Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohobbat NOTE IMP pg 31 - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
i just read the whole ff its great 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
plz continue soon!!!!!!!!! 😭 i really njoy reading this FF!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Praise da Lord...u finallie updated...thnk GOD...thnks 4 updating nd continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Heyy guys im really sorry, i didnt update, actually the nxt part was on my laptop n it got corrupted, it just got fixed yesterday, so im just about to post the nxt part, here it comes. 😊
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Guys the way this story is going to go, i cannot continue from kripas point of view, so from now it will be in 3rd person... hope u guys understand 😊:

Part Sixteen

After Kanan left, Kripa also said a quick bye to angad and left for her room. Angad thought there was something weird going on but he just shrugged it off thinking that he was just making a mountain out a mole hill. However kripa on the other hand was very tensed and was pacing up and down her room.

Kripa (thinking) - what should I do? How should I get out of this clubbing idea? How about I just say im sick? No, no I can't do that coz kannan will see rite through it, shell know im faking, I could jus tell angad, no, no, I can't do that; god knows what he will do when he finds out. Oh my god, why is there no way out of this, I guess I just have to go to the club and just stay away from him, maybe Ill be lucky and he wont be there, but he's always there on a Saturday night, but my only choice is to just hope he isn't there, n if he is just to avoid him. Yup, that's the best thing to do just avoid him.

At 8pm

Angad was waiting downstairs with Kannan.

Angad was wearing faded blue jeans, a transparent white shirt which was revealing some of his chest and was half tucked in, and a white coat on top (hope u guys can imagine what he looks like- kind of like what abhishek bachan wears sometimes-loll)

Kannan was wearing a white mini skirt with a red halter top looking pretty.

Kannan (screaming) - Kripa hurry up, we are waiting for you. Just then Kripa came down looking absolutely gorgeous, she was wearing a black dress that fell right below her knees, and showed off her bare back a bit, her neck was bare and she was wearing long chandelier earrings that touched her shoulders.

As she came down, Angad couldn't stop looking at her and his mouth dropped open, he only knew kripa was gorgeous but today she was looking absolutely breathtaking, and he just couldn't stop thanking god that he loved her, actually even more than that he couldn't stop thanking god that she loved him.

She came down the flight of stairs, and looked at kannan and said

Kripa- Ok kannan I am ready, happy? Now let's go.

Kannan- Kripa you look sooooo good, I really don't understand why you don't dress up often; I mean you look so pretty. I mean just a bit of make up and we could fix your hair a bit like cut it a bit here and there… blah blah blah,

As kannan was saying this she started walking out thinking that angad n kripa were following her. As she started following kannan outside, an arm grabbed her waist and swung her around. As she swung around she crashed into angad's chest and she could feel his seductive eyes gazing rite at her which made her skin burn. She knew she shouldn't but she just couldn't stop herself from looking into his eyes- those chocolate brown gorgeous eyes, she could just feel all the love and passion inside them, all she wanted was to just melt in his arms at that point of time, nothing else just him and her, and their own little world that was created in his arms just for her. They both just looked into each others eyes not saying anything as they didn't need to, their eyes and their heartbeats did all the talking for them. Even though she knew she couldn't, she took all the courage in the world and diverted her eyes out of his gaze, and looked down and blushed a light shade of red. He just smiled looking at her innocence, he took his face closer to her, he took his face closer to her ear, so she could feel his warm breath on her bare neck, and he could smell the fragrance in her hair, he whispered in her ear

Angad (in a seductive tone)- I love you, you look gorgeous.

Kripa could not do or say anything but blush an even darker shade or red.

Angad- You look even more beautiful when you blush.

Kripa just smiled and blushed even more. He brought his face out her hair, and moved towards her lips. He moved closer and closer till he was half an inch away from her lips, she just stood their not breathing, she didn't even want air to come in between them so she held onto her breath making sure nothing would come in between them at this moment. Just as his lips were about to brush hers …....

…. They heard kannan screaming from out side. Ruining the perfect moment he drew his face back. And she said,

Kripa- Better luck next time

She gave him a quick kiss on his cheek and ran out of the door, before he even had time to react, he just smiled and even slightly blushed, he just ran his hand through his hair and whispered to himself 'Man I just love her.' And walked out as well.

At the club

Angad parked the car and all three of them got out. They all walked towards the club and inside. You could hear the music on full blast and you could see the flashing lights. Kannan saw some friends from college and immediately went towards them dragging angad and kripa along with her. They went up to 5 people three guys and one girl. They were Kripa and Kannan's group in college. Kannan and kripa said their usual His and hellos, and Kannan started introducing Angad to everyone.

Kannan- Angad this is Aman (pointing to a tall, good looking guy) this is priya, aman's girlfriend (Pointing to the girl standing next to Aman) This is Rahul (pointing to a medium height, good looking guy) and this is Janvi, his girlfriend (pointing to the girl standing next to Rahul) And last but not the least this is Nishant, my boyfriend, the love of my life (she said linking her arms with Nishant [I know I have totally shocked you guys here loll]) And guys this is Angad, mere aur kripa ka bachpan ka dost, jo kripa ko toh bachpan se janta hai par mujhe javani me aake mila.

Nishant- Kannan, kya matlab? Mujhe kuch samaj nahin aaya.

Kannan- Are jaan, mera matlab ye hamara bachpan ka dost hai, par mujhe apna bachpan hi nahin yaad, lekin kripa ko yaad hai, so technically angad mera dost toh javani mein milla rite?

Nishant- offo, tumse to koi nahin jeet sakta.

Kannan- Now that's right.

Everyone started laughing and angad gelled in with the gang really well.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Guys that was 1 of the longest parts i hav rote... hop it was long enough pls do leave comments!!!! 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESUM part!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 really cute!!!!! 😳 😳 wonder what Kripa is hiding???? 😕 well continue soon!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

nice part 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
she has a a a a BOYFRIEND!! u freaked us out for nothing!!!! very good twist!!!

awesome long part.. continuhe sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank god hse had a boyfriend i though it might turn out lik mughse dosti karoge and shell ened up liking angad thank god it didnt and that angad kripa scene was totall cute i luved it only if the kabab mein haddi kannan didnt shout then itd be a perfect moment but like kripa said better luck next time so hopefull when u write the next part ull give angad some luck right anwyays awesome part pls cont soon 😛

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