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               MANAN FF - JUNOON - E - ISHQ

CHAPTER 3 - BANG BANG !!

 

 

 

Man 2- chalo jaldi jaldi sab kuch khali karo warna... idharse koi bachke nahi jayega ...(and fires the gun in the air)

 

 

Nandini was sitting with manik .she was on the window seat .hearing thebullet fire she gets scaredand unintentionally holds maniks hand tightly...and manik stares at her and gets lost in her...

 

Bg music-

Tere sansoon ki saans mein

Jo hun toh mein hun..

Tere khwaboon ki aanch mein

Jo hun toh mein hun...

 

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai...

Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona hai...

Tu jo hai toh mein hun ...

Tu jo hai toh mein hun...

 

how cutely she closed her eyes and like a small child babbling ...aiyappa save me !! plz plz ...then hearing the caos in the bus he came back to reality and made the grip on her hand tight to which she looked at him .he just nodded his head giving her assurence and don't know why but she felt a different kind of satisfaction that yes she is with him...she is not alone in all of this ...for the fist time in her lifetime after her amma appas death she felt the same trust,securence that she felt with them but to her surprise ,in reality he was just a mery stranger whom she just met a few hours ago then why was his presence feeling so familier ...why ??? she was still confused by her feelings ...

 

 

Man 3- ohooo!!! Dekh toh yahaan toh leela majnu ka scene chal raho hai ...(laughs in a very dirty manner)vise maal toh kafi dhasu logyo hai...(and gives a dirty look on nandini checking her out from top to bottom )      

 

Nandini makes her grip tighter on maniks hand and tries to hide...but in vain .she is hell scared and is felling disgusted by his dirty look on her

 

Manik - listen you...(angrily grinning his teeth together)

Man 3- eee ... Angrejeee zyada shaanpati nahi... Chup chap baithare warna (forwards a hand towards nandinis face)thare leela ke liya thik na howego...

 

And that was it for manik ...abd befor he could touch her manik atopped his hand and glared at him as if telling to back off ...seeing this nandini becomes more scared ...

Man 2- laundiya dekhi nahi ki kahin bhi suru hojata hai...eee jis kaam ke liyr aaya hai pehele wo kar...

Man 3- jee boss...ee ladki jo bhi gahene zewar ho bhi hai sab khali kar ...chal chal  mhara tame khote na kar... Chal chal phata phat aur tu hero ...thare ko kya especial invitation dun ...(sarcastically)chal tu bhi khali kar...

 

Manik and nandini both give their rings ,bracelet,watch wallet etc to him and he was about to leave when he sees a small heart shaped diamond pendent whixh is studded in platinum with a silver chain in nandinis neck..

 

Man 3- ee ladki ...tu mhareko ullu samajhti hai...yeh bhi nikal chal chal jaldi (showing her the gun )

Nandini- mei..mein...ye ..yeh nahi de sakti...plz uncle aap sab lejaeeye leekin mein yeh nahi de sakti...(a lone tear escapes her eyes) yeh mere amma appa ki akhri nishani hai...

Man 3- thare ko ek bar kahe hui baat samajhna aave hai ka ???...lagta hai tu aise na manegi abhi thareko mein aapne bhasa mein samjhata hun...

 

Before manik could react ...he grabs the chain in her neck and pulls it with so much force that nandini gets a deep cut on her neck ...as it was not any ordinary chain but silver chain ...and cries in pain and blod starts oozing from the cut...and that was it for manik seeing her in pain ever though she was a mery stranger for him god knows why but his heart literally shattered into piceses...it felt as if someone has put a dagger though his heart...and in those fraction of seconds he stood up and started punching him...

And he starts to bleed...

Man 3- thare himmat kaise hui mhareko marneki ...ab tu dekh (angrily)

 

In an instance he drags nandini by holding her from her hair ...she screams in pain butt he is least bothered and makes her kneel down on the bus floor and points a gun towards her)

 

Man 3- aab mein thara badla isse lunga (smiles evily)

 

He is just about to shoot when manik kicks the gun and it fallsdown onder the seat .he starts punching him with full force when the other three men come from behind and hold him from behind so that he is not able to move ...

Manik- aabe tujh jaisa datrpook meine aaj thak nahi dekha ...huh...kaise gidadoon ko pal rakha hai aur tu saale humein lutne aya hai ...abbe apne shakal kaBhi aine mein dekhi hai ...abe tujhse ache to wo chote bachhe ache hain jo bus mein logon ka pocket katte hain...apne aap ko choor kehete ho ...aabe gadhe tu toh dhangse dhamka bhi nahi paaraha hai aur sabse amazing baat toh yeh hai ki tujhe ek aurat ka sahara lena pad raha hai appne baat humsab se manvane ke liye... ha ha ha...(and gives a u -r -so -useless wala look )

Man 3- thare zuban bhi thare hath paon jaise bahut zyada chal rahe hain ab tu dekh ki mein thara ke hasra karta hun...(with a evil smirk)aakhri baar aapne leela ko dekh le ...

 

he points the gun towards him and is ready to shoot ...all this while nandini was in a state of shock when suddenly she comes back to reality and she sees that the man is about to shoot...suddenly her eyes falls on the gun which had fallen under the seat and in that moment of instance she thinks...

 

Nandinis prov-

No no aiyappa ...no no mein aisa hone nahi de sakti usne meri jaan bachane ke liye apni jaan khatre mein dali ...nai mujhe kisibhi hal mein use bachana hoga ... No I cant let him die...no no ... aiyappa ! help me ...

