Shivi SS : Step by step *Part 7 on Pg 19 26.05.2021* *Completed* - Page 2

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Posted: 2 years ago

Great start👍🏼



Amazing update. Hope Shiva reveals the truth to Raavi

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Posted: 2 years ago

I love this take too. At least in today's episode it was Raavi who went to get Shiva. This one was cuter because it allowed Raavi to look past the past happenings and move forward. She probably won't accuse him of the same but she can ask him what was his reason for doing so.


Loved how both compromised to fulfill each other's wishes. Can't wait to read part 2.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing start👏

Loved this take on current track😊

Gaumbi make Raavi understand her wrong ways as an elder brother😊

Loved Shivi's conversation❤️

Both compromised for each other's happiness😊

Waiting for next

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Posted: 2 years ago

I really loved this...

Cant wait to read more.❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice start. Enjoyed reading. Loved the way goumbi handled raavi 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful story ❤


Very nice start 👌


Gaumbi ne sahi rasta dikhaya raavi ko 


Shivi ki outing sath me 😍😍


Plzzz update next part sooon🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hi everyone😊. 

Thank You so much for showering your love on the first part. It was so overwhelming. 

I am back with another update. 

Do give a shot and tell how's this one. 

Happy reading guys❤️. 


Part 2


From the last half an hour Raavi was roaming here and there followed by a highly frustrated Shiva.

‘Ae chipkali or kitni der?’

‘Abhi toh aye hai. Dekh na kitna acha lag raha hai yaha.’

‘Tujhe lag raha hai, mujhe nahi.’

Raavi spoke now turning to him ‘Shiva dekh ab tu apni marzi se aya hai toh ache se enjoy kar. Yeh bak bak karke na apni energy waste kar na mera dimag kharab.’

Shiva spoke ‘Aee.’

Raavi replied ‘Acha chal. Tu yahi kahi baith ja main explore karke ati hu kyuki mujhe acha lag raha hai yah.’

Shiva thought for a second but then was worried for her safety so spoke ‘Ab chal. Phir kahegi chod dia akele.’

Raavi spoke genuinely knowing how much he hated shopping ‘Nahi kahungi. Pakka. Is ek baat ke liye nahi kahungi. Dekh vo cafe hai vaha baith ja nahi toh vaha nadi kinare chala ja’

Shiva spoke faking anger ‘Jitni der tune yaha bak bak ki na utni der mein tu ek do dukan nipta leti.’

Raavi got mad ‘Shivaa. Tu kaisa hai. Huh. chal ab’ she walked ahead leaving a smiling Shiva.

They went to a bangles shop and she started exploring bangles.

She picked one and spoke ‘Shiva dekh na, yeh Dhara di pe achi lagegi na?’

Shiva loved the fact that the first pair she selected was for his Dhara bhabhi, he nodded in a yes not speaking much.

Raavi then picked up two three and spoke ‘Konsi achi hai isme se? Mujhe sab achi lag rahi hai. Tu bata na Shiva konsi lu?’

Shiva spoke ‘jonsi leni hai lele na. Kyu itna waqt barbad kar rahi hai.’

Raavi ignored him and asked the shopkeeper ‘bhaiya aap hi batao konsi lu?’

Shiva was not comfortable with her asking from another man so he hurriedly spoke before that man could reply ‘YEh vali le ye tujhpe achi lagegi.’ touching the multicolour one.

Raavi was surprised and blurted ‘Jab puch rahi thi toh bataya nahi. Huh.’

The shopkeeper spoke ‘Vaise toh ma’am sab achi hai lekin yeh yellow bahut achi hai.’

Raavi got her answer so his suggestion made her uncomfortable ‘Nahi aap yahi multi colour kar dijiye.’

Shiva clenched his teeth when that shopkeeper advised her but soon a smile formed on his face when she chose the multi coloured one.

 Shiva paid for both the bangles and they went to another shop.

‘Chal ab kuch jhumke lelete hai’ Raavi spoke irking him but he followed her quietly as he didn’t have any option.

