Purvir SS : The Haunted Cottage|Completed | - Page 7

Sargam bahut accha likha hai 👏

But aur kitne part hai

Concept is clean, no extra taam jhaam.

specially this part

And dialogues hamesha ki tarah jhakkas😎

Starting me thoda fun lagta hai but jaise aage padhti gai, bahut accha tha.

all scenes comes in front of my eyes. I m curious now, aage jaldi likhna

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Sargam bahut accha likha hai 👏

But aur kitne part hai

Last part bacha h chotusa..Climax 🤣

Concept is clean, no extra taam jhaam.

Matlab apko pata h aage kya hone wala h🤔

specially this part

And dialogues hamesha ki tarah jhakkas😎

Starting me thoda fun lagta hai but jaise aage padhti gai, bahut accha tha.

all scenes comes in front of my eyes. I m curious now, aage jaldi likhna

Originally posted by: sargamif

Nahi mujhe nhi pata aage kya hoga. Concept is clean matlab this part is clean

CHAPTER - 4

Vir turns around to look who saved him from falling on the sharp object and is shocked to see Purvi there.Vir gets to see the real face of Purvi.Purvi looked at vir helplessly.While she had a weird menacing glint and seriousness on her face while staring at Vivek.

Vivek-m janta tha tum jaroor aaogi..Tumhara rom rom darta h iss baat se ki kahi tum vir ko kho na do..Isiliye aj tumhare saath ek game khela hum logo ne..Ab dekh liya vir ne tumhe..Ab yakeen hogaya use ki tum kya ho..

Purvi-m janti thi vir apko ek din sab pata chal jayega..Chahe ek umar ho y ek pal m apke saath rehna chahati thi..Mujhe maaf kar dijiye..

Vivek-apni y iccha(wish) puri karne k liye tumne vir ki zindagi dao par lagayi..Tumhare is roop k saath vir rehna chahata h ya nahi y tum khud se pucho..Tumhare pas sirf aaj raat tak k waqt h..Aj k baad tum nazar nahi aaogi..

Vir-(crying heavily)bas kar tu..Tujhe kya lagta h tu ise meri zindagi se nikal dega..m to shuru se hi sacchai janta tha..Kitni koshish ki hamare beech y pal na aaye..Hamesha khamosh raha..Itne dino tak tum logo ko nazarandaaz kiya..Phir bhi sirf meri khushi k liye isne tum logo ko hamari saalgirah(anniversary) pe nyota diya..Janta tha ki tum log kabhi nahi samajh paoge..Humne bahut kam samay saath bitaya h...Lekin sau janmon k barabar h wo pal..

While Purvi and all four friends were shocked to hear thai.Purvi fell down on her knees and covered her face with her both hands and started crying seeing how much Vir loves her.But,now she'll have to leave Vir,her munchkins-Juhi,manas and this thought pricked her heart.

Flashback

Vir and Purvi arrived in the cottage.Purvi started to explore the house.The beautiful house on the outskirts of Rewari Village where they were soon going to start a new life but they never knew that this will soon bring an end to their happiness and Purvi's life?But how?

Pur-kitna acha h y ghar..Kitna acha lag raha h yaha se sab..Bahar ka nazara..

Vir-ghar pasand aaya..?

Pur-Hmm.

They both touch their foreheads together and vir planted a kiss on her forehead.Whike Purvi decorated the house which looked like a fairyland.The house full of pics ,every corner speaking the depth of their love and decorated the laughter of their life.While Vir brought a parrot,a new member in their family and hanged the cage in the balcony and called Pur,juhi and manas out.While all were busy playing with the parrot,Purvi started to feel dizzy,her blood pressure dropped which made her extremely light headed and she fainted.Vir immediately rushed her to the hospital .

In The Hospital

While Purvi's checkup was going on,Vir sat outside restless and worried about her health.

But,a good news was soon awaiting them.

The doctor called Vir and informed him about Purvi being pregnant and he is soon going to be a father.He fell on the chair with a thud.He couldn't believe his ears that he was going to be a father again.He was so filled up with joy.He lifts Purvi up and swirls her.His happiness knew no bounds.

But was this happiness going to last long?

9th month of Purvi's Pregnancy

Purvi and Vir were sitting near the fireplace,enjoying the cute moments of their life.But,soon Purvi went into labour,Vir couldn't get help as the land phone was not working and he wasn't able to call the ambulance.His car also was in the garage as the engine broke down.So,he rushed pur to the hospital on his bike and they met with an accident hitting a huge Boulder.Vir fell on the ground but Purvi fell off the cliff into the river below.He tried to help Purvi but he lost his consciousness.When he opened his eyes in the hospital,he saw Purvi and was happy that she is fine but sad that they lost their baby.A tear trickled down his cheek.He wasn't able to control his emotions and started crying that happiness never stayed in his life.Why is he the only unlucky person who doesn't have the right to stay happy.Purvi tried to console him but all in vain.She cupped his face,kissed his forehead and wiped his tears.He gets discharged from the hospital and reached home.But,in a few days,he understood that Purvi had passed away and it was her spirit that was with him after he doesn't see the image of Purvi in the mirror.However,he chose to stay with her.Also he avoided his friends and others to protect this secret.

