Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 26

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Posted: 8 years ago
Unres
I loved it!!!! Wonderful!!! Plzz update soon!!
Thankx fr the PM
Edited by Tremors - 8 years ago
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Mujhe laga iss update mein devakshi ka first make out scene padne ko milega... Par yeh toh kuch aur hi nikla... Chalo koi nhi.. Issi se kam chala lungi..
Well a vry sweet fb of devakshi.. Loved d way sona too wants to let loose her boundary bt also nt willing to let go of her discomfort... And dev is always ready to make sona his... Perfect... Agla update mein pls unka first make out milega???

And pls jaldi update karo... Pls pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mujhe chapter ki beginning bohot achhe lagi.Backdrop I mean.
Hot n passionate update.
Gayu, full on passionate update de Na.

Thanks for pm.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tremors

Unres

I loved it!!!! Wonderful!!! Plzz update soon!!
Thankx fr the PM



Thanks for liking it dear

will try to update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Mujhe laga iss update mein devakshi ka first make out scene padne ko milega... Par yeh toh kuch aur hi nikla... Chalo koi nhi.. Issi se kam chala lungi..

Well a vry sweet fb of devakshi.. Loved d way sona too wants to let loose her boundary bt also nt willing to let go of her discomfort... And dev is always ready to make sona his... Perfect... Agla update mein pls unka first make out milega???

And pls jaldi update karo... Pls pls


arrey likhna shuru to issi irade se kiya tha
but took a different direction though

agle waale mein pakka

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Mujhe chapter ki beginning bohot achhe lagi.Backdrop I mean.

Hot n passionate update.
Gayu, full on passionate update de Na.

Thanks for pm.



Thanks for commenting diii

agla update pakka passionate wala
iss baar late bhi ho gaya tha aur aage kuch soch bhi nahi paa rahi thi isiliye jitna hua utna update mein daal diya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy


arrey likhna shuru to issi irade se kiya tha
but took a different direction though

agle waale mein pakka

thanks for commenting


Milega na pakka??? Okkk ๐Ÿ˜‰
Main abhi se taiyaari karti hu ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
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Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh



Milega na pakka??? Okkk๐Ÿ˜‰
Main abhi se taiyaari karti hu๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›




Haan haan pakka
Kal ke episode mein mere babies mujhe inspire jo karenge
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Posted: 8 years ago
kitni rude ho yar...atna wait karwane ke bad sirf aik kiss dali hai bus .๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
but but but..i loved the part..its was as always awsomeee๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘sirf or sirf devakshi thy na toh maza agya padhe kar.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

aise acha acha parts likha karo ladki..maza atta hai.๐Ÿ˜›
bijoy and ishwari nahi dala karo..pakaate hn wo bhut...show me bhi unka rokna sunein..or yahan bhi unko padha..naaa๐Ÿ˜ญ

aik ki maa mental hai..aik ka baap pagal hai..bech me bachare humare masoum se devakshi hain๐Ÿ˜†



jaldi jaldi update karo yar...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›kal to qaymaat ane wali hai wese bhi show me..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...next part me uska touch dalna thora.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

or aik or wish aik do parts me plz abudoro dev bhi dal do plz....mujhe abudoro dev bhut acha lagta hai๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ..aik fight sona ke sath karo๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰..dr bose and mr abudoro ki fight ka maza hi kuch or hai yar.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ and ishwari and gkb ko bhi plz abudoro ke darshan karwana plz...๐Ÿ˜ƒi know free hogyi main kuch zaida hi but kiya karun...mujhe abudoro chaye mtlb chaye.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†plzzz๐Ÿ˜•



chalo aj colorfulll comment kardiya.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›



Edited by M.soni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: M.soni

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#330066">but but but..i loved the part..its was as always awsomeee๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘sirf or sirf devakshi thy na toh maza agya padhe kar.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›</font></font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0033">aise acha acha parts likha karo ladki..maza atta hai.๐Ÿ˜›</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0033">bijoy and ishwari nahi dala karo..pakaate hn wo bhut...show me bhi unka rokna sunein..or yahan bhi unko padha..naaa๐Ÿ˜ญ</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">aik ki maa mental hai..aik ka baap pagal hai..bech me bachare humare masoum se devakshi hain๐Ÿ˜†</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#cc00cc">jaldi jaldi update karo yar...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›kal to qaymaat ane wali hai wese bhi show me..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...next part me uska touch dalna thora.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†</font></font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#cc3333">or aik or wish aik do parts me plz abudoro dev bhi dal do plz....mujhe abudoro dev bhut acha lagta hai๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ..aik fight sona ke sath karo๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰..dr bose and mr abudoro ki fight ka maza hi kuch or hai yar.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณand ishwari and gkb ko bhi plz abudoro ke darshan karwana plz...๐Ÿ˜ƒi know free hogyi main kuch zaida hi but kiya karun...mujhe abudoro chaye mtlb chaye.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†plzzz๐Ÿ˜•</font></font>
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<font color="#009999" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">chalo aj colorfulll comment kardiya.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›</font>
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๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
I love ur comments yaar!!!!!!!
Bohot mazaa aata hai aapke comments padhne mein
Sorry yaar i know itna wait karaya aur sirf ek kissi daala
But don't worry agle waale mein pakka bohot kuch hot hot hoga
Aur aapki saari farmayishe maani jayengi
Aubhodro dev to mujhe bhi bada bhata hai
Bada hot lagta hai yaar!!!!!!
Use bhi daal denge...aakhir yeh dono ladai ke baad bada hot make out jo karte hai
Aur gkb aur isshu ki dhulai to hogi par abhi nahi
Kuch chapters ke baad
Aise hi comment karte raho yaar

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