pressure. 


And yeah The idea, honestly after reading your comment I was shocked. I always thought that ever I have to make it a Fs or FF I will use this kind of ideas, where ShiVi will adopt Puchki & you literally wrote it. Well... 


But then also the same issue , I don't want to keep my work in abandonment, already my 2 works in IF are incomplete.🤪 


So I want to ask you, progressing this drabble series step by step with each one with an end, so that it seems like the story ends in one drabble only. I'm thinking to show the bond of ShiVi with Puchki. And if I get the time to show the Adoption & other things part, I'll discuss it with you & then could make it a conclusional fiction where Puchki is the legal daughter of ShiVi. 


But till then, as I can't promise of a fiction I want to stick to short drabbles of Puchki with ShiVi. I hope you won't mind. Because if I promise of a conclusive fiction, IK time issue will bind me to keep on hold which will be rude. 


Pls do consider my situation.😭.

Also I loved your Khayali Pulaav so Much... Aise hi Khayali Pulaav banate rehna Please❤️😳.


Your comment & compliment was the best one I ever got for my works. Thanks a lot <3

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Early Morning Nautanki


"Abbbey Ab kya hua??" Shiva woke up from his sleep & looked up to the swing where Little Puchki was sleeping , But at the moment currently crying. "Hmm.. Shiva, Puchki uth gyi..(yawning)" Raavi tried to get up But Shiva made her lay down again by gently pushing her.


"Rukkk, Tujhe zukhaam hua haina, so chup chaap, mein dekhta hun" Raavi tried to stop him & get up , but one glare & Raavi faked sleeping, but peeped with one eye open what he was doing "Viral fever bhi galat time pe hona tha, Naa puchki ke Paas jaa paa Rahi hun, Naa usse Bed pe sula paa rahi hun" Raavi pouted while thinking.


Two days ago, Raavi caught viral fever. Suman & other members were tensed as of now, Raavi couldn't take care of a small baby in fever then they have to ultimately give the responsibility to Dhara, As Rishita's due date is close and they can't burden her with a baby's full time responsibility .


This frightened Gautam too a very much extent & he in a hurry declared Shiva & other members to take care of Puchki. Suman wasn't convinced as she knows that her 'Bulldozer ki shareer waala Beta' could take care of Store & many big responsibilities, Could lift heavy bories, But when it comes to Baby Sitting , He is a big zero.


Everyone was almost convinced to give the Responsibility of Baby to Dhara. Gautam tried to somehow stop Suman , But as Suman was about to call Dhara, Shiva Declared That 'He will take the responsibility of Little Puchki'. And thus now from two days , Shiva is Busy with his new Job.


"Aaja..." Shiva picked Puchki up & immediately frowned. "Matlab tujhe yeh saare kaand subah subah hi karne hote hai??" Raavi giggled watching her Bhootnath's expression. Shiva turned around & glared at her and Raavi pulled the Duvet on her & acted sleeping.


Here little Puchki was crying her lungs out , Pulling Shiva's hair & scratching his beard. "Arrey meri maa Rukja..." Shiva opened the cupboard with his one hand & took out Diaper from it. He then Gently placed Puchki on his side of the bed & ran to bring cloth, water & wipes. Raavi peeked from her blanket and found Puchki crying a lot.


"Sorry Babu, par kya karun, abhi mujhe fever haina, aapko bhi ho jaayegi... abhi mein aapko nini or cleany nahi kara sakti." Raavi frowned looking at the crying face of Puchki. And Puchki while crawling, to come to Raavi's side misbalanced to the end of the bed and was about to fall down, but Shiva immediately came & saved her. Raavi got up from the bed and immediately went to Shiva's side.


"Sorry, Sorry Shiva meine dekha nahi tha, woh bed ke end pe aagyi thi" Raavi was afraid to watch Little Puchki crying so badly .." Nahi nahi, galti meri thi, bed pe chodke gya tha takiye laga dene chahiye the baaju mein.." Shiva tried to swing & sway her around but the wails of Puchki wasn't stopping. "Shiva, de mujhe, Paanch minute ke liye , chupp kara dun bas.."


Raavi very gently swayed Puchki around, cocooned her in her arms & was humming sweetly to calm her down. Raavi could feel the heartbeats of Little Puchki beating rapidly. She lulled her and paced around the room.. Finally Puchki became calm. Raavi gently laid her down on the bed, discarded her old diaper , this time without tearing it & very gently wiped her bums & cleaned them. She then changed the diapers & then picked her up. "Laa de Mujhe, Mein kardunga baaki ka kaam.." Raavi handed Puchki to Shiva, And Shiva took Puchki to the well side. He mixed warm water with cold water in a small bucket & then with a soft muslin cloth cleaned Puchki's face & legs.


He then went back to his room & made Puchki comfortable in her swing, But as he was about to go, Puchki again started crying.


"Firse nahi..." Shiva muttered under his breath. Raavi internally giggled watching the irritating yet confusing expressions of Shiva. Well she must appreciate him , as in two days, he learnt a lot of things , despite of his disliking. Also while doing that he doesn't fuss much. But she knows when he doesn't understand what the baby wants , he becomes all the same 'Saddu kaddu Pandya'.


"Chipkali,!! khaana, peena, susu, potty sab toh karwaa diya, ab kyun ro rahi hai hai??" Raavi from her duvet peeked up & said, "tu toh mujhse aise puch raha hai jaise mujhe 50 saal ka experience hai bacche sambhaalne ka! mere liye bhi naya haina.."


After a complete silence from both sides & only Puchki's crying sound echoing aroud , Raavi spoke again, "shayad usse jhulle mein neend nahi aa rahi hai. usse yahi sulla de...." Raavi closed her eyes expecting Shiva to react and "Gadhedi, saara kaand toh idhar se hi shuru hua na, agar woh tere saath so sakti, tu uske kaam kar sakti, toh mujhe kya zarurat thi??" Raavi frowned and said "haww!! tera matlab kya hai?? Matlab bacche sambhaalne ka kaam sirf maa kare, baap ka koi kaam nahi hota??" Shiva scratched his nape and pressed his lips and said "Pura bolne degi, Mere bolne ka matlab tha ki, Mujhe kya zaruart thi isse yaha sulane ki, humare saath so jaati na, aise Gadhedi"


Raavi made a 'Oh I got you' expression but then, Puchki's yelling became loud & founding no other option, Shiva picked Puchki & placed her on their bed.


Puchki immediately stopped crying & gave her tootheless smile . "Nautanki, Bilkul tere jaisi hai yeh, apnaa kaam manwaa ne ke liye aansuon ka nal chaalu kar deti hai, " Raavi pouted and pointed at Shiva. "Tu na ab zyaada bola raha hai" And the famous bickering of ShiVi at 4 am morning started.


Puchki on the other hand was looking both of them fondly with her big black marble orbs & clapped her hands in the middle of their argument. ShiVi stopped . They looked at her & then looked each other . They burst in laughter & both laid on their sides of bed "Isse humare jhagde dekhke mazaa ata hai" Shiva laughed "Sahi kaha" Raavi too joined. While Puchki dozed off in a deep slumber watching full entertainment to her hearts content.

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Tagging You ML, And I hope you like this piece 

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Posted: 1 years ago

This was sooo cute😍

Edited by silvershades01 - 1 years ago