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Part 2 


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Thank u very much friends

Sunn Zara.... Listen, darling....Part 3

 After some time Tanvi opened the door and checked if he was there.She was shocked to see Veer shivering there in coldness as it was raining.

She felt upset seeing his condition.

She went near him holding an umbrella.

“Veer!”.

Veer looked at her.

Tanvi:Are you mad Veer?It’s raining.Still you are sitting here instead of going back home.

Veer:I told you that I will stay wherever you are.I can’t leave you and go.You are my life Tanviji.

Tanvi looked at him emotionally.

Tanvi:You come inside and change your dress.Otherwise you will fall sick.

Veer smiled:Finally you allowed me to come inside.

Tanvi did not reply.

Veer got inside the room with his bag.

Tanvi:Why have you brought a big bag?

Veer:Because I am going to stay with my wife here.

Tanvi was shocked:What?What nonsense!

Veer:The husband should be with the wife.Right?So when you stay here I should be here.Right?

Tanvi was shocked.

Veer went inside the washroom.He came back changing his dress.

Tanvi:Veer..just go out.

Veer:A husband should stay in his wife’s room.Right?So I will stay in your room itself.

Tanvi was stunned.

Tanvi got nervous.

Veer:Don’t be nervous Tanviji.I love you truly.Without your permission I won’t even touch you.

I won’t sleep beside you in your bed.

Tanvi was relieved.

He slept on the floor mat.

Tanvi:He is not harmful like I thought.He is decent.

Tanvi slept on the bed.

Veer went to his dream world.

Veer-Tanvi went for a lovely morning walk.They were smiling and chatting.

Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

In their room ....

Veer teased Tanvi.

Tanvi:What?

Suddenly she started throwing things at him.He tried to defend himself with a pillow.

Both were laughing.

Aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun sun sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

Tanvi was giving an interview at a press meeting.Veer came and stood near her taking photographs with her.


Aaj khamoshiyon se
Aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun sun sun zara

They relaxed in the garden with sweet romantic moments.


Beetey lamhon ke saaye
Toh bas yahi tham gaye hai
Yaad mujhe aaye teri baatein
Palkon ki surkh chadar
Pe ask bhi jam gaye hai
Teri ankhon se na
Hatti aankhein

Bebasi ka hai aalam kya
Karoo main bata
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

Veer sang playing a guitar and Tanvi got lost in his voice.

Aaj khamoshiyon se
Aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

They danced together romantically.

Choom ke apne hoton se
Tere gam ko chura loo
Laake tujhe de doo
Khushiyan sari
Apni har beqarari ko
Seene main hi chupa lu
Meri chahtein jaye tujhpe wari
Sehme sehme labon mein

Ghul gayi hai dua
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

Ghul gayi hai dua
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara


Aaj khamoshiyon se
Aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara.
Sun zara soniye sun zara.



Veer dreamt of a cute flight journey with Tanvi.


Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

Veer-Tanvi went to beautiful places and took photographs there.

Aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun sun sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

Aaj khamoshiyon se
Aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun sun sun zara

Beetey lamhon ke saaye
Toh bas yahi tham gaye hai
Yaad mujhe aaye teri baatein
Palkon ki surkh chadar
Pe ask bhi jam gaye hai
Teri ankhon se na
Hatti aankhein

Bebasi ka hai aalam kya
Karoo main bata
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

The next morning Veer woke up and sat on the mat.He turned off his face and saw Tanvi sleeping.

He admired her innocent beauty.

Aaj khamoshiyon se
Aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara

He remembered the dream he saw.

Veer:It was such a nice dream.Though I don't know to sing,in the dream like the heroes of movies I sang so well and Tanviji got impressed by my magical voice.It wish it was true.

Choom ke apne hoton se
Tere gam ko chura loo
Laake tujhe de doo
Khushiyan sari
Apni har beqarari ko
Seene main hi chupa lu
Meri chahtein jaye tujhpe wari
Sehme sehme labon mein
Ghul gayi hai dua
Dhadkanein hai deewani
Dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
Sun zara soniye sun zara
Sun zara soniye sun zara(
Lucky: No Time For Love).

Tanvi opened her eyes with a smile.

