Haye Mai Lut Gaya (hey I am gone) TS last part on page 15 Dt 22/11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ddramaqueen

Thank You Di, thanks a lot... 🤗

You r really amazing writer.

So, Mehak's dad died due to heart attack. DK has Mehak's responsibility after it. Pragya nice girl. Bcm Friends. Mehak's 1st day at clg. Hero's entry. Collision aaha. Shaurya lost on her. Pragya disturbed them😉. Pragya's too shocks😆. Arre pagli voh Mehak ke liye lift de raha tha aur usse dekhne ke liye party mein aa raha tha😳. He called Pragya, Mehak picked it and what an innocence janaab ki. MehRya dance😛😛. Closeness😳. B'day wishing ohoo. Mann na padega SK ko baaz ki aankh hai. He wished her n gift+return gift😳😳. B'day party's end most beautifull

Thanks di once again

Originally posted by: anjali45

Are Anu ek baat toh btao iska part 2 dogi na 😃

Originally posted by: SweetChilliGirl

Hi !


This was good story but since it was to be wrapped in one shot so I felt it was bit rushed (uh! I'm sorry. Just sayin what I felt). It would have been better it few things like their friendship and group thingy would have been shown a little more (of course I know that would have required one or probably two more shots but it's always good to read more right?). Anyway, good job done! Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Aha di,kya baat hai awesome os.

keep writing,mujhe aap par kuch nhi phekhna siwaf bahut saara pyar ke. 🤗

but i need to know aapka shaurya itna desperate kyun hai...🤣

Originally posted by: Thabassum19

Very funny title Anu ...so Mehak lost her father and moved on with her gaurdian and his daughter...later to get bumped on shaurya who on his first meeting went ha ha over Mehak that he was keeping tabs about her thru pragya and confessed his it was lovely to read that he threw a party for her andd finally

Had his return gift after party ...nice os Anu...n

Originally posted by: dwriter

Anu di..aapne apni record thod di.. 😆
That's a cute story di..lut Gaya Shaurie...would love to read more.
Afsos Ki baat yeh hai Ki aapko bug karne Ki mauka nahi Mili mujhe..
Chalo koi na..aapki Diwali special story keliye bug karoongi😆
Thanks a lot for writing this story di...🤗
Thanks for the PM
Plz do write more for us...