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She selected a jhumka but she was not able to wear it so she first looked at Shiva for help but he turned his face in denial.

So, the shopkeeper came and said ‘Laiye ma’am main pehna deta hu.’

Shiva was shocked at the audacity of this man he took the earring from his hand and spoke the most unexpected thing ‘Abhi iska pati zinda hai toh tu piche hat’

Raavi was shocked and just looked at him with surprise and admiration while he was struggling with the jhumka. After a few failed attempts he succeeded and all this while Raavi didn’t complain a bit because she knew he never did this before.

Raavi looked herself in that small mirror and without asking him spoke ‘Shiva paise dede iske.’

Shiva spoke ‘PAr yeh itne nahi ache lag rahe’ 

Raavi replied ‘koi baat nahi’

Shiva spoke ‘Acha utar toh sahi vo pack karke denge na’

Raavi didn’t know why but she didn’t feel like removing those earrings. Her heart didn’t allow her to do so,  so spoke ‘Ab aise hi thik hai. Bhaiya aap paise le lijiye iske.’

Shiva was confused ‘YEh chipakli kyun zid kar rahi hai? Ache bhi nahi hai. Kahi yeh… NAhi main hu hi kon jo yeh sirf isliye le’

*Both were confused about this new found feeling.*

Raavi spoke breaking his chain of thoughts ‘Chal na Shiva mujhe bahut pyas lagi hai or garmi bhi lag rahi hai kuch thanda pite hai.’

Shiva spoke ‘Ha chal mujhe bhook bhi lagi hai.’

They went to a restaurant and a waiter came to take their order, Shiva without thinking spoke ‘Bhai pehle jaldi se ek chocolate shake le ao iske liye. Baki order batate hai abhi’ Waiter nodded and went from there.

While Raavi looked at Shiva with widened eyes, 'Tujhe yaad hai mera favourite drink?’

Shiva slapped his head in mind but then spoke normally ‘HA toh. Bachpan se hi ghar ake Dhara bhabhi se request karti thi’

Raavi smiled ‘MAtlab tu notice karta tha mujhe.’

Shiva hid the blush that was about to appear on her cheeks and spoke showing fake anger ‘ORder karegi kuch? Ya mera dimag khake pet bhar gaya tera?’

Raavi rolled her eyes and looked at the menu 'Tu toh daal chawal hi khaega. Hai na? '

It was Shiva's turn to be surprised this time 'tujhe kaise pata chipkali? '

Raavi spoke 'ha toh. Or kuch khaya hai tune kahi pe bhi? Jab bhi kahi jao toh daal chawal'

Unknowingly a smile appeared on his face, Raavi saw that smile and her heart skipped a beat. That smile was so captivating That she will never forget in her life. 

'Acha tu kya khayegi? ' shiva asked. 

'Mera kuch khas khane ka man nahi hai, tere sath share kar lungi' then she remembered Shiva didn't like sharing his food so continued 'par tu toh khana share nahi karta. Tu khale khana main shake pi lungi or chips ka packet le lungi'

But to her shock Shiva spoke 'kar lio share mere sath. Koi bat nahi'

Raavi was shocked 'tu apna khana share karega vo bhi mere saty? '

Shiva replied in his usual tone 'rehne de tu. Apna hi karle kuch main nahi khila raha'

Raavi spoke making a pout 'Acha sorry na' which brought a smile on his face. Before he could say anything Raavi's chocolate shake came. 

Raavi took a sip from the straw and gave a relaxed expression 'kitna thanda hai yeh. Haye itni garmi lagi thi mujhe. Maza aa gaya pike. Le Shiva Tu bhi try kar na' she thought he will sip from the glass itself par to her surprise Shiva took the glass and took a sip from that same straw. 

Both felt a shiver run down their spine thinking about the fact that he took a sip from her straw. 

Things were definitely changing between them and they were liking it this way. 

Raavi shopped some more and they finally headed towards the river. 

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Raavi was in awe of the place 'yeh kitni sundar jagah hai'

Shiva spoke taking in all the beautiful scenery 'sach mein. Mujhe yeh jagah bahut pasand hai'

Shiva sat down on the mudded area, looking at the still water. Raavi too sat with him and enjoyed the peace. 

