Purvir SS : The Haunted Cottage|CHAPTER 4 UPDATED- PAGE 9|Completed

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Posted: 18 days ago

Chapter 1

This love story with a dash of horror is set in the backdrop of Rewari village.

Virendra Pratap Singh is the mukhiya of Rewari village,a manof principles,owner of several mills,a passionate and possessive lover  whereas Purvi Virendra Pratap Singh is a happy-go-lucky girl whose world revolves around her family.Both purvi and vir stay in a cottage on the outskirts of Rewari village isolated from the noise.A haunted abandoned cottage on the outskirts of the village.But,some unprecedented things happened during their arrival in the abandoned area.A constant drizzle followed them on the road but it was magical to feel the rush of the monsoons.The roads were flooded with water.Dark low hanging clouds pregnant with rain took over the sky.The parched land was only too willing to embrace the downpour.And as they reached the cottage,they noticed a old man dressed in white,sporting a long flowing grey beard  surfaced out of nowhere,looking almost like an apparition himself.He had an ageless feel about him.The wrinkles around his face and his sunken eyes seem to tell a story of their own but he was more interested in narrating the story of the foreign couple who resided in the cottage a long time ago and it is believed by the natives that the house ishaunted by their spirits.

Both Purvi and vir live happily with their two little munchkins-manas and juhi.A small happy family away from the noise and thenegativity ,cherishing every little moment.But was this happiness going to last long?

It was 7 o’ clock in the evening when four of them were playing hide and seek with juhi searching the rest three.Here mukhi and his bawri hiding behind the curtain while vir is in full romantic mood grabs her waist,gives a peck on her cheeks,licks her earlobes and they end up in a passionate liplock.But,suddenly the lights went off and manas starts crying and purvi rushes to him to protect her children from all the bad evils.

Kya purvi ki khushiyon ko lagne wali thi kisi ki buri nazar?Kya vir ke parivaar pe mandra raha h kisi k bura saaya?

So,it was 30 September,the day of their marriage,the most beautiful and divine day of their life.(Ek rishta jo majboori m juda,mol se bandha r umar m aadha ,kaise us rishte ne ki pyaar ki dahleez paar-Remembers purvi)Yes,it was their 3rd wedding anniversary.In these three years they witnessed a lot of ups and downs,purvi lost her child in a miscarriage few months back which made her vulnerable.But was that the end of their hardships?

So,for their wedding anniversary purvi decides to surprise vir by inviting his close friends Vivek,Swathi,Shailesh and Gopi.Vir and his four friends studied in the same school and became best friends.On receiving purvi’s invitation,the four friends working at different places unite and show up at vir’s place to surprise him.Vivek is fond of photography,so he clicks snaps of vir’s reaction on seeing his friends.

Vir was shocked to see them at his place.They were not in contact for a long time.He becomes emotional seeing them.A tear trickle down his cheek.Whereas juhi manas comes shouting vivek chachu and hug him,shailesh and gopi.

Vir-tum sab yaha kaise..matlab itne samay baad..manne toapni aankhan pe vishwas na ho raha..tum sab ta m dobara mil raha hu..

Vivek-(laughs & hugs him tightly)arrey to t u hume bhoolhi gaya tha..wo to purvi ne hume tum dono ki shaadi ki saalgirah pe nyota bhejatha..to hum aa gye tere se milne..

Vir looks at purvi.He was crying while purvi cups his face and wipes her tears.

Pur-ap aise ro kyu rahe h..ap bilkul hamare tauji ki tarah bhavuk h..

Vir-(raising eyebrows)yo tera tau kyu haath dhoke marepeeche pada h..arrey konsa udhar liya h maine isse jo mahara peecha na chodraha..khushi k mauke pe kyu us bhatakti aatma ne yaad kar rhi h..smiley36

Pur-ap hamare tauji k bare m aise kyu bol rahe hain..agar wo hamare tauji h to apke bhi kuch hue na..matlab tau to nahi par apki umar ke h to dost hue na apke(giggles)smiley36

Everyone starts laughing.So,vivek takes everyone to room to show them the pictures he has clicked but his camera wasn’t working.

