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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER - 2

Shailesh narrates the incident to everyone,just then vir interrupts.I told you that this house is haunted by the spirits.

Vir-ib sab gaon wale to y hi bolte h ki pret aatam k saaya h iss ghar m..Par maine r bawri ko kabhi kuch mehsoos na hua..Ib y bhoot wali baat sach h ya na..Iska to koi praman na h..Afwa bhi ho sake h..

Pur-y sahi keh rahe h..Hume to itna samay ho gaya rehte hue par hume kabhi kuch mehsoos nahi hua..Agar kuch hota to hume bhi to pata chalta..Gaon walo ki to aadat hoti h afwa udane ki..y sab ho sakta h apka waham ho..Ab ap hi samajhiye ji..

Vir-bawri theek bol rhi h..Tu itna lamba safar karke aaya h..Thakan ki wajah se yo sab ho jawe h..Koi baat na h..Tu aaram kar..Darne ki koi zarurat na h..

Gopi-(giggling)tune kuch jyada pee rakhi h kya..Kya bake ja raha h..Koi bhoot nahi hota..So ja r humko bhi sone de..Gadha kahi ka

No one pay heed to Shailesh words.But,he knew something is wrong here.This cottage is haunted.

Why did vir and pur not pay heed to Shailesh words?Why vir and pur were hell bent on making it Shailesh superstition?Were they both a part of the mystery of the cottage?

Next Day

Morning-11 AM

Shailesh,Gopi,Purvi and Shalini were watching a horror movie.Shailesh was reluctant to watch the movie due to the incidents he witnessed last night but agrees when everyone forces.

Pur-ise kon horror movie kehta h..Horror kam r comedy jyada lag rahi h..Hume nahi achi lag rahi h..Bilkul bhi maza nahi aa raha h..

Gopi-bhooto ko kab se dar lagne laga..

Pur looks at Gopi in shock.Her eyes had a weird menacing glint and was having a strange seriousness on her face.She kept staring at him without blinking while Gopi was scared a bit.☢️

Gopi-(laughs)m to majak kar raha tha..Tum aise kyu dekh rahi ho..Ek baar ko aisa laga ki tumhare andar sach m aatma aa gayi ho..😆

There Shailesh noticed Shalini playing with the knife in her hands.She touched Shalini's shoulder.

Shailesh-Shalini..You okay?Kya hua hai tujhe?

She got up from the sofa and took a step forward.She leaned towards him as he was still sitting on the sofa and pointed the knife towards him.

Shailesh-Sha....Shalini...Kya kar rahi h ye?

Shalini smirked and said in a voice having a strange tenor,"Tera khoon peena chahati hu-"she stared at shailesh."Kahan se kaatu-"she placed the knife on his wrist.."Yahan se"?She moved close,put the knife on his neck and whispered in his ear,"ya yahan se"?

Shailesh and gopi were getting scared and pur was looking in shock.They started thinking,"ye kya ho gaya h shalini ko"?Kahi iske andar wo kursi wali aatma to nahi h?

Shailesh pushed Shalini lightly and stood up from the sofa while Gopi was sitting on sofa trembling.Shalini led out a loud mocking chuckle-

"Bahut shok tha na tum dono ko bhoot dekhne ka"?She suddenly lunged forward causing Shailesh and Gopi to nearly jump out of his skin,"Le dekh".

She started singing in a low,scary voice-

"Twinkle twinkle little star

How I wonder what you are.

Up above the world so high,

I'll stab you and you will die".

The last word was said in a low whisper but the tone was enough to send chills down Gopi and Shailesh's spine.Both were taking their steps back in fear.They tried to get up and escape but Shalini was already standing in front of him blocking his way.But,they got up,pushed her and ran away from their screaming for help.But,pur was standing there shocked.She was looking at Shalini in surprise.She was not at all scared.

Why was Shalini behaving so strangely?Was Shalini the one possessed by the spirit?Why wasn't pur scared?Was pur hiding something?

At 3 o' clock in Afternoon

Vir and Vivek arrives arrives and calls Shailesh and Gopi to join them to bring the necessary items for the anniversary function.They refuse to come as they had to go for some important work.On the other hand,Shalini was decorating the hall and slips from the stool while decorating the wall.A cupboard with sharp articles almost falls over her but is held back by a force.Shalini turns around to find Pur holding back the cupboard and knives with her powers.Pur signals Shalini to get up .Shalini is terrified and runs out.