They were quiet for almost 15-20 minutes taking in the peaceful nature, birds chirping sun almost ready to set. 

Raavi asked considering this the best time to talk 'Shiva'

Shiva just hmmed lost in his own thoughts. 

Raavi spoke not looking at him 'kyu gaya tha us din chod kar? '

Shiva's jaw clenched hearing that, he was about to get up to ignore the question but Raavi held his arm and stopped him 'please mat ja kahi. Baith ja'

Shiva spoke 'mujhe koi jawab nahi dena'

Raavi asked ' please shiva mere liye yeh janna bahut zaruri hai'

Shiva kept quiet; he didn't want to say anything or explain anything. 

Raavi too gave up on him and rested her back on that deserted area and closed her eyes thinking about all that happened in the past few days. 

Shiva looked at her and spoke 'chale? Sab wait kar rahe honge? Andhera bhi hone laga hai'

Raavi asked 'tujhe jana hai? '

Shiva asked 'tujhe nahi jana? '

Raavi nodded her head in no and took out her phone  and dialled Dhara's number. 

'Hello Dhara di' she spoke. 

Dhara too spoke from the other side 'ha Raavi. Abhi time lagega kya? '

Raavi replied 'Dhara di mujhe vohi bolna tha ki mujhe yaha Nadi kinare acha lag raha hai kya main kuch ghante yahi baith jau please? Bahut time baad thoda sukoon mil raha hai'

Dhara understood her and spoke 'ha tum aram se ana. Vaise bhi Dev rishita dinner karke ayenge, Krish bhi kahi bahar gaya hai or main Or Gaumbi bhi ja rahe hai bahar'

Raavi was happy 'thank you Dhara di. I love you. you are the best'

Dhara was happy to hear I love you from her after so long 'jab Vapis ayegi toh hamari purani Raavi banke ana. Or Jo bhi batein solve karni hai apne Bhootnath se karle Raavi. Yeh mauka bar bar nahi milega'

Raavi blushed and spoke 'ji di' and she disconnected the call. 

Shiva was really happy to see his wife sharing a beautiful bond with his bhabhi. 

'Ab tujhe jana hai toh ja. Waise bhi vaha koi nahi hai. Sab gaye hai idhar udhar ghumne' Raavi spoke, sticking her tongue out. 

Shiva rolled his eyes on her childlike antics but inside he didn't know but he felt good.  He again lied down with Raavi. 

'Vaise us din jaan lene ki koshish kyu ki tune? ' he spoke lost in the moment. 

'Pata nahi Shiva. Shiva bahut choti umar mein maa papa dono chale gaye toh mujhe hamesha se dar tha hi ki sab mujhe chod denge. Or us din Mandap mein vo dar sach ho gaya jab Dev jise main bachpan se pyar karti thi vo chala gaya. Us din na Shiva kuch tut sa gaya tha mujh mein aisa laga jaise sab khatam, kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha Shiva mujhe. Sab black out ho gaya tha us ek pal mein or mujhe laga ki ab jeene ka matlab nahi. 

Par shayad kismat ko kuch or manzur tha or tune bacha lia mujhe. Shiva jab Dhara di ne kaha na tujhse shadi kar lu or Mausapa ne bhi kaha toh main maan gayi. 

Kyuki nafrat nahi thi mujhe tujhse kabhi toh socha jaise taise kat jayegi zindagi tere saath par jab us din gundo ke sath tune mujhe chod dia na, tab vaha na jaise kuch khatam ho gaya jo thoda bahut maine khud ko samet ke rakha tha na vo bhi bikhar gaya or us ek pal mein laga ki Bhagwan ne koi nahi banaya mere liye. Akele hi marungi shayad main' 

Shiva heard everything she said with calmness but the moment she talked about dying alone he couldn't control and his hand on it's accord held her hand getting a shocked expression from her. 

