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CHAPTER - 3

30 September-The Day Of Their Wedding Anniversary

Morning-11 AM

Shailesh and Gopi were terrified.They decided to visit the temple and meet the priest there.They bring some gangajal from there and as soon they reached the cottage,they both saw Shalini approaching them.Scared they splash a bottle of gangajal on her.But,to their surprise,nothing happened to Shalini.

Shalini-ye kya pheka tum dono ne mere upar?

Gopi-ae..chudail..jo bhi h tu..ab tu nahi bach payegi..y gangajal h..

Shalini approaches him and hits him on his head.

Shalini-arrey gadhe..bhoot m nahi purvi h..

Shailesh-to phir wo sab kya tha..?kal raat ko tujhe kya ho gaya tha..?

Shalini-arrey wo to m majak kar rahi thi..tum logo ko darane k liye..r tum logo ne mujhe hi bhoot samajh liya..gadhe kahi ke..

Shalini narrates the incident she witnessed in the hall.Three of them were shocked.She revealed to them that Purvi is the one who is possessed.

Same Day: Evening-7 PM

Everyone gathered in the hall to celebrate purvir wedding aniversary.Purvi is looking drop dead gorgeous in pink and white floral lehnga choli whereas Vir was looking dapper in a white embroidered kurta.Both were happy as they were celebrating three years of togetherness.

But was this happiness going to last long?What will happen when the dreaded mystery will unfold?

On the other hand,Shalini sprinkled the holy water on the knife which pur would touch to cut their anniversary cake.Manas and Juhi brings the cake.Vir hugs his two little munchkins.

Pur-suniye ji..hum isme ache to lag rahe h na..

Vir-bahut sundar lag rahi h tu bawri..chand k tukda lag rahi h meri bawri..

Pur-ap jhooth bol rahe h mukhiji..hum isme bahut ajeeb lag rahe h..

Vir-arreyy..acha ruk ib...

Vir left the hall and brought a rose flower for purvi and tucks it in her hair.

Vir-ib tu lag rahi h..choti si..cute si ladki..chal cake kate ib..

Purvi feels a shock as soon as she touched the knife thus revealing to three of them that she is truly possessed.Pur gets a shock and she moves back with a jerk and the lights of the hall started to flicker.

Vir-ke hua bawri..tu theek to h na..?

Pur-ha hum theek mukhiji..She had a strange seriousness on her face.Her eyes had a weird menancing glint while she was staring at three of them.

A short Purvir DanceπŸ₯³

Vir grabs pur from her waist,turn her around and embraces her from back.He moved her hair from her right shoulder and kissed on her neck and sucked her earlobe.He lifts her up and swirls her,brought her down and kissed her cheeks.

Whereas pur warns three of them not to utter a word about this to vir and to leave the next day.The three of them inform Vivek about it but he doesn't believe them and walks out of the hall where he gets his camera back from the delivery boy which he had given to repair shop.There three of them decide to search pur room so that they can find a clue so as to prove their point.

Purvir Room

Three of them properly went upstairs.On the landing they notice pur's room door was ajar.They rapped at the door and pushed the door wide open and entered.They were shocked when they saw the unexpected.The bed,the room also was empty.On the bedroom chair and along the rail of the bed were scattered the garments,the only garments which pur was wearing just now,the pink and white floral lehnga choli .Vir big slouch pagdi even was cocked jauntily over the bed post.As three of them stood there ,they heard the sound of footsteps approaching them.And as they were about to leave the room,a most extraordinary thing happened.The bed clothes gathered themselves together,leapt up suddenly into a sort of peak and then jumped headlong over the bottom rail.It was exactly as if a hand had clutched them in the centre and flung them aside.Immediately the pagdi hopped off the bed post,described a whirling flight in the air through the better part of a circle and then dashed at Gopi's face.Then as swiftly came the sponge from the washstand and then the chair flinging the clothes carelessly aside and laughing drily in a voice,turned itself with its four legs at three of them,seemed to take aim at them for a moment and charged at them.They screamed and turned and then the chair legs came gently but firmly against their back as they were trying to run out but the door slammed violently and was locked.The chair and the bed seemed to be executing a dance of triumph for a moment and then abruptly everything was still.All three of them fell on the floor terrified.