Force?What kind of a force was it?So,was it Purvi who was possessed by the Spirit?Then,what about Shalini?Why was Shalini behaving so strangely few hours before?Who among Shalini and Purvi,was possessed by the spirits?





Pata nahi kaisa likha h.I know 1st part jitna acha nahi h and I m extremely sorry for that.😒🤔😔

Edited by sargamif - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its nice sargam❤. Kaisi ho aur prep kaisi chal rahi hai. Purvi kahin super woman to nhi hai🤔

Itne sare suspence, kiske ander aatma hai, nahi hai, sab me ek k baad ek dikh rahe hai. Aage ka jaldi likhna.

Take care🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Didi ap me aur kitne hunar chhupe hue hai🤩

This was terrific. Horrifyingly superb!! Waise to thrillers mera fav genre hai so this becomes more fascinating to me 🔥🔥

This update was worth waiting ...waiting for more😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Its nice sargam❤. Kaisi ho aur prep kaisi chal rahi hai. Purvi kahin super woman to nhi hai🤔

M thik hu..❤️prep bhi thik chal rahi h😆

Itne sare suspence, kiske ander aatma hai, nahi hai, sab me ek k baad ek dikh rahe hai. Aage ka jaldi likhna.

Next part m pata chal jayega kiske andar aatma h..😆

Jab m part conclude karungi tab mereko jarur chappal padengi..🤣

Take care🤗

Awww..I love you❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sxshh

Didi ap me aur kitne hunar chhupe hue hai🤩

Pata nahi..Filhaal itne hi bahar aa paye h🤣

This was terrific. Horrifyingly superb!! Waise to thrillers mera fav genre hai so this becomes more fascinating to me 🔥🔥

Mera bhi thriller fav genre h nd crime too😆to batao aatma kiske andar h🤣

This update was worth waiting ...waiting for more😉

Awww..Thank you so much❤️

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Diiiiii❤️❤️❤️🤧🤧🤧🤧 ab aa raha na mazza! This is just what i want! Horror thriller crime bas maza aa gaya!

Ab dheere dheere romance bhi hamesha padh padh ke thoda different ka craving ho raha tha! Jaldi continue karna haan🤗😆❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

Sorry bohot late ho gayi compliment karne mein🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Diiiiii❤️❤️❤️🤧🤧🤧🤧 ab aa raha na mazza! This is just what i want! Horror thriller crime bas maza aa gaya!

Mujhe laga y bahut hi bakwass part likha h maine

Ab dheere dheere romance bhi hamesha padh padh ke thoda different ka craving ho raha tha! Jaldi continue karna haan🤗😆❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

Sorry bohot late ho gayi compliment karne mein🥺

Koi nahi..Bas maza aana chahaiye padne m😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Apke aur hunar bahar ane ka besabri se intezar rhega 😃

Di maine apna prepared topic kya bataya ap to viva lene lage 🤣

Mera guess ye hai ki it's something related to Vir's past aur it's something which is protecting Purvi ...shayd 🤔 [Di I realy have no idea ye bas theory thi jaise hun aksar banate hai🤣 ... Maarna mat bas ]


Thrillers me burai ye hai ki climax ka intezar karna is like slow poison 😂😭😂😭😂😭...to isse pehle hum mar jaye curiosity me pls update Kr dena 🙏🏻🙏🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER - 3

30 September-The Day Of Their Wedding Anniversary

Morning-11 AM

Shailesh and Gopi were terrified.They decided to visit the temple and meet the priest there.They bring some gangajal from there and as soon they reached the cottage,they both saw Shalini approaching them.Scared they splash a bottle of gangajal on her.But,to their surprise,nothing happened to Shalini.

Shalini-ye kya pheka tum dono ne mere upar?

Gopi-ae..chudail..jo bhi h tu..ab tu nahi bach payegi..y gangajal h..

Shalini approaches him and hits him on his head.

Shalini-arrey gadhe..bhoot m nahi purvi h..

Shailesh-to phir wo sab kya tha..?kal raat ko tujhe kya ho gaya tha..?

Shalini-arrey wo to m majak kar rahi thi..tum logo ko darane k liye..r tum logo ne mujhe hi bhoot samajh liya..gadhe kahi ke..

Shalini narrates the incident she witnessed in the hall.Three of them were shocked.She revealed to them that Purvi is the one who is possessed.

Same Day: Evening-7 PM

Everyone gathered in the hall to celebrate purvir wedding aniversary.Purvi is looking drop dead gorgeous in pink and white floral lehnga choli whereas Vir was looking dapper in a white embroidered kurta.Both were happy as they were celebrating three years of togetherness.

