Sunn Zara.... Listen, darling....Shivin Tejasswi FS Part1

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Sunn Zara.... Listen, darling....Part1

 

 I dedicate this story to Viditian who requested me to write a story on Shivin Tejasswi.This story is inspired by the Kannada movie Kurubana Rani.I have not seen this movie.Thank you very much my dearest friend Palchin2995 for giving me this concept to write this story.

A boy told a girl:Believe me,your aunt is betraying you.

She got angry hearing it.

“How dare you talk like this about my aunt?She is my everything.She only nurtured me after I lost my parents.I trust her”.

He:You are doing a big mistake by trusting her.

Hearing this a middle aged woman and a young man became dull.

Somebody said:Cut it!

Then he said:Tanviji..your performance was superb.No wonder that you are the lady superstar of cinema.

Tanvi smiled:Thank you Sir.

It was a scene from the movie they were shooting for.The girl was the lady superstar Tanvi.

The man who said Cut it and appreciated her performance was the film director Vidyuth.

The middle aged woman and the young man who became dull seeing the scene were Tanvi’s aunt Niharika and her son Siddharth.

Sid:Mom…what kind of a scene it was!It seems as if the script writer of this movie know the reality.In real life also Tanvi is having an aunt like you who is exploiting her fame and looting money.

Niharika:For a moment even I got nervous.But no…it’s just a pure coincidence.Just chill.Nobody knows our reality.Tanvi trusts us blindly.She thinks that we love her very much.

Niharika and Siddharth smirked.

Tanvi came towards Niharika:Chachi!

Niharika:My sweety…

Tanvi  and Niharika hugged each other.

Niharika:What a performance it was!My sweety is the best.

Tanvi smiled happily.

Tanvi:In this movie I have a cunning aunt.I feel bad for my character.I am so lucky that I have got a sweet aunt like you.

Niharika caressed her face:I am also lucky to have a niece like you.

Tanvi and Niharika hugged each other again.

Niharika smirked.Siddharth too smiled in an evil manner.

Niharika said in her mind:I am really lucky to have you .Because of you,my son and I are leading a luxurious life.

 

The shooting location was a small village.They needed a boy who has to act as the boy who marries Tanvi in the movie.The hero is not able to shoot for a few days.So they needed a body double to do the wedding scene with Tanvi. The producer Ram Lal gave money to the director Vidyuth to pay the boy who can do this scene.

Vidyuth and his assistant Rakesh discussed about that.

Vidyuth:Our producer is a NRI who does’nt know anything.So he gave a good amount of money to pay the boy who comes only for a few minutes in the movie.I am not going to give a good payment to a body double just for a minute role.So you just find any random villager over here to do that scene.

Rakesh:Ok I will try.

 

Later Rakesh informed him:Sir…I found a guy who can do that scene with Tanvi.A very innocent…a complete fool.I asked him if he can tie mangalsuthra around Tanvi’s neck he was excited as he is her big fan.You don’t have to pay a single penny to him.

Vidyuth:Very good.What is his name?

Rakesh:Veer.

 

Tanvi dressed up as a bride to do her wedding scene in the movie.Veer arrived.Seeing Tanvi as a bride his face blossomed.

With excitement he went towards Tanvi:Hi Tanviji…I am Veer.I am your big fan.I really love you a lot.

Tanvi smiled:Hi Veer.

Veer:I always dreamt to marry you.

Tanvi giggled as she took it only as a joke.

Tanvi:Really?

Veer:Yes.But I never thought that my dream will get fulfilled like this.

Tanvi just smiled taking it as a fan's craziness.

Vidyuth:Ok…Tanvi…Veer….the scene is a normal wedding scene.Veer…when I tell you,you should tie the nuptial chain around Tanvi’s neck.

Veer replied happily:I am ready at any time Sir.

As Vidyuth instructed Veer took the nuptial chain in his hands 

and tied it around Tanvi’s neck.He applied vermilion on the partition of her hair.

Veer felt that he was in a heaven.

 

After the scene,Tanvi removed the fake nuptial chain.

Then for the next scene she wore another dress and came.

Veer noticed that Tanvi has not worn nuptial chain and vermilion.

Veer:What is this Tanviji?We just got married.Suddenly you changed your wedding lehenga and even removed your nuptial chain and vermilion.Why?

Tanvi was stunned.

Vidyuth to Rakesh:When you told me about Veer,I never thought that he would be just a big fool.

Rakesh:But will this crazy man create problem?

Vidyuth:I guess already he is creating problems.

Tanvi:What are you saying Veer?It’s true that you put nuptial chain and vermilion on me.But it was just acting.It was only a movie scene.

Veer:Acting?Delivering dialogues can be acting.But how can tying nuptial chain and putting vermilion be acting?I was not acting Tanviji.I did it from the bottom of my heart as I really love you.

Tanvi was shocked.

Tanvi:Veer..please try to understand.This happens in movies.But it’s not real.

Veer:How can you say that it’s not real Tanviji?It’s not camera trick.I really tied nuptial chain around your neck.I really applied vermilion on your hair partition.It really happened.It’s not illusion.

Tanvi was stunned.

Niharika:Why are you all looking like this?Put this mad man out.

Siddharth and the production people dragged away Veer.Veer looked at Tanvi painfully.

“Tanviji…”

Tanvi was confused and she did not know what to do.But the way he called her now made her upset.

