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What I liked:
The suspense: Was Payal killed? If yes, who killed her? Is Arnav responsible? What was his relationship with her? Why did Payal die at all?
The romance: You always ace it in all your stories. The slow build-up to realization and combustion is always exciting.
The locations: As someone who lived in South India for the last 4 years and travelled it extensively, your authentic description brought back memories of culture and flavours I will always miss.
What I didn't like:
1. The story rushed too much at the end. A lot of subplots were introduced and closed or closed hurriedly. The story also moved locations at breakneck speed, there are points I am still unsure about.
2. The names of all the extra male characters started with R. Again, a confusion point for me.
3. This Khushi: She is intelligent and comprehends well. But doesn't think twice about the repercussions of any actions, be it going against Payal and being at the club as a teen or sleeping with Arnav without disclosing her truth or even the way she treated her career. Dimag hai, par use kyun nahi karti?
PS: Sorry for the late reply. Keep writing. Every once in a while when I prowl the forum, I like to be taken by pleasant surprise [:)]
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