Seeing her awake he went near her.

Veer:Good Morning Tanviji…

Tanvi:Good morning.Are you not going home?

Veer:No.When you are here how can I go?

Tanvi did not know what to say.

Niharika knocked the door.Tanvi opened it.She was shocked to see Veer in the room.

Niharika:Veer is in your bedroom.What is this Tanvi?

Tanvi:Chachi…Veer was drenched very badly in the rain.That’s why I brought him inside.

Niharika:Why are you showing him sympathy?

Veer:Because I am her husband.Any wife will show concern towards her husband.Right Tanviji?

Tanvi was silent.

Niharika:How dare you?

Tanvi held her hand:Chachi…come…

Tanvi took Niharika out.

Niharika:Tanvi…he is dangerous.

Tanvi:No chachi.He is not dangerous.He was with me the whole night.But he did not even touch me.

He is a gentle man.

Niharika:So are you planning to make him stay here forever?

Tanvi:No chachi.He has to leave.

Niharika:Then I will call the police.The police will drive him away.

Tanvi:No need of calling the police chachi.They will hurt him a lot.Poor guy.He is not that bad to get beaten by the police.Let him stay here for time being.Slowly I will convince him.Anyways the shoot will get over soon.After that we are leaving this place.So only for a few more days we have to tolerate him.

Niharika:But Tanvi…

Tanvi:Please chachi…

Niharika:Ok.

 

Niharika went to Siddharth’s room.He was sleeping.She screamed at him making him wake up.

Sid:What is this mom?You didn’t allow me to sleep.

Niharika:Here there is a big problem and you are sleeping.

Sid:What’s the big problem?

Niharika told him everything.Siddharth was shocked.

Sid:So my fear is coming true.Tanvi has started feeling soft corner towards Veer.This soft corner may turn into love.

Niharika got worried.

Niharika:No.That should not happen.If Tanvi marries Veer,her career will end and our luxurious life will also end.Tanvi is a hen who lays golden eggs.We should not lose her.

Sid:Yes.Veer is over smart.If he stays with us here he may even find out our true colour.That’s dangerous.

Niharika:We should do something to kick him out.

Sid:Yes mom.

 

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hi thanks for the pm! wonderful update 

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Niharika and Sid will plot some way of getting rid of Veer. I hope Veer knows something and is putting on the act of a delusion innocent guy to protect her.

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Part 3 


Beautiful Update


Fabulous song selection 

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Veer got wet in the rain & finally made his place in her room. Loved their bonding. Niharika agreed to Veer staying with them, but she & Sid are afraid of getting exposed. I hope their plan gets foiled.

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Thank u very much friends



Sunn Zara.... Listen, darling....Part 4

 Tanvi was jogging.Suddenly she saw Veer near her running along with her.

She was stunned:You?

Veer:Yes.When my wife can wake up early in the morning to do jogging I should also give her a company.Right?

Tanvi thought:This fellow won’t understand anything.

Both were jogging.Tanvi got tired very fast and started panting.

Veer:What is this Tanvi?You stopped it so fast.

Tanvi:I can’t do this anymore.

I hate exercising.But since I am an actress I am forced to do all this.

Veer:But exercising is necessary.It makes us healthy.

Tanvi:Then you run alone.I can’t.

Veer:Ok.

Veer continued jogging.

Tanvi too followed him.

Veer:You resumed it?

Tanvi showed a puppy face:Ya..

He giggled.They jogged together.

 

Sunn Zara Arziyan Main Mangta Hoon Mere Khuda Se Teri Sunn Zara Khwaab Meri Neend Mein Bhi Karte Hain Baatein Ter

After some time they started walking.Unknowingly Tanvi held his hand and walked.Veer became very happy.

Sau Baar Khuda Se Maanga Hai Mannat Ka Tu Woh Dhaaga Hai Tu Pyaar Ke Badle Apni Yaadein De Gaya


Tanvi:I really had fun jogging with you.

He smiled.

Veer said in his mind:I hope every morning you will allow me to be with you while jogging.

Main Gair Tha, Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyun De Gaya Main Gair Tha Tere Liye, Phir Mujhe Sapney Kyoon De Gaya.

