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Posted: 8 years ago

Loved it. And welcome back and hope to read continuously your wonderful story

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jasbin

@jasbin

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

wel come back

thanks for pm

that was a lovely update

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afsha

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Posted: 8 years ago

After so long u updated

N dono ko alag kar diya 😭😭

I hope Arnav fights for her

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kavitha

@mkavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

hi sandhya first of all thanks for the pm. i thought after this long gap u will miss it.but even if u missed it i will never miss the story as i was regularly checking this thread.this story had impressed me from the terrific prologue and ur arnav and khushi are always very special.as for the update so many things happened in just one evening.khushi's realisation her hesitation and then their separation.😉 it seems a little rushed to me.maybe it's because u are writing after all these days.eagerly waiting for the next update.

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garima

@garimaarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Welcome back dear
Awesome update
Loved it

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Congratulations on the new thread Sandy. It was a mark of the popularity of your craft with this art. I am very very happy for you.

Secondly, welcome back. It is good to have my friend and one of my favorite author back in action. ❤️ 🤗

I did not see any rustiness anywhere Sandy... It is as free flowing as always, as captivating as always, as entertaining as always and as enchanting as always... 👏👏👏

So if you felt any rustiness let me assure you, you have over come that and some my friend. It is a fantastic job and I was able to slide into as if I have only read Chapter 10 just a couple of days ago. But in reality I have read it when you wrote it.

A young girl of Khushi's age and the amount of pressure she face with the snoopy relatives is every unmarried girl's nightmare. Gosh they are forever tying to marry girls off. We may be in 21 century but in many ways we might as well be in the dark ages.

Coming to the 'Not to be before it can be' was really sad. This time I am with Arnav. He could not have spelled it out any clearer if he had drawn a map for her. Khushi should not have insulted his intelligence and at least given him the courtesy of opening out a little bit more to him. Now what? As he correctly pointed out she better stop from yo-yo'ing between the hot some time cold some time attitude...

And he is gone now... GONE!!! What is the use of tears? I am so frustrated I wanted to shake this girl?

Thanks for this beautifully presented Chapter.

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rashmi

@anamika00

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

welcome back sandhya.Beautiful update for a amazing story.

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jdd1959
THANKS 4 D PM.
I M NOT AWARE OF UR WRITING STYLE, I THINK THIS D FIRST WORK OF I CAME ACROSS...
BUT I LOVED D WAY U WRITE...
THE PLACE U HAVE TAKEN AS UR STORY BASE, I FELT LIKE INSTEAD OF READING I M WATCHING IT THROUGH UR WRITING...I M VERY GOING 2 ENJOY UR STORY. I M SURE ABOUT IT...
I THINK KHUSHI NOT COMMITTED HER FEELINGS 4 ARNAV BEC OF HIS MOTHER WHO THINKS KHUSHI IS RESPONSIBLE 4 ANJALI'S DISAPPEARENCE N STILL KEEPING GRUDGE ABOUT IT. I THINK KHUSHI TOLD ARNAV ABOUT CONSIDERING JOB OFFER BEC SHE IS AFRAID OF HER FEELING N ATTRACTION 4 HIM 2 KEEP 2 HERSELF...VERY MUCH EAGER N CURIOUS 4 THIS ARSHI...AAKASH N LA PAIR...MADHU BUA, N GM UMA LOVED EVERY CHARACTER.
PS. PARDON MY ENGLISH...

@Red - You are spot on. That is exactly what I feel too.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 8 years ago

Happy to see you back Sandhya.. hope things have settled now. congrats for the new thread..

Awesome updates.. i had missed chapter 10 too.. so read both 10 & 11 and there were awesome.. however sad with the end of chapter 11. Arnav is gone and he don't even want to be a friend with Khushi.. felt bad to see the change happening between them.. Khushi should stop living in her past, well Arnav is very much in connection with today and future.. he is not so much in past and seeing his emotions towards Khushi leaves no doubt about Arnav's thoughts about their future together.. even he must be have thought of consequences of having a relation with Khushi but he is not deterred however Khushi is giving up before even trying.. well now looking forward to see what happens next.. loved the super awesome update..

thanks for pm 😊

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just4this

@just4this

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Hello sandhya

Thanks for the pm, Thanks.

Coming to the update, as usual it was marvellous, what a detailing of scenes especially Uma's parting of her bun and warding of an evil eye what most of older generation do ,

The description of valley and it's beauty how can u capture in ur words and relly to us as if a scene is running on the screen.

So they couldn't ignore the elephant,

Eagerly, anxiously awaiting to see how the story unfolds.

Thank u , thank u, thank u,

Pls update soonish dear

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