Shivi SS : Step by step *Part 7 on Pg 19 26.05.2021* *Completed*

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi guys🤗.

So, this is my first story on ShiVi. I am not sure how many parts this story will contain, so for now I am considering this as a SS. And if you have a better title suggestion than do give.

This story starts when Raavi insults Shiva during the Kuldevi Pooja.

I hope you guys will like it. Happy reading guys.

Part 1


Shiva left the place when Raavi again insulted him in front of everyone. Raavi stood there expressionless, Dhara tried to talk to Raavi but Gaumbi intervened ‘Dhara tu zara yaha dekh main abhi ata hu.’ And he assured her with eyes.

‘Chal Raavi mere sath ek baar’ He asked Raavi and took her away from all of them.

They reached a place where they could see Shiva sitting on stairs but he couldn't hear them or see them.

‘Kya hua Raavi?’ Gautam asked.

Raavi gave him a questioned look. Gautam asked directly ‘nahi rehna Shiva ke sath tujhe?’

Raavi who was looking down shot her head up and looked at him.

‘Bol na Raavi? Nahi rehna chahti Shiva ke saath?’ Gautam spoke.

‘Pata nahi Gaumbi. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya ho raha hai or kyu ho raha hai.’ Raavi spoke.

Gautam spoke ‘Ek baar ko sab bhul ja Raavi ki duniya kya kahegi, ladka dusra milega ke nahi. Sab kuch. Or ab bata ki Shiva ke sath rehna chahti hai ya nahi? Main janta hu pyar nahi hai abhi par tujhe kya lagta hai ki tu is rishte mein kuch bhi de paegi? Kya tu is rishte ko, Shiva ko apna paegi? Kya tu yeh rishta nibha paegi? Dekh agar tu nahi reh payegi toh tension mat le yaha se jate hi main lawyer bulaunga or koi tujhse koi sawal nahi karega or tujhe is rishte se azaad karunga.’

Raavi was shocked; she just can’t think of leaving this relationship with Shiva. She tried to avoid his question ‘Gaumbi vo bhi yeh Rishta nahi apnana chahta. Us din dekha nahi kaise mujhe chod ke aa gaya tha?’

Gautam smiled that she didn’t agree on breaking the relation ‘Vo kya chahta hai ya nahi use tujhe kya farak padta hai Raavi? Or kya tune use pucha ki vo tujhe us din chod ke gaya tha ya nahi?’

Raavi replied ‘Maine khud dekha tha Gaumbi vo chala gaya tha.’

Gautam spoke ‘Ankhon dekha har bar sach nahi hota Raavi. Or tune abhi bhi mere sawal ka jawab nahi dia.’

Raavi thought about what Gautam said but got tensed when he again asked that same question.

Gautam sensed that and spoke ‘Chod rehne de. Agar tera jawab ‘na’ hota toh ab tak bol chuki hoti.’

Raavi spoke ignoring him ‘Vo meri bilkul izat nahi karta Gaumbi.’

‘Tu karti hai kya?’

They both turned back to see Dhara standing there.

‘Bol na Raavi Tu karti hai kya Shiva ki izat?’ Dhara spoke standing with Gautam.

Raavi looked down.

Dhara continued ‘ek baat kahu Raavi? Shiva un logo mein se hai hi nahi jise gusse se sudhara jaye ya koi bhi kaam karvaya jaye. Usko pyar se kahegi na toh vo sab kar dega tere liye.’

Raavi asked shocked ‘Mere liye?’

Dhara replied caressing her cheek ‘HA tere liye. Manti hu vo tujhe na pasand karta hai lekin tera bura nahi chahta vo. Us din mandap mein bhi vo aya tha tere liye bhaga hua, or koi nahi aya tha or tujhe bachaya tha.’

Raavi just kept looking at both.

Raavi spoke ‘Yeh sab aap isliye keh rahe ho na kyuki Shiva aapka bhai hai?’