'Main tujhe nahi chod ke gaya tha us din, Tu bahut dar gayi thi or panic hoke chilane lagti thi toh socha pehle un gundo se nipat lu nahi toh vo phir tujhe nuksan pahuchate. 

Un gundo se nipat ke aa hi raha tha ki Dev aa gaya mujhse pehle tujhe bachane

He heard her gasp loudly on this revelation. 

Raavi was blaming this guy lying next to her tears started to fall down her eyes. 

'Matlab tu mujhe vaha nahi chod ke aya tha' she said sobbing.

'Tune soch bhi kaise lia ki tujh jaisi Chipkali ko un gundo ke paas chod ke aunga main. Shadi karke jo lifetime subscription maine li hai ki tu mera khoon chuse vo subscription main kisi or ke sath nahi batne vala' he said trying to lighten the situation. 

Raavi smacked his arm. She spoke 'sorry Shiva. Or thankyou'

Shiva replied 'Sorry mat bol. Or thank you kis liye? '

Raavi spoke 'us din meri jaan bachane ke liye or mujhe apnane ke liye'

Shiva wiped her tears 'dhara di ko bol thank you unke kehne par kia tha maine yeh sab'

Shiva spoke 'tu Dev ko bhul paegi kabhi? Bachpan ka pyar hai na vo tera? '

Raavi replied 'Shiva Dev ko main usi din usi pal bhul gayi thi jab usne mujhe choda tha mandap mein, jab vo mujhe bachane tak nahi aya. Jo bachi hui izat thi vo bhi khatam uske liye mere man mein Shiva. '

Shiva didn't know but a wave of relief spread in his body. Thanks to darkness, Raavi couldn't see his expressions. 

Raavi was struggling to be comfortable as she didn't have anything to keep under her neck. Shiva saw this and asked 'kya hua kyu til mila rahi hai? '

Raavi spoke 'meri gardan dukh rahi hai kuch chahiye rakhne ko'

Shiva hesitantly forwarded his arm, Raavi looked at his arm under the moon light and rested her head on his arm peacefully. 

Shiva felt really happy when she kept her head on his arm. 

Soon he felt she was snuggling into his warmth. He spoke 'itna kyu chipak rahi hai? '

She didn't reply then he looked down to find her sleeping peacefully in his arms. 

He too drifted off to sleep. From the last few days both of them couldn't sleep due to their rivalry. 

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After somewhat an hour later Shiva woke up due to the mosquito biting, he tried to stretch his arm when he felt her curled up in his arm. 

A smile crept on his lips as all the events flashed in front of his eyes.

'Itni buri bhi nahi hai yeh Chipkali' he thought to himself. 

He checked the time and it said 8 o'clock in the evening. 

He called her 'oye Mami ki Behen ki beti uth'

Raavi snuggled in his warmth and mumbled 'sone de na Shiva. Itni achi nind aa rahi hai'

Her hot breath was fanning his chest making him feel tingling. He never thought he would feel this proximity with any girl and that too with his MamiKiBehenKiBeti. 

'Ravi uth ja ab. Bahut bhari hai tu' he voiced out the opposite to what he was thinking. 

Raavi slowly opened her eyes taking in what happened. She shot her head up 'so gayi thi kya main? '

Shiva spoke teasing her 'nahi jagte hue hi chipak rahi thi'

She blushed 'mujhe pata nahi chala kab aankh lag gayi'

Shiva spoke 'ab toh uth gayi na? Chale vapis?'

Raavi spoke 'ha'

They both got up and dusted their clothes and helped each other do so. 

Both walked towards the haveli thinking about the time they spent today. 

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So, how was it guys? 

I hope you guys liked it. 

Please do tell how you liked this part. 

I will meet you soon till then take care guys🤗. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing update😊

Finally the mu got cleared😊

Loved Shiv's outing, their conversation was beautiful❤️

Waiting for next

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🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿 aur khilao popcorn

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The shopping scene was so cute! I love husband and wife shopping trips 😳

So happy to see Shiva and Raavi trying on their relation, thankfully misunderstanding cleared! What a beautiful scenes by the river ❤️


Update soon!