Very interesting suspense n all๐loved purvir romance n liplock ๐ ๐ feeling sad that purvir lost their baby ๐
Continue soon ๐ณ
Very interesting suspense n all๐loved purvir romance n liplock ๐ ๐ feeling sad that purvir lost their baby ๐
Continue soon ๐ณ
1st of all
lead story se hatkar ek new concept likhna is incredible.
I like the part where purvir doing romance behind curtain
Tauji scene was Helirious๐
And last the way u describe haunted scene in last part, i m like it plays on tv n i m watching it. ๐
Originally posted by: pallavi_p281st of all
lead story se hatkar ek new concept likhna is incredible.
Thank u di๐โค๏ธ..y line apne likha mujhe bahut acha laga padke๐ณ
I like the part where purvir doing romance behind curtain
Purvir ho r romance na ho..y to nahi ho sakta๐๐
Tauji scene was Helirious๐
Arrey Tauji k bina kuch bhi pura na hota๐phir horror hi kyu na ho๐
And last the way u describe haunted scene in last part, i m like it plays on tv n i m watching it. ๐
Diiiiii...Ab m kya bolu๐ณsatve aasman pe hu m abhi๐๐ณ
Originally posted by: midniteangelSargam I love it ๐๐ kya likti ho yaar!! Woh red mein jo likha tha it gave a different feel.. I love this horror story... purvir ka behind d curtain romance n tauji ka comparison toh best tha ๐คญ๐ค
Thank you manuโค๏ธ๐ณ
Romance of purvir is a must๐๐ณ..r tauji to apne rockstar h๐๐
Suspense badane k liye ho to likha tha red m๐
Mast hai sargam...new plot...but tauji will never go...๐คฃ
Originally posted by: Srilata.MineilMast hai sargam...new plot...but tauji will never go...๐คฃ
Thank you diโค๏ธ..Maine socha kuch naya try karte h is baar๐
Tauji to indispensable part h hamare ff r show ke๐
I m glad u liked it๐
Wooooh sargam mujhe pata tha ye awesome hoga jab summary padhi thi pehle Maine
But ye to next level๐
Full on horror vibes๐๐๐
Acha laga indono ka relationship kafi developed tha isme
Vir later ask his friends not to be worried about bawari if she behaves strangely,as she is mentally upset about her miscarriage.
First I laughed at this because pura nai padha tha ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ fir jab last ke 4 words padhe my baby pur
Last me kya hua ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ
Ab jaldi se next wala bhi dede
Ooooh Sargam.
Love that you are trying a different genreโค๏ธ
I love me some good suspense/horror. Waiting for the next part.
Originally posted by: NezukoWooooh sargam mujhe pata tha ye awesome hoga jab summary padhi thi pehle Maine
But ye to next level๐
Thank you Nez diโค๏ธ
Full on horror vibes๐๐๐
Hain..Aisa kyaโข๏ธ
Acha laga indono ka relationship kafi developed tha isme
Vir later ask his friends not to be worried about bawari if she behaves strangely,as she is mentally upset about her miscarriage.
First I laughed at this because pura nai padha tha ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ fir jab last ke 4 words padhe my baby pur
Last me kya hua ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ
Mujhe bhi nahi pata kya hua last m๐๐๐๐
Ab jaldi se next wala bhi dede
Ha likha hua h mere pas.. kar dungi post jaldi๐ณ
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