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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry guys but no updates till 27th march 2016 as this year i am having my board exams ...and all of u know how it is... So i hope u guys understand as i am having a realy hectic schedule so in all all this its difficult to write ...but guys no need to get worked up ...after 27th march i will update everyday regularly ...abhilasha promise and i assure u u guys will enjay the upcomming chapters as thre r lots of twists and scenes full of fun and romance coming up ...so till then ...stay blessed !!!
Happy makar sankranti...
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hey guys as i am free 2day so thought to give update for the lastime before my exams i will give 3 udates today so enjay...😃




JUST A COINCIDENC OR DESTINY ??? (B)


after having dinner an a little chit chat with his sister and mom he finally went to his room...meanwhile 

MUKTIS ROOM-
MUKTIS PROV-
hmmm...yeh bhai  jabse ay hain kitna wierd behav karrahe hain...jaise hi unhone us incidnt ke bareme bola all of a sudden ekk part mein ruk gaye and literally aise lag raha tha jaise bhai kuch chipane ki koshish kar rahe hain hmmm...why i dont know but mujhe aisa lagta hai ke there is more to the story and a part of it is definitely missing which bhai is hiding from me...but bhai aap yeh bhul rahe ho ke mein bh aap hi ki behen hun soo app mujhe itne assane se buddhu nai bana sakte(give a naughty smile)
MANIKS ROOM-
comes out after getting fresh...there is a knock on the door...
mukti- bhai mein andar aajaun???
manik- aree doll tujhe kabse mere room mein anekeliye knock karne ki jarurat padne lagi ...aana..(smiles)
mukti - wo bhai ...abse mein knock karke hi andar aungi...(makes a sad face)
manik becomes worried and keeps the towel on the table and rushes towards her 
manik- arree par kyun ??(making her sit on the bed)
mukti stands up facing her back to manik and smiles naughtily...
mukti- aur nahi toh kya ...abb aap mujhpar trust nahi karte app bachpan se mujhese aapne saare tensions saare baatein yaahan tak ki aapni secrets bhi share karte the lekin ab aap mujhse baatein chupane lage ho ...aapne toh mujhe bilkul paraya kar diya ...(starts fake crying)
and as usual our the great manik malhotra cannot stand a single tear in his sisters eyes ...
manik- aare doll plz maat ro tujhe toh pata hai na that i cant see u in tears ...plz plz bhaiya ki jaan maat ro ...ok ok i ll tell u the missing part of the story but promise kar kisiko iss bare mein nahi bataigi  ok ??
and our mukti is back in our jovial mood thinking mission muh khulwao successful !!
mukti- shuru hojao...i am listening...
and suddenly maniks face becoms red thinking about the bus incident...
mukti- ooomg bhai !!!!!(stands on the bed with the most shocking exptrssion on her face)
manik - kya hua seeing her reaction(worriedly)
mukti comes down from the bed and drags manik towards his dresser and makes him stand infront of the full lenght mirror..
mukti- hawww bhai look at your face ...pura lal hogaya hai (laughs)i mean mank malhota ,THE MANIK MALHOTRA blush kare hain ...
manik - hidding his blush  mukti tu bhi na kuch bhi bolte hai aalj kall tumhare college mein padai wadai nahi hote kya jo tu kuch jada hi yeh sab bakwass karne lasgi hai (holding her ear)

mukti- aaa bhai lagta hai (laughing)
ok ok ok ...on a serious note fine mein aapki taang nai khichungi par baatao toh sahi ke aisa kya hua tha jo aap aise...(manik glairs at he and she tries not to laugh)aaree mera  matlab hai ki aap apni bhenen se bhi chipa rahe ho ?
manik- wo..(he narrates the whole story)
mukti-ootere bhai ...matlab aab toh sachimein mujhe door knock karke he aana padega...
manik- kyun ??(confused)
mukti- aree abtoh meri bhabi jaldi hi aane walihain and u know mujhe beech mein gooseberry banne ka koi shock nai (manik was looking at her with utmost shock)aare look kya de rahe ho ...saach hi toh kehe rahi hun pata chala aap dono ka koi...private moment chal rajha ho aur mein uninvited beech mein taapak gayi ...na baba na...itna bafda pap mujhse na hopayego ...(says melodramatically)
manik- aacha ...badmash kahin ki ruk tu abhi batata hun apne bhai ki tang khichti hai ruk ...(they both start running in the whole rume like tom and jerry laughing)
meanwhile ...
NANDINIS APARTMENT-
varsha and nandu after a lot of chit chat and after having dinner come to the room...and sit on the bed..
varsha- waise nandu..
nandini- hmmm
varsha- remember last tune jab call kiya tha tune kuch kehete kehete ruk gaye thi...
nandini -kya ...(confused)
varsha -ke woh mein bas mein ek bacche ki help karahi thi aur...
and all of a sudden nandus face become red
nandini- ab ba ba...ka...kya...kuc..kuch bhi toh nai ...and (turns around remembering the incident)
varsha- achha (naughtily)toh tu yh mun kyun chiparahi hai bata bata aur all of a sudden yeh tera face red kyun ho gaya han ...bol bol...tujhe dekh ke toh tamatar bhi sharma jaye...
nandini-aa..ai..aisa kuch nahi hai wo toh bus mein ...(and stands near the window)

