Compromises ? - Shivi SS -(snippet of next chap) (page 9) - Page 3

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Posted: 2 years ago
#21

Love this version of Raavi, strong and independent.

Looking forward to the next chapter💜

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Posted: 2 years ago
#22

Perfect Story plot👏

Shiva needs to learn a lesson, it's high time he thought about Raavi and her feelings😡

Please update soon, want to know what happens next

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Posted: 2 years ago
#23

Loved both the chapters. ❤️

Shiva needs this treatment. I liked the way Raavi held herself up. 


Waiting for the next chapter. 


Update soon...

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Posted: 2 years ago
#24

Read both the parts in one go❤️

This is amazing....Strong and independent Raavi...this is what I wanted to see!!!

Loved reading these 2 chapters...do update soon❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#25

hey beautiful people here is the next part i know this one is a little short but i promise the next one will be lengthy i have added a few characters here and those who are a fan of dhara ka mahanta please skip this one as she may get a little bashed in this one , okay without further nonsense lets begin .. dialogues are in bold  

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CHAPTER 3 - new beginnings 


Dhara intervenes the conversation 


“raavi yeh itni badi baath bhi nahi hai ki tu ghar chodke challi jaye”

Raavi remains shocked by dharas words 


“haan di , apke liye toh yeh badi bath nahi hogi , apka khara sona shiva mujhe kabhi bhi kahin bhi neecha dikha sakta hai , bezzat kar sakta hai aur mein yeh sab bakwass sehti rahoon ? yeh chahti hai aap ? “ asked raavi sarcastically 


“bacha har rishte mein problems hote hein aur unhe milke solve karna patda hai , tu itni choti bath ko divorce tak kyu keech rahi hai ?” justified dhara 


“yeh koi chotti bath nahi hai Bhabhi , shayad apne nahi dekha hoga par maine zaroor dekha hai ki kitne efforts dali hai raavi bhabhi ne , uss din shiva ka saath dene ke liye unhone apne kamre ko aap ko de diye lekin tab bhi shiva ne unke bath ka galat matlab nikhala “ said krish 


"krish ne sahi kaha hai . kisi bhi aurat ko apne hi pati bezzati bardash nahi honi chahiye , pati hai toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki mauhale ke saamne uska mazak bane ke rakh do" added rishita 


“dhara di mein apki disrespect nahi karna chahti lekin agar kabhi bhi apne zindagi mein mujhe ek choti behen ke taur se dekha hai toh mujhe ek bath sach sach batiye “ pleaded raavi 


“aap sab har baar mujhe hi kyun compromise karne ke liye kehte hein ? jab mandap mein dev ke wajah se mujhe itni bezzati sehne padi tab aap logon ne kaha ki adjust karlo , aur phir jab mein apke paas ayi apna dil halka karne tab bhi apne bola ki mujhe adjust karna chahiye aur main kiya bhi hai . lekin aaj nahi , aaj shiva ne hadd paar kardi hai“ tiredly spoke raavi 


“raavi yeh koi tarika hai bhabhi se bath karne ka “jumped  shiva


“shiva bas mujhse aur nahi hoga , nahi mein tumhari Bhabhi ko handle karsakthi hoon aur nahi tumhe , agar bath dhara Bhabhi ki ho toh tu kisi aur ke baare mein nahi sochta hai , dhara di mein apki bohot respect karthi hoon aur aap meri role model bhi thi lekin jab aap shiva ki Bhabhi ban jati hain tab aap ko bhi kuch nazar nahi ata “ tried to explain raavi 


“ayyee raavi yeh kya tu inlogon ke sath bath kar rahi hai , chal tu yahan se main tujhe kahin jane nahi dungi , tu apne ghar mein rahegi mere , anita aur tumhare mausa pa ke sath samjhi “ said Prafulla 


“maasi meine decide kar liya hai ki mein uss ghar mein nahi rahoongi aur isse zyada iss topic pe koi bath nahi karega aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki che mahine ke pehle hum divorce keliye apply nahi kar sakte aur humari shaadi ko sirf 3 mahine hue hai , tab tak mein apne friend ke sath rahungi ” declaring which raavi leaves the house 


shiva is stunned to see raavi talk like this to his bhabhi , before he could stop her , anger takes over him for insulting his bhabhi and he leaves to his room . 

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It had been a week since raavi and tanisha (raavis friend) moved in together , tanisha was planning on moving in with her boyfriend but decided on having raavi with her instead of anyone else , both of them were collage mates and the best support system for each other when required 


“isha main tujhe rent agle mahine mein de dungi “ said raavi while arranging the flowers 


“arrey uski koi zaroorat nahi hai raavi , tu pehle settle hoja phir yeh sab dekhte hai”


“haan pata hai lekin phir bhi , aur waise humare online business ko start karne ke liye humein 2 aur log lagenge” said raavi while trying to think of people to hire 


Raavi being an enthusiast of fashion decided to start an online business where she assists clients on their wardrobe choices and manufacture clothes if needed , a whole business cant run with just 2 people. 

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Okay so how did you guys like it ? i dont know if this is what you guys expected or not , forgive me if its not upto the mark. Also do let me know who you guys think will be the other 2 members supporting raavi .

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Posted: 2 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Love this version of Raavi, strong and independent.

Looking forward to the next chapter💜

thank you 

updated <3

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Posted: 2 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Read both the parts in one go❤️

This is amazing....Strong and independent Raavi...this is what I wanted to see!!!

Loved reading these 2 chapters...do update soon❤️

thank you dear 

updated 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Dandellion_22

Perfect Story plot👏

Shiva needs to learn a lesson, it's high time he thought about Raavi and her feelings😡

Please update soon, want to know what happens next

updated darling 

do let me know how you liked it <3

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Posted: 2 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: anshika5103

Can't believe I am saying this 

But I want shiva to suffer 😂


lol dont worry , he will get his fair share of suffering 

updated next part , do check 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ShinyShine

I loved it 

I always like reading about strong and independent Raavi 


Continue soon ❤️

thank you 

updated  <3