Present Day

Vir-m kuch nahi kar paya..Meri wajah se meri bawari ki jaan gayi..Jab mujhe hosh aaya tab tu mere saamne thi bawri..Manne laga yo sab ek bura sapna tha..Par nhi..Yo ehsaas manne hone lag gaya tha ki wo meri bawri nahi h..Bawari mar chuki h..r yo baat samajhne m mujhe jyada waqt nahi lagi ki y bawari na uski aatma thi..Phir manne pata laga ki bawari ki body ki talaash khatam hone wali h...Bhagwaan se maine yo mannat maangi thi ki bawari ki body kabhi na mile..r yo hi hua..Police ko teri body kahi nahi mili..Manne yo darr tha ki tujhe kahi sacchai ka pata na laga jaye..r kahi m apni bawari ko phir se kho na du...isiliye usse jatata raha ki mujhe kuch nahi pata..Waqt k saath y jhooth bhi sach ban gaya..Usse dur krne wali har cheez ko maine apne ghar r zindagi se nikal pheka..Saare sheeshe(mirrors),r bhagwaan ki saari murtiyan maine visarjit kar di maa ganga ki god m..r camera m se tasveeren bhi maine hi delete ki thi...Na jaane kitni baar kaha ki tu mere saath na ho to m ek pal bhi na jee paunga..

Pur-(heavily crying) jara sochiye mukhi ji..y log bilkul sach keh rahe h..Meri wajah se apki zindagi barbaad nahi honi chahiye..Mera r apka koi mel nahi h..Mujhe apse dur jaana hi hoga..y prakarti(nature) k viruddh h..

Vir-(cups her face) log chahe kuch bhi kahe..Kuch nahi badla hamare beech..m tanne chu sake hu..Tanne gale laga sakta hu,tere saath has sakta hu,tujhse baat kar sakta hu..r mujhe kuch nahi chahiye..Hum aj bhi wo mukhi r mukhiyani h..Chahe qayamat hi kyu na aa jaye hum aise hi rahenge..

Purvi ran into vir's arms.They delved into a bone crashing hug.Both cried heavily but ultimately satisfied that they didn't had any secrets between them.Purvi was satisfied that now her Mukhiji knew her reality and that she can live with him forever without that any fear and at the same time so proud that she is the only one who deserves this much love.

Pur-(humne kanhaji se maanga tha ki hume aisa pati chaiye jo hume maan de,samman de,pyaar de par hum nahi jante the ki koi hume itna pyaar karega ki humari jaise aatma r uski bhayanak shakal k saath bhi rehne ko tayyar ho jayega..Hume itna kuch diya apne lekin kyu phir hume itni jaldi apne pas bula liya..Kyu hume hamare mukhji k saath nahi rehne diya..Kyu hamara ghar sansaar basne se pehle hi tabah kar diya..Par hum khud se wada karte h ki hum mukhiji r hamare bachchon ko kabhi dukhi nahi hone denge..Koi musibat nahi aane denge un par..Bas har janam hume mukhiji hi pati k roop m mile..)

Next Vacation

After a year the friends again meet up this time with the addition of Shailesh's wife.Shailesh's wife was petrified to get out of the car.Purvi then goes and brings her into the house with care.All of them get along well and click a picture.

A voiceover of Purvi saying that-

She knows that she would never appear in the picture but the picture would be close to her heart.

Vir's love for Purvi was so pure that despite he knew that she is a spirit he decided to live with her,kyunki wo uske jism se nahi uski aatma se pyaar karta tha.They lived happily ever after.

This is the end of the eternal love story of Mukhi Virendra Pratap Singh and Purvi Virendra Pratap Singh.

Maine apni pehli series finally complete kar li to is khushi m socha sabko tag kar du..

For me it's party time🥳🥳💃💃💃

@supriya u aren't tagable, donno why?🤔😆🤔😆

Sorry,If I forgot to tag someone.😊

Bruh

Kya twist tha 😳😳😳😳😳😳

Mukhiji ke sath hi kyu😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

God mukhi ko dubara ese din na dikhaye

Sargam 👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sargamif

@supriya u aren't tagable, donno why?🤔😆🤔😆

Sorry,If I forgot to tag someone.😊

Seriously isko mai bhi tag nai kar pati

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Bruh

Kya twist tha 😳😳😳😳😳😳

Kyu samajh nahi aaya kya?😎😃😎😃🤣

Mukhiji ke sath hi kyu😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

God mukhi ko dubara ese din na dikhaye

Ohh..Mukhi ke chahane walo k dil tut gaya🤣🤣

Sargam 👏👏👏👏

Dhanyavaad❤️

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Seriously isko mai bhi tag nai kar pati

Haa..Wahi to🤔

Ajeeb sa username rakha h captcha ki tarah🤔