Arshi FF : Sea Mist Thread #2 Epilogue pg 106 - Page 89

Absolutely brilliant story this was. I loved & read this multiple times. Thank you so much for such a wonderful read. You are a wonderful & such a talented writer. Its always such a pleasure to read your work. Fantastic concept as always & am waiting for your next amazing FF. Please do PM me the index of all your stories. Thank you so much

Absolutely beautiful and very creative writing 

I loved each one of the chapters

U r a very talented writer girl

Awesome work

Thrilling yet enchanting story 

Mysterious throughout

Payal return is the best which I never guessed in the ff

A perfect story

Loved it cheers to you

Hey Kavi,

You are an wonderful writer. It was amazing to realize how you made this story part of our lives by your writing.

I am happy that the story has come to its logical end.

But then I am sad that it has come to an end. :(

Hoping to see you come up with new idea, new story soon...

Hope, you keep writing and spreading happiness. :)

Res

Edited:

What I liked:

The suspense: Was Payal killed? If yes, who killed her? Is Arnav responsible? What was his relationship with her? Why did Payal die at all?

The romance: You always ace it in all your stories. The slow build-up to realization and combustion is always exciting.

The locations: As someone who lived in South India for the last 4 years and travelled it extensively, your authentic description brought back memories of culture and flavours I will always miss.

What I didn't like:

1. The story rushed too much at the end. A lot of subplots were introduced and closed or closed hurriedly. The story also moved locations at breakneck speed, there are points I am still unsure about.

2. The names of all the extra male characters started with R. Again, a confusion point for me.

3. This Khushi: She is intelligent and comprehends well. But doesn't think twice about the repercussions of any actions, be it going against Payal and being at the club as a teen or sleeping with Arnav without disclosing her truth or even the way she treated her career. Dimag hai, par use kyun nahi karti?

PS: Sorry for the late reply. Keep writing. Every once in a while when I prowl the forum, I like to be taken by pleasant surprise [:)]

Such an awesome story 

So very well written

It was an amazing mystery story 

Till the end no one could have guessed it

Beautiful story. I love your writing style and the plot was great

Superb! Outstanding. Brilliant writing. 

Interesting story...

Loved it...

Beautifully written...

It's a beautiful story  I loved your previous work also .

you really discribed very well about south canara I am also from udupi near marvante😍😍

Originally posted by: _InDreamWorld_

It's a beautiful story  I loved your previous work also .

you really discribed very well about south canara I am also from udupi near marvante😍😍

She has started a new one, Distant Horizon - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5146698