Would this encounter with Purvi put an end to their life?Or Vir will save his friends from Purvi?

When they were trying to run out,Pur appeared in front of them.She put her open palm on her face and withdrew it.The centre of her face became a black cavity.She removed her pallu from her forehead  and with a violent gesture tore her sleeves of the top,for a moment they resisted her.A flash of horrible anticiaption passed through them.It was worse than anything.Three of them standing open-mouthed and horror struck,shocked at what they saw.The torn clothes and false hair flew across the passage into the room,making a hobbledehoy jump to avoid them.Everyone tumbled on everyone else down the steps.For the person they knew,their friend's wife,a bubbly girl,dancing downstairs an hour back,giving some incoherent explanation on spirits,was a solid gesticulating figure upto collar of her,and then nothingness ,no visible thing at all.Shalini was left almost in a fainting condition in Shailesh arms on the landing.It was with the gratest difficulty that Gopi and Shailesh succeeded in getting her downstairs.

Isn't strange that three of them knew her truth and despite that she didn't harmed them?What can be the reason behind this?

There Vivek gets his camera back from the repair shop delievey man,who delieverd it to the cottage.He sees  that Pur is not captured in any of the pictures where she was actually present.He then confirms it by clicking few more pictures of her.He was shocked and immediately rushes to vir to inform him but she somehow manages to divert vir's attention.

Next Day-1st October

Morning-7 AM

Next morning shalini,vivek and gopi noticed shailesh packing his bag and ready to leave the house.But,Vivek confronts him.

Vivek-tu kaha ja raha h shailesh..Vir hamara dost h r hum use aise chod ke nahi ja sakte r wo bhi tab jab hum purvi k sach jante h..

Shailini-Vivek thik kh raha h..hume vir ko sach batana hi hoga..

But,Shailesh was adamant that he will not stay here.

Shailesh-agar hum sab ruke to hum m se koi bhi zinda nahi bachega..m bhi vir ko akela chod ke nahi jaana chahta par agar hum log hi jinda nahi bachenge to usko kaise bachayenge..r tum logo ne ek baat pe gaur kya ki purvi vir ko koi nuksaan nahi pahuchati h..vir ki jaan ko koi khatra nahi h..

When Shailesh tries to leave the house,he is beaten and threatened by pur.They all get scared.So,vivek decided that now he will come clean to Vir.

Purvir's Room

Same Day-10 AM

Vir-arrey tum sab log itna dare hur kyu lag rahe ho..?ke baat ho gayi?koi bhoot dekh liya ke..(laughs)

Vivek-hume tujhe kuch batana h..(interrupted by pur)

Pur-Baatein to baad m bhi ho jayengi..chaliye sab nashta kar lijiye..

Vivek-Purvi sabko chai peene k man h..to tum sab k liye chai le aao..please

Vir-Ja bawri..agar sabka chai peene k man to le aa chai..

Just as pur leaves,Vivek manages to show the camera pictures to Vir,but the pictures doesn't exist anymore.Instead of pur's photgraphs,there were beautiful sceneries of the cottage area.All four friends were shocked.

Vir-bahut chokhi tasveerein kheeche h Vivek tune..

Vivek-(shocked)sundar..kya bol raha h tu..ek min dikha zara..arrey wo tasveerein kaha gayi..wo kaise delete ho gayi..y sab kya ho raha h..

Vir-Konsi tasveeron ki baat kar raha h tu..

Just then pur came there smiling.

Who erased the pictures?So,was it Purvi who deleted those pictures?Or was it Vir who was behind this mystery?

Few Hours Later

All Four Friends In Their Room

The four friends decided to perform a drama so that they can take vir away from purvi and out from the house.So,according to the plan,Shailesh acts like having stomach pain,and hence they call out to Vir.Just when Vir reached there and saw Shailesh in the horrible condition shouting and crying in pain,he gets tensed and rushed him to the car to take him to the hospital.Vivek forgot his purse and told Vir as per the plan and so Vir asked Pur to bring his purse kept on the table.The friends previously spalshed the gangajal or the holy water in few places in the house(on all the doors and windows to avoid any passage to escape) and Vivek goes back to the house and locks purvi and sprays the holy water on the main door. The friends immediately leave with Vir.There purvi was running angrily in the whole house trying to unlock a door so as to move out of the house and prevent them from telling the truth to Vir.But,as soon as she touched the doors and windows she experienced a jerk and fell on the floor.She was shouting on the top of her voice but all in vain.Halfway they observed that the atmosphere seemed to change and the friends understood that purvi is out.The engine of the car failed.They all came out of the car and noticed a temple nearby.While Vir was shocked to see Shailesh who was standing fine there.