varsha- wo toh bus kya ...aiyoo ab maat bolna ke tune kuch .chi chi chi ...nandu tune ais akiya...
nandini- ar kya bole jarae hai aisa kuch nahi hai wo toh bus mein ek  bacche ki help kar rahi the anur suddenly break lag gaya aur mein uske upar gir gaye...(and stops realising what she sai and again her becomes red )
varsha  - hawww nandu ..mujhe pata tha tu chiparahi hai ...ooo toh yeh baat thi ..tabhi mein sochu hamari nandu itna blush kyun kar rahi hai ...aur tu best friend se chipayegi chal ab batta ,...ab kuch detail mein bata..
nandu sighs  a finally the truth was out and she cant hide it...
after a while...
nandu- toh yh sab hua ...
varsha - oye hoye yar kash mein waha hoti mujhe bhi u know live movie dekhne ka moka milta...
nandu- tu bhi na varshu kuch bhi bolte hai(and again tands near the window watchin the moon)
varsha - par on serious note...kahin tujhe use pyar wayar toh nahi ho gaya ..u know love at first site...(worried)
varshas prov- oh god plz han mat bolna plz plz plz ...nandu tujhe abhi sachai nahi pata ke tu kisi ki already hai...)
nandini- (nandu watching the moon  ) pyaar ka toh mujhe pata nahi but thers something...something really different about him...i dont know why but bahut jana pehechana sa hai ais lagta hai ke jaise mein use pehele se janti hun ...par pata nahi hum aur kabhi melenge bhi ya nahi...
MANIKS ROOM-
mukti- bas bas bhai aur nahi daud sakti bas hogaya ...p(panting heavily)
mukti and manik both together fall on the bed ...
mukti- waise bhai..
manik- hmmm..
mukti- kahin apko use pyaar toh nahi ho gaya...
manik gets up and stands near the window and looks toward the moon...
manik- pyaar ka  toh i dont know but thers something special about her ... pata nahi kyun but uske saat un kuch moments mein mujhe ek ajeebsa sookoon mehesus hua ..aisa laga ke mein use pehele se janta hun...pata nanhi hum phir mill payenge bhi ya nahi...
the screen divides into two both nandini and manik watching the moon at the same time...

sorry for the spelling mistakes and do comment...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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JUST A COINCIDENC OR DESTINY ???(c)

nandini- varshu mein ek call karke aate hun ...
varsha -ok
MANIKS ROOM-
muktis phone rings ...
mukti bhai mein call attend kar ke ati hun ok...
manik - ok

after sometime...
mukti -bhai bhai bhai i am so happy...(and twirls manik)
manik- are mra doll itna happy..kya mein wajah jann sakta hun...
mukti - bhai apko yaad hai mein once ek musical camp ke liye masoori gay thi...
manik- han woh mein kaise bhul sakta hun first time mere doll mujhse itna duur gayi thi that to for 4 days i was vry worried... aur tu bohot buri tarah se bimar ho gaye hi...(had tear in his eyes)
mukti - oho bhai aap bhi kya emotional ho jate ho ..mere puri baat toh suno...han toh mein keherahi thi ki remember mene aapko meri ek friend ke bare mein bataya tha jisne mere help ki thi ...jab meri tabiyat kharab o gai thi.. 
manik - han ...
mukti- bhai wo yahan hai mumbai mein ...yh i am sooo happy ...aur kal ham milne wale hain...
manik- arre tabtoh mujhe bhi usse milna hai aur usse thank u bhi bolna hai...