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Part 1


Beautiful Start 

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Poor guy got his heart broken. He was too innocent to realize anything.

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Tanvi is unable to believe that her Aunt Niharika is cheating on her and looting her. The shooting scene was dramatic. Veer putting vermillion on Tanvi's partition seemed real. Shocked that Tanvi reacted after knowing that her marriage with Veer was real.

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Thanks a lot.Tani Veer wedding scene was not real.It was a scene they shot for the movie.But Veer was too innocent to believe that it was only a movie scene and not real.That's why Tanvi reacted.



Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Tanvi is unable to believe that her Aunt Niharika is cheating on her and looting her. The shooting scene was dramatic. Veer putting vermillion on Tanvi's partition seemed real. Shocked that Tanvi reacted after knowing that her marriage with Veer was real.

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Sunn Zara.... Listen, darling....Part2

 

Tanvi was sitting in her room and thinking of Veer.

Suddenly somebody knocked at the door.She opened the door.She got shocked as it was Veer.

Tanvi:Veer!Why are you here now?

Veer barged inside.

Tanvi:Veer!

Veer:We are a married couple Tanviji.Today we just got married.In our village no husband will leave the wife like that after marriage…that also on the wedding night itself.So I will be with you here.

Tanvi was shocked.

Tanvi:Are you mad Veer?I told you that we are not married.

Suddenly Niharika and Siddarth came hearing the sound.They got shocked to see Veer there.

Niharika:You came here also?

Sid:Get out.

Veer:Why should I leave my wife and go?Who are you to order me?

Sid:This guy is really mad.He needs to be pushed out.

Siddharth pulled his collar and pushed him out.

Veer:Tanviji..you can’t do this to me.How can you kick out your husband on the wedding night itself.

Tanvi got frustrated:Oh no…what to do with this man?

 

The next day Veer came to the location.He ran towards Tanvi:Hi Tanviji…

Tanvi was shocked.

Tanvi:You came again?

Veer:Where will I go leaving my wife?

Tanvi:Oh no…

Tanvi faked a smile:Veer...now you go.I am very busy.We will talk later.

Veer:I will wait here until you become free.

Tanvi was stunned.

She thought:This guy won't leave me.

Tanvi went towards Vidyuth and Rakesh:From where did you find this body double?Because of him I can’t live peacefully.Please do something.

Vidyuth:We never expected this Tanviji.

Rakesh:We will do something about it Madam.

Tanvi:Ok.

 Tanvi left the location without Veer's knowledge and Veer got disappointed.

 

Vidyuth and Rakesh met Veer’s parents and told the matter.They became shocked and upset.

His mother Bansuri said:Our son is crazy about actress Tanvi.He used to say that he will marry Tanvi.

His father Balwant:But we never thought that his madness will cross the border.

Vidyuth:Tell your son to control himself.He has become a nuisance to all of us.

Balwant-Bansuri became upset.

 

When Veer reached home Balwant and Bansuri surrounded him.

Balwant:Is it true that you are disturbing that actress Tanvi?

Veer:I am not disturbing her.

Balwant:We heard that you are always going after her.

Veer:You are also always walking after Maa.Is it a disturbance for her?

Balwant was embarrassed.

Bansuri:But I am your father’s wife.But Tanvi is..

Veer:Tanviji is my wife.I married her.

Balwant:Stop it.Whatever you say a fake wedding scene of a movie cannot be real.

Veer:Whatever you say our real wedding can’t be fake.

Balwant-Bansuri was stunned.Veer walked away.

Bansuri:What will we do Balwantji?

Balwant:He is out of control.You should not have allowed him to watch Tanvi’s movies.You made him crazy.

Bansuri:Now you are blaming me?When he was watching Tanvi’s movies day and night what were you doing?

Balwant:You are blaming me now?

Bansuri:Then what about you blaming me?

They both kept arguing with each other.

 

 

Siddharth sent goons to threaten Veer.

The goons surrounded Veer.

Goon:Why are you after actress Tanvi?Leave her.Otherwise…

Veer:I will not leave my wife Tanvi at any cost.What will you do?

Suddenly the goons started punching him.But to their shock Veer started punching them back with full force.

 

Siddarth informed this to Niharika.

Niharika:This guy is so powerful.

Siddharth:I wonder whether Tanvi will also accept him as her husband one day.

Niharika:What nonsense!Why would Tanvi accept that mad fool as her husband?She will never do that.

Siddharth:You are right.Why would a top actress like Tanvi accept a stupid villager?

 

 

The next day Tanvi was shocked to find Veer in  the compound of her temporary house.

Tanvi:Veer…again you came here?

Veer:I am your husband Tanvi.How can I not come here?

Tanvi:Oh..just leave Veer.

Sid:Just ignore him.When you ignore him he will go on his own.

Niharika:Yes.You try that and see.

Tanvi looked at Veer:Whatever ..I will  not let you come inside.So better you leave.

Veer:I will not go even if you don’t let me enter your house.I will stay here itself.

Tanvi got irritated:Then you stay outside itself.

She closed the door angrily.

 

 After some time Tanvi opened the door and checked if he was there.She was shocked to see Veer shivering there in coldness as it was raining.

She felt upset seeing his condition.

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Tanvi is in a bind. She can't just accept someone as her husband when she didn't sign up for it. Veer on the other hand has a pure heart but is delusional.

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Veer-Tanvi marriage was a shooting scene but it seems that Veer is delusional. I guess he is falling in love with Tanvi.