Veer saw Tanvi murmuring.

Tanvi:Back to back movies.All are expecting too much from me because of my lady superstar tag.How will I handle everything.So much of pressure on me.

Veer:You do yoga.You will be stress free.

Tanvi:But…I don't know this yoga and all.

Veer:I will teach you yoga.My papaji had sent you to Yoga Guru long ago.

She smiled.

 

Veer instructed her how to do the basic steps of yoga.Under his guidance she did it quite well.

Tanvi:You are right about yoga.I feel so relaxed now.

Veer:Always be relaxed and happy like this.

She smiled.

 Haathon Ki Lakeerein Bikhri Huyi Hain Kismat Mein Jaane Kya Likha Kaash Tu Kahin Se Mil Jaye Mujhko Sajde Main Karta Sar Jhuka

Tanvi was painting.Veer was surprised.

Veer:You paint?

Tanvi:Ya.It’s my favourite hobby during free time.

Veer:I also love it.

Tanvi:Really?Can you give me more ideas to continue it further?

Veer:Sure.

Looking at the paintings 

he shared his ideas with her 

and she painted accordingly.


Main Yaad Mein Teri Har Lamha Arse Se Khuda Maine Rehta Hoon Tu Khaahishon Se Badhkar Jhoothe Vaade De Gaya

They both looked at the painting.

Tanvi:Wow..I never thought that you could be so creative.If you had not helped me I would not have been able to complete this painting successfully.

Veer:But I can’t paint flawlessly like you though I admire paintings.But I like pot making.

Tanvi:Really?Will you teach me?

Veer:Yes.But for that you need to come to my house.

Tanvi:Ok,I will come.

 

Veer took Tanvi to his house.

Seeing Veer’s parents Tanvi greeted them ‘namaste’ and touched their feet.

Balwant and Bansuri were numb as they could not digest the fact that Lady superstar of movies Tanvi has come to their house.

Veer-Tanvi started making pots together.

Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya Main Gair Tha Tere Liye, Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.


As Veer was teaching her to do it unknowingly they both sat very close to each other.Realizing their position Tanvi blushed.

Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya Main Gair Tha Tere Liye, Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.

  

Unknowingly they shared an eye lock.

Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya Main Gair Tha Tere Liye, Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.

Bansuri smiled:Tanvi is so down to earth and humble.

Balwant:You are right Bansuriji.

Bansuri:Do you think that there is something between them?

Balwant:Our son loves her like crazy.But whether she also started loving him is a big question.But seeing how she behaves with him I feel that she also likes him.

Bansuri smiled:If so our son’s biggest wish will get fulfilled.I will only be happy to accept Tanvi as my daughter in law as she is like a normal girl.

Balwant smiled.

After everything got over Bansuri called Tanvi to have food.

Tanvi:I am really tempted to eat food.But as an actress I can’t eat all this.Because if I gain weight everyone will blame me as if I did some crime.I love ice sticks..especially orange flavour.But I sacrifice that also.

Bansuri:What a hard life!

Tanvi:But in return I am getting everyone’s love.That makes me happy.

They smiled.

 

 

Tanvi saw Veer sitting near the swimming pool immersing his feet in the water.

Tanvi:Are you planning to swim in this swimming pool?

Veer:No way.I prefer to swim in the village river and not in this artificial pool.But I feel nice to immerse my feet in this water.

Tanvi:Are you kidding?

Veer:No seriously.You come and sit here.

Tanvi went and sat near him.

Veer:Put your legs in this water.

She put her legs in the pool water.

Veer:Are you not feeling nice?

Tanvi:Ya…actually it feels good.

Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.


Veer was splashing water.

Veer:I always do this in the village pool.

She smiled.

Tanvi too did it seeing him do so.They splashed the water and had fun.

Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.

They enjoyed a lot.

Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.

 

Veer:I will give you one more idea to entertain yourself as it’s a holiday for you.

 

He took the earphone from the table near by and fixed it in her ear.

Veer:All are the songs from your movies.You enjoy.

She was surprised:You have the collection of my movie songs?

Veer:Yes.I listen to your movie songs daily.But I imagine myself in place of your hero in every song.

