MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4) - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manan's moments were emotional.way u penned their moments were commendable. Hats off. Manik was shocked to see nandini bold and expressionless.aryaman and nandini's part was mindblowing. Loving their friendship.blood sample part seems to be interesting. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.this story seems to be very interesting. Love to read more
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Manan moments r awesome..
Nandu bankrupted..
Emotional..
Wat blood sample..
Waiting 4 d nxt..
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww awesome superb amazing plz cont soon thanks for pm happy holo😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yess ... Now this was something new ... Hmm interesting ...
Now I'm really curious to know abt this new twist ...these blood sample thing is new ... It was nt there last tym ... So what is the mystery of these blood samples ?? Nd then Aryamaan's doubt ... What is he doubting ?? Seeing Manik's behavior abt what ???
Eee really egar to know ... Post the nxt part sooonnniishh ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow beautiful wonderful awesome update


Manik know that now he can't let her go as Nandu is still affected by him and what's underneath the cold behaviour he needs to find that out and make her come back to him

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
I knew she wont agree to manik's conditions
She's even mortgaged her home
Stupid girl
Blood samples... Kiske?
Hua kya tha?
Plzz mystery bta do
Aryamaan is such an awesome friend
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for next part
Hey I m going out for one month where I can't able to read
pls update before April 4

And keep pm me so I can update my self in may
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
again loved manik's reaction on nandini giving him the compensation money...
songs choice was amazing as always...
both songs were awesome...
loved the way manik shouted on everyone to get out...n everyone left n then the way he questioned nandini...n when she dint answer...he still determined as much as before to get his answers or even more determined to get to know the reason...
loved the way aryaman offers her hot coffee...n make her smile...
loved his logic of not being jobless...😆


the end was changed...nandini was crying n arya was consoling her...n arya was taking about manik...n what had happened in past...
why did arya said that he did not understand manik's behavior...??
ok might have expected manik to act all angry on nandini for leaving him all of a sudden n disappearing...but he was acting calm n asking her the reason...
n what was nandini talking about blood samples...?? n why cant they have a happily ever after...??
ok there might be someone behind their separation but they can fight from that person together...before ok she might be scared coz someone might have threatened to kill manik n had asked nandini to go away...but now they are together...ok she is scared but that doesnt mean that they cant have happily ever after...n what is the deal with blood samples...?? dont tell that she is having some disease...?? n thats why she left him so that he starts to hate her n move on...or something harmful chemical or something was found in manik's blood...like someone was injecting him something which was harmful for him...dont know not getting any other thing related to blood sample right now...

but liked it more than the last time newspaper scene...but i liked the club scene also...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Next chapter,
jaldi please,
pretty please,
this suspense will kill me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome update dear..
Nandini did give everything that she had..
Even her apartment...
She didn't care about her being bankrupt..
What is the reason behind it?
Manik was so torn seeing all these...
Nandini's condition was no less..
But she has aryaman as her best friend...
Thnxxx For the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..

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