But was this happiness going to last long?What will happen when the dreaded mystery will unfold?

On the other hand,Shalini sprinkled the holy water on the knife which pur would touch to cut their anniversary cake.Manas and Juhi brings the cake.Vir hugs his two little munchkins.

Pur-suniye ji..hum isme ache to lag rahe h na..

Vir-bahut sundar lag rahi h tu bawri..chand k tukda lag rahi h meri bawri..

Pur-ap jhooth bol rahe h mukhiji..hum isme bahut ajeeb lag rahe h..

Vir-arreyy..acha ruk ib...

Vir left the hall and brought a rose flower for purvi and tucks it in her hair.

Vir-ib tu lag rahi h..choti si..cute si ladki..chal cake kate ib..

Purvi feels a shock as soon as she touched the knife thus revealing to three of them that she is truly possessed.Pur gets a shock and she moves back with a jerk and the lights of the hall started to flicker.

Vir-ke hua bawri..tu theek to h na..?

Pur-ha hum theek mukhiji..She had a strange seriousness on her face.Her eyes had a weird menancing glint while she was staring at three of them.

A short Purvir Dance🥳

Vir grabs pur from her waist,turn her around and embraces her from back.He moved her hair from her right shoulder and kissed on her neck and sucked her earlobe.He lifts her up and swirls her,brought her down and kissed her cheeks.

Whereas pur warns three of them not to utter a word about this to vir and to leave the next day.The three of them inform Vivek about it but he doesn't believe them and walks out of the hall where he gets his camera back from the delivery boy which he had given to repair shop.There three of them decide to search pur room so that they can find a clue so as to prove their point.

Purvir Room

Three of them properly went upstairs.On the landing they notice pur's room door was ajar.They rapped at the door and pushed the door wide open and entered.They were shocked when they saw the unexpected.The bed,the room also was empty.On the bedroom chair and along the rail of the bed were scattered the garments,the only garments which pur was wearing just now,the pink and white floral lehnga choli .Vir big slouch pagdi even was cocked jauntily over the bed post.As three of them stood there ,they heard the sound of footsteps approaching them.And as they were about to leave the room,a most extraordinary thing happened.The bed clothes gathered themselves together,leapt up suddenly into a sort of peak and then jumped headlong over the bottom rail.It was exactly as if a hand had clutched them in the centre and flung them aside.Immediately the pagdi hopped off the bed post,described a whirling flight in the air through the better part of a circle and then dashed at Gopi's face.Then as swiftly came the sponge from the washstand and then the chair flinging the clothes carelessly aside and laughing drily in a voice,turned itself with its four legs at three of them,seemed to take aim at them for a moment and charged at them.They screamed and turned and then the chair legs came gently but firmly against their back as they were trying to run out but the door slammed violently and was locked.The chair and the bed seemed to be executing a dance of triumph for a moment and then abruptly everything was still.All three of them fell on the floor terrified.

Would this encounter with Purvi put an end to their life?Or Vir will save his friends from Purvi?

When they were trying to run out,Pur appeared in front of them.She put her open palm on her face and withdrew it.The centre of her face became a black cavity.She removed her pallu from her forehead and with a violent gesture tore her sleeves of the top,for a moment they resisted her.A flash of horrible anticiaption passed through them.It was worse than anything.Three of them standing open-mouthed and horror struck,shocked at what they saw.The torn clothes and false hair flew across the passage into the room,making a hobbledehoy jump to avoid them.Everyone tumbled on everyone else down the steps.For the person they knew,their friend's wife,a bubbly girl,dancing downstairs an hour back,giving some incoherent explanation on spirits,was a solid gesticulating figure upto collar of her,and then nothingness ,no visible thing at all.Shalini was left almost in a fainting condition in Shailesh arms on the landing.It was with the gratest difficulty that Gopi and Shailesh succeeded in getting her downstairs.

Isn't strange that three of them knew her truth and despite that she didn't harmed them?What can be the reason behind this?

There Vivek gets his camera back from the repair shop delievey man,who delieverd it to the cottage.He sees that Pur is not captured in any of the pictures where she was actually present.He then confirms it by clicking few more pictures of her.He was shocked and immediately rushes to vir to inform him but she somehow manages to divert vir's attention.

Next Day-1st October

Morning-7 AM

Next morning shalini,vivek and gopi noticed shailesh packing his bag and ready to leave the house.But,Vivek confronts him.

Vivek-tu kaha ja raha h shailesh..Vir hamara dost h r hum use aise chod ke nahi ja sakte r wo bhi tab jab hum purvi k sach jante h..