 

And without being noticed she some how manages to pick up the gun and gaining some courage she poins the gun towards the man who was pointing his gun towards manik ...her hands start shaking but still she had to do it aany cost...

 

Nandini- chodo usse ...i said leave him ...(she shouts with full force )

(her hands were again shaking)

 

All the men together start laughing ...

Man 3- tu goli chalave gi ...ha ha ha thare mein itne himmat na hai ...chal idhar de ...ee chori yeh khelne ki chiz na hai...(and starts walking towards her)

Nadini - mei.. mein.. kehe rahi hun mein goli chala dunge... pass mat aana...wahin ruko warna mein sachmein goli chala dungi...(but he still ncomes towards her)

Manik- eee ...dur reh usse ...ladki ko kya darata hai dam hai toh mujhse akele baatkar naki tere in paltu kutton ki madad se.l...

The other man who was holding him punchesd him in his stomach and blood comes out of his mouth...

Man 3- (angrily goes to him andholds him by his hair and...)ooo... hero ..filmy dialoug apne ghar pe... ab tu dekh me thara ke hal kartahun (and he again points the gun towards him and he is ready to shoot... he was just about to pull the trigger when...)

Nandini prov - no ...!!!!aiyappa... help..(and closes her eyes tightly and

 

                                           BANG ! BANG!

Due to sudden firing everybody becomes scared and and they all look towards the direction in which the bullet was fired and soon the man who was pointing a gun towards manik falls down on the floor And the floor gets filled with his blood ...meanwhile nandini also freezes at her place ...she is in a state of shock ...and who wont be ...for a girl who never even killed a fly had shot a man,a living man just a moment ago...at that very moment maniktakes the advantage of this situation gets free of their grip and starts fighting the shit out of them seeing his courage the other guys present in the bus also gain some courage and start to fight back they manage to get the driver free and tie them with the help of the rope and all this while nandini was still in a state of shock and she did not realise ...that one of them was going to stab her with a knife when...manik came and held his hand and pushed him with so much force that he fell down.. all this while they did not ralise they were standing right at the door ...and before he could ask any thing to her tha guy again came to attack but this tme he pushed nandini and she couldnot withstand the force and lost her balance and the bus door opened with a thud and she would have fallen out of the bus but manik held her hand they had and intence eyelock ...

 

 

Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahun
Bin tere mujh mein kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai
Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi

 

meanwile the others had managed to capture the guy who pushed nandini ...nandini was gasping heavily when manik pulled her in and again she fell in his arms and they share an eyelock...

 

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon

 

And with the sudden claping sound they come back to reality...and.. she was still shivering ...

Manik- umm umm...miss moorthy ...r u all right ?? (concerned)

Nandini- (no reply)she is still shocked

Manik-miss moorthy ??are you ok ??(now worried)

Nandini- (finally speakes and tears start rolling from hers eyes )I ...i I killed someone...(says in a state of shock)

Manik- hey hey its ...its completely fine ...whatever you did was just a step taken in defence...everything is fine shhh...its ok now...

Nandini- (now she starts panicking)OMG!!!!!! I ...I actually killed someone (freaking out)... ho..how can I kill someone ??? no... no no no...I have become a muderer..me..mein aisa kaise karsakti hun...

Manik -hey noo just listen to me(but she was not ready to listen anything)

(first hehesitated but finally he kept his hands on either side on her shoulder)miss moorthy !!!miss moorthy look at me ...( but still she was not ready to listen to him she was just going on babbling on her own and crying continously..)NANDINI look at me !!!!( and instantly hearing her name she looked at him )its ok now everything is fine...you are safe now...we all are infact you saved all of us today you are not a muderer ..do you get me???you are not a muderer ...and they diserver it so theres nothing to fell sorry about it you did the right thing...(assuring her)

 

Finally she calmed  down and realised he was holding her from her shoulder..she just looked at him akwardly..

Manik- (realising)ohh!! I ..i am sorry ..i didn't mean to... I was just...

 

Before he could complete...

Nandini- thanks for saving me fom them ..and thanks for being there...

Manik- its fine... afterall you saved my life today thanks toh mujhe tumhe kehena chahiye...come lets sit ...I don't think ke we can reach mumbai by midnight we may reach by morning only...

 

Nandini nodes and they proceed towards their seat..

     

     to be continued in the next chapter...

plzz plz guys waiting for your comments jaldi jaldi karo and agar spelling mistakes ho toh maff karna...😳

Edited by abhilashaS - 8 years ago

Hey nice chapter
You gave little late but it's okk I m waiting for your update from so long
That what happen next
But everything is fine now

Next try to update soon
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N yes can you send your ff link or ff name in pm mean when you pm Next time mention your ff name or else link plzz

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sorry guys for making you wait so much but my puja vacations have started so i will try to update regularly...😃and thanks for appreciating my work...

guys get ready ...shocking secret to be reveled soon...😲😲

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     MANAN FF- JUNOON-E-ISHQ Edited by abhilashaS - 8 years ago

Hey nice start of their friendship

N sorry for late commenting Busy in assignments

N thanks for pm

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        MANNAN FF- JUNOON - E - ISHQ

Hey nice chapter

Yar manik ko pta hi chale vala tha but...


Waiting update soon What truth gonna be revealed