She giggled.He also giggled.

 Main Gair Tha Tere Liye Phir Mujhe Sapne Kyoon De Gaya.

Veer too joined Tanvi on the movie sets.Niharika and Siddharth was really irritated.

There the crew members surprised Tanvi with a cake wishing her happy birthday.

Veer was surprised to know that it was her birthday.

She cut the cake and fed everyone including Veer.This made everyone shocked.Because Tanvi was treating her so called enemy Veer very well.Everyone including Veer put cake icing on her face.She also pasted icing on others face.Finally everyone ended up putting icing on each other’s face.

Veer gave a small gift to Tanvi.

Veer:You got many expensive gifts.But this is a small gift for you which I made for you with my hands.

She smiled.It was a cute craft work in the form of a show piece where it was written ‘Happy birthday’.

She smiled:It is lovely.I loved it.This is my best birthday gift.

He became very happy.

Sunn Zara Arziyan Main Mangta Hoon Mere Khuda Se Teri Sunn Zara Khwaab Meri Neend Mein Bhi Karte Hain Baatein Ter

They took a selfie holding the birthday gift.

Sunn Zara Arziyan Main Mangta Hoon Mere Khuda Se Teri Sunn Zara Khwaab Meri Neend Mein Bhi Karte Hain Baatein Ter


 At night…

Tanvi did not find Veer in the house.

Tanvi:Did he leave?

Unknowingly Tanvi became dull.She went to the compound in search of him.

Suddenly she saw Veer coming with a basket.

Tanvi:Veer,where were you?

Veer:I realized that you are longing to have orange ice sticks.So I bought them.

Tanvi was surprised.

Tanvi:But Veer..how can I have it?

Veer:Dieting is essential for your job.But don’t sacrifice your small happiness forever.

He took out an orange ice stick and gave it to her.

She smiled:You also have one.We will have it together.

He smiled.He also took one ice stick and they both starting having it.

Sau Baar Khuda Se Maanga Hai Mannat Ka Tu Woh Dhaaga Hai Tu Pyaar Ke Badle Apni Yaadein De Gaya

 

Niharika and Siddarth were watching it.

Niharika:Tanvi is got closer to Veer in a limited time.How is it possible?

Does he know black magic?

Sid:He has trapped her in his so called love.If it continues he will be in and we will be out.

Niharika:No…that should not happen.Get rid of him.

Sid:Yes.I will take a drastic step to put him out.

 

Siddharth met a Don named Kali Thakur.

Sid:Veer has become a burden.Please kill him.I will give you any amount of money.

Kali:I will kill him.But I don’t need money.I need something more precious than money.

Sid:What is more precious than money?

Kali smirked:A night with Tanvi.

Siddharth was shocked.

 

 

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Wow, I loved Veer & Tanvi's dialogues and during the jogging scenes. The song sequences are romantic. Veer giving the inputs to Tanvi about the paintings is cute. Veer taking Tanvi to his place and teaching her to make pots is romantic. Surprised to see Balwant and Bansuri as Veer's parents. They approved Veer's marriage with Tanvi. I wonder whether Tanvi would accept Veer as her husband. Niharika and Sid are very much annoying. Surprised to see Kaali Thakur as Siddharth as his hired goon to kill Veer. Is he KT from DBO? KT is so cheap to ask for a one-night stay with Tanvi. Hope Siddharth backs out and mends his ways.

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Thanks a lot.Balwant Bansuri were there in part2 itself.Yes Kali Thakur is from DBO.


Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Wow, I loved Veer & Tanvi's dialogues and during the jogging scenes. The song sequences are romantic. Veer giving the inputs to Tanvi about the paintings is cute. Veer taking Tanvi to his place and teaching her to make pots is romantic. Surprised to see Balwant and Bansuri as Veer's parents. They approved Veer's marriage with Tanvi. I wonder whether Tanvi would accept Veer as her husband. Niharika and Sid are very much annoying. Surprised to see Kaali Thakur as Siddharth as his hired goon to kill Veer. Is he KT from DBO? KT is so cheap to ask for a one-night stay with Tanvi. Hope Siddharth backs out and mends his ways.

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thank you for the pm

amazing update