Swasan 5S:- Because I love you. EPILOGUE ( II ) PAGE :- 22(important30 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ria2794

God, Girl was crying like an idiot. It was so heart-wrenching. I loved this tale so so much my favourite from your books. It's an absolutely beautiful tale. I loved Swara so much here, She is really a brave girl. It's not easy to walk out, at least for me. She did what was right.



Hey Ria, was overwhelmed by your comment, and I'm really really glad to here that this was one your favorite. Thank you Soo much.

And I'm happy that you accept this part of this story. And here I would like to give my privilege being a girl.

Ditto, I'm quite clingy, sticky whatever we writers discribe that. It's always been the toughest part to give away or to walk out. But here, situation is different. We have to.

Loved replying to you dear, hope you liked my reply.

Love,

Kam.


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Kam,


After reading this update, I agree that they do not deserve to be with each other - I agree that love need not be equal but it has to be there else the person being loved takes the other for granted and the one doing the loving starts hating themselves and soon will hate the other. So until Sanskaar realises that his lust can and will translate to love or rather he does feel both love and lust for Swara it would be good if they went their separate ways.

But I would give Sanskaar credit for admitting to the truth that he was attracted towards her and wanted to marry her as that was his father's wish. Men do lust after women but few are honest about it.

How are things otherwise (you did give a detailed description but had to ask?). Take care.

lots of love,
Nyna


Nyna darrrling,

First of all I'm happy that you like and agreeing my decision. (For bold) No one can use words like you baby, and I must agree that I am enthralled, fangirling.

I hope will fulfill your hopes baby, was working on it.

And trust me my fangirl side forcing me to avoid throw any degradation on Sanskaar. And I will never do that. That's the result of that, and I gladly agree with you that 80% of men's were cowards. 69% of them work behind us showing a smiling face. Most of them were beast.

Now things settling.. Loved replying to you darling,


Love you,

Kam.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sinishere-


About update. I'm soo proud about Swara. She is brave and coward. And I'm proud of you man. Love you machan.


Your's,

Sin.


Hey sin, I think I asked you to edit this post. Like I did.😡
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushali10

Hey kam,

I must admit that I was so nervous for the sad ending.. But now... M so so so proud of SWARA.. the way u have described her feelings... I m so touched.. Thank you for this update..

N I believe that epilogue will b beyond our expectations.. Sanskar will understand his feelings for her.. Which should not b just lust or family concern..

Hope u r fine.. Take care.. Needless to say we r waiting for ur updates...



Hey dear,

Wait let me get down first coz I was on cloud nine. Floating, reading your comment.

I must thank you for being patient with me, and for liking this part. And it means a lot to me.

Like Talia said, me and sad ending were two opposite poles. But I tried to make it look like sad. But truth is I was twice heartbroken in my life, because of my wide mouth. I can say it really helped me.

I'm working on epilogue, it will be the longest part that I have ever written for this story. So it's taking all my free time. Hope will make up to your mark.

Loved replying to you dear, hope you liked it.

Love you,

Kam.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu


kam janu...

Talia my soul mate.. I'm really happy to chat with you. It's been ages like you said.

I read your note..i do not know exactly what problems you are facing in your life..but i will pray for you..for your dignity and to give you strength to pass this difficult phase...

They came and gone but the termors are still there.

Update was brilliant..you did shift the story to women dignity and self respect in end..which was good in a way..


You always bring an orbit white smile to my face with your comment. Love you more for that. And the reason behind this decision will leave shocked.


Did things happened in your life influenced you to change story or was it preplanned this way????

You're somewhat correct but not the one I had mentioned here. It's another story which leave you stomach ache. And mouth dry of laughter.


in this story..i felt sanky was the victim...swara never told him about her love for him..it was one sided...sanky suffered through out after knowing kavita's betrayal..he was devastated...he got addicted..swara decided to heal him..he never asked..nobody asked her..she did it herself...coz she love him...she bought him home...she patiently healed him...


Hmm... Babe you get his character exactly how I wanted you guys to be.. and I'm all smiling. He was in delimma, he was not sure what he was feeling why he was feeling, and you know I love confused souls as my leads. So here he is. It was not just the love she had her to help him, but she had gone through those moments alone. That was one of the reason.


sanky was not in his best of shapes when they had make love.but she never stopped him..becoz somewhere she wanted it too..

Making love... Hmm but it's not, he wasn't in his sense. Forced s*x won't bring pleasure rather it'll be more painful that too she was a virgin. So she never wanted that at the same time she don't want him to get out of the house. Soo it's different.


she kept him with her and he never crossed line after that...just that kitchen incident...


I want my leads to be gentleman. That way I can show how should a man behave among ladies. Soo most of the readers here are adolescent.


after reading last chapter..i believe..sanky did changed n healed, he felt strong pull for her...it was not lust exactly..he did not name it love...but it was love afterall...he put it in front of her not nicely..his choice of words were not exactly good...


I have lived my life among mens, I have dozens of cousin, and dozens of friends, and I have received hundreds of proposal, and I clearly know how bad they were expressing their thoughts. It'll be fun to watch them. Some were polite they mask their wants with fake gentlemanism. Comparing to those males, Sanskaar is way better.

Indeed he was healed by her, and soon will realize his original feelings for her. Don't worry babe I'll make it sure. And definitely it was not just lust, it's a package, he was leaving her, and he'll never know when he'll meet her again. And the blossoming love were the reasons.


i liked how he asked to marry her..but his reason was not true...he has to realise his feelings for her...somewhere i felt he was afraid of rejection from swara...after kavitas betrayal...rejection did happen...she rejected him politely...


Everyone is scared of rejection, and trust me where their is a true love a fear will.be there in their hearts. Same fear of rejection.


she should have told him about her love for him...i think she should give him one chance...every one know she love him...just sanky is clueless...


She clearly knows she was never on his good side before, he boldly insulted her and he didn't stop his friend from calling her transgender. Just think how it is possible for her to tell him that she loved him when he hated her almost all of his life. And she was also scared of rejection. She has more valid points than him.


for me this seperation will give him n her time to think n realise their true feelings... swara should not alone make decision ...tell him everything n wait..i hope he reciprocate her feeling n do return...


Yep separation and time is best healer of all times. Sure he will never give her a chance to walk away from him, and you can expect a broody, charming, intense Sanskaar on epilogue

Will wait for epilogue...

Working on it babe... And I loved replying to you, if you have any objections, point it out to me.

Love u babes


Talia.


Love you too babes,

Kam.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Its awesome dear
Finally they met😆
I hope for a happy ending😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's awesome. But swara is not Riyan's Chachi. She is his Masi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hai kam di. ...
It's been a long time... hope u nd your little one are doing good... coming to the update... its beautiful di... I really liked swara for not accepting his stupid offer... and the pain swara has undergone is beautifully penned di... lots of love di 🤗

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