mukti - ok fine aap bhi mere sath chalna ...
manik- acha sun raat bohot ho gaye hai and mein bhi bahut thak gaya hun toh tu soja aur mein bhi sojata hun vais bhi kal se office bhi jana hai...
mukti-ok gud night bhai ...luv u
manik- (kisses her on her forehead)gudnight mera doll and luv u too ...
NEXT MORNING...
NANDINIS PLACE- 
nandini- varsu uth na jalde se ...ajj office ka pehela din hai aur aaj hi late...
varsha- 5 min yaar...(sleepily)
nandini- no no 5 mins abhi ke abhi uth aur jaldi se ready ho ja...
varsha- ufff kya yaar nandu abhi mein aur shahid kiss karne hi wale the...tu kabhi mea sapna pura hone he nahi dete...(irritated)
nandini- tu aur tera shahid kapoor...ufff is mahine mein this is the 17th time jab tera aur tere shahid ki kiss hot hote rehe gaye...(laughs)tera kuch nahi ho sakta
varsha- he he he...bahut hasi aarahi hai ruk tu jab tra aisa koi private mooment chal raha hoga na apne husband ke saath dekhna how i will barge in from nowhere phir kaisa feel hota hai...
nandu- aab issme mera husband kahan se aagaya ...(laughs)anyways sun tu ready hoke aaja mein jate hun office aaj mre shift pehele haina and patanahi boss kaise honge...bye...see u in the office
varsha - bye(shouts as nandini run out of their flat)
MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES-
shekhar malhotra along with manik enter te office...
shekhar- gud morning everyone...
employes- gud morning sir...
shekhar - guys ...jaisa ki aap saab jante hain yeh mera beta manik hai aur bhaut saloon baad abroad se padhai kar k lauta hai...and aajj se yeh mere jagha iss company ko sambhalnge...so ajj se yeh hain aapke nai boss...

everybody clap...
employe1- welcome sir 
employe 2- pleasure to have u here sir...
manik- thank u everyone ...(full attitude) plz continu with your work...
MANIKS CABINE-
manik enters ...and sees cabir...
cabir - aaja mere sher finallly u r back gud to haave u back bro(hugs him)
manik- (hugs him back) kaisa hai tu sale...(hits him)
cabir abe maar kyun raha hai???
maink- cause u deserve it (hits him again)
cabir- abe par maine kya kiya...
maink - kaminey ...us kya chala gaye tu toh mujhe bhul hi gaya ...na koi call na kai message...
cabir - abbe waise baat nahi hai ...
manik - achha wo sab chor yeh bata ki tu toh yahan ka manager hai toh tune mere liye koi ps appiont ke ya nahi...

cabir - han han ki hai na buss aate hi hogi ...uska bhi aaj first day hi hai...
manik- its already 8:50 am where is she... anyways i am going to m cabin just send her as soon a he comes..
cabir- sure dude...yeh lee yeh kuch album s releted file hain inhe padh lena..unce ne mujhe diye the tujhe dene ke liye...
at that moment nandini cames running and opens the door of the cabine at that time manik was also leaving the cabin with some files and bam!!!and the file falls on the floor scattering al th papers in the air and the apere starts to fall above them...
manik-wath the hell ...(and looks at her and stays still and keeps looking at her)
nandini - im sorry im sorry ...so sorry wo mene janbujh kar nahi kaya mein late ho gaye thi na islie ...(and looks up)
nandini- aap?
manik-tum?
cabir- arre tumdono ekk dusre ko pehele se jante ho !!that fantastic matlab abb kaam karnemein koi dekkat nahi aye gi...by the way nadini yeh hai tiumhare boss aur manik yeh hai tumhari nayi peronal secretary ...



sorry for the spelling mistakes and do comment...😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome. . So manan again meet.. wow.. 
They will be boss and secretary..  
Do update soon 
Waiting eagerly 
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update

Wow manik N nandini are boss n secretary
Ab to both will spend so many times together
Yeppi

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey guys the next chapter is almost ready but only part one and if u guys want then i will update it but it will be my last update before exams as promised, if u want me to update the full chappy without leaving it on a cliffhanger then u guys have to wait till my exams get over...so its your choice reply fast ...i will be waiting by the way the next chapter will be HUM TUM EK STOREROOM MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKHJAYE...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ummm confuse

Vese I want to update par cliffhanger??
Umm


Ohk kardo post part A
We will wait for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Do update soon 
Waiting eagerly 
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ok guys so i will update part a after lunch in the afternoon...
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HEY GUYS HERE IS THE UPDATE ...AND THIS IS THE LAST UPDATE BUT STILL I WILL TRY IF I CAN GIVE UPDATES IN BETWEEN BUT IF NOT THEN DONT WORRY WILL BE BACK AFTER 27TH MARCH ...TILL THEN HAPPY READING... 😲


HUM TUM EK STORE ROOM MEIN BAND HO ...AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE...(A)

 

they r still in shock and looking at eachother.cabir first looks at manik then at nandini and again at manik...

cabir prov- yeh ho kya raha hai ...ye ek dusre ko aise kyun dekhrahe hain ...ek dum tipical leela majnu wali feeling aarahi hai...ha ha  aisa lagaha hai koi romantic movie ka scene chal raha hai aur mein kabab mein haddi bankar inke bech mein kahn se tapak gaya hun ...hmmm something is deffinitely fishy ...pata lagana padega...