Before Dhara could speak Gaumbi spoke ‘Maine toh tera bhai banke tujhe yeh option bhi dia ki tu yeh Rishta tod de’ Dhara looked at Gaumbi with shock but calmed down when she saw his assuring eyes and played along.

‘Ha Raavi. Agar tu chahti hai toh tod de yeh Rishta. Koi bat nahi.’ Dhara spoke hoping she won’t agree on it.

Raavi just turned her face from them and looked at nowhere.

‘Raavi decide kar ki tu yeh Rishta chahti bhi hai ya nahi? Or agar chahti hai na Raavi toh aaj jaise tune sabke samne Shiva ki insult ki vo karna band kar.’ Dhara spoke.

Raavi chided ‘Par vo bhi toh sabke samne mujhe sunata hai.’

Dhara spoke ‘vohi toh Raavi. Tu pehle khud yeh baat samajh or phir use samjha ki agar ladna hi hai toh apne kamre ki chaar diwari mein lado. Kyuki yeh duniya phir tumhari ladaio ka fayda uthaegi tumpe hasegi tumhe taane maregi.’

Raavi thought about it and spoke ‘Shayad aap sahi keh rahe ho.’

Dhara spoke ‘Raavi main nahi keh rahi ki pyar ek pal mein ho jayega par is rishte ko chance toh de. Agar shikayate hai toh usse kar, ladaia hai toh usse lad lekin is tarah se ki vo chize suljhe naki Uljhe.’

Gaumbi again spoke ‘toh baki ki pooja karni hai? Ya yeh Rishta khatam karna hai?’

Raavi looked at Dhara for help and Dhara scolded him.

‘Tu layegi Shiva ko? Ya main lau?’ Dhara asked politely.

Raavi looked at her and spoke after thinking ‘Laati hu main use’

Dhara smiled and kissed her forehead, Gaumi too caressed her head.

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Shiva was sitting on stairs, what Raavi said hurt him, he thought ‘Us chipkali ki baaton ka mujhe kyu bura lag raha hai?’

He felt someone sitting with him and he looked sideways only to find Raavi sitting with him looking straight.

‘yaha kya karne aayi hai? Or kuch sunana rehta tha?’ Shiva spoke rudely.

‘Kya tu yeh Rishta kabhi apna paega Shiva?’ Raavi asked, still not looking at him ignoring his question.

‘Yeh kya bakwas sawal hai?’ he again replied rudely.

‘Bakwas toh nahi hai, simple sa sawal hai jawab dena.’ Raavi spoke now looking at him.

‘Tu apna paegi? Jis admi se tu pyar karti thi uske chote bhai ke sath zindagi bhar ka safar nibha paegi?’ Shiva asked not breaking the eye contact.

Raavi replied ‘Koshish kar sakti hu.’

Shiva spoke ‘Bhool payegi use?’

Raavi replied ‘Thoda yakeen hone de tujhpar or is rishte par phir jawab dungi tujhe is baat ka’

Shiva spoke picking a pebble to throw in the air ‘Yeh bhi thik hai.’

Raavi spoke ‘Chal chale pooja baki hai abhi.’

Shiva replied, ‘par main toh vachan jhuthe kha raha tha na?’

Raavi avoided that question and got up, she gave him her hand ‘Chal. Sab intezar kar rahe hai.’

Shiva looked at her hand for a few seconds, Raavi was about to take her hand back but then only Shiva held her hand and got up. She gave a small smile to him and moved with him. Shiva too smiled.

Raavi thought in her mind ‘itna mushkil bhi nahi tha isse baat karna normal’

They reached the place where the pooja was going on, Dhara and Gaumbi were happy to see them together.

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After the pooja took place Rishita asked Dev to take her to the market Dev asked everyone. Raavi without thinking replied ‘Main bhi chalungi.’

Dhara spoke ‘Shiva tu bhi ja na uske sath.’

Shiva replied ‘Nahi bhabhi main vo us nadi kinare jaunga Mausam bhi acha hai’

Dhara spoke ‘Raavi tu bhi ja na nadi kinare.’