Swathi-arrey kitni ajeeb baat hain..ek bhi sheesha nahih..Par koi nahi..mere pas makeup mirror h us se kaam chala lungi

The strange thing about the house was there was not even a single mirror in the house.As she was about to take out the mirror the mirror breaks.Just then vir interrupts,mirrors don’t last in the house.He narrates the story of the foreign couple who resided in the bungalow long back and that this house is haunted by their spirits.Vir later ask his friends not to be worried about bawari if she behaves strangely,as she is mentally upset about her miscarriage.Slowly the friends experience paranormal activities in the house.At 4o’ clock when it was fairly dark and shailesh who was screwing up his courage to go to the kitchen to get some water on his way to the kitchen noticed through the half open door someone seated on the armchair before the fire,dozing it would seem,with her head dropping on one side.The only light in the room was the red glow from the fire-which lit her eyes like adverse railway signals,but left her downcast face in darkness- and the scanty vestiges of the day that came in through the open door.Blood was oozing out from her eyes,blood droplets were falling on the floor.Everything was ruddy,shadowy and indistinct to him,the more so since he had just been lightning the bar lamp,his eyes were dazzled.But,for a second it seemed to him that the woman he looked at had an enormous mouthwide open-a vast and incredible mouth that swallowed the whole of the lower portion of her face,the monstrous goggle eyes and the huge yawn below it..And as she turns to look at him,the centre of her face became a black cavity.She moved her hand on her face and took out something which she threw towards him.Then,when he saw what it was,he screamed loudly,dropped it and staggered back.The nose-it was her nose! completely black and blood oozing out-rolled on the floor.The lights of the room started to flicker.Shailesh screamed loudly and staggered back.A flash of horrible anticipation passed through him.Everyone inthe house heard the frightful screams of Shailesh and he immediately ran away from their to his room.Everyone gathers in the room hearing his scream.

Who was she?Was the cottage really haunted?Was vir hiding something?What mystery was going to unravel with the arrival of these four new members in the house?

Posted: 18 days ago

Res#1

Edited by sargamif - 14 days ago
Posted: 18 days ago

Kya mast genre select kiya hai aapne story ke liye. Kuch naya naya aaya hai forum mei ye tohsmiley32

Badiya suspense haismiley20

 The description of certain things that you've given at various points in the ff made it more intriguing. Do continue with this ahead.smiley42smiley27

Posted: 18 days ago

Mast Likha he Di smiley32

With each line the story is getting more n more  intriguing 

Or yeh buttering nhi he smiley36coz mereko sachhi buttering Karna nhi aata aaj yeh prove ho chuka he smiley44

Posted: 18 days ago

Originally posted by Anahita02134143


Kya mast genre select kiya hai aapne story ke liye. Kuch naya naya aaya hai forum mei ye tohsmiley32

Badiya suspense haismiley20

 The description of certain things that you've given at various points in the ff made it more intriguing. Do continue with this ahead.smiley42smiley27

Thank you Anahitasmiley27 

I m glad that u liked it.I was little hesitant ki pata nahi romance ke alawa kisi ko kuch pasand aayega y nahismiley44

Posted: 18 days ago

Originally posted by Piyaazzz


Mast Likha he Di smiley32

With each line the story is getting more n more  intriguing 

Or yeh buttering nhi he smiley36coz mereko sachhi buttering Karna nhi aata aaj yeh prove ho chuka he smiley44

Thank u piyusmiley27

Tha later part of the story is very interesting..Full on suspensesmiley36smiley16

Posted: 18 days ago

It's fantastic...❤️

The way you've picturised the haunted scene, PurVir ka romance, their journey and her miscarriage.... I was hooked🤩


Please continue soon 

Posted: 18 days ago

Originally posted by sargamif


Thank u piyusmiley27

Tha later part of the story is very interesting..Full on suspensesmiley36smiley16

yesss we r in for suspense thriller 🤩🤩🤩


Molkki 


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