cabir- aaa ...sorry to disturb u guys but yeh look look baad mein khelna abhi kuch kaam karlein...

manik- aaummm ...ahmmm(clears his throat) um you come to my cabin aur cabir isse  saxenas ke files ddwe dena...

nandini- ye..yes sir...(comming back to her senses)

 

MANIKS CABINE-

maniks prov- oh god yeh yahan aur wo bhi eing my ps shit...no manik you cant get carried away ...you have show that you can never be affected by anything...wait ...does she actually affect me???

there is a knock on the door ...

nandini-may i come in sir...

manik- (comming out of his thoughts and acting as a tough boss)yes come in...

nandini- sir woh files...

manik- ya keep it on the desk ...

nandini was about to leave...

manik- oh hello ...(nandini turned around)kahan ...did i ask u to leave (shouted on her rudely and nandu got scared)

 

nandini- wo mujhe laga..

manik- kya laga han ...dont use your brains unnecesarily..abb khadi kyun ho ..(nandini gave a confussed look)go and get  a black coffee for me  wityhout sugar fast ...(shouted scaring her)

nandini runs out of the cabin..

manik prov- what tyhe hell mank... tu aise kyun behave kar raha hai and wo uss ladki ke liye jisse tusirf ek baar mila hai...and ek bar mein he usne essa kya effect kar duiya tujhpar ki you have to show all ths fake anger ...kya mein usse like...?? no no aise thodi hota hai aur mein toh usse janta bhi nahi...uuuhh oh god!!!

IN THE CANTEEN-

nandini-(talking to herself) aiyaapa kitnehadus hain ...kya bigada hai mine unka ...uff kitna cilate hain ussdin toh bus mein kitne acche se baat kar rahe the par abb dekho blkul monster hhmm... inka naam manik nahi monster manik hona chaiye...pata nahi all of a sudden kya hogaya...pa mujhe unke baaton se itna kyun farak padraha hai...mein toh sirf unse ek hi baar mili hun ...

 

maniks cabin -

nandini enters with the coffe-

nandini- may i come in sir ...aapke coffee

manik- areee itni jaldi waapas aagaye ...(giving a sarcastic smile) mujhe toh laga tum coffee ugaoge phoir unh roast karoge aur phir mre liye banake leke aaoge...(nanidi made a frown)

aab yeh frowns dena band karo aur pichle saal ke progress files store room se lekar aaoo ...

nandini- ys sir-...hunh..monster kahinka(said slowly but still a little audiable)

manik- kya kaha...

nandini-v vo ..vooo ku... kuch nahi mein jaate hun (and leaves)

STORE ROOM-

nandini finding the files from past 1 hr...but still notv getting it...

nandini- aaa ache (snezzes) aaa ache(again sneezzes)aiyappa ... aise kyun behave karte hain mere saath ... pata  nahi kis janam ka badla nikal rahe hain...

just ten manik enters the srote room fumming in anger and bangs the door close sue to which the door lock gets jammed and manik doesnot realie it...

manik - oh god ..u still couldnt find it ...total useless ..

nandini- sir wo i am..

mank- wo sir kya han ek file tumse dunde nahi jaate ... hato tum uss side dhundo...

nandini  nods and stars searching for the file and manik tooo...and in the pocessess nandini keeps on snezzing  continously...which is noticed by manik...

manik- kya hua tum theek toh ho ...why r u snezzing so much??(worried)

nandini- wo sir mujhe ...mujhe dust se allergy hai  ...aaache (and snezzes again)

manik (now stats feeling guilty) wo i ...i am sorry mujhe pata nah tha ..

nandini- its ok sir.. (and smiles assuring him)

after soome time...

nandini- sir mujhe file mil gaye ...

manik- cool ..now lets leave  aur wise bhi its already 5:00pm and office band hone ka time bhi ho gaya hai...

nandini nods manik goes and pulss the door but the door doesnot open he again tries by pulling it but it doesnot open...

manik - what the hell... lagta hai yeh door jam ho gaya hai ...

nandini- what!! ab hum kya karenge sir ?? aiyooo...(stats to pray) aiyappa ...plz help uss..

seeing her this cute act brings a sudden smile on maniks face ...

manik- wait mein call karta hun kisiko...(search his pocket but does not find  his phone  then he remembers his phone is still on the deak in his cabine)shit wo toh cabin mein he rehe gaya ...aur ab tak toh sab log jaa bhi chuke honge ..lagta hai ajj raat yahin rehena pade ga ... damn it !!!

nandini prov- aiyappa what will happen now ??

  spelling mistakes ho toh plz maff kar dena ... and do like and comment waiting egarly...😳😳😳


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