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kamila.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: whity.007
Its awesome dear
Finally they met😆
I hope for a happy ending😳

Mrs. Naughty bond finally you showed up.👏 was Missing you.

Love you machan. For this comment.

Hoping to see you often. 😳

Love you,

Kam.

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Annu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#172

Mind-blowing dear.. Today only I start reading this SS and read all update.

Loved the way you portrayed character beautifully👏

Will eagerly waiting for next part. Please update soon

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kamila.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: mumpi09
It's awesome. But swara is not Riyan's Chachi. She is his Masi.

Thank you Soo much dear, hope will fulfill your expectations. And thank you once again for pointing out that.

Love you,

Kam.

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kamila.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: nikky22
Hai kam di. ...
It's been a long time... hope u nd your little one are doing good... coming to the update... its beautiful di... I really liked swara for not accepting his stupid offer... and the pain swara has undergone is beautifully penned di... lots of love di 🤗

Hey sis... 🤗 ... Yup it's a very long gap, life sucks sis. We all are good, how is you???

I'm really glad that you like it sis, this means a lot to me. It took forever for me to write up.

Lots of love,

Kam.

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mehandikhatun

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Posted: 7 years ago

#175

This is so heart breaking i feel like crying my heart out .

I dont know what to say or how to make u convince to complete this story as soon as possible but please please please complete this story

it is imppssible for me to wait for a month or something like that for ur next update

Please give the second epilogue

I am literally dying i cant even wait for a single day now

Please update soon

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#176

Dear kam...

Thank you for keeping me posting on the story ...

Let me get back to all the updates...I am glad that swara didn't wear her heart on her sleeve and she let him go...letting the one you love go is one of the hardest thing to do and and she proved that she was not going to be weak for she realised he was not yet completely healed form his pain...

I love the progression they made in there friendship and the fear they both hold to move forward...He showed a sign to unite by hod it behind the excuse of his families wish...For that fear shows enough that he is not yet ready to love...He cares for her but how much...

Hate me for saying this but we need love to breath and not just exceptance...He has not fully seen that she is his saviour...This distance is just what they need...

Then comes the pious leap I love that you took her back home is see why her farther is protective after all they just want what is best for there princess...

Mmm the incomplete conversation between her and ragani left me wondering that does he know now that she loved him? As you left it in the end his action showed jealousy yet I wonder didn't he nor spot her in the party earlier...I am sure he was there just like she guessed...

I wonder what those words are..?

Promise you will update soon...

Till them will wait...

Take care girlie :)

Razia

P's beautiful update as always :)

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kamila.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#177

Dearies,

I'm sorry that I haven't post the part on it's due time due to my laziness. Please forgive me. I'm working on it.

Next part deal with Sanskaar point of view. Hopefully waiting for your response.

I need to make some clarification here, you can't expect them to ran to.each and cry out their love. It's nearly impossible in real life. We humans are egoistic mammals. So the progress will be delayed. And yet Happy ending.

And trust me you curse me a lot with the twist. I'm twisted. He he he.

Keep your hope level low, I might disappoint you.

Regards,

Kam.

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kamila.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: mehandikhatun
This is so heart breaking i feel like crying my heart out .
I dont know what to say or how to make u convince to complete this story as soon as possible but please please please complete this story
it is imppssible for me to wait for a month or something like that for ur next update
Please give the second epilogue
I am literally dying i cant even wait for a single day now

Please update soon

Hi mehan,(hoping it was your name. If not enlighten.) Thank you Soo much dear. This means more and more to me.

Sorry posting it. Just gone off air.

Please don't die on me, I want you to stay health and we'll and keep on reading.

Will post it soon. Dear.

With love,

Kam.

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kamila.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: ripo
Hii dear
Awesome update dear you have described swara's emotions so beautifully loved it
They finally met lets see what happens
Take care

Thank you Soo much ripo dear, this means a lot to me.

Will try to fulfill your expectations.

Love,

Kam.