Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 28

amazing it is ..
u have d ability to wrote hot scenes vey decently
plz update soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

amazing it is ..
u have d ability to wrote hot scenes vey decently
plz update soon
thanks for pm

Hey thanks for d lovely complement dear
Will update soon

Thank for the pm. That was an hottt update but u stopped suddenly when things were getting hotter. So expect a sizzling update soon may be after tomms episode. So hamari mills and boons kaam pe lag jaa soon.

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

😆 😆 😆
I love ur comments yaar!!!!!!!
Bohot mazaa aata hai aapke comments padhne mein
Sorry yaar i know itna wait karaya aur sirf ek kissi daala
But don't worry agle waale mein pakka bohot kuch hot hot hoga
Aur aapki saari farmayishe maani jayengi
Aubhodro dev to mujhe bhi bada bhata hai
Bada hot lagta hai yaar!!!!!!
Use bhi daal denge...aakhir yeh dono ladai ke baad bada hot make out jo karte hai
Aur gkb aur isshu ki dhulai to hogi par abhi nahi
Kuch chapters ke baad
Aise hi comment karte raho yaar

Gayu I really wanna beat u 😡
I thought it's gonna b the hottie one but nope!!!
Why????
So, u better make sure, u update ur next part real soon n the way I wanna see...
Okay ?????

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Gayu I really wanna beat u 😡
I thought it's gonna b the hottie one but nope!!!
Why????
So, u better make sure, u update ur next part real soon n the way I wanna see...
Okay ?????

Sorry for coming in between but that's what I was thinking too! 😭 😭 😭
Sunday bhi acha guzar jata hamara !

Originally posted by: moni160282

Thank for the pm. That was an hottt update but u stopped suddenly when things were getting hotter. So expect a sizzling update soon may be after tomms episode. So hamari mills and boons kaam pe lag jaa soon.

😆 😆
Mills n boons
Yes will make the next one passionate for sure

Originally posted by: M.soni

Apko mere comment pasand atty hn..mujhe apki story pasand atti hai..Chalo hissab barabar😆

Next part hot and hottter hona chaye werna nagin dance karun main tumalhari post mw.😡😆...wo alagh baat hai mujhe nagin dance atta nahi...so wo comdey dance samjh kr dekh lena.😆..

Haye abudoro se hot toh koi hai nahi...😳yes yes larai k bina toh in se romance hota hai..jab tak larty nahi tab tak hormones nahi jagty inke.😆

Gkb and ishu and bijoy ko 2 3 parts tak dor hi rakho plzzs😕...gkb and ishu ko bad m karwana lena abudoro k darshan..me wait kr lungi.😛..

And thanks for the pms dear...😃

Thanku so much meri stories ko pasand karne keliye
Agla update pakka tadakta phadakta hoga
Musoorie ki kasam 😆


Naagin dance 😆 😆

Waise i would love to see u dance

Gkb aur isshu to kuch dino tak gayab rahenge meri story se
Their entry is prohibited
Aur aubhodro dev to bohot jald milega aapko
Kyunki jitna karara jhagda hoga inka utna hi karara romance milega

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Gayu I really wanna beat u 😡
I thought it's gonna b the hottie one but nope!!!
Why????
So, u better make sure, u update ur next part real soon n the way I wanna see...
Okay ?????

Tu mujhe maaregi
Maar...phir main tujhpe domestic violence ka case karungi

😆
Then sneha going jail n jail mein chakki peesing n peesing 😆

Originally posted by: Iqqa

Sorry for coming in between but that's what I was thinking too! 😭 😭 😭
Sunday bhi acha guzar jata hamara !

Ohh dear
Koi nahi agla update saari kasar poori kar dega