Shailini-Vivek thik kh raha h..hume vir ko sach batana hi hoga..

But,Shailesh was adamant that he will not stay here.

Shailesh-agar hum sab ruke to hum m se koi bhi zinda nahi bachega..m bhi vir ko akela chod ke nahi jaana chahta par agar hum log hi jinda nahi bachenge to usko kaise bachayenge..r tum logo ne ek baat pe gaur kya ki purvi vir ko koi nuksaan nahi pahuchati h..vir ki jaan ko koi khatra nahi h..

When Shailesh tries to leave the house,he is beaten and threatened by pur.They all get scared.So,vivek decided that now he will come clean to Vir.

Purvir's Room

Same Day-10 AM

Vir-arrey tum sab log itna dare hur kyu lag rahe ho..?ke baat ho gayi?koi bhoot dekh liya ke..(laughs)

Vivek-hume tujhe kuch batana h..(interrupted by pur)

Pur-Baatein to baad m bhi ho jayengi..chaliye sab nashta kar lijiye..

Vivek-Purvi sabko chai peene k man h..to tum sab k liye chai le aao..please

Vir-Ja bawri..agar sabka chai peene k man to le aa chai..

Just as pur leaves,Vivek manages to show the camera pictures to Vir,but the pictures doesn't exist anymore.Instead of pur's photgraphs,there were beautiful sceneries of the cottage area.All four friends were shocked.

Vir-bahut chokhi tasveerein kheeche h Vivek tune..

Vivek-(shocked)sundar..kya bol raha h tu..ek min dikha zara..arrey wo tasveerein kaha gayi..wo kaise delete ho gayi..y sab kya ho raha h..

Vir-Konsi tasveeron ki baat kar raha h tu..

Just then pur came there smiling.

Who erased the pictures?So,was it Purvi who deleted those pictures?Or was it Vir who was behind this mystery?

Few Hours Later

All Four Friends In Their Room

The four friends decided to perform a drama so that they can take vir away from purvi and out from the house.So,according to the plan,Shailesh acts like having stomach pain,and hence they call out to Vir.Just when Vir reached there and saw Shailesh in the horrible condition shouting and crying in pain,he gets tensed and rushed him to the car to take him to the hospital.Vivek forgot his purse and told Vir as per the plan and so Vir asked Pur to bring his purse kept on the table.The friends previously spalshed the gangajal or the holy water in few places in the house(on all the doors and windows to avoid any passage to escape) and Vivek goes back to the house and locks purvi and sprays the holy water on the main door. The friends immediately leave with Vir.There purvi was running angrily in the whole house trying to unlock a door so as to move out of the house and prevent them from telling the truth to Vir.But,as soon as she touched the doors and windows she experienced a jerk and fell on the floor.She was shouting on the top of her voice but all in vain.Halfway they observed that the atmosphere seemed to change and the friends understood that purvi is out.The engine of the car failed.They all came out of the car and noticed a temple nearby.While Vir was shocked to see Shailesh who was standing fine there.

Vir-Yo sab ke ho raha h..Shailesh tere ta pet dard ho raha tha na...kaise dahade maar ke ro raha tha na to phir..ib ke ho gaya..koi mujhe kuch samjhayega..agar Shailesh theek h to ghar chalte h..bawri ghar pe akeli hogi..

Gopi-Hum tujhe sab bata denge..par pehle hamare saath chal..

The friends took Vir to a temple and revealed to him about Purvi.Vir is confused and doesn't believe his friends.Everyone tries to make vir understand but he wasn't ready to listen and confronts them for saying ill about purvi.As he was about to leave the temple just then Vivek pushed him near a sharp object located outside the temple.

Why Vivek pushed Vir on a sharp object?So,was it all their cooked up stories?Did he pushed Vir out of anger because he refused to believe them?Is it the end of Vir's life?







Y sab likhne k liye mujhe udti hui chappalein aati hui dikhayi de rahi h..par please single mat phekna..jodi m phekna to mere bhi kaam aa jayengi...🤣🤣🤣

Edited by sargamif - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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RES.. maine do do chapters abhi pada tha kyunki time nahi mila exam prep ki saath...😭

Sargam I'm out of words.. u r so good at writing a thriller and horror genre, just loved how u described d details 😍😍 👏👏

Cliffhanger mein chod diya... I wonder what will happen to Vir, I'm sure he'll b saved 🙈

Best part, u made my favourite nursery rhyme into a horror rhyme 😂😂

Edited by midniteangel - 4 years ago

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