Vir-Yo sab ke ho raha h..Shailesh tere ta pet dard ho raha tha na...kaise dahade maar ke ro raha tha na to phir..ib ke ho gaya..koi mujhe kuch samjhayega..agar Shailesh theek h to ghar chalte h..bawri ghar pe akeli hogi..

Gopi-Hum tujhe sab bata denge..par pehle hamare saath chal..

The friends took Vir to a temple and revealed to him about Purvi.Vir is confused and doesn't believe his friends.Everyone tries to make vir understand but he wasn't ready to listen and confronts them for saying ill about purvi.As he was about to leave the temple just then Vivek pushed him near a sharp object located outside the temple.

Why Vivek pushed Vir on a sharp object?So,was it all their cooked up stories?Did he pushed Vir out of anger because he refused to believe them?Is it the end of Vir's life?







Y sab likhne k liye mujhe udti hui chappalein aati hui dikhayi de rahi h..par please single mat phekna..jodi m phekna to mere bhi kaam aa jayengi...🀣🀣🀣

Edited by sargamif - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

RES.. maine do do chapters abhi pada tha kyunki time nahi mila exam prep ki saath...😭

Sargam I'm out of words.. u r so good at writing a thriller and horror genre, just loved how u described d details 😍😍 πŸ‘πŸ‘

Cliffhanger mein chod diya... I wonder what will happen to Vir, I'm sure he'll b saved πŸ™ˆ

Best part, u made my favourite nursery rhyme into a horror rhyme πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Edited by midniteangel - 3 years ago
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sorry..Nezu di apko tag karna bhul gayi

chapter 2 & 3 updated

@supriya dunno why u r not tagable

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Originally posted by: sargamif

sorry..Nezu di apko tag karna bhul gayi

chapter 2 & 3 updated

@supriya dunno why u r not tagable

Ok ok ❀❀❀❀

Mai padhti hu thodi der me

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Abhi kal exam hone do phir Saara padh k comment karungi πŸ€—

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Abhi kal exam hone do phir Saara padh k comment karungi πŸ€—

ab tujhe jab padna h tab pad lena..mujhe bas is series ko jaldi se kahtam karna h..to m fatafat update kar rahi hu opposite to my behaviourπŸ€£πŸ˜†

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ab tujhe jab padna h tab pad lena..mujhe bas is series ko jaldi se kahtam karna h..to m fatafat update kar rahi hu opposite to my behaviourπŸ€£πŸ˜†

Karna to mujhe bhi apni series ko khattam me last 2 parts Bache sirf par me phir attak gyi hu 🀣

Iss weekend tak try karungi πŸ™„πŸ™„ ek part ho jaaye 

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Karna to mujhe bhi apni series ko khattam me last 2 parts Bache sirf par me phir attak gyi hu 🀣

Iss weekend tak try karungi πŸ™„πŸ™„ ek part ho jaaye 

kiska paper h kal be..jee k h kya🀣🀣

arrey tu to hoshiyaar h update karne m..🀣πŸ€ͺ

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Originally posted by: sargamif

sorry..Nezu di apko tag karna bhul gayi

chapter 2 & 3 updated

@supriya dunno why u r not tagable

Don't be sorry di ...I rushed here to read your update I was eagerly waiting for it 🀩🀩


Coming to the story ...I've no words to describe what an exquisite plot you've created !!! πŸ‘πŸ‘

Purvi is possessed aur shayd wo Vir ko pane ke lie ye sab kar rhi hai ....too good di !! You're excellent and incomparable in whatever's you write !! 🀩🀩🀩


Maza aa gya bhot bhot bhot achha hai yeπŸ€—

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mujhe bas is series ko jaldi se kahtam karna h..to m fatafat update kar rahi hu opposite to my behaviourπŸ€£πŸ˜†

Miracle 🀩🀩🀩

Par this change is a blessing ❀️

Jaldi se de do di puri series .. I'm waiting