Rishita spoke before Raavi could reply ‘KAhi vaha bhi tumhe akele na chod aaye Raavi yeh’ and she laughed

Dev spoke ‘Rishita.’

Raavi felt bad and words from Dhara di rang in her mind ‘Yeh duniya phir tumhari ladaio ka fayda uthaegi tumpe hasegi tumhe taane maregi’

Shiva was about to leave that place but Raavi spoke ‘Shiva ruk.’ She then turned to Rishita ‘Koi baat nahi Rishita main dekhlungi. Tum chinta mat karo’

‘Or Shiva, main bhi chal rahi hu tere sath’ Raavi spoke to Shiva.

Shiva was surprised with this behavior of Raavi he spoke ‘Par tu toh market jana chahti hai na?’

Gaumbi spoke purposely ‘Ek kaam kar Raavi tu pehle inke sath market chali ja or phir Shiva ke paas chali jaio.’

Rishita spoke under her breath ‘ab yeh kabab mein haddi banegi mere or Dev ki’

Everyone heard that, Dev passed her a glare.

Raavi was hurt so spoke ‘Gaumbi main nahi ja rahi man nahi hai mera.’

Shiva saw the hurt on her face and spoke ‘Chal main tujhe leke chalta hu. Kisi ki kabab mein haddi nahi banna padega’

Dhara smiled seeing care from Shiva for Raavi. Raavi was very amused by this statement of his.

Rishita spoke plastering a smile on her face ‘Are nahi mera vo matlab nahi tha.’

Dev too spoke ‘Shiva tum chalo hamare sath iska vo matlab nahi tha.’

Shiva spoke ‘Nahi bhai koi baat nahi. Ab shayad Raavi ko dikat ho tum dono ke sath chalne se. Tum karo apna time enjoy. Chal Raavi chale.’

Shivers ran down Raavi’s spine hearing her name from his mouth and she kept looking at him.

Dev tried to talk to Raavi ‘Raavi Rishita ka vo matlab nahi tha.’

Raavi spoke politely ‘koi baat nahi Dev. Tum enjoy karo akele. Shiva mujhe le jayega’

‘Chalo na baby itna thodi kahenge hum inhe’ Rishita spoke and dragged him.

Raavi spoke ‘Dhara di aap nahi chaloge?’

Gaumbi spoke ‘Tu hamari chinta mat kar hum yahi ruk kar apni purani yadon ko taza karenge’

Raavi giggled. Dhara too blushed.

Before leaving Raavi hugged Dhara tightly and whispered a thankyou in her ear and left with Shiva.

 

‘Tujhe toh shopping se nafrat hai na? phir?’ Raavi asked.

Shiva spoke, maintaining his angry look ‘Vapis jau kya?’

Raavi replied ‘Maine kab kaha aisa. Chod ke jana hai toh vo tujhe pata’

Shiva got angry and turned to go back but Raavi held his arm ‘Acha sorry. Mazak tha is baar. Sach mein’

Shiva didn’t say anything and walked with her.

They took an auto rickshaw for the market.

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Index:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

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 Ok so how was it guys?

Do tell me through your comments.

Thankyou for reading. Will see you soon.

Take care till then❤️.

 

Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Loved reading it.I wish we get to see something similar in the show.

Posted: 2 years ago

very nice.. Title from my side : Two confused Soul😆..

Posted: 2 years ago

Love this seed of understanding and acceptance being planted that will hopefully bloom into a loving, happy relationship 😳 

Edited by ananyakhetarpal - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Update as often as u can. It was really good. 🍿🍿🍿

Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing start :)

Loved how Gaumbi treated Raavi... it was really like a big brother giving advice.

Shivi conversation was wonderful.

Do continue soon

Posted: 2 years ago

Lovely start.. nice to see a sensible Raavi here ❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

Great start. 👍🏼

Really enjoyed it. 

Do continue soon..

Would love to read further....

Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing update!! I was hooked right away and now I cant wait for the next part !! 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hooked me right away! It was done well. I